Penname: Chillin [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: September 20 2017
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Summary:

An inventor looking to get ahead in life accidentally helps create a phenomenon which will rebalance the world of men and women, and in the process, turn him into the perfect slave for his terrifying and beautiful boss Ms. Hoshoku.

Done as a commission.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Breast Enlargement, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, New World Order, Slave, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Jacksmith Commission Stories
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25622 Read Count: 150069
[Report This] Published: August 25 2017 Updated: October 04 2017
Reviewer: Chillin Signed
Date: September 20 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Jack, I have to say that you are a supreme wordsmith. You know your craft. That being said, I really hope Ben gets at least 1 bone. Mariah is such a bitch and it doesn't seem he deserves all that is coming to him. Relentless abuse can get tedious. Just my 2 cents. Thanks for listening!

Author's Response: I appreciate your thoughts. While the relentless abuse is understandably not everyone's cup of tea, this story was purchased as a commission, and so is following a specific guideline from the commissioner.

Reviewer: Chillin Signed
Date: September 21 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Totally understand, Jack. I appreciate your response!

Reviewer: Chillin Signed
Date: October 02 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Can we know Hoshuku's final size? :)



Author's Response:

We'll hear in the last chapter

[Report This] Published: January 22 2019 Updated: August 20 2020
Reviewer: Chillin Signed
Date: February 24 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Odds

Hey, you doin ok? This is an INCREDIBLE story that just seems to have fallen off the map. PLEASE continue!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for checking in. I've been extremely busy. I'll have to get some more chapters written in the coming days. Glad you're enjoying!

 

Best,

J

Summary:

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


A secret medical trial in a high security,  all womens penitentiary threatens to destabilise the balance of the prison ecosystem.  And maybe even the entire prison. 


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Breast Enlargement, Crush, Destruction, Feet, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Muscle, Slow Size Change, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107907 Read Count: 65164
[Report This] Published: June 28 2022 Updated: January 14 2023
Reviewer: Chillin Signed
Date: October 16 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: G37 Trial - Week 3

Another fantastic chapter! Very well written. Hope the next chapter is soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you! The next chapter is already in the works 😁 I'll try to get it out this week but I'm busier than I thought I'd be

Reviewer: Chillin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 23 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: G37 Trial - Week 3

An absolutely amazing chapter! The action is riveting and I can't wait to see what happens next. Great dialogue and descriptions!



Author's Response:

Hey, thank you!  I was actually very worried about the dialogue so you calling it out specifically means a lot.

I hate bad dialogue but also feel like it's subjective so always wonder if people might hate MY dialogue, haha

Reviewer: Chillin Signed
Date: November 10 2022 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: One last chance

Way to build the suspense! Friggin awesome! Keep up the great dialogue and descriptions of the action! Another worthy chapter to this story.



Author's Response:

I appreciate it! I wasn't sure if I built the suspense for too long in this one so it's nice to hear some validation, haha