Beyond what I already said, I would like to ecourage you to write and, should the work meet the criteria (the most basic ones), perhaps post it on Giantessworld. Quality stories are always welcome, even if one needs six whole days after finishing them to gather strength and pen a review (or type, in modern times).

Also, as I cannot officially rate it higher than 10, here it goes.

Ajacks has already written a review I can fully back, so I will just describe my feelings while finishing the read, to cite a classic (and do excuse my French - pun intended):

"HOLY SHIT FALLS!"

Sometimes when I read a story, one that presents specific character's point of view, I wonder what makes them special and most fit to tell that particular tale. At times the answer is immediate, The Tragedienne, however, is not such a case. And so I am left with a question: what makes Summerlyn different from other highborn people who came in contact with Merphomenee? She is a princess, but so were many of M's 'pets'; she is eloquent, well-mannerd and bright, but these characteristics are also not unique to her. One might argue her being 'special' is due to her better understanding of the magical nature of the universe (multiverse?), but the existence of other worlds is presumably a common knowledge to the inhabitants of Illyrica and her injury left her a de facto disabled person, unable to perform even the least impressive acts of magic (which, if i remember correctly, is commonly used to solve day to day problems in Illyrica) - making her seem rather pathetic in the eyes of native Illyricans rather than unique.

In spite of being left with questions (or maybe due to it?), I eagerly await next chapters. At this point the plot is difficult to predict and so the story is all the more engaging.  Chapter V itself kept up with my expectations and, though lacking in action, was by no means a boring read. Descriptions were as vivid as inprevious chapters (maybe even more so)  and the whole experience very immersive.

Criticism: It can't be sunshine and rainbows all the time you say? Personally, I find the usage of real world names of regions slightly unnerving. It does not take anything from the story, but somehow does not fit and breaks the otherwise splendid immersion. 

Dear Sir/Madam

You have taken a completely different approach to a size related story, one that is focused on worldbuilding and unique storytelling, thus making it feel like a true dark fantasy novel. Each scene, no matter how mundane, is painted meticulously and vividly.

I cannot be the judge of French inserts' correctness, having no eperience with the language whatsoever, but the English part seems really well-crafted (though I am by no means an expert, being a non-native speaker).

Overall, The Tragedienne is a quality read and, given the solid foundation laid in the first three chapters, has the makings of a real masterpiece.

Best regards

C

Though I have not left any review of your story until today, I have followed it since the beginning. Seeing it coming to an end actually makes me miss it already, it is among the best ones in recent times... One definitely should not take good stories for granted...

The lack of an extended epilogue is, however, a detrimental factor. The plot is cut short abruptly, leaving many questions unanswered (for example: how Mary's and Naomi's aging process is affected by changes that affected them? Are there any further implications?).

Perhaps, having already created an interesting setting, you could consider another story in the same universe? There seems to be lots of things to explore and obviously an epilogue will not suffice to do so.

Personally, I care more about the story than 'true' fetish content, so you have at least one reader who is actually interested characters' future devlopments; do not make hasty assumptions!

Best Regards,

C

A surprisingly heartwarming story that has reached its finale all too soon. It does, however, showcase the advantages of write-it-before-you-publish-it approach.

All the best and keep up the good work!

A really good story. My initial grade of 9/10 requires an update; this time its a deserving 10/10. It is also (maybe, probably) my favourite story of recent months.

C

Quite an unexpected addition to the story, both in terms of content and the fact it actually happened.

When the adventure began, I immediately became invested in the story and hoped for a nice slow burner with dynamic relashionships and rich worldbuilding -- the setup was perfect. Then it abruptly came to an end, one that felt rushed and brought nothing new to the characters and an overall sense of misery. As I belive the storyline should not be influenced by anyone but the Author themselves, I grudgingly accepted the sad reality and moved on (especially having in mind your declaration concerning the length of the story).

The new chapter (epilogue part 2?) is in a way frustrating: the story is oficially over, yet some of Sona's actions indicate her attitude towards Florina is changing ever so slightly. These two have great chemistry and it just seems so wasteful to leave things the way they currently are. A new story featuring them could be an idea worth exploring.

Best regards,

C

I was hesitant whether to leave a review or not; ultimately I decided to go for it, though it is not an easy one to write. My previous experiences with your stories were really good and where writing craftsmanship is considered, Beyond the Sea meets all my hopes and expectations. Two issues, however, need to be mentioned.

1. The use of existing character in the story - it is more a matter of personal preference rather than a real problem. I am not a fan of fanfictions of any kind, as only through a completely original work is the Author's potential fully realized. The worldbuilding, character design and development, all play crucial roles in creating a most immersive reading experience. Here, the fanfic issue is really just a minor nuissance; the original and quite intriguing plot makes up for it with interest.

2. The paywall issue - the elephant in the room and a source of my discomfort while writing the review. First I have to state that I have no problem with publishing stories on Patreon first, granting paying readers early access and other benefits. Thus I think io1908 was wrong and their critique - unjustified (that being said, your response was not exactly classy itself).

My problem lies elswhere and had not existed before the second chapter was posted. I assume that whenever an Author publishes their work in the media in any form, they are intent on completing it in the same form (otherwise, why bother doing in the chosen way?). Your statement effectively prevents this story from ever being completed in one of the chosen forms, making the first two chapters an empty promise unless the readers are willing to pay. So, viewed from a perspective of Giantessworld reader, the story is not actually a story but a teaser, a bait. That I find unacceptable and cannot support. I request you inform potential future readers about the status of the story at the beginning of the read, not to raise their hopes in futility.

Best regards,

C

I have to apologise first for withholding my review for a considerable amount of time. It was not my intent to  delay for so long, rather to let the story grow a bit to see its potential. And then, as per usual, time became a scarcity.

The review will be quick. I could (maybe) go on and on about what I like/love about the story; it will be more efficient, though, to simply call it exquisite. It has been an amazing ride from the beginning and I am looking forward towards future installments, wherever they may take us.

I will refrain from suggesting the course the action should in my opinion take; the story is yours to tell and fan suggestions are usually detrimental to the quality of the tale the Author waeves. As long as quality does not drop I am on board with any resolution that may come.

Obvious 11/10. Beyond expectations.