The holodeck is used for new and interesting ways when beverly crusher makes a miniature world.
I must say, that you do fan fic quite well, especially since it's hard to translate this interest to fan fic and have it read well.
Alot like the movie with the usual evil twist that andrew nellis puts on his stories.
Been a while since you posted a chapter, but I must say this story is fantastic.
Author's Response: thankyou. Sorry I've been busy but new chapters are in the works.
Lovin' this story. Keep it coming
Another fantastic entry. You certainly have a way with words, and your descriptions of items and events don't leave you wondering what you're trying to say.
Love it, counting the days till the next.
Neverquest was supposed to be a game, a virtual reality world, an MMORPG where Women rule. But after a virus enters the system, the characters begin to question their own reality as it slowly changes around them...
This is the FIRST book in the Adelais series.
Read all the way to chapter 111. This story was good at times, but once the game shifted to be truly lethal I felt it lost a lot of its charm. It became more of a slaughterfest than the fun charming story it started out as.
Author's Response:
Sorry you didn't like it. I don't feel there were very many deaths in the story, but I've tried to maintain an equal amount of charm and suspense.
Batman and his sidekicks are miniaturized and must rely on the aid of their female allies, the Birds of Prey (A shamelessly goofy piece of fanfiction. I regret nothing!).
I admit I went in with low expectations, but I was pleasantly surprised. This read and flowed just like the comics, with most of the heroes never out of character compared to their comic counterparts.
Good job!
the end of the world, at the hands of beautiful giantesses. Need I say more?
Fantastic story, especially the imagery. While reading it, I can clearly in my mind see what's going on in an epic movie monster style of cinematography. Kudos to you for this excellent story.
Another note: I like that you chose to make it just a specific amount of women, and not all women like some other new world order stories. Having men and women share in this conflict together really brings this story to a more believable level of story telling.
Also adding, I like that you are keeping the language and reasoning for they're presense a mystery.
Author's Response: Agreed again on this, my friend. I guess i wanted the story to be about people, as much as about giantesses, in a strange quirky way. ;-)
Hell of a story revival. Five years for a new chapter. It's a cute story, hopefully you'll keep it up.
I'm not sure if you would call this violent or gentle. It depends a lot on how you interpret the ending, which I have left open ended for the time being. However, I may one day go with a violent and/or sexual continuation if I ever pick this up again, so to be on the safe side I will give this an R rating.
Absolutely loving this story. I would love to see it continued, as it is truly a unique piece of fiction.
An overly curious college girl finds a strange box on her roommate's desk that, unbeknownst to her, is filled with thousands of tiny people. If only she weren't so clumsy....
Great so far. You're writing style sure sucks you into the story.
An adventurous teen who just happens to be five inches tall has been stuck in homeschool all his life. When he finally enters public high school and a new world of friends, bullies, and cliques, he quickly discovers challenges even bigger than he could've imagined.
It's nice to see how many people he has looking out for him. Erica's friends seem to love him like a brother, and are protective of him like big sisters.
This is definitely true. Certainly they are more outwardly affectionate toward Peter than Erica is.
Going by the reviews... man some of you people really want to see this poor kid suffer.
I guess they do!
Stella's going to get a savage beating from Jessica. And then from Erica. And then from their mother.
It definitely won't be pretty, whatever it is.
@ChocolateCheese1, you don't like it, there are an exceptional amount of stories on this site that cater to your desired action.
I'm pretty sure he showed up to the wrong party here.
Well she was about as subtle as a note tied to a brick tossed through a window.
You forgot lighting the brick on fire before throwing it!
It's nice to see a loving family at home in these kinds of stories. Even the aloof and slightly cold nature of his sister is just a facade she puts on because she's a teenager; she really does care for her little brother.
Thanks for reading, glad you liked it!
“Trust me. You have no idea what that feels like.”
This sentence seems a little off. Did you mean more like "You have no idea had good it feels to hear that." or something? Cus her reaction seemed to imply that.
No, that's what I meant. It was intended to sound like a relieved statement from Peter. Lisa's reaction was just one of bashfulness, not like she'd said something insulting.
Erica's icy demeanor is starting to crack a bit. I bet if Jessica were in the room during this conversation, she wouldn't have let her mom use her as an excuse. She probably would have offered to quit her dance classes.
Her demeanor is indeed cracking. And that's probably an accurate guess about Jessica.
