Penname: Ronnie [Contact] Real name:
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Summary:

          Coincidences occur on a daily basis, fate is foreboding and you never known when you're going to die or just disappear. Struggle and live just like Monica or suffer the consequences.

          This is a story about coincidences and fate. The poor Girl Monica, and the courier girl Cheryl's stories will become infintely tangled together. Who is really the lucky one?

          Watch as the man named Jack throws chaos into both these girls worlds with this unaware shrink tale. Who will come out on top, and who will be crushed like a bug.

Be warned, this story contains, unaware, shrink, and vore.


Categories: Unaware, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Entrapment, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Shrink Studio
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3356 Read Count: 9571
[Report This] Published: February 25 2013 Updated: February 25 2013
Reviewer: Ronnie Signed
Date: February 25 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Monica's New Role & Package

I liked the inventiveness of your story, haven't read one like it that I know of.  Also, big fan of unaware.  My personal preference for stories is that they need not be overtly sexual in nature because 99% of the time it seems jammed in there illogically and for no reason than to get people aroused.  I much rather prefer a story where a giantess who cares about the small man/woman is putting them in danger without knowing it.  But for this story the sexuality worked because of who the characters were.  Nice job :)



Author's Response:

Thanks Ronnie, and Sorry for the late reply. I need to get better at double checking review son older stories I wrote.

Summary:

Sarah gets home with the medicine to help her sick sister deal with her cold but an accident causes her to experience a cold in a way she never wanted to.

 

Another request story, dont read if you're not interested in Nose stuff lol.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Entrapment, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Nose, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2670 Read Count: 11764
[Report This] Published: May 10 2017 Updated: May 10 2017
Reviewer: Ronnie Signed
Date: May 25 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Just wanted to log in to make a comment. For someone who isn't especially a fan of this sub genre, your writing is excellent. You're really able to convey a sense of tension and overwhelming fear for the tiny person. I've noticed this with your other stories as well. I'm a freelance writer and I think you're one of the best writers I've seen in this odd community of ours. Keep up the great work!