I am a huge fan of gentle and vore content. I am not the best writer in the world, and I apologise in advance if I make a mistake. I welcome reviews greatly if they are kind or constructive in nature.
I am pleased to be here. And I'm sorry I deleted all of my older content... I struggle to find pride in my work but people seem to like it sometimes, and that's all that keeps me going.
Having spent the last ten years as a pet to his younger sister, a young man and his lover make a hopeful push for a new home - and a return to the person he used to be.
Aww dude that was kinda sad! But I have a feeling that Camilla would try and steal him later to rescue him if she really cared about him. Surely she knew that he didn't want to stay with such a sister-- an owner who cared not for his genuine happiness.
Tiffany, a young ten year old giantess likes "playing" with the "tinies" in a city but what happens when a bigger and older giantess takes over Tiffany's turf?
(Jesus that nineteenth chapter was ridiculously long, and I loved it)... So, I ran across this story two or three days ago and have spent a huge chunk of my free time reading it on my phone. I'm not very good with reviews, or even writing stories, mainly, but I can say I've enjoyed this one, a lot! It's hard to pick a favorite scene so far, such as Tiffany coercing the burger joint to feed Thomas because she couldn't stand him getting turned away, or Cecilia's understanding nature with Abraham's shyness. I'm a sucker for gentle themes, and there were quite a few in this story to be found so far! Really wish Thomas would tactfully and carefully explain to Tiffany what her Mother did to them, but I guess I can imagine why they'd stay quiet about it...
I hope Beverly gets her just-desserts one day, and Zeke's trying, too, but he's guilty through silence by this point. In my head, I imagine the only way to break her would be for someone to swallow Zeke, and tell her that it didn't matter because he wasn't as special to them as he was to her. But I'm stoked to see just how you move the story along from here. You've got a solid imagination, Nothingness!
And, so far, everyone's my favorite character besides the obviously douchebag ones. Haha! Anyways, I'm gonna favorite this so I can catch up on it later. Sooo, thanks! Good luck on the updates, but don't overwork yourself. I'm forcing a pace on myself with my own stories now, because when I start, I spend all day typing, and that ain't healthy.
See ya around.
You flatter me, Intheliar. Thank you for the kind review and honestly, I think your being hard on yourself. You're an excellent writer and I"m not just saying that! I see nothing wrong with your writing, your spelling is on top with little to no errors and your females characters have pretty realistic dialogue if you ask me as well as being very likable and not possessing too much of a girly-girl stereotype. As you know, I've enjoyed Asher's Small Life like so many others have and of course, Dimensional Shift. I couldn't help but check your bio and my God, your almost 23?! I"m 23! :D You like Hunter x Hunter, I like Hunter x Hunter! I'm don"t smoke or drink either but you got me at the cursing and having a fiance part XD. Although, I usually curse with my friends like if we're joking or something, but for the most part, I talk pretty decent and my love life is empy T-T
Anywho, enough of that. Yeah, Tiffany getting Thomas that free meal was pretty sweet, right? Why can't I have a giantess get me a free meal?! Now that I think about it, reading your stories actually might have made me come up with Cecilia understanding Abraham's bashful nature without knowing it XD See, your an inspiration! Yeah, Beverly is a lose cannon, but like you hinted, Zeke may be the key to breaking her. Good luck on your updates too, and don't feel like you have to compare yourself or be better than anyone when you write your stories. ;)
A prince trades his freedom to become a giantess' pet in order to avoid an arranged marraige.
Hello! I love your story thus far! Keep it up, I'm eager for every update you make; just don't push yourself too hard.
The following are my own opinions about the setting, and that's all they are. Opinions. :)
I love it when the giantess is gentle towards a select chosen one, and indifferent to other humans. It's like gentle and cruel in one. Not a huge fan of giantesses who wouldn't harm a fly. Even though I'm primarily a gentle-gts lover. So the tsundere attitude rocks my socks.
I feel like Eric gets away with talking back to her too easily sometimes. It makes me wonder why she's so soft on him. I dunno. But I like it.
I'm a little sad that she ate the doctor and the other dude, but my other head wasn't. Oh well. Keep it up and have a good one!
I loved the amount of vore in this chapter!
But I'm at work and I didn't need an erection. So, screw you. Thank you, but screw you ;)
Whew, that was quite a wait for Ch 16! I understand life can make things difficult someti--... frequently. But I'm glad you are well and gave us another update!
I enjoy the way the story is going. And I like how protective Tor is of her princeling, he is surely lucky to have a friend like her taking care of him. She makes sure he's always taken care of, but never lets things get too mushy-- whether it be her ignoring him, eating other humans, etc.
There's always that subtle nagging feeling, that they are not equals, but at the same time, that maybe it doesn't matter that much. I like gentle gts fictions mainly. But other stories make the characters TOO equal sometimes and the thrill of being intimidated is effectively pushed to the back burner. Being reminded of the difference in power, the sheer futility of resistance, and the grace of being spared by such a being, that's what tickles my fancy, for lack of a better term.
I've prattle on long enough. #No taxation without respresentation
Life can be such a bummer sometimes. But writing is theraputic. ;)
As for Tor, she is very protective of Eric. We'll delve into the "why" of that a little later. And she's not a mushy-gushy sort of woman. She shows her affection in other ways. And no, they're not equals. They probably never will be in Tor's eyes, but she isn't going to treat Eric like shit just because (in her mind) she's better than him. He hasn't pissed her off, so she won't be a bitch to him haha. There is a lot more interactions between them to come. Thanks for sticking around!
What seemed to be the perfect start to a wonderful adventure is tragically cut short by an unfortunate series of events.
You have an eloquent way of describing things, sir.
I must admit, I was really rooting for the story to continue abated, and have its happy ending; but the darker side of me just loves accidental or regretful giantess vore. For that, I thank you for the short story. I wonder how long she lamented her actions that day? For all intents and purposes, he might have actually lived longer if he was left to fend for himself; if it wasn't for her good intentions.
But then again, if I had to pick a way to die, I'd rather be swallowed accidentally by a well-meaning giantess than starve in the corner of a room or get stepped on by the foursome making their way out of detention, you know?
Either way, I really enjoyed this story; and I was just leaving this review to let you know that. :)
Hey I know this is an old story but your summary really caught my attention and I wanted you to know that I hope you're doing better these days. Every author is subject to being criticized no matter how good they are. Even the best authors cant escape from trolls or people who think they can do better. Keep your head up. That fear caused me to delete five of my own stories and I miss them.
A game show with tiny contestants and high stakes.
Enjoyed the story. :)
Theres something extra humiliating about the first two losers getting done in by mere teenagers.
Were they both fixed up with something to make them survive longer or did they both meet their fates soon after?
Unfortunately for them, they were made super-tough. They'll last about ten years. Our first round loser spent his remaining years 'in' the adult film industry, while our second was forgotten about yet just too big to pass out of the stomach. So he helped that girl keep a wonderful physique as a diet aid for a long time.
A relationship between a tiny and his giantess girlfriend who's cruel to everyone except him.
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Really liked this. Even though cruelty isn't usually my thing, I still dig it from time to time. It's criminal that this doesn't have more reads.
Being protected by an evil giantess while she toys with people your own size is a secret delight of mine
In the future, a controversial form of the death penalty involves shrinking convicts down to one-inch tall, and having them tortured and killed by executioners known as Chevaliers. One Chevalier finds herself in a difficult situation when a shrunken convict claims to be innocent, and she must decide whether to risk everything and help him escape, or crush him underfoot.
It took me far too long to get around to reading this. Namely because I had a sneaking suspicion that I might become obsessed once I started. So, here I am, about four hours later after starting this series, leaving a review. The 80th review, if I'm not mistaken! Congratulations, you've earned the milestone!
I'm a bit of a coward-- the cruel encounters and actions in this story were relatively tame compared to some other titles, such as the actions of the Chevs or the encounter with Cathy in what was supposed to be a safe haven. You really had me bashing my head against my pillow at one point, but that just goes to show the power someone's writing can have on another! You create emotions from thin air, or in my case, a small phone screen.
But... The cute interactions between Allie and Brian were a big hook for me. I actually smiled a great deal throughout my initial foray into this story. I'm a sucker for gentle encounters, and plot driven stuff works well with it! I had questions, and you routinely answered all of them (maybe except working out how Brian uses the bathroom on his own, but honestly I don't mind if you never explain that lmao).
One more thing I'd like to compliment is explaining the characters' mental thoughts and reactions to events. On several occasions it was really charming to see Allie fret and become flustered on her own mistakes, and really regretting some of it heavily. Something about a guilty giantess resonates within me. Having Allie constantly worried about Brian's mental health and 'how he would take things' was very sweet of her character.
I certainly hope they continue to flourish and grow together, and work on becoming more honest and careful. It was a bit hard for me to read through the argument chapter, mainly because I'm so conflict-avoidant. But it seems everything turned out alright in the end!
Also, I liked the idea of them just taking the day off in the weekend chapters. So comfy to read through that.
You have more strength than I do, in your ability to start and flesh out a story. I'm jealous on that word count haha. But, I know what it's like to start a chapter and not want to break it up into sections. When I typed the long-since-deleted Asher's Small Lifestyle Change story, I think I typed a sixteen thousand word final chapter. My fingers hurt for awhile after that, and I started to tone it down a lot ever since.
One more thing, I added you to my favorite authors with a small caption. Go and read it, should you fancy to..!
And, seeing as there's more stories to read on this series, I guess that means...
This review is not over!
Thank you so much for the review!! I'm really happy to see a review from you, it means a lot. Also, thank you very much for the 80th review!
I'm honestly not a huge fan of cruel stuff either, despite what this story might suggest. This is an example where the cruel stuff was included to fit the world/create drama. Even Cathy's session was created less because I enjoy that type of content, and more so because it would cause Brian's breakdown. Which is perhaps just a different type of cruelty... oh well. Either way, gentle stuff is my true love. Now that Allison is no longer a Chevalier, I'm happy to (mostly) leave that stuff behind. I'm glad it created an emotional response, though!
I'm really happy that you enjoyed their relationship! That's ultimately what I wanted to write about. I agree, gentle interactions and plot go very well together, since gentle interaction isn't necessarily sexual by nature. As a side note, I spent way too much time debating how to go about the bathroom thing. I ultimately just decided to lampshade it a bit, since I figured it really wasn't that important to the story. It made sense for them to raise the issue, but the specifics seemed unnecessary to explain (and potentially gross). I lampshade it even more in the second story, so at this point I'm committed. Whatever the solution is, it totally absolutely definitely makes perfect sense, trust me!!
I love a nervous/considerate/guilty giantess, too! I think it's super sweet, so I'm glad you enjoyed Allison's thoughts. I also know what you mean, I hated writing the argument chapter. I really don't like writing conflict between them, but sometimes it makes sense for the story. Oh well, like you said it works out in the end. I loved writing the weekend chapters, though. I love comfy cozy relaxing content.
Damn, 16k words for a chapter is nuts! That would definitely make my fingers sore, too. I didn't have a sense for how long my chapters should be, but I don't like to go above 6000 words. No particular reason, it just feels too long for me. However, I usually just write until the scene is done, I've never cut/added stuff to meet a particular word count.
Thank you so much for adding to me for your favorites! I absolutely love that caption, I will gladly accept that description. I'm all about that positivity and supportiveness, so I'm really glad if I was able to provide encouragement.
Thanks again for the review, I really appreciate it. I see that you've already reviewed the second story, so I'll go respond to that one as well! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story.
-Pluto
The story of Allison Starr and Brian Bentley continues. Allison is no longer a Chevalier, and she is in a relationship with Brian. Now, with an uncertain future ahead of them, they must decide how to proceed if they want to clear Brian's name. Luckily, some help arrives in the form of Allison's college mentor.
This is less of a review and more of a long comment.
There's not much I can say that hasn't already been said by other reviewers, however, I know full well the satisfaction each single review has the ability to bring. I spent the better part of today blazing through chapter two and I'm not even really sure I want to start the third story until it's finished, which I'm aware could take awhile. But alas, it's likely I'll read into it and try to keep up as updates roll out.
Once again, I can't really stand tinies suffering any amount of injustice, or, at least, not if they don't deserve what they're getting. The entire SP project rightfully deserves to be shut down, I keep getting hung up on who's actually a criminal and who isn't. There's no way Brian's the first, not with how many get sorted through that nightmare. Even a six-month Chevalier like Allie had a kill count of 256.
You really do seem to like to torture your characters, Pluto! For every happy chapter, it seems like another one follows right behind it with either Allie or Brian facing a new traumatic experience or reliving an older one. Life's no fairy tale by any means, but I really am looking forward to your characters finding the peace and love they so desperately deserve to have. I'm also interested in seeing Brian and Jen meet back up.
I'm conflicted on whether or not I like the idea of shrinking being reversible, but with what our hero (and his partner, to an extent) seem to have gone through, maybe he does deserve to get big again and give Allie that hug she's earned. She does everything with good intentions behind them. Even getting lost in her fantasies in bed with her traumatized boyfriend nearby, he was never in any real danger beyond some inadvertent mental damage. I do so fancy a giantess being unaware of the duress they're subjecting their tiny to, and even more tickled when they feel guilty and reconcile with them. It's just too cute.
Actually, I'm almost inspired to start another story. That's how these things happen, you see. An image generates in my head and I flesh it out a bit (and eventually abandon it.) What image did you generate for me? Well, it's a short one. A slightly confused tiny is traipsing across a bed in the dark, trepidation present in their steps. Whether they know they're alone or not is a mystery, but they are caught surprised by a swift hand lashing out at them from underneath some heavy blankets, and they're pulled with a quick yelp underneath the comforters, out of view. What fate lies beyond is not a tragic one. Was it a friend? A girlfriend? Pulled into a lover's embrace? What if instead it is a concerned sibling, a sisterly hand gently snatching them up to hide them from an abusvie parental figure?
This is merely inspired by Allie becoming possessive over Brian during their initial bed-time play, before the amnesia. Trapped under Allie's hand, being reminded of the power she actually could exert over him if she weren't so kind and loving... Even a simple premise like that sets my mind wandering, coming up with various scenarios like the one in the previous paragraph. I'm not going to write anything any time soon, though..
Anyways, I'm a fan of your work. Excellent job on using correct grammar, and I'm not even sure I could find a single typo if you held a gun to my head.
Repentance, guilt, kindness, love, these ingredients were combined to make a happy size-love story. But Professor Pluto accidentally added a problematic ingredient! Chemical Trauma!
Until next time.
Thank you very much for another review/comment! Absolutely, reviews are always nice, and I seriously appreciate when somebody takes the time to leave one. Especially really long ones, like yours! I honestly have no idea how many chapters the third story is gonna end up being, since I don't know if I'm going to have to split any events up. No matter if you wait until it's done or read it as it comes out, I really hope you enjoy it!
I'm really glad that you enjoyed this story as well! Although the Chevalier content is mostly gone, there was still plenty of *mental* torture as well. I had the very same thought as you a couple times - "boy, I sure love putting these people through a terrible time." I said in another response once that I'm glad they're fictional, since they would almost certainly beat me up if they could for writing them such difficult lives. However, hopefully the bad stuff just elevates the good stuff? Maybe? I hope??
The whole reversible thing was definitely a bit of a retcon, based on the reviews. However, I hope that I can execute it in a believable/earned way. Absolutely, they've all earned a happy ending, and this is one way to get them there. Allison was definitely never malicious when she screwed up. That's why she beats herself up so hard, since the last thing she wants to do is hurt him. I also like the theme of unaware duress followed by guilty reconciliation, and I love that story idea! If you ever decide to flesh it out, I'd love to read it. I like the thought of it being a sibling, since I feel like this site needs more gentle sibling interaction. However, like I've said, do what's best for you first. With that being said, I'd be absolutely honored if I was able to help inspire something!
Once again, thanks so much for your reviews! I'm seriously happy that you're enjoying the series, since you're one of my inspirations. Oh, I've had plenty of typos and mistakes, but I'm not above going back and fixing them in the future, which is likely why there don't *appear* to be any. Autocorrect also helps a lot, judging by the fair number of typos I've made in my responses to reviews. Lastly, you're absolutely right - my gentle formula involves a generous sprinkle of emotional trauma. It drastically increases the chances of it blowing up in my face, but it's been okay so far. I hope you enjoy the third story!!
-Pluto
Markus has recently learned of the dark hunger that his elven adventuring companions have for humans. The elves meanwhile, have just learned that Markus isn't nearly as off-limits as they had always thought he was.I'm a sucker for a gentle themed story peppered with vore. You're pretty detailed with your writing!
Something I love to run across is a human, who is undoubtedly safe in the company of his giant companions, yet still is scared of them at some base, internal level.
I liked the ending of this story with the elephant in the room finally being addressed and put to rest.
Trust is a very important thing when it comes to tiny/large relationships and friendships. Being reminded of the power dynamic, and then finding a way to equalize it really melts my heart.
(Yes, they could eat you. But they won't.)
Thanks for writing this!
Garter-Lamia are smaller versions of the normally frightening monstergirl that some keep as pets. Apple is one such tiny snake-girl, recently purchased by her new master, Darren. Apple often fantasizes about him, and wonders what things might be like between them if she was the big one...
A one shot about a tiny pet Lamia and her fantasies and schemes to shrink her master to gain the upper hand in the relationship.
I've been meaning to leave a review on this, but now I've finally got a short break to do so. Firstly, I'm impressed you were able to crank this out in such a timely manner. I don't have much free time to write usually, but I saw the time span between that thread and the upload of this story. You work very fast and keep a consistent quality. This whole thing was very cute and had a nice lighthearted theme to it.
I am beyond pleased to see one of my comments made it into here: the Norm Humanton post. It actually had me laughing pretty hard, that's such a suspicious (sussss?) name for a profile. I also like how the name Cake made it into here as well, and she even made her own comments!
And being a fan of vore, the snappiness of how quickly Darren got Snekked at the end was charming. I'm thankful she snapped to her senses and rectified the situation quickly.
The story kind of reads like a goofy anime kind of deal. I loved all of it, thank you for uploading this.
Glad you liked it, yeah the Lamia trying to hard to fit in in the online comments was too good to pass up, Norm Humanton probably always recommends that other users by a garter Lamia lol. Darren getting nommed immediately is a natural consequence of letting his pet Lamia watch SNEKKED videos all day, like it's only natural that the poor girl would want to try him once. Anyways thanks for the review, these monstergirl stories are always fun to write and see people's reactions to.
A neurotic shut in engages in a regrettable, toxic dispute with someone on 4chan, only for the stranger to appear at his front door.
You know, I really like stories like this one. It's a shame it's so short, but it hits the right notes for me. I really like when an intimidating giantess figure unmasks themselves as someone gentle. Dante should probably cool it down with the hate and vitriol online, but looks like he's learning that lesson already, even if it was accelerated due to the looming presence of a giantess.
it's one of my favorite dynamics when former enemies become friends despite one of them being easily capable of harming the other. after the events of the story he'll definitely cool it down a bit
Katie is an up and coming star at an ad agency when she gets infected with a virus that turns her into a cat-girl. Harrison, her workplace rival, finds this hilarious, and constantly bullies her about her new feline traits... Harrison quickly finds out that he's infected with a similar strain of the virus that got Katie, but he's becoming a mouse-boy, complete with a reduction in size. How will Katie react to her old workplace bully becoming a delicious mouse-boy? She's going to eat him obviously... it's just a matter of when.
A romantic one-shot about coworkers dealing with the effects of a mutagenic virus and their new instincts. Catgirl vs Mouse-boy goodness within.
Very cute. I enjoy the cat/mouse art on the boards and I'm happy to see some type of gentle/vore story come out of it. I was kind of expecting an "o sht" moment with Harrison needing to run and getting chased before Kitty made good on all those vore threats, but he lost the second he had his guard down. I'm sure instincts are strong forces enough already, so it's no wonder alcohol was what made her easily give into her predatory role.
Harrison kind of had it coming when he'd been a douche to her while she transformed. I'm glad they reconciled afterwards. As minor as it is, conflict and characters being rude aren't easy for me to read through since I'm a certified cinnamon roll, but I'm glad I stuck through it. Gentle truly is patrician taste.
Also there's no need to be sorry about a delay on Neet because the speed of which you churn out stories is quicker than a catgirl's hand landing on a mouseboy's tail. I'm not really sure how you manage it at all. But your work is appreciated and you deserve to know that.
Some of my stories have more conflict than others, as it is I try to aim for an uplifting story as a rule, like you I'm kind of a softy lol. Anyways the catgirl mouseboy thing was stuck in my head and I finally had to do a story on it, the whole "instinct" idea was fun and I like the long somewhat teasing relationship where Harrison is never quite sure how serious Katie's threats are. Glad my work is appreciated, I always love reading reviews!
A giantess is taking a bath when she discovers a tiny man sneaking around her bathroom. Despite her kindness and politeness, she remains adamant that, as a giantess, she must eat him. She wants to have a little chat with him first, but nothing can sway her from her decision to make him her bath time snack.
Well that was a quick story. I see you're already hard at work writing another story too, and just wanted to leave some encouragement somewhere. I hardly have the time or energy to write anymore and I miss having the motivation. Unfortunately it's just torture, never being satisfied with anything I submit.
Speaking of torture, this was pretty much how it goes. If a giantess planned to eat you, what would you do if you were tiny? If begging and pleading were off the table? If she wasn't going to change her mind? You're screwed. It would be the same chance of outrunning a hungry polar bear when you're unarmed-- you're prey, sad as it is.
I think that's why I'm drawn to Gentle stories more than most, though I do love watching vore get mixed in in various ways. I won't get into the psychology of 'Why do people like vore and misery' but I'm glad it exists, if that makes sense. Helps me realize maybe my own life ain't so bad.
Sean really missed his chance to make his existence known. Everything he's ever done was snuffed out and no one would remember it. Vanessa could, sure, but he spent his time cursing his fate instead of talking.
Anyway, it's not much of a review but feedback and comments are what kept me going whenever I was in a writing mood and I felt I may as well give you another thing to check. Please, take care, and happy writing to you.
Thank you for taking the time to leave me some of your thoughts and I have to say I agree with what you said.
Although I barely publish a thousand words a week, I have tens of thousands of each chapter in my notes. I have at least a dozen different drafts of the same chapter, all extremely different, with the last day dedicated to taking the pieces I dislike the least and putting them together to create the story. And despite that, I still find myself re-editing pretty much everything before posting.
A lot of it is because I'm still pretty green in my writing skills, and I can't satisfactorily express what I want to write. My first story wasn't up to the standards I would have liked, and I only published it in the hope of advice, which I received immediately and in detail, thanks to the kind reviewers!
And I'm also really happy that you still managed to understand exactly what I wanted to express in the story despite its poor writing.
Although I love giantess vore, I have never liked evil giantesses. I find them petty and pathetic, as well as a major turn off. I have always preferred 'gentle' or playful giantesses, who treat their prey like a person, knowing that they are sentient beings with their feelings just like them, but nevertheless, consider this to be secondary to the fact that they are food that will end up inside their stomach to be digested alive.
I hope that one day I'll be able to write exactly the kind of story I want to make, but until then, I'll try to get better at writing.
Thanks once again for your comments!
The story of a maid who serves a tiny master.
[Previously titled "An Outing with Master]
After reading your replies, you do seem worried about whether the content is boring or not, and I understand that, since I've felt that feeling before. But I say that it's okay to have a non-sexual (G or PG) rated story. I end up skipping the vaginal cave diving present in most stories, I like reading about the size differences, feelings of characters regarding such things, fear and hope, etc. Spending a little time expressing differences in power really gets my heart tugged. Asexual gentle interactions aren't bad. I just like seeing the big people peacefully interacting with the smaller people, or even having to convince them of their pure intentions.
"I end up skipping the vaginal cave diving present in most stories"
I can relate. Still write that kinda stuff if someone commissions it, but I realize I've been losing interest in writing it for myself. I guess it's the erotica writer's version of getting tired of sleeping around so much and wanting to settle down and start a family instead. Problem is I still don't fully understand what makes this sort of story tick, so I can only play it by ear and feel it out as I go.