Penname: Calahonda [Contact] Real name: Juan
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Summary:

A version of my other story 'A Shrinking Condition' where another author and I take a different direction by focusing on Steve's training going to the next level with his family.

Where the original is very lightly incestuous, this story focuses on sexualizing his step-mother and step-sister a lot, so you have been warned.

The story is complete. We have two endings for those who prefer one over the other.

 

 

This is orginally Sm7in story but I found it on writing.com as an interactive story. I tweaked a route and created a new option.

All the credit is to Sm7in for this story.

 

Bonus chapter out.

 

I take reviews, suggestions, and comments and try to add them into the story. so if you want something to happen, review.

 

 

Disclaimer: This is the original authors work and property, all character and stories are his or her property. This is a work of fanfiction or tribute to the original author. All other characters or scenarios are properties of other authors. No money was made from the creation or continuation for this story.

You should check out this author, Sm7in, and his stories elsewhere

You can also add your own routes and options at writing.com

 


Categories: Giantess, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, Odor, Slow Size Change, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 88 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 129478 Read Count: 562408
[Report This] Published: November 10 2020 Updated: October 14 2021
Reviewer: Calahonda Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 12 2021 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44: Labor of troubles

It might be nice let Steve take the initiative to enter her. After all it is pretty chilling outside the spot he is growing to feel comfortable in. That will be stimulating surprise for Alesha not having to force him in.



Author's Response:

I might go with that or might not. I could also use it later on. I don't think that Steve wants that right now. He has been trying to escape the past 48 hours from the girls and it seems to be out of place if out of blue he wants to be inside. I will try my best to see if I can come up with him wanting to go in but I give no promises.

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Date: February 03 2021 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51: Friends not coming over brings you down

Great set up! I would like to see Kady catch him and Alison help her with the delivery. And maybe that they help each other with the insertion into the next one. Look forward to your next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. The vote went to Aunt Maria for the person that tiny Steve gets to hangout with. it is possible later on for Kady and Allison to come in again.

 

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Date: February 04 2021 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52: Restroom Break with No Rest

How could I forget about aunt Maria! A movie with the family seems to me the perfect setting to do whatever the others already experienced. Steve already has the right size.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. i am glad that you are happy that Aunt Maria is having sometime with Steve. I hope you still enjoy the story as it goes on.

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Date: February 15 2021 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58: Time to start again from the top

Isn't Kara already fantasizing about her students at one inch tall? And might Steve be the lucky one?



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Yes, Mrs. Adams fansizes about her husband or one of her students at one inch tall. Steve is going to be the lucky one for her, the issue is she going to find him before he goes in the womb or after.

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Date: April 19 2021 Title: Chapter 69: Bonus chapter: New year, New behaviors

Wow! You really outdid yourself with this chapter! I cannot say I like the male interference but I love the way you describe Steve's developments in his techniques. In order to get his nutrition by stimulating the women who carries him. I would really like to see him return to his mother and use his improvements to satisfy her. After all, there is no better or safer space for Steve than Kady's womb, is there? I can't wait to see the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. I know that some people don't like the male interference but I had readers ask for it and I try to fit it in the story the best I can. The main focus is Steve so I try to limit male interaction with Steve and the original author doesn't want it either by his rules but alllows it slightly. I do like it also how Steve has to please the woman who is carrying him to survive until the pill and such comes to let him out. 

 

I will count your vote for Kady. making the vote count, 0 for sister and friends, 1 for Aunt and friends, and 2 for Mom.

Reviewer: Calahonda Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 26 2021 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72: Home is where this began

Great set up. I would go for the second option. I'm curious to see what Kady is up to.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. We will be going with the Aunt for the first part. Kady will show up. Kady has her own plans for Steve and the Aunt might be forcing her to speed things up.

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Date: May 11 2021 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76: Aunt going to get away with this

An interesting development. Well done! It would be nice to see that Steve develops an urge to enter Kady willingly. After he discovers that the outside world is cruel and cold Kady's womb is the only place he is protected from it all. Look forward to your next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. I like the idea and will try my best to aim for Steve to choose someone to enter willingly. The world outside is getting more and more cruel to him as he continues to shrink. He would be considering trusting someone.

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Date: June 08 2021 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79: A boobitful experience

Wow! One of your best chapters so far! I didn't see this coming. Good to see the obvious bonding between the two of them and that he is comfortable with this mother feeding him. I would say the next step is Steve willingly enter his sister/mother because she is now the one to give him shelter. He would be safe in her from any harm from the outside world. Her or Kady of course.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much. I couldn't find myself doing a short chapter for that interaction. I would say that Allison is more manipulative than caring, she would use that sort of behavior to get what she wants. If that is how she will get Steve, she will become more caring. We are getting to the point where a choice will be made between Kady and Allison soon. I need people to decide if Allison is going to use her asshole or vagina before then.

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Date: July 02 2021 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81: Decision of a lifetime

Kady of course!

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Date: August 03 2021 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82: A Momma's boy

The clit is the obvious choice of course because that's her most sensitive spot. And Kady doesn't know Steve improved his skills considerably. I look forward to see her getting pleased by a more experienced Steve.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Steve is on the clit. We will see more of what Steve can do later with his new skills (uhm pyschological behaviors) from Mrs. Adam

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Date: August 31 2021 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83: Forming a clic with Kady

Terrific chapter and good to see you picking up this story. Good choice of Steve to  willingly enter his Mother. I hope that she will be aware of his choice and enjoy him. For Steve it will be the safest option of course.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Steve is willingly entering into the womb. she is aware now, but that could change depending on how many pills she takes.

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Date: September 09 2021 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84: Kady, the goddess mother

Great chapter and good to see Kady welcoming his decision. You make me curious to see what an overdose would do. I look forward to your next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Kady has chosen to overdose. We will see if going inside willingly was good for him. All I know, they are connected more than ever.

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Date: January 24 2021 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49: A Summer Gone

I would go for a holiday with the family. They are more or less addicted to carrying him and be a mother to him and want to explore those feelings more and help each other. Well done so far and I look forward to where you ta Steve in the next story! Keep it up!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. it is possibility this story arc will be chosen. I am holding off on adding to this story so people can review and vote for what story arc they will want. So please be patient. that arc, if chosen by readers, will explore more of those feelings. I am hope you enjoy whatever comes due to the vote.

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Date: January 20 2021 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47: Getting an Earful.

She could be the ultimate mother to him by carrying him for a longer period than the others and be the first one to breastfeed him. She has seen the others after all and that would be the ultimate way to overpower them



Author's Response:

I like the idea but I already have something planned for Steve to finish this arc. I do have to say though that Allison has been the first one to breastfeed him, she did it when she gave birth to Steve. Alesha has bigger boobs than everyone else so she has that going for her, they could become larger due to breastmilk.

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Date: January 20 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Prolgue

Not your strongest chapter if you ask me but that is only because this is not really my thing. I am curious how Alesha is going to enjoy him and become his next mother. I really look forward to see how you let things unfold.



Author's Response:

I know not every chapter will please everyone but I try to complete the requests people give me in the reviews. Someone asked for an ear chapter so I try to find a way to get an ear scene. I try to please many different readers whe want to read different things. Sorry if this feels like a rant, I want a lot readers to give reviews and ideas for the story and I want them to know that I try to make what they want possible within reason.

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Date: January 18 2021 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46: A really affectionate friend

Your writing skills seem to improve every chapter. Therefore I definitely would like to see how you let things develop before the inevitable happens. Well done and I look forward to your next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. I am trying to improve my writing by writing a lot of stuff and seeing where I need to get better. I hope you like the next chapter.

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Date: January 12 2021 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44: Labor of troubles

... need you to go right inside MY womb because I suffered enough from seeing my mother enjoy carrying you!

Yet another terrific and descriptive chapter! Well done!



Author's Response:

I will go with that for what Alesha says. Thank you for enjoying the chapter.

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Date: January 09 2021 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42: I don't like Needles

Really love the way you describe Julia's feelings and urges with Steve inside of her. Look forward to your next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your response and enjoyment of the story

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Date: January 01 2021 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41: An unexpected child

Julia will try to keep him inside for as long as possible to sexually enjoy her pregnancy of a teenage boy! Again a great chapter!



Author's Response:

Julia is going to try and keep him inside her as long as possible. She is enjoying this.

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Date: December 20 2020 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39: Mother Nose Best

Good chapter although the nose part is not really what I like. A hole would be a forced one way street to the grand prize, the womb. From Julia's point of view that is.



Author's Response:

A reader asked for a nose scene so I tried to find a spot to fit it in. I try my best to have reader's responses become part of the story.