Giantess World :: Calahonda

Summary:

Enlisting the aid of his sister, a teenaged highschooler who has been inadvertantly shrunk decides he wants to crash the birthday party of the girl he's been crushing on, but the party is girls only.

After the party, the story tracks the tribulations of the shrunken lad as he navigates his way through a sea of lovely ladies.

Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Gentle, Incest, Insertion, Lesbians, Maternal, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 180 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 207233 Read Count: 2405090

[Report This] Published: July 17 2015 Updated: September 06 2017

Reviewer: Calahonda Signed

Date: November 30 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Tom's Story

......... forgot to rate! :)

Author's Response:
Thanks!

Reviewer: Calahonda Signed
Date: November 30 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Tom's Story

I read all the 139 chapters since you started this story, Duggernaut. And it still surprises me that you write with the same speed and vigour Tom has in your story. I too felt compelled to finally rate and review this story this story. Although I made my account to do that for another story (In over his head, which I can recommend) it definately could have been yours. Excellent writing skills, Duggernaut, and easy reading for non-native readers like me. Can't wait for chapter 140 in which I hope to see Cassidy involved as well. By the way, did you know that in Holland we have a navigation system called a TomTom. And we call that a vagination system.... :)

Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to share a review. Feedback is always welcomed and it provides motivation to keep writing. I was not aware of the TomTom vagination system. Very funny. I hope you continue to enjoy this story!

In Over His Head by Mouseyman99, Raziell Rated: X

[Reviews - 64]

Summary:

Do you play Skyrim? Do you mod? What if that crazy, custom, bouncy, busty, nearly nude world you made through combining all those mods came to life..and had it’s OWN story? A story with giantesses, sexy monsters, powerful beautiful women, sex, and "unbirthy"ness/"vory"ness! But also a story with romance, adventure, comedy, and an epic saga involving Daedra, gods, and many of the most powerful forces in Tamriel, all set in a time just after the events of Elder Scroll's Online.

It begins with a peculiarly small Bosmer, far far north of the main Skyrim province, in a small but bustling Nord town, on a remote, frozen island in the middle of nowhere...

Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Fantasy, Gentle, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 124462 Read Count: 156909

[Report This] Published: October 19 2016 Updated: May 26 2019

Reviewer: Calahonda Signed

Date: November 28 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

And another terrific chapter! One has to feel sorry for Mavka, the way she struggles with her feelings. And now Edovan knows how she feels about him! How will he act with this knowledge and how will Yagaritte react when she finds out? How is the romance between Yagaritte an Edovan going to proceed with this development? You still made me very curious about what happened in the laundry room; what did Yagaritte whisper in his ear and who belongs the ring to that he found? Really can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:
Thanks Calahonda! always appreciate your feedback, and I know my partner does as well!

Edovan is a giver. It's just his nature. Question is..how MUCH is he willing to give? Or mebbe she just TAKES XD But either way it definitely complicates things! But Act 1 is about to end and Act 2 is about to start and it will definitely give Yagaritte a fighting chance as we get out into the wilderness and into some dungeons! <3 There will be lots of surprises along the way as the bigger story starts to take shape!

Reviewer: Calahonda Signed
Date: December 25 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That,s veey kind but you don' have to convert just for me. It's my limitation, isn't it? By the way, suppose your last chapter was someone's fantasy, whose would it be? Edovan's or Mavka's?

Author's Response:
hahaha that's a good question! Given the nature of their connection..it would depend a lot on how close they are to each other. If close it prolly starts as hers and ends up being both? She has that affect on him <3 But I don't think Edovan would ever "conciously" go down that road if she's not close by to influence. We actually made this just for fun, and as personal treat for me to share with you, but we toyed with the idea of making it a Mavka/edovan shared dream at some point before we decided to just post it for christmas as is XD But don't worry, we will definitely be "exploring" this territory further in the real story! Her desire for him and his for her and the nature of it is completely tied to who/what both of them are, and all will be revealed in good time!

Reviewer: Calahonda Signed
Date: December 08 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Would be a loss to see this story stranded!

Author's Response:
still writing! not stranded..lol should be ready to post again this weekend. my partner is in retail hell right now so I just need her to finish the vignette and then we can go straight to all the stuff I've written next xD

Reviewer: Calahonda Signed

Date: December 13 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Glad to see the story continue. You make me very curious about what she whispered in his ear! And who belongs the ring to he found in the laundry room? I look forward to see Edo and Yagaritte reunited, and what she plans to do with him... Another well written chapter and can't.wait for the next one!

Author's Response:
It might be a bit before we found about those two things..but Y and E will be reunited soon, I promise. She's been a busy bee, but all her hard work has been leading up to this XD As for the staff, we will fiind out when Edo finds out XD Thanks again for the support and the feedback Calahonda. I forward everything you guys comment to my partner and I thinks she looks forward to hearing from you guys as much as you look forward tor eading the next installment! I know I do.. See you this weekend with the next Chapter!

Reviewer: Calahonda Signed
Date: November 17 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Keltohey is right. This story is a gem and deserves to be appreciated a lot more. I love the fantasy-setting and your character building. Edovan as a naieve and sheer magnet to the female creatures. Especially the confusing effect he has on the by nature gentle Yagaritte, with a slight but harmless sadistic twist. I hope to see the romance between the two of them develop further. Great fantasy, and please continue to fantasize all you want. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:
Thank you! It's very gratifying to get the positive feedback. I share everything you all post with my partner and I think it really helps her confidence. I'm nervous about writing in general and she's nervous about writing giantess/vore/unbirthy type stuff.. so it's always great to hear people are really getting into the story and the characters, which is good, because the story doesn't stay at the Boar forever xD

We are kind of imagining this in alot of ways as an anime xD So we definitely have our harem and our fanservice xD But at the heart of it all its a true love story with an epic fantasy adventure background.. and hopefully you really enjoy the comedy as well.

Next post is Sunday so we ca nget the other forums caught up to this one! see you then! Tell your buddies to come read it too! The more of us involved the more fun it will be!

Reviewer: Calahonda Signed
Date: November 22 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

My brother has a gnome in his garden (as quite some Dutch people have). Since your last chapter I feel very strange when I visit the place and can't help wondering what might have happened to the poor thing (the gnome, not my brother :-).

Author's Response:
lol.. i guess that depends..are there are any giant Dremora ladies hanging lurking about by any chance? xDD

Reviewer: Calahonda Signed
Date: November 21 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Terrific chapter and very well written indeed! Especially the way you describe the scenes from both perspectives. This story is getting better and better. Edovan is really on his way to become the Rudolph Valentino of The Horny Bear. I'm curious about Yagaritte's reaction when she comes to retrieve him. And where and how will she find him? Stashed in one of Mavka's devices? And how long will it take Yagaritte before she wants to try him out? Really can't wait for the next chapter !

Author's Response:
Thanks! He's definitely not out of the woods yet XD Hell, hes more less still on the moving belt, headed to the sawmill xD Let's hope Mav has more self-control now then she did the first three times xD Hopefully he's still around for Yagaritte to retrieve... O.O

Reviewer: Calahonda Signed

Date: November 18 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A female co-writer, that explains the depth in your female characters! And that I sympathize with Edovan because I still don't have a clue about them either!
There's no reason for the both of you to be nervous about your writing. As I mentioned before, your writing skills are above average. As far as I can judge as a non-native English reader, that is.
The comedy aspect of the story didn't escape my attention. Please do not worry about writing 'unbirthy type stuff', as you call it (hilarious phrase!). That gives the story the erotic touch it needs in my opinion. It is all a fantasy after all and that's what this site is all about. If I want reality, I switch to Discovery Channel. Or CNN....

Reviewer: Calahonda Signed
Date: December 14 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

And it appears to be a mystery what Yagaritte did to/with his staff! It can serve only one purpose, if you ask me.... :)

Reviewer: Calahonda Signed
Date: November 23 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Back in the laundry room , Yagaritte whispered something in Edovan's ear. Something that got him over the edge. Are we about to find out what or wasn't that relevant?

Author's Response:
you will find out..but its a secret for now <3

Reviewer: Calahonda Signed
Date: December 19 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Another good chapter MM, though a bit shorter than we are used to! I'm curious to see how Bernadette intends to compete with Mav and Yag!

Reviewer: Calahonda Signed

Date: December 24 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Can we expect another chapter this weekend, MM?

Author's Response:
It Christmas, and you have been very good, so I'm posting special holiday treat right now!

Reviewer: Calahonda Signed

Date: December 25 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

And what a treat it is, MM & Co! Excellent chapter but I'm glad you pointed out that it did not happen. It makes me even more look forward to see the poor guy reunited with Yagaritte. She's the one he is in love with after all. I look forward to the next chapter although I still can't get used to.the damn inches....;)

Author's Response:
lol you want heights in centimeter's/meters too? we can do that! I'm excited to get them back together too! He's got few thigns to take care of first but its coming!

Reviewer: Calahonda Signed
Date: January 17 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Can we expect another update, MM? It would be a loss to see your story stranded!

Author's Response:
writing a little more every day! I promise we are still working on it, just trying not to rush make the story as good as we can. Things are about to get much more "complicated" and adventurous..lol and that's a different challenge from sexy tiimes XD tho there will be plenty more of those too! They follow Edo where ever he goes XD

Reviewer: Calahonda Signed
Date: April 02 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Just reread your story, MM. Makes me even more curious about what is going to happen next. And most of all, it makes me wonder even more what the hell Yagaritte whispered in his ear! Any plans for an update?

Author's Response:
almost ready to post.. shooting for sunday!

Reviewer: Calahonda Signed

Date: May 07 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow MM! You took your time but with result! Excellent chapters. I cannot help feeling sorry for Eydva and I am curious how Staan ends up with Edovan. Look forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response:
I'm glad you stuck around! I prmise it wont be so long till next one xD musta rewrote that fight 20 times XD

Reviewer: Calahonda Signed
Date: May 07 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

...... but why do I have the feeling that I already know Eydva?

Author's Response:
because you have already met her xDDD and NO it's not Edo xD

Reviewer: Calahonda Signed

Date: May 19 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really can't see what connects her to Edovan and where this is leading. Can understand Staan's feelings I guess. Curious where Yagaritte will fit in. Still by far the best story on the site, MM!

Author's Response:
Getting back to Yagaritte soon, I promise! And all will be revealed in time xD sooo many secrets..lol Really appreciate your feedback Calahonda! I always pass it on to my writing partner to inspire her <3