Penname: MarsyMan [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: November 09 2016
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if any of you read my cringey story on here once upon a time...



...no you didn't.


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Summary:

Continuing the tale told in Children of Vandan. An enemy force invades the kingdom of Vandan, and the giant princesses, Belena and Sylvie, must come to its rescue.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Body Exploration, Couples , Gentle, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Vandan
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23840 Read Count: 67135
[Report This] Published: March 24 2014 Updated: August 22 2020
Reviewer: MarsyMan Signed
Date: July 06 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Oh my god. The madman actually went and did it. Wow!

Thank you so much for re-dedicating yourself to this ^.^

I really love your stories and I remember reading all of the Vandan posts quite a while ago and really enjoying them - but being really bummed out when this was left inactive. I think I'll go re-read the previous stories and catch right back up. Expect a review on the new chapter(s) in a bit. I've got some reading to do! :>



Author's Response:

I'll be waiting!

Summary:

The official sequel to "Who's Really the Bigger Person Here?"

It's been about a year since the events of the last story have taken place. Amy, Ben, Mark, and Johnny reunite for a summer all to themselves. The town is more tolerant of Amy, the military hasn't returned, and things are looking up.

That is until a few new visitors come to town. Who are they and what are their intentions? All of that can be summed up in one statement . . . . . shit happens.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Adult 30-39, Butt, Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30239 Read Count: 74783
[Report This] Published: October 31 2014 Updated: February 21 2016
Reviewer: MarsyMan Signed
Date: March 01 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Really Epic Setup, Trust Me.

Welp. Just finished reading all you stuff and I've really enjoyed it. And the thing is, I tend to try and not read stories that aren't finished and haven't been updated longer than a year ago. To me, it means it's dead and not with getting attached to the characters, for it to just stop before it ends. But I just couldn't resist this. I loved the first one and when I saw there was a sequel, I practically jumped for joy.

Only to see all the signs of a dead story.

Completed: No.

Updated: February 21 2016

I didn't care though ;) But I fell into a trap I myself saw coming from a mile away. Even if it was like Admiral Ackbar yelling "It's a trap!" Before the board room scene in ROTJ. I just couldn't stop myself. And, even worse... I loved it. I love these characters, I love the premise, I love where the story was going. I just... am saddened that's it's ended up like this. But I understand if you don't really have the will to write. I just wanted to say that I wish, some day, that this will continue... ;)

Minime by RandomStoriesHQ Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

'The aim of the serum I was injected with was to concentrate the cancer molecules and ultimately shrink them down to about a twentieth of their original size, which would kill them off… and what the doctors forgot to mention here, was that if the chemical combination of my blood cells was as rare as my own, there would be a somewhat awkward reaction. Sally Ryan’s serum made not just the cancer but the rest of my bones and muscles shrink down to about a twentieth of their original size. So yes, I’m pretty small for my age. Small enough to fit in someone’s hand. Small enough to ride on their shoulders. Small enough to call myself five and a half inches tall.'

Amy Leebeck is your average 16 year old girl, apart from one tiny detail. She has grown up five inches tall and faces the tough challenges of living at her size. When she was abducted by a boy fighting a lost cause, Amy thought that her pitiful existence was over. But as she gets to know her mysterious kidnapper, her dull and dreary life begins to unfold...


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Teenager (13-19), Couples , Gentle, Humiliation, Entrapment, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: M/f, M/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 39406 Read Count: 81600
[Report This] Published: June 25 2015 Updated: March 10 2017
Reviewer: MarsyMan Signed
Date: February 15 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Thank god. I'd been wondering where the next update for this was. I'm really liking this story! I hope there are more chapters incoming ;)

Summary:

Claire Abernathy is a kind girl. Having moved after family issue's she winds up working at a Daycare. Its a dream job for her, she loves children... but the children here have secrets of their own.

Contains Underage content, along with a lot of other strange philia's. If thats not your cup of tea, feel free to look somewhere else.

 


Categories: Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Furry, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, New World Order, Nose, Odor, Scat, Unaware, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 196299 Read Count: 214819
[Report This] Published: February 22 2016 Updated: March 16 2017
Reviewer: MarsyMan Signed
Date: February 15 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Why We're Here...

Thank you so much for continuing this. Been reading for a while but only recently made an account here so I couldn't really review. Anyway, I love this story. The setup, characters and the way each girl is developed and each succeeds in being individually unique and interesting is extremely impressive  and the dedication it must take to write 5000+ chapters is even more-so. It all pays off anyway. I'm thoroughly enjoying the series and I'm looking forward to the next chapters. ;)



Author's Response:

T-T thank you so much for your words MarsyMan, they really do make me feel better about my writing and it feels good to know i'm not just dragging a story along that no one wants to read. Thank you so much for taking your time to say that to me, i really do appreciate it.

Reviewer: MarsyMan Signed
Date: February 21 2017 Title: Chapter 19: What We'll Do...

Oooo! Great chapter! Another long one to enjoy. I was wondering when Claire's and the Twin's stories would finally intertwine and I love the way they did. The interaction between them in the final few moments gave me chills. I can't wait for the next one! :3



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it MarsyMan. A simple moment, but it was enough to throw the twins off :P

Thank you for reviewing, i'll try to have another chapter up when i can.

Reviewer: MarsyMan Signed
Date: February 27 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Who... are you?

Jesus. Great chapter! I really loved these flashback chapters but I'm glad we're finally back to the main timeline. The insight they gave was really cool to read with the characters having each of their beginnings revealed. Anyhow, this story keeps on getting better and better and I hope the next chapters will keep that status. Thank you for dedicating time to write these. They're fantastic and I can't wait for the next one ;)



Author's Response: And thank you for dedicating your time back to tell me that. :) I'll try my hardest to have a new chapter finished soon!

Reviewer: MarsyMan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 16 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Epilog

I’m sad to see this finish. Seriously. This has been one of those special stories that knock it out of the park. One of those that you’ll randomly find scouring the website that you’d binge all the way through. I’ve loved this and a bit gloomy to see it go. I’m going to miss it.

However, I wanted to wait to right my final review on the Epilogue instead oof the fiinal chapter so I could do this:

As a tribute, I wrote a review of the entire story. It’s in third person written as if it was for someone who had never read it, meaning I’m keeping it vague for spoilers. (It’s easier to relay my opinions that way without going too overboard. I actually had to cut stuff out when it went over 700 words and I seemed like I was droning on :P)

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I first saw this story on the most recent page around a year ago. Sitting there with its secrets. Waiting for it to be read and unveiled….

Well, it didn’t really have that much of a mystical build up. But, still.

I started reading through it quite casually. Not that engaged but still holding my interest - thinking it was an alright story with some decent characters.

But as I continued to read on, the story revealed itself to be a very well set-up and structured storyline with genuinely interesting characters. Each chapter set up in a way that each of the leads and supporting are developed individually and have them be the focus of their own segment. Comparable to TV shows like Skins - where each episode is from the perspective of a different cast member. In this roster there is:

Kat – A seemingly kind/innocent girl who talks about herself in the third person and has an adoration towards cats. Taking up their mannerisms and appearance.

May – An innocent but clumsy girl whom is the most balanced morally.

Kai – An eccentric and overly uncaring for her own hygiene.

Lily (Or Lilith) – A cruel and unforgiving girl with her own set of seemingly flawed moral code.

And Sophia and Alexis – Two blonde and mysterious identical twins who share their appearance with the uncanny twins from The Shining and seem to be able to exploit everything around them at will.

All of whom attend the same day-care and all share a unique pass-time...

Each girl has their own time to shine and are fleshed out well enough that you begin to understand that they’re all flawed in their own right. Opening up to the main character, and in-turn, the reader.

Speaking of which, what separates Precious Little Demons from those TV shows is that it doesn’t switch perspectives. It’s all tied together and told from the point of view of our main character; Claire. Who may at first may appear to only be a catalyst for the story to ensue, but is shown to have some demons of her own. As she gradually becomes a very interesting character in her own right.

And like I said, you grow to care for the equally (Totally not equally, Kat is my favourite) and know their goals but also their limitations.

I got incredibly enticed and hooked during those first few days of that I even read a few chapters on the train and stayed up some days reading well into the night. Each of the girls never stopped being interesting and I enjoyed it for how it played out.

Sadly though, all things most come to a close. Nothing lasts forever. Although in this story, it’s potentially set up to go on forever. But would I want that? In a way, yes. But ultimately, no. The story is over. I would definitely read short vignettes involving the same characters or a sequel story. But for now. It’s run its course.

And what a good one it’s been…



Author's Response:

D-Damn...

You made something fly into my eyes. I'm not crying i swear!

;-;

 

Thank you for writing this for me MarsyMan. Whenever someone goes about taking their time, to tell me their thoughts, especially as detailed as you have, i just feel elated. You've been here since the begining, and i'm glad you've seen my work come to a close. I know this story is finished but even so, it makes me happy how it ended. I'm glad people can see the story for what its worth, and not by the amount it holds.

Thank you for reading my story. Thank you for telling me your feelings. It's an honor to read them.

^,^

Summary:

Tiffany, a young ten year old giantess likes "playing" with the "tinies" in a city but what happens when a bigger and older giantess takes over Tiffany's turf?


Categories: Unaware, Giantess, Breasts, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Feet, Gentle, New World Order, Violent, Vore, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 84059 Read Count: 258430
[Report This] Published: October 21 2016 Updated: October 26 2018
Reviewer: MarsyMan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 04 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Thank you thank you thank you for updating this story! Hopefully you've gotten the inspiration you needed to continue - writer's block can be a bitch. I thought Thomas' look on the situation he's in was interesting, like his relationship with Tiffany itself. How he thinks there's hope for her but deep down knows that throwing his life away to stay with Tiffany isn't very realistic. I'm probably reading too far into it, but normally when character's realise that the situation they're in, that forms the main basis of the story, is temporary and fleeting away/coming to a close - it foreshadows the forthcoming narrative change and shift towards the final act.

Like ToraDora for instance, if you've seen that show. How Kawashima digs into tha main character when the anime is starting to come into the final act - telling him that he can't keep up a front of negligence just so that good times can last - how people need to move forward... 

Anyway, that's just me rambling I guess. I could be wrong, could be right. I don't know. I need sleep. See ya!



Author's Response:

How's it going, MarsyMan. Thanks for the review and  for the support when we were in the shoutbox! : 3 Yeah, one day someone will fine a vaccine against the dreaded Writer's Block, hopefully soon. I guess I could at least tell you Thomas's outlook on his situation won't necessarily bring the story to an conclusion but your right about it foreshadowing something. It's funny, everytime I try to start ToraDora, another anime distracts me. I've only seen like the first few episodes but I heard it's good.  Also, congrates on getting a 20k read count and 40 reviews on your story. ;) Expect a review from me soon.

Reviewer: MarsyMan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 26 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow. Feels like I haven't written one of these in a while. Well, anyway. I'm really tired whilst writing this - I've had a hectic week *~*. So excuse me if I seem a bit... disjointed in this review.

Just to start. Tiffany! Aha! My suspicions were correct. I am a genuis! >:3 Jk jk. But yeah, that flashback was very fitting for her character. I would love to see more of those building up her backstory and how she transformed her dissatisfaction around other giants into escapism through rampages. What'd be really cool is if there's more flashbacks exploring her first rampage - perhaps being caused by an especially tragic childhood event hmmmm????? ;)

The anime aspects of this chapter are probably the most prevalent that they've been so far. I'm surprised Bree didn't yell "HENTAI!!" before karate-chopping Gwen lol. With Tiffany being a prime tsundere I thought she'd be more selfish - definitively say she wasn't going and storm out of the diner clutching Thomas. Though I really like how she acts in this chapter, showing how she's evolved. How instead of snatching up Thomas like she would've before, she decides she's going to try and fight for him. Perhaps cause she realised that she herself needs to breach out more after seeing how she isn't the only one wanting attention from Thomas - and that she needs to step up and get it from him by going along with his plans more and taking chances. Which is paralleled by Thomas thinking maybe he's being too harsh - but in reality it encourages her to listen to him and develop herself into a better person. I like ittt! ^.^

The little resolution at the end was cute. That got me. I like how it comes from her overcoming her shyness and not being intimidated by groups of other girls, that was shown in the traumatic memory from earlier, by standing up for her friends and not letting them get the best of her. I'm rooting for Tiffany - she seems like she's trying.

As always I'm overanalysing so I'm gonna go now. Sorry for not leaving a review in June or whenever the last chapter came out. I remember writing, or at the very least drafting, a review for chapter 22 but I seems I didn't post it whoops :P

Soz for the messy review, I can't wait for the next chapter :D

I'm gonna go sleeepppp!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hey MarsyMan! First off, don't be sorry for not leaving a review. If anything, I should be the one apologizing to you and every other reader for the consecutive delays in updating chapters. Yeah, Tiffany is definitely branching out. A bit of reminiscing of that birthday had that effect on her shooting those girls with that water gun. Honestly, I had intented for Bree to say "Baka!" but your "Hentai!" reference makes much more sense. Thanks for the review! :)

Reviewer: MarsyMan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 13 2018 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Been a long while, but it's here! I'm so glad that this story has finally returned :D And I have this huge review to spout my thoughts I guess. Sit down, grab your popcorn, and prepare to be bored senseless! ^.^

So, what I really loved about these chapters was the further push of the supporting characters towards the spotlight. I really like the progression in how they've been edged in and even though they were abruptly introduced, this time to breathe has definitely been great in developing them all and helping to differentiate them.

Furthermore, Cecilia has 100% revealed what I thought about her with the whole argument over whether or not she has any real friends. That showed a lot of cracks in her very hard persona towards other giants - showing her insecurities with connecting/conversing with people her own size.

Tiffany seems to be sort of getting along with the other group members, and her interactions with Cecilia really put into perspective how much of just a shy and nervous child she really is - especially in situations where she is non-dominant. (Ironically, exactly like how Cecilia puts forward dominance in order to mask her own insecurities). Additionally, the hook at the end is quite enticing - makes me really hope that there are more chapters on the way soon!

Now, before all this I just want to clarify that none of this ruins the story for me, and I hate to be the guy nailing the 'No Fun Allowed' sign on your lawn. But I see you finally explained the whole distribution of media thing. 

I initially thought you were teasing me with Brooke wearing a Nirvana shirt and Adventure Time merch. But I'm glad you fully explained how the media of tinies is so heavily incorporated into the giants lives.

But, like, have you seen that Simpsons episode where Homer goes back in time and has to make sure he doesn't touch anything in case he alters the future - how any miniscule alteration can minorly or drastically change the course of history.

Basically the concept it uses is that if someone were to go back to, say, the year 1990 and bump into someone on their way to work - it may lead to that person missing their train, leading them to be late for work that day, meaning they promise to stay overtime for their boss, meaning they don't go out with co workers that evening which would've been the evening he met his soul mate - so he doesn't have any children or the specific children that would've been born. From that one little bump into someone, there's a huge chain reaction that leads to someone not being born that would've had a huge impact on the people around them. Do you get that theory? Any change not matter how insignificant can completely change the course of history unknowingly. 

So, personally, I can't really get behind the thought that bands like Nirvana, shows like Adventure Time or comics like Deadpool existing identically to how they do in real life. With a gigantic alteration in this universe being of an alternate dimension of giant women going in and out, rampaging through cities would cause more than a few alterations in time.

Like, wouldn't it be extremely possible that Kurt Cobain or Pendleton Ward were living in major cities before their success and were killed in rampages - or any of the people who would've influenced them to make their art.

And also what the giant world would have had significant influence on tiny media considering all the catastrophic attacks.

Like in this universe did catastrophic events like WW2 or other wars happen? With all the giantess rampaging in cities around many countries probably would've had enough on their plate/they might not have been able to go to war with all the costs of damages. 

Though, it's pretty obvious that both have had influence on American media within the last 70+ years - meaning many things have been created or not created due to all those people dying and the cultural/economical changes to many countries in the world. Like its safe to say a lot of anime wouldn't exist nor would a lot of comic books/cartoons that where created in the wartime effort during WW2. (Meaning Disney would be a lot different - possibly no Kingdom Hearts. And Captian America wouldn't have been such an icon - meaning no Deadpool)

So say those events did happen, if there were rampages in cities every other day, wouldn't the impact of them not occur?

And the vast increase of people dying and lives being drastically affected increase exponentially? (Meaning huge changes to culture and entertainment)

God... sorry about all this. I can live with the inconsistencies - they don't ruin the story or anything for me, it's just... are there any other explanations that are coming? Like, are the giants a recent thing? They don't really seem to be with the boy at the end being saved quite a few years ago. But maybe? I don't know, I'm just confused *~* Perhaps I'm just over-analysing this to the extreme.

If they are a recent thing then the Deadpool movie probably wouldn't have been made cos the world would be in such shambles. That would suck :P

Anyway, glad you're back either way, I will always ultimately love this story - even if a few things bother me. Keep on doing your thing! ;>



Author's Response: Hello, MarsyMan. First off, thank you again for leaving another one of your reviews. It was very clever of you to point out a comparison between Tiffany and Cecilia. I don't think anyone has pointed out Tiffany's shyness around other giantesses. You've also made an incredible observation about how the rampages should have made some serious altercations in the normal world. I'm sorry if some things bother you in the story. I know it could be a real pain reading something you might enjoy only for there to be possible plot holes or things in the story that don't add up. Initially, I didn't think Giantess Bully was going to be a story that would be this long and in all honesty when first started writing this, I didn't really have a big plot thought out. Eventually, I started coming up with some ideas that I thought would be really fun but sadly, that was my flaw: Coming up with fun ideas. I didn't really think through the more realistic, non-whimsical things that would explain this and that which is a huge dent in a story I would like to believe, became more elaborate. However, I think I can still give you and other readers some explanations. For one, to give you a hint on your question, noticed how I haven't actually mentioned any real cities. It's usually City Block Y or O. I did also think beforehand about how the giantesses could wipe out the population of normal sized people completely to the point of extinctions. There is also the warp holes that have been brought up in the story. Who is to say there are not other dimensions out there besides the one Thomas, Zeke, Anika and Mildred live in and the one the Giantesses live in? How did the warp holes come into existences? Were they manmade or dare I say, "giantess-made?" ;) Again, I appreciate your concerns about how there are some questionable things in the story. It helps me to know what needs to be address and shows you are involved in the story. :)

Reviewer: MarsyMan Signed
Date: July 23 2017 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Seeing as you asked a direct question, I meant Asuka Langley from Evangelion. Although, those traits are what I personally got from Asuka's character - others may see her as just a hateful snobby rich kid - which she basically is at face-value throughout the show. But I think her character goes way deeper than that. (If you haven't seen Evangelion, ignore all this)

Oh, and yeah soz I meant to say Gwen :/ Just a little name mix up :3

See ya!



Author's Response:

Ah. Another anime I could put on my list to watch lol 

Reviewer: MarsyMan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 21 2017 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Sorry for not writing this review sooner. My stupid-stupidness didn't see this new chapter in the Most Recent page when it came out >:( Which is unfortunate as I really look forward to each chapter... stupid me and my stupid sleep schedule. Earl stupid of stupid town - his royal highness King Stu Pid IV - baka of bakas.

Anyway! I LOVED this chapter! It did everything it needed to and more - fixing the only real gripe I had with this story (there being too many characters introduced at one point) by sprouting off and giving focus to each one individually. With them being interesting and given distinguishable qualities that didn't fall under eccentricities. That's a really impressive feat! Their characters were subtle but also blatant (meaning they were easy to get the gist of) in their approaches - especially considering how many were introduced. 

I already know that this review is gonna be a long one so I'm gonna do this to structure it better:

Intro: (Thomas and Tiffany) 

At this point, (continuing on the thought of Chapter 18 being a turning point), I think this is as far as Tiffany and Thomas go in their development. As in, I think the way their interactions and everything have reached the point at which they've excepted each other and the only further development will be when this solace is disrupted - to test how much they actually and truly feel for each other (which has been done - but not to a dire extent).

Cecilia:

Definitely have a better grasp on her now - getting a sort of Asuka vibe. Her personality to me is that of someone how does care about what she believes in, but also on the other hand, also does it because it makes herself feel like a better person in a situation where she is dominant.
Maybe, that's why she decided to mother these tinies because people in the giant world saw her wealth and power and where too intimidated - maybe that's why she decided to become the center of these people's lives - as she couldn't connect with people in her own world.

Trisha:

To me, she seems like an interesting character to be developed. I want to see more scenes with her in the future to flesh out who she is - what type of person she is and whether or not she turns out to really care for her tiny. At this point she just seems confused so I wonder what it'll be like when she inevitably breaks - either in acceptance or denial. If you get my drift. I just mean that I think she'll be interesting to watch grow.

Bree:

Possibly my favourite of all the new characters. She's just an embodiment of absolute innocence within this story of arguably detestable/flawed natured characters. To me she's the only truly innocent and likeable character right off the bat of their introduction - like she isn't hiding anything. Whether that'll change or not I don't really know. But for now I appreciate her as being a relaxing and gentle character.

Blair:

What can I really say about that interlude?



...more like Inter-LEWD

Awww fam yeh cuz that was like bareeeeeeeee jokes man init bruv. Like - no neck, mothers. I swear down. You chatting my language?

Beverly/Zeke:

I've seen quite a few reviews already hypothesising the impending situations that may challenge Beverly's character so I don't think I need to here. But I have to say, I do see their relationship getting rather bitter-sweet/tragic by the end...

Regardless, I'm PUMPED to see what happens next. I've been enticed in this story since the first few chapters. And whilst I was initially drawn by the centralised narrative (and I'll admit a bit apprehensive about all the new characters coming in all at once). I now love the very natural direction the story has taken. I look forward in seeing what comes in the next few chapters.

 

(Just a tiny note, I noticed a few spelling errors here and there - like the very last word. I don't mean to be rude by saying this. I just thought making it known to you would be best if you were unaware)

See ya! ;)



Author's Response:

Author's Response:

Hey MM! Man, you guys are killing with the reviews! Thank you so much! I guess chapter 19 was the best chapter so far. Btw, you're not a baka lol Sorry about some of the mispellings and grammar errors. It's sad that I actually thought I proofread this chapter properly -_-

 

I think I'm the real baka here...

 

Your analysis on the girl was interesting but just to clear any confusions, Gwen is the giantess and Trisha is her tiny lol I was actually more intrigued with your analysis of Bree. ^.^ She really does appear sweet and innocent, doesn't she? In fact, when I wrote her part in this chapter, I originally wanted the mother to reject her even after she sees Bree trying to comfort her son but I couldn't bring myself to have the titaness sweetheart go through that. The way you weighted out Bree's innocent nature compared to the other detestable/flawed girls from the meeting had me thinking I was reading a wikipedia page about an anime character's bio. It really got me hype lol.

 

Your deduction on Cecilia's kind treatment of the tinies to fill in that empty hole she has was another clever character analysis on your part. You truky have a sharp mind, man. I'm honestly a bit intimidated. :')

As for Tiffany's and Thomas's relationship, I have a feeling you and the other reviewers have an idea of whats going to happen next and the same goes for Zeke's and Beverly's relationship.

 

Thank you again for yet another review and btw, which Asuka from which anime were you referring to?



Author's Response:

Hey MM! Man, you guys are killing with the reviews! Thank you so much! I guess chapter 19 was the best chapter so far. Btw, you're not a baka lol Sorry about some of the mispellings and grammar errors. It's sad that I actually thought I proofread this chapter properly -_-

 

I think I'm the real baka here...

 

Your analysis on the girl was interesting but just to clear any confusions, Gwen is the giantess and Trisha is her tiny lol I was actually more intrigued with your analysis of Bree. ^.^ She really does appear sweet and innocent, doesn't she? In fact, when I wrote her part in this chapter, I originally wanted the mother to reject her even after she sees Bree trying to comfort her son but I couldn't bring myself to have the titaness sweetheart go through that. The way you weighted out Bree's innocent nature compared to the other detestable/flawed girls from the meeting had me thinking I was reading a wikipedia page about an anime character's bio. It really got me hype lol.

 

Your deduction on Cecilia's kind treatment of the tinies to fill in that empty hole she has was another clever character analysis on your part. You truky have a sharp mind, man. I'm honestly a bit intimidated. :')

As for Tiffany's and Thomas's relationship, I have a feeling you and the other reviewers have an idea of whats going to happen next and the same goes for Zeke's and Beverly's relationship.

 

Thank you again for yet another review and btw, which Asuka from which anime were you referring to?

Reviewer: MarsyMan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 03 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yeah... That's sort of what I was expecting 😂 It's completely fine if you're waiting to reveal these things later on. At least you know the answers to begin with ;) Oh BTW, it's 'MarsyMan', but dont sweat it. Although, now that you mention it, 'MarshyMan' might've been a better choice of name xD Anyway, thanks for the reply! If you want to know if I like the story... Look at my favourites and all the reviews I've written on my profile ;)



Author's Response: Your too kind..."MarsyMan" :)

Reviewer: MarsyMan Signed
Date: January 02 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Hey! I thought this chapter was great! Learning the characters was interesting and the cliffhanger really makes me really wanting to read on. But I have a few questions...

Now, I'm an extremely OCD person (don't have the condition, but you know what I mean) and I'm not trying to nitpick or criticise by asking this but, Bree said she was an Otaku and Thomas claimed he was one aswell. So is the Japan they consume media from in the tiny world? If so, with the amount of respect 'tinies' get, how would they get publishing rights to print manga in the giant world from them? And would the giants want to read something from the widely per sieved 'inferior' world?.. Like do they have Harry Potter and stuff like that? You said they have 'The Walking Dead' in a previous chapter, so is it an all-female version or is it imported? And do they obtain rights from the tinies to broadcast it. Or is it public domain in their world or something? Furthermore, how do the women get pregnant? Do they rape male tinies or something? Or like do they have sperm banks?

I'm sorry, I know I'm over thinking it but it's been bugging me since I read this chapter a few days ago. If you don't want to reveal some of these things, like you plan to reveals them in upcoming chapters, that's completely fine. Just want to get some more as much insight into the world as possible ;) Thanks! - MM



Author's Response: Hey MarshyMan! I really REALLY wanna answer your question about why the giantesses have the same medias as ours and trust me, I have an explanation "wipes brow" but I plan on saving it subsequently in the story as well as the mystery to how the women breed. I gotta tell ya, I almost freaked out when I read your comment. "Nooo! I plot holed my own story! :'( I'm a failure! I-I-I... Oh, wait...They have the same crap as us because---" It also occurred to me that I forgot to put the SciFi tag on this story so... "hint, hint." ;) I see geeman's title as the "slueth" might be threatened lol, jk. But seriously, thanks for pointing those things out, MarshyMan and I totally get what you mean about the OCD thing. It just means you enjoy the story and it would be such a turn off if there where plotholes in it. You do enjoy the story, right? RIGHT?! o_o Don't worry, your questions will be answered but maybe not too soon and I think you might find one out of two of the answers was something you didn't expect ;) Oh and forgive me if my response here was too congenial or offensive to you in anyway. Thnx for your review. :D

Reviewer: MarsyMan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 07 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hey! I'm really loving this so far and it's great you're updating this (semi-)regularly. The dynamic betwen Tiffany and Thomas is what makes me look forward to reading each chapter and I'm interested to see where the story and characters will go in the future :)



Author's Response: Ty, your words are too kind. I actually surprise that everyone is liking the dynamics between Tiffany and Thomas so much =3

Summary:

A young giantess sought fun and adventure, but she got more than what she bargained for when she crossed paths with a mysterious human. She soon learned that no matter how many villages she had groveling at her feet, some individuals needed a different approach to dominate.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Breasts, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Gentle, Giant, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/m, FM/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 37097 Read Count: 73661
[Report This] Published: May 30 2017 Updated: June 22 2017
Reviewer: MarsyMan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 31 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Quite an enjoyable opening. Liked alot of the character build up and that cliffhanger really is a tease :3 Do you update regularly? Because overall this looks like it will be quite entertaining and I'm optimistic to see how it progresses ;)



Author's Response:

Yes, I do. Actually, I just posted this the day you read it. I’m very glad you liked it. Thank you so much for the good rating and inspirational review. I’m working on the second one right now, again thanks and have a good day.

Summary:

An immediate sequel to "Godsis Universe: The Arrival."

Alex Goldfield and his god-like sisiter, Gloria, spend the first night together as reuinted brother and sister. However, it seems like some neighbors are not too pleased with the newcomers.


Categories: Body Part, Destruction, Feet
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2183 Read Count: 5001
[Report This] Published: August 17 2017 Updated: August 17 2017
Reviewer: MarsyMan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 18 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Unexpected Guests

Really intrigued by both installments so far! :D

One little thing though, now I get that you're probably doing a collection of short stories but is it necessary to publish them separately? It may be clear once you post the rest and if so - forgive me asking.

But anyway! I am quite drawn to these setups and I'll be pleased to read many more :3

Summary:

Jake is a short wolf with big fantasies. When his office crush makes an offhand wish after work one day, she and Jake find that life changes quite a bit when fantasy and reality become mixed.


Categories: Unaware, Giantess, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Furry, Gentle, Insertion, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74717 Read Count: 71549
[Report This] Published: November 11 2021 Updated: November 27 2021
Reviewer: MarsyMan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 23 2021 Title: Chapter 10: Truth or Dare

I haven't logged in on here in a long while, I haven't left a review in even longer. But I just wanted to drop in and say: this is amazing. You're doing great work with this, keep it up!



Author's Response:

Thank you, you're too kind. :) There's plenty of mischief on the way so I hope you continue to enjoy!

Summary:

Election experts were baffled by the straight vertical line spike increase of votes for Biden that happened in the wee hours of the morning when most of the country was sound asleep. In all their years, they had never seen an election quite like that of 2020, where a huge dump of votes went 100% for one candidate and 0% went to the other, propelling that candidate to victory against all odds. It was statistically improbable for this to happen naturally, and no one could ever figure it out how 100% of the votes in the dump all went to Biden. But Kamala Harris knew.


Categories: Giantess, Middle Age (50+), Destruction, Entrapment, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, New World Order, Scat, Sci-Fi, Slave, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2057 Read Count: 3227
[Report This] Published: December 08 2021 Updated: December 08 2021
Reviewer: MarsyMan Signed half-star
Date: December 09 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

is this maga copium on a fkin fetish website??? LMAO. nothing gets me more aroused than a story about unsubstantiated election manipulation 😎

Author's Response: Then you ought to have given it a higher rating.

Summary:

Tiny and giant live amongst one another. Students of both sizes share the same school with one another. For the most part, they are separated out, but a chance encounter between a tiny and giant triggers something both do not fully comprehend.


Categories: Gentle, Giantess, Couples, Teenager (13-19)
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8693 Read Count: 23082
[Report This] Published: July 02 2022 Updated: July 02 2022
Reviewer: MarsyMan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 06 2022 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Homebound

This is great. Keep it up!