To celebrate over 100k views of Invasion, I decided to write a followup to it.
Unbelievable! Maybe a little less gore and a little more caring interaction,
You've also got me wondering where the h play Aaron is, what's the other tiny world from the last chapter doing, where's Omega, and why is Aaron almost identical to the new hero, ( I honestly forgot his name!)
You're doing great, just wanted to drop my 2 cents in the can
Author's Response: As revealed in the final chapter of the first Invasion, Aaron and his family is on the Ark exploring space as to him returning I won't rule that out if I write a follow up to this series. Tiny world? If you mean the one shot story that bridged Invasion and Vacation, honestly I figured it ran its course. Hmm...maybe I can write a story about it. When I thought about this new hero I wanted him to be very similar to Aaron so it would be easier to relate to but at the same time give him certain character flaws a new idol worshiping hero could have. Omega is around. Saying anything more would be telling :)
Newlyweds Derek and Amber, honeymooning in the Teton Range, encounter a strange object that affects only men. Can their young marriage survive this early test?
Great going, I wonder how thick the FBI plot will get?
Author's Response:
Quite thick. It's the main driver of the plot. Thanks for the feedback!
hope you get back to this
Brandon trys to uncover some dirty on one of his victims, but he shoud be careful at what he might find.
Really hope you get back to your universe series
The positively beautiful sisters of Omega Pi are a selective sorority who possess a very curious secret, that being, they sustain their otherworldly looks by stealing the lives and life energy of unsuspecting young men.
Might you consider anyone inside the sorority breaking to some degree because of the ideological stress?
Author's Response:
There is always the possibility, of say, perhaps someone new to the sisterhood? A certain disharmony? I guess we shall see :)
Could we get some gentle footwear entrapment with Cam? Oliver needs to start trying to talk to Cam and irk the girls off with stubbornness
Author's Response:
I'll see what I can do to maybe incorporate some silk stocking entrapment. As for Oliver, he needs to break Sersei's spell and him and clue in to what is going on. We shall see :)
This has got to be an harrowing adventure story, get Oliver on the run and have him start looking for cam , what happens when the omega pi huntress is hunted?
Maybe take some time for Oliver to get caught, make the girls frustrated and figure a way out from the collage of info he stumbles upon in meandering around fate, make this an adventure story, not an interaction story
Author's Response:
Hmm, there is probably a happy somewhere in there. We'll see how this progress. thanks for your input!
That's a nice turn, give him some time to figure out what's going on, and then give the girls some time to realize he's smarting up
Author's Response:
See if Oliver can piece it together before that third band. I guess it depends which head does the thinking in the end, :)
A shrinking story told from the perspective of Billy Little. An odd character, that happens to stumble into something that will dramatically change his life forever. It's an extremely detailed depiction of his nightmarish episodes. This is just the beginnings of something so much bigger than Mr. Little. Because, before he realizes what's actually happening, the entire world has already changed into a completely different humanity.
What about Amy finding a way to "wear"
Billy around when she has to get back to everyday work?
Author's Response:
Humm, ...possibility. That's been done before, though, and I think that Amy will be just a 'bit' more, ...creative?
A young highschooler wakes one morning to find everything normal, until the floor starts to shake. He must live his new life dominated by colossal women, adapt to his new state of affairs, and try his best not to be squished.
Maybe the growing height difference makes in shoe detention possible? Love to see him trapped between toes for a while
Tiffany, a young ten year old giantess likes "playing" with the "tinies" in a city but what happens when a bigger and older giantess takes over Tiffany's turf?
terrific, pkease develop the ideology struggle here and dont go back to the gore too much. great so far though, cant wait to see how Tiff develops
The standard NWO story which I have been writing to pass the time and explore some ideas. Follow Rektor a worthless male and Alexis a female who is the biggst of her kind and an adventure in a different world.
hope you get time for this again
What about the male babies that the female clan must have brought? Maybe something interesting there...
Great storyline, one thing I suggest is copy/paste the text into Word or Libreoffice Writer and run a spell check, this helps me tremendously because the one thing that can degrade a well written story is spelling mistakes (we all make em') the story developement is doing great though
Where are the firearms? Technically this would be a blow away, if you limit them you n Ed to work the reason into the story line, doing great though! ;)
Wonder about any open minded elements in his brother's clan?
Author's Response:
Guess you will have to see, however the last chapter was the bloodiest and most violent I have ever written.
Maybe good enough, hey, if they can't fully reverse the growth in all people, (maybe most) you could spin off an intersizeables universe in the aftermath
Don't let Rektor give Amber an easy time for what she almost did.
Author's Response:
I think the tree thing is good enogh punishment because she basically got called out big time.