I've started writing scripts for clips4sale sites. Inside you can read those scripts, find out where you can get the clips, and the differences between the clips and my script.
My personal quam with many giantess videos is lack of follow through. It seems once the woman pulls up her tight pants or lowers her dress she simply walks off and that's the end. It would be nice to watch her go about for a few minutes knowing that he's tucked away up in there. She could go about her living room, sit on the couch reading, enjoy a drink in the kitchen, go out for a walk with the camera following behind her at butt level, drive off, talk with her girlfriend on the phone about having a date / sex later and she never even mentions the guy up her butt, etc.
I do appreciate your scripts. I wrote several scripts myself and though I believe they (TaylormadeFEMDOM) tried to keep close to my story lines they always seem to vary in ways that fall short of the mark. I do not fault Mistress Taylor, quite the opposite. Trying to put to video someone else's vision is not easy.
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I understand that mentality. However, every minute is a dollar, and I think there's a lot of people out there would be upset about spending a few extra minutes where the girl is just being normal and not even acknowleding the tiny person up her butt. I personally would be someone like that. Even in stories when the girl is off doing something else, I like to hear her thoughts about the tiny guy up her butt. If it wasn't extra money though I totally say that I think that should be included in most clips.
I saw this video. When I watched it I couldn't help but lament that such a potentially great script was lost to such poor and detached acting.
Perhaps they can redo it with Alexis. You could always change the script a little so the two are not so close in content; like by having the devil's deal for his soul being to condemn the shrunken man to eternity between her asscheeks with his face up against / in her asshole knowing how smelly it is there, only to find out after she inserts him and uses her telepathy that he thinks he's in heaven. The devil gets frustrated at his adoration and worship of her asshole; but the deal was struck and now he's stuck and the devil's out of luck (he he he).
I don't think Alexis does clips any more. However, maybe one day I'll write a different version of a script and we can see a girl who truly feels like the devil!
Claire Abernathy is a kind girl. Having moved after family issue's she winds up working at a Daycare. Its a dream job for her, she loves children... but the children here have secrets of their own.
Contains Underage content, along with a lot of other strange philia's. If thats not your cup of tea, feel free to look somewhere else.
I can't speak for anyone else; but the way I read the stories on this site is to copy them over on my computer to read later. Sometimes I forget to comment. The reason I copy the stories over is because I find the text formating on this site to be a bit harsh to read; where as on Word I can edit things to a format I more comfortable with.
I started your story months ago and really liked it. Since then I've simply been copying chapters over to read once a bunch are done. As of this chapter it works out to 226 pages with the font and text size I use on Word. That makes for a much more fulfilling read rather than the constant cliff-hanger style on this site.
I just wanted you to know that lack of feedback doesn't necessarily mean lack of interest and enjoyment. Keep up the great work!!!
Your words calm me, thank you for that :)
My greatest concern is always if people won't enjoy my story. I want to make people happy so i try my best to format them properly, but i guess you have a point. This site has had some issues when i tried posting directly from word, so i always have to copy and paste and that gets messy.
A young woman keeps her playthings in a shoebox under her bed
What is with this site? It won't let me reset my password so I had to re-register. I just wrote a long reply to your great story and when I hit submit it told me I'm not authorized and erased it all. What the heck?
Wish you could have read what I wrote. Anyway, love the story.
Thanks for the read and review. I feel cheated I didn't get the opportunity to check out your original review but I am glad you are enjoying this one.
@Tom Speedy
Love love love the mummify Josh idea. All wrapped up in the cotton from Faith's mother (I prefer "Faith's mother" to "Miss/Mrs. May", it just drives home the fact she's Faith's mom and she too does these things to tinies. Simply personal preference and all due respect to your preference.) panty or what have you. Unable to be an active participant anylonger so much as just an object for Faith's mom's use.
I don't know who this girl is either, perhaps she's one of many Faith's mom prefers to play with, men just make good butt stuffers for her. I am hoping the tiny trained to "sit" is still and full time in her panty.
Hmmm, makes one wonder where else on Faith's mom she might be keeping a few tinies (toe separaters, bra underwire, on each butt cheek, etc...)
Woo Hoo! Faith's mom is gonna have two new tinies all to herself. Yes yes, something always happens. Josh findsthe shrink/grow device in the closet and story over (tables turned?).
Now is this the girl that the mother kept in her panty or another one, perhaps her foot licker?
I'm curious, is Carver still inside Faith all this time? Yippie! Though Cadence should get to keep her little Carver inside her, front or back, all the time. ; )
@Tom Speedy
Sounds like it's going to come down to a good ole fashioned "who can give Faiths' mother Merys the best orgasm, winner gets the front loser goes up her rear CONTEST" for Julian and the panty pet girl!
Maybe, but I still have a few tricks up my sleeve :)
TomSpeedy
I had to laugh when I read your comment after I posted mine; we both said almost identical comments, admittedly you were first.
What ever she does I hope the mother doesn't get rid of the girl in her panty nor give her a rest. Heck let the mother order her to crawl up her asshole, just don't ever let her out of the mother's panty (other than the aforementioned bathroom trips of the mother where she's been commanded to "sit"). Maybe the girl will be ordered to go deeper inside the mother (she'd need a tiny diaper, he he he).
It will be interesting to see Julian undergo the same "sit", "kneel", "lick" training the girl did.
FINALLY! Now the only question for Julian, keeping the other tiny, the female one company in the front of the mother's panty and trained as another pet by the mother, or is it to be up the mother's asshole Julian goes.
As to Josh, hopefully he's scared to hysterics and begs Faith to allow him to stay in her panty for a while, a very, very, very long while.
Will Cadence ever make Carver her full-time panty pet?
Is Carver still inside Faith? Nice! But it be even better if Cadence makes him her full-time live in suppository; with or without the straw for air. Just popped right up in Cadence's rear and forgotten for good.
Poor Julian, so close to the mother yet so far. Then again, Faith can always take a chance at being right and say "Julie has that tiny you were asking about tucked inside her panty. Did you want it?" Faith doesn't know for sure who Julia has; but it's a risk worth trying to save Josh and Julian.
Sure the mother has her own trap set; yet there's always the possibility the mother warns Julia not to hurt it, maybe even give it back and then warn Faith to keep her tinies under lock and key. Hey, I'm just trying to save Julian as the mother's pet. : )
Tom Speedy, you just reminded me with your comment. Well Julian's already been up Faith's asshole, he's been up Cadence's asshole; rather than killing Julian, Julie might decide to punish(?) him, perhaps now it's time for Julian to get shoved up Julie's asshole too.
If so, hopefully for a lot longer this time. It would be funny if the mother comes looking for Julian, finds out he's up inside yet another asshole and decides her own asshole is where she's going to keep Julian once she gets him. Heck, Julian must be developing a taste for girl ass by now.
It would be nice if Josh makes it back to the safety of Faith's panty to heal up {or live there. he he he}.
Certainly gives credence to the term 'ass clown' :)
Either the mother comes and takes Julian away for herself or it's Ba-Bye! Hmmm, if the mother were to take Julian, would she call for Josh to show himself and take him too or would Josh be left to his fate hiding in Julie's room???
I kinda agree with Alman, perhaps Carver and Cadence might find that they both enjoy Carver being in Cadence's panty, worshipping and falling deeply in love with her p_ssy. I did want him up Cadence's asshole, now I'm not sure which idea I like better. Perhaps once inside, Carver wil fall in love with Cadence's asshole?
What ever happens, may Mrs. May find Julian and keep him, perhaps Mrs. May would prefer two tinies living in her panty permanantly, she has the lesbian lady already.
Now now, what is Julie going to do with Julian? A living toe ring? A full sized spanking on his tiny rear? Kept in a jar and peed on? Swallowed then thrown up?
If Julian gets taken out of Cadence's asshole this soon, especially if he had a straw to let him stay up there indefinitely, I hope Carver at long last finally goes up Cadence's asshole in his place; and stays there.
Well if Josh and Julian do go back in Julie's room, then wouldn't it be quite possible for Julian to return to Mrs. Mays room rather than Faith's and get caught by the mother?
With Julian in the mother's, uh-hum, clutches (no way she'll let him go, nor would he leave her) and Carver now hopefully living full time in Cadence's asshole (fingers crossed), that leaves Josh, Bohdi and whomever Josh rescues from Julie's room (assuming Julie doesn't catch them, after all Julian hasn't been up Julie's asshole yet, he he he)
I never understood why the straw, or breathing tube concept isn't more widely used when someone is living up inside a woman's butt. Those really thin straws you get with a pint of milk or a juice drink are ideal, small enough that it shouldn't bother the woman and small enough to keep the one inside from getting TOO MUCH outside air or escaping through it.
Let's hope Candence realizes there's no need to take Julian out, at least anytime soon.
It would be nice if Josh begins to long to go back in Faith's panty, finally admitting he truly enjoys being her panty prisoner.
As always, keep up the great work.
Oh SON OF A B&%$^!!! Again! I write out a bunch of comments, saved them to copy and the site both told me my comments could not be posted and deleted my copy.
FIX THIS SITE!
Great story as usual.
Not to go over all the different torture scenarios I wrote out, AGAIN; but wouldn't it be interesting if Josh and Julian find tinies Julie is torturing in her room. More erotic-perverse than bone breaking devices. A few tinies locked in gibbets dangling from Julie's toilet seat into the bowl below. Tinies being sewn into the gossets of Julie's panites. Female tinies locked in a circular stockade where the head of one woman is in the crotch (or ass crack) of the next, and so on to complete a full circle.
You know, weird stuff like that. (I can't believe all I wrote out was lost, again darn it, after I copied it too). Bare in mind, if Josh or Julian help or release any of Julie's tinies, then their plans are blown and their cozy accomodations are lost. So it's pretty much leave the others to suffer Julie's tortures.
Is Cadence ever going to get her fun with Carver? Perhaps make him her buttplug, or even her all out suppository.
Hi DW sorry the site has been messing with your ability to review. I appreciate you taking the time to resubmit. Helping tinies does open a whole new can of worms for our little saboteurs and we will visit this topic again soon. Cadence is by no means done with Carver and don't think she hasn't forgotten Julian s insulting and condescending banter.
@ Tom Speedy
I think the mom sounds the most fun too; even though she was just given an introductory character developement, she gives off the air of having a closet full of shoeboxes stuffed with tinies.
Duggernaut is doing a terrific job with this story, so I don't want to sound critical or be influential of his plot because I really like what he's doing.
One thing I would like to see is Cadence finally getting her hands on Carver and having the fun with him she mentioned in an earlier chapter. Afterall, we haven't yet heard what her favorite activity with tinies is; though didn't she like Faith's boots and want to wear them? Some possibilities there perhaps?
Is Cadence really going to let Julian get away with all those insults? A small punishment might be in order, like another bathroom trip or a good ole fashion spanking.
Thanks for the props. Next chapter will see some retributive payback for one of our little captives...
Fantastic story.
I'm a bit suprised Julian didn't request of Faith to be let loose to live out his time in her hot mom's room after playing the tricks on her sister. Perhaps even asking to actually be given to her mom as a present in a manner where he couldn't be hurt, like caged in a pendent on a long neckless that would dangle between the mother's breasts or have Faith present him as a tiny with a crush on the mom and who begs to serve the mother as an irreplacable foot massager that mom should keep and keep alive.
Just a thought; but keep doing the great work as you have been. Thanks for a terrific story.
Julian surmised he might elicit a better chance targeting a known adversary. Faith might have balked at the mother idea seeing how quickly she buckled and accepted the punishment. Gain some trust first. then renegotiate, :)
Nice! Very nice indeed! Sounds like someone's prisoner in Julie's workout panty. Front? Back? Perhaps one each? Heck, who says all her panties don't have a tiny or more sewn permanantly into them. That is, assuming that's what's moving. I'm kinda getting ahead of the story.
A pile of used gym socks, sounds like a tinytown. How many tinies can be captive in her socks, the discarded shoes or anywhere else in her room. Does Julie even eat her tinies, or keep them alive surviving on her sweat, dead skin, toe jam and her other bodily goodies?
Makes one wonder if the mother, with the large breasts, actually eats all her tinies or keeps them safely “close by” her.
Unexplored territory. Who knows what things the two are yet to find?
