Amazing chapter, absolutely loved it, and I'm grateful for the quick update. You wrote Carly perfectly for this chapter. You captured her somewhat psychotic and twisted love and passion for Jack, one of my favorite characteristics about her, extremely well. When the chapter was building up to Carly talking about getting her life back together with Jack, part of me was hoping for Jack to reciprocate Carly's twisted love for him, but I'm also glad Jack stood up for himself and threw down the ultimatum at Carly that he will never be her property again. The emotions Carly displayed of sadness, longing and desire before Jack's ultimatum, as well as her break down and anguish afterwards were also really well done, some of the best writing to date. Although as you said, Carly is not out of this yet, and it'll be interesting to see what will happen with her next. Also wonder what will happen with Jack now, as well as Sophie. Before the whole kidnapping, I was predicting/hoping Jack would develop a relationship with Sophie where Jack finds resolution for, and satisfies, his lust and desire for feet, but still retaining his humanity since its with someone who actually loves and cares for him in an honest and positive way. But after the reintroduction of Carly, I dunno what to expect/ what I want to happen, but I trust where you will take this story. Amazing work so far, always glad to read your work.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the in depth review! The hint of a lustful relationship with Sophie's feet at the end of that other chapter was more to symbolize Jack's residual need to resolve things with Carly, but I can understand the expectation there. I like to keep people guessing.

Glad to more interaction with Sophie and hopefully we'll see some foot interaction with her and Jack soon. As always, thanks for the update and great work.

Great chapter, glad we got some foot interaction between Sophie and Jack. I hope there will be more but I understand if there won't be. Regarding Jack and his internal conflict, I'm conflicted myself. On one hand, you wanna root for Jack and hope he overcomes his need to be a toy and underfoot of a goddess since he is our main character, but on the other, the parts of this series where he is worshiping feet and devoting himself to them, especially the scene where he wholely devoted himself to Carly right before Sophie saved him in the third story of the series were some of the best parts of this series. As for the ending of this chapter, you've left us with quite a cliff hanger and I can't wait to read what happens next. Thanks for the update, eager to see what happens next.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing again. I totally get what you're saying about the thematic conflict of narrative vs. fetish content. I'm hopeful the ending will find a happy medium between those.

Glad to see you brought this story back to this site, it was one of my favorites. Will you be continuing with the sequel? I really love these characters and this setting, especially Evita and Daniel.

Great second chapter, I feel like you have once again captured both characters and their interactions with each other very well. Hoping to see more foot worship stuff from the coming chapters, you write foot content amazingly well, especially with these two, and I'd love to see more. As for bringing in other slaves/shrunken people for Carly, since other readers brought it up, I think you should just keep it Carly and Jack. For me, this series as a whole is about Carly and Jacks relationship and interactions with each other mentally, physically, emotionally, etc. They're the crux of the series, especially now that they have accept each other's positions in this alternate-verse story, so I don't think it would be a good idea to add other shrinkies. But hey, that's just my two cents, you're an excellent author and I trust where you will take this story. As always, can't wait to read the next one.

Author's Response:

Thanks very much. I'm anticipating the next chapter being foot-related. As for whether we'll see Carly with other tinies, I won't necessarily say we won't see other characters appear in future chapters, but I agree that Carly and Jack are the crux of everything, and I wouldn't necessarily alter that just for the sake of it.

Really glad and grateful to see you follow through with this requested story. My favorite parts of this series were always the interactions between Carly and Jack as goddess and tiny footslave, particularly the loving, benevolent, indulgent, and slightly (or not so slightly) obsessed goddess Carly and Jack we saw this spin off come from, and I hope you will continue to focus on that loving goddess/slave dynamic between the two in this story. Glad to see you still active, keep up the good work.

Author's Response:

Thanks very much. Those are some good adjectives you use to describe their relationship in this story; the tone of everything from their dialogue to their action is going to feel very different, and much more mutual, in this story.

Great chapter, glad to have you back. it's always nice to read a new chapter about our favorite duo, looking forward to more, it's always worth the wait.

Glad to see an update for this story, I've missed this duo.

Glad to see an update for this side story, interesting how they maintain the loving and playful master servant relation ship even at normal sizes.

Great  chapter, really enjoying the foot stuff and Kay's goddess like attitude. Wonder how things will play out with Ben now that Kay knows about his foot fetish. The whole shrinking conspiracy run by Kay also seems interesting, wonder if we'll see more tinies besides Ben. Great chapter and great story, can't wait to read more.