Reviewer: meereten01 Signed
Date: October 11 2018
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Death of Hope
Sorry for not reviewing last time. You always have a lot to tell in your responses, it makes the reviewing so much more interactive. I usually feel a bit guilty about not having more to tell.
Those guys kinda had it coming and Mira is right. They would have destroyed Mira and Anthony if Mira hadn't done anything. But I must admit that it must also have looked a bit scary how Mira handled the thugs. On the other hand, Anthony should maybe be a bit impressed about how protective Mira is of him.
The thought of loosing Anthony awakened something powerful within him.
And well, at least Anthony has some time now.
Also, thank you for writing!
Author's Response: Please, friend, theres no reason to aplogize for not reviewing. I only asked for the first time in a while for it because it lets me know I'm on the right track, and followers of the story are enjoying themselves. I often, though I never like to admit, get self-conscious seeing some works doing so well with so few words actually written, either by comparison to my work, or indeed overall. I know I've essentially got my foot in two camps with this story, trying to appease my want/need to create a narrative, while also attempting to cover a subject matter most people are looking forward to being more direct, sexual, and short, but I can't help but enjoy doing it.
Also, "a bit scary?" Lol. I sometimes imagine what any of us would be like if placed into our fantasy, which we swear up and down we'd enjoy being a part, despite the sheer terror of the reality. Personally, if I watched my girlfriend do some of the things I've fantasized about, I'd probably be scared shitless!
Anyways, as always man, thanks for your review!