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The Best Revenge by Vintovka Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 48]
Summary:

After years of torment, a tiny man finds himself back at the feet of his ex-girlfriend who originally shrank him while she tries to provide him with a meaningful life.  Meanwhile, his former tormentor is humiliated and tortured by her former friends now that she is the tiny one.  Though their lives are different they are not yet over, and may still come to blows again.

 

Sequel to I Dream of Gina, and final arc in the story started in The Prom Incident.


Categories: Mature (40-49), Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Couples, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Legwear, Mouth Play, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84502 Read Count: 178006
[Report This] Published: August 25 2018 Updated: December 09 2019
Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 26 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Going Out Tonight

* poor design firm

Ugh, autocorrect



Author's Response:

Not sure why it would've autocorrected TO that, but I understood it anyway :) 

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 27 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Going Out Tonight

It tries to autocorrect to that because my phone keyboard has multiple languages set and it tries to guess which one it is by the first few words. It guessed wrong this time.

I'm looking forward to reading the ending. Knowing you it will at least be interesting.



Author's Response:

What languages???

Also as my most consistent and polite reviewer I'd like to specifically offer you a request, so please hit me up if you want me to write something for you!

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 28 2019 Title: Chapter 23: Setting a Trap

Aww, the poor neighbours houses got removed and we didn't get to see any of it :(

And now they can't even live to tell the tale.

And indeed they recognize that they should be terrorizing the city by now. They should definetely do that instead of lure Fulda and her tiny fiancee into a trap. Or hurt Akane.

Gina should know Akane is right and she is one of the good girls. At least they didn't trash her like the terrarium. I didn't think they would do that after putting so much effort into making it a nice place to live.

As always, thank you for writing! And I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

 



Author's Response:

With the neighbors gone, nothing's standing in their way.  Maybe they'll go for the whole block next if they have time.  They're bigger than the houses now, so they shouldn't have much trouble clearing them out.

Is Akane right, though?  It seems like Gina has the upper hand here, and hse's moving on to bigger and better things.

Thank you for reviewing!  The next chapter's going to be a doozie, I've been working on it for several days.

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 30 2019 Title: Chapter 24: Worlds Are Colliding

Nice to see that Janine accepts Fuldas fiancee. They do have quite a bit of guts entering the house. I would have called in the big guns as soon as I saw that huge house.

Janine and Fulda seem awfully calm for the impending dooom. It looks like Gina can simply steal "her" boyfriend back and simply crush the rest. I hope Fulda has a plan.

I bet that highschool is really glad Gina didn't turn up for classes. Now they still have most of a school left.

I'm eagerly waiting to see how this one turns out. Thank you for writing and see you next time!



Author's Response:

It's a family of giant women so they end up being more accepting of dating shorter men, whether they're an inch shorter or an inch tall.

They're brave people!  Janine wasn't privy to Gina's threats, but Fulda isn't scared of her.  You'll be surprised by their plan, I think.

Can you imagine a school trying to accomodate a 50 foot tall student?  They'd go broke just expanding the doorways!

And thank you for reviewing!  It's coming down to the wire now, and I'm having to make myself space out uploading them.

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 04 2019 Title: Chapter 25: Bonds of Matrimony

Wow, I didn't expect the marriage to actually go through normally. Ooh, and by the fact that Gina hasn't simply crushed the entire thing out of pure jealousy, makes me think Gina still cares about the entire wedding party as people. I'm wondering what kind of plan Gina has to actually have a one inch tall boyfriend at her size. That would be completely impractical.

On the other hand I think that it's not nice for Gina to ruin a wedding like that. Couldn't she have let the wedding continue peacefully and ruined everything a bit later? And where is Akane?

At least it's a relief Anni didn't try to steal the groom. I thought that would maybe be the suprise you were talking about.

Thx for writing and until next time. Friday?

 



Author's Response:

Yeah, Fulda and her tiny man are married now!  Gina wanted to demonstrate her absolute power to them before doing anything, she's all about showmanship.  She's basically a giant villain gloating, she knows she's in control.  Maybe she wants her tiny boyfriend just to have him?  Even though she's millions of times his size, she still has strong feelings for him!

And pass up chance to show up her big sister?  No way!  Unfortunately, Akane didn't get to ride with Gina and Veronica and had to stay home.

Anni would never!  Aside from that one moment of weakness she's always been fine with him and Fulda.

Thank you for reviewing!  Friday for the big finale.

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 06 2019 Title: Chapter 26: In the Aftermath

Im surprised Roni stepped in you're right in that I didn't see that coming. Nice that Fulda has a bit of equal size time with her tiny husband. But I must say that I did secretly hope we saw Gina demolishing some more stuff.

And Akane got me. I almost thought Fulda would stay tiny forever. I'm glad to see that thats not the case.

I'm almost starting to feel sorry for Gina. If she wasn't so insane, she would easily have a nice life, a boyfriend and a school that was nicely built for her 50ft stature. But no, she just had to bully basically everyone in her life.

Thank you for writing and I'm looking forward to that epilogue.



Author's Response:

I thought it would be poetic justice to have Gina done in by the friend she was trying to mold in her own image before she could go on too much of a rampage.  

I'm expecting a bit of blowback on Fulda not spending enough time tiny, and if so it'll be reasonable.  Akane does have a point in that she's done a lot of damage and that'd be an appropriate punishment.  But then, one of the people who's suffered most has forgiven her and wants her to be big.  I was torn between the two, but I'm not going to make all my readers happy, so I went with what I thought was best.

Maybe Gina is to be pitied.  It's not her fault she was given the ability to shrink people at a young age and let the power go to her head.  But she could've used it for good too, and instead chose to do what she did.

And thank you for reviewing!  I hope the epilogue is as satisfying as I expect it'll be.

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 09 2019 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue

They're so cute together.

The tiny protagonist now has the best bodyguard ever. And if seems fulda has a really nice boss that lets her play around with the buildings.

Doesn't Akane want a shrunken boyfriend too? Or is she still busy talking some sense into Gina? 

Still a strange world that they think there is no proof for Gina. On the other hand, if they did, some government agency would surely steal Gina and grow her because they hope she can crush  their enemies.

Maybe I should go back to the beginning and read the first chapters again to remind myself where it all began.

Thank you for writing and taking us on one hell of a ride!

Until next time?



Author's Response:

They are, aren't they?  It's a good thing Fulda's boss doesn't really care what they do with the old models once they're done.  If they get stomped apart before going in the trash, what's the difference?

Aside from taking care of Gina, Akane wants nothing to do with all the size-changing shenanigans.  Maybe she'll get a normal-sized boyfriend, or a nice tiny one, she doesn't discriminate.

There's lots of proof!  It was just ill-timed, and without there being more of it people start to doubt it.  That's how the internet goes though, whoever yells the loudest comes out on top.

I absolutely suggest going back and reading everything before this, and reviewing all those chapters too, and recommending them to anyone who might be interested.

"Next time" will come very soon!

Alex After by NotSirk Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

A one shot spinoff of a story from Kurogane335's Random Stories Factory I wrote like three months ago.


Categories: Giant, Teenager (13-19), Middle Age (50+), Giantess, Futanari, Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3361 Read Count: 11820
[Report This] Published: August 27 2018 Updated: August 27 2018
Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 28 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Birthday Boy

Her brother definetily needed a kick in the butt in the original story, but this doesn't seem to be it. But it does seem like Alex has built a nice life for him/herself.

Also, how is it going? Did you already recover a bit from your surgery?

At least, thank you for writing! Its always nice to see a story written by you!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comment! I'm doing fine by the way. Three months out and nearly back to 100%! Thanks for asking. Maybe I'll get back to writing soon,  but I'm a little lost on where to start. I'm open to suggestions. I've also been working on my art so that's a time sink. Maybe I'll finally start that comic? But I wouldn't know how to advertise it. Eh I'm rambling again. Thanks again !

Bully for You by Vintovka Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Years of social isolation come to an end when a high school senior's bully decides to take full advantage of the complete domination she has over him.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Giantess, Butt, Entrapment, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Slow Size Change, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5217 Read Count: 24610
[Report This] Published: August 29 2018 Updated: August 29 2018
Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 30 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Bully for You

I think Amelia is in love with our main character, that's why she gives him so much attention and ultimately decided she cannot live away from him and decides to swallow.

I also think our main character is in love with Amelia, he is simply mesmerized by her. When Amelia clearly gave him the chance to walk away, he stayed instead of running for the hills.

I must say that I liked the sort of mysterious part where the protagonist shrunk but Amelia didn't directly acknowledge it but let it  fully sink in.

Thank you for writing! I enjoyed this story!



Author's Response:

There's a thin line between love and hate, and if thinking they still love each other enhances the story for you I won't try to push a different narrative :)

 

I find it's a lot more fun to have people treat him like he's tiny instead of talk about him getting smaller.  Don't forget the other two girls he ran into who also didn't care, or everyone in the hall who ignored him.

 

Thanks for reading!  I really enjoyed writing it too, so I'm glad other people like it.

Taking Over by NotSirk Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Not your typical vore story. 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), BBW, Body Exploration, Fantasy, Mouth Play, Slow Size Change, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20396 Read Count: 23467
[Report This] Published: August 31 2018 Updated: September 07 2018
Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 02 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Swallowed Whole

It seems everybody is to lazy to review this story, which is very sad because it deserves one. And this review is very late, because I'm the laziest reviewer in the world!

This story is like your usual stories. Both cute and emotional, but at some times very funny. I feel much sympathy for the main character and totally understand her elf-envy.

Oh and as an academic, you really overestimate us. A girl that can make a portal like thingy in her garage would literally eat most of the professors for dinner. 

Thank you for writing! I really enjoyed the story! I really light up everytime I see another chapter is written by you.

p.s. you drawing is not bad



Author's Response:

Thanks for dropping a review! I try to not be bothered by lack of comments. I'm pretty sure people still read my stories. If I don't get comments I try to re-evaluate my writing. Maybe it hasn't resonated with readers or maybe it's fine and people just don't have anything to add. I'll keep going either way. Thank you again. Your comment is appreciated!

Also I'm not an academic so I'm being purposefully vague and bullshitting the science! Don't tell anyone!

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 04 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Guess Who

I still think those elfs are pretentious. They deserve to be eaten ;)

Seems like somebody is turning into a small elf. So weird. Shouldn't she become enourmous and rampage that other dimension into Oblivion, as is the common theme on this site?

And luckily it seems that my lazy review and a call out have brought some reviews at last!

Thank you for writing!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the comment and the shoutout! This story isn't as popular as some of my others but I'm glad people enjoyed it. 

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 14 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Princess for a day

I'm really lazy, so I procastinated writing a review.

This story looks like it went kinda the wrong way, Delilah kinda ended up on the bottom end of this deal. But that was kinda the intention, going by the title I think. But I deep down, I really hoped it would be Delilah that took over some kind of city or country.

I wonder how much of this was purposefully planned by Elixasana.

Also, thanks for writing!

Volleyball by Vintovka Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

A man watching his school's volleyball team finds himself a captive audience when he gets shrunk before a game.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Giantess, Butt, Entrapment, Footwear, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Unaware, Crush, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2413 Read Count: 9302
[Report This] Published: September 02 2018 Updated: September 02 2018
Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 02 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Volleyball

Somehow nobody notices Fulda's murders. It almost seems like they are distracted by something. Maybe Fulda should become some secret agent with those stealthy crushes.

This tiny didn't even have the option of getting away. Its like fulda is increasingly making it harder for tiny's.

Also, thank you for writing!



Author's Response:

Who would pay attention to a little dot, just a blemish in the wood, when they came to see a game?

 

If he hadn't been getting high on glue she wouldn't have had anything to hold him down.  Maybe he even could've escaped.  Really, it's his own fault.

 

Thanks for reading!  And when you write reviews it lets me know people are enjoying my stories, so I really do appreciate them.

Implication by Vintovka Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Flirtatious advances during a study group turn into something more, though the target fears he'll end up the butt of a joke.  However, the sorority girl who seduces him has more than simple humiliation on her mind, and he learns there are worse things than being laughed at.


Categories: Muscle, Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Couples, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Legwear, Slow Size Change, Violent, Body Exploration, Crush
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Gamma Tau Sigma
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12829 Read Count: 34152
[Report This] Published: September 04 2018 Updated: December 20 2019
Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 04 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Getting Familiar

Ah, so Fulda actually sometimes also meets decent people. I hope he survives this or at least has a good time.

Maybe Fulda can wear him in her shoe ;)

And Fulda as president of the sorority. Figures. Now it's just a matter of time before she becomes president of the United States.

Oh and the amount of people this soroity abducts and shrinks in a country where they care is already astonishing. I wonder what would happen when they go on vacation in some third world country where nobody cares. With these girls some smaller villages or army bases could disappear.

Also, thanks for writing! It's a good setup / story!



Author's Response:

He'll have some fun, I guarantee it :) Other than that, I can make no promises.

 

Luckily for us, Fulda's political aspirations begin and end at the sorority level.  She's got a few too many skeletons in her closet to consider office anyway (the skeletons are in her shoes).

 

It's amazing what a group of spoiled rich girls can get away with, especially when their method is so unbelievable.  Though I think it would be incredibly bad praxis to have them abuse and exploit people in the third world, a spring break or festival trip to the Caribbean isn't out of the question.

 

Thanks for reviewing!  I hope the story lives up to the potential of the set-up.

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 11 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Netflix and Chill

Fulda is such a comfortable girl. Sometimes I think it would be nice to be tiny and curl up on her.

But that also wouldn't be very healthy I think.

But at least our little protagonist has a huge warm blanket.

Thank you for writing! And also for responding to reviews. It is such a nice thing to do.



Author's Response:

If you were a good little guy you'd be fine!  But everyone runs from her like she's a monster and she that makes her sad, and she doesn't deal with rejection well at all.  We'll see how it turns out for the protagonist though.

 

I appreciate your reviews!  It doesn't take long to respond to them, and I'm sure people like reading my thoughts as much as I like theirs.

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 13 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Time to Run

After the last story I kinda forgot how cruel Fulda can be. Seems like the chill of the last chapter has disappeared.

But she is a little bit different than before, because the tiny protagonist didn't die yet. Fulda has some plans.

Thank you for writing and I'm looking forward to the next one!

 



Author's Response:

College Fulda could be an outright terror compared to after she graduates.

She really likes her games, and if there's no party playing with a single shrink is a nice way to spend the weekend.

And thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 16 2019 Title: Chapter 4: Walk a Mile...

Wow, it seems like you really have stepped up your descriptions and length of torture before the tiny dies. I dig it!

I hope for many more chapters like this.

The only reference I didn't understand was about Fulda inhaling food. How does that work?

Thank you for writing and until next time!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I have several more chapters like that coming down the pipe, though for a different story.

"Inhaling food" just means eating it real fast.  Either that, or choking.

And thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 22 2019 Title: Chapter 5: Landscape's End

I was able to feel Fulda's disappointment through the story. This tiny was just a bit lame I think. Must be because it was his first time shrunk. At least Fulda solved the problem nicely.

But on the other hand, I think I would also be a bit of a coward if I was first shrunk. But I don't think I would actually disagree with Fulda or ask many obvious questions.

Thank you for writing and until next time!



Author's Response:

She wanted at least a couple days playing with him, but he was so boring and obstinant she couldn't justify keeping him around.  Maybe she'll get someone more exciting next time.

Thank you for reviewing!

MaddieMayASMR by Stevie Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

 It's YouTuber vs YouTuber as a gamer goes toe to toe with his bigger, meaner ASMR making neighbor. 


Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14980 Read Count: 28583
[Report This] Published: September 04 2018 Updated: October 14 2018
Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 05 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You know that asmr is about being relaxed, quiet and comfortable right? It seems Maddy has more in common with Godzilla than asmr. She should chill out. If she continues like this she'll crush the poor protagonist before she gets her problems fixed.

Also, good to see that you are writing again, thanks!



Author's Response:

Yeah I know. Lol.  I liked the idea of her comforting and putting people to sleep at night, then shutting off the camera and being a bulldozer in the real world.    Also thank you.  We'll see how long I stay motivated.  

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed
Date: September 07 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I actually wanted to wait untill the next chapter to respond, but let's do it now while I still remember what I wanted to say.

Bulldozer, lol. Maddy is a bit of a lousy bulldozer, the building is still standing. I really hope she becomes more of a bulldozer in the next chapter.

Also, should I imagine ASMR Maddy?

I'm really looking forward to a next chapter.

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