great work  jack, i hoped chloe wouldnt recognized him and will torture and abuse him as his pet and i hope she will be as cruel as her sibling carly, anyway i dont understand other fans comments like dont be such cruel stay with sofie be more gentle, i think they dont understand the punch line of this story because in my opinion its about jakes poor fate and how can be cruel world around him  maybe it deserves a happy ending but hope not just yet there can be plenty of years of torture and emotional abuse for jake from chloe (maybe from her mother too) so keep working and i hope u will get back also to your other story about shrunken student :)

also i have one idea in my head for quite a long time, there is no doubt you are one of the most tallented writers in this genre and there is one unfinished story called "family foot slave" on this site which is one of the most favorite at all im sure u ve already read it but its not complete becouse author said that he lost most of material so if you can think about lets called it free continuing of the strory because i can see u r very good and exited writing about foot thing and sibling torture so if you just would think about it, lots of fans would be crazy about it im sure :))

Jurdzi

im happy u decided to continue with this great series i hope u r gonna write some stories about actions in school like promoton night or some parties and carl will take jake with her. it would be interesting to imagine it. Anyway great job. Jurdzi

Hi, are you ever planning to return to this story or write a similar one, by any chance? I would love to see more humiliation, domination and torture of Jason, especially from his sisters, or possibly their friends. A first half of this story is my all time favorite. It would also be crazy to imagine his mother and father will join this torture, even if only from a professional interest. There is a lot more potential on how to prolong his misery.

Couple of thoughts:

• There is someone by name Jennifer (I think) mentioned thorought this story as she had been treating him horribly, until he ended up with Tracy. Are you planning to further introduce this character later on, or is it just a small hint of Marks past that you are not planning to exlore anymore?
• I am surprised none of these college girls has any pantyhose on. It could make his intimate experience with their feets even more challeging.
• I wish Amoe used some broom instead of a vacuum cleaner. Given her limited sight, she could have beaten a hell out of him without even noticing, while leaving him in some pile of dust. An honorable mention to a famous scene from Honey I Shrunk the Kids movie.
• I would love to see Mark turned into an object with these college girls, just like he is presented as a shoe insert with Diane and Sarah. He could be a simple clothes or hair decoration, or perhaps a jewerly (ear ring, toe rigs, etc.) He was already tied up once by Crystal, so I hope there will be some more bondage. By other words, to continue dehuminizing him in the clutches of these wannaby friends.
• Like I said in my previous comment, I would love to see more of Linh, and perhaps Kelly as well, given her size and indication that she would love to wear him as a good luck charm.

Great story, one of my all time favorites right away. I am sad I need to wait for every single chapter now that I finished what you have already posted. I hope you will find a peace and balance in your life that would allow you to not only finish this story, but also posting the remaining chapters on a regular basis.

CYA!

I can't help myself, though, your writing style reminds me a lot of kenny224. Even to such an extent, that I'm inclined to believe it's you, lol. If I could pick one correlation, it would be this "submit to your goddess" voice inside a head of the main protagonist.

You're an extremely talented writer in this genre. I'm absolutely loving this story, and I can't wait to see how it progresses and of course, its end. 

I'm also impatiently awaiting this long time coming encounter of Belle with Zoey. I do hope there's gonna be several chapters dedicated to this alone, as I can imagine with Zoey finding a shrunken "sister", especially in her indestructible stature, is her dream come true.

Should you be able to come up with your own patron or whatever account to post some of your other stories, I'll be the first in line.

Wish you all the best!

Amazing story. Immediately one of my favorites. I love all these unaware and humiliating situations. Especially the last 2 chapters, where folks are talking about them, unaware of their presence. I really hope there is a lot more coming in. Maybe some lollipop or candy misplacement or more feet/heels related scenarios, perhaps nail painting?

Its very refreshening to see the new characters.

Keep up this great work!