Reviewer: daftpunk Signed
Date: October 20 2016
Title: Chapter 1: Introduction + Story Start
Great story idea. im going to look forward to every chapter that comes out.
Hopefully miriam is the queen of nose toe clamping, fast foot bouncing and deadly toenails!
If you are feeling creative you can exaggerate the unaware situations to more types of contact, at a level of unreal obliviousness.
cheers
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad that you enjoyed the story so far. As I might have mentioned before, this is way outside my comfort area on what to write about, so I hope I can keep the main part of the story intersting.
And that's a cool idea. I might play around with extreme leves of unawareness and see how I like it.
I also hope you like the more traditional shrinking stuff I included as well. I figured that I had might as well use these characters to their full potential.
Take care!