very good chapter. the ending felt a bit short though I would had loved if there was some more torture and find out what frank would do with his figures hehe

I think the best about this chapter is clearly you tried to go back and bring back the style of Ashely being purely cruel and even enjoying it. It was a big lacking in the past chapters, of him speak and lead conversation in this sadistic way. Like in the first chapter with the tissue. I enjoyed this a LOT. Not a fan really of the toddler part though.

i am so glad you begin a new, I like this a lot

I loved this one and please add more in cruel way. I found it awesome how this boy has the power just to imagine from any place and transform people, good idea. I wonder what if he accidentally thinks something and turns someinto into object or body part and he doesnt know that would be cruel. the sex scene was the best, and worse for him of the boy sitting with his ass on him to fuck the girl. wow.

Sooo good. Seriously? This virgin idea, best idea eaver! Totally the best part with this Tim character. I love this chapter. And Phil too. Too bad Phil wasnt wrtten out just mentioned using the doll. But there is plenty of room for more Phil I guess, ha. The gum idea was also wesome, especially of her swalloing it, lol. And that gum boy drawing, lol!! Not sure about this, but maybe you could have put the gum idea in the beginning of another chapter actually, and then had more room for the dool idea. I totally loved the doll idea, wished it had been a bit longer. I loved how they all used his throat mostly and the one guy falling asleep with his dick in his ass, lol, best part.

Would like the different victims story view, maybe in another one again, really good. But this is like the best chapter so far, the best, I cant come around this. So glad for another scat themed one they're just the cruelest. I like this the most so far, after the toilet and the fly chapter. The ending was so ironic it is unbelievable, how come you up with that? You could have just ended it there but this totally is like a topic of a cake. The younger brother literally pimping his brother out, aka the fleshlight, to his classmates... I had such a good laugh. It must be hell, but even worse... being an asshole. So fucking good.

AWESOME! I hope you write more like this, please! I love unaware scat and tiny sizes, would be awesome to use someone as a toilet even maybe without the girl knowing, like transformation, turning into like a glass or pipe a girl shits into.

Author's Response:

Thanks! For me it's more about the humiliation and depravity of the situation than the actual scat stuff, so I don't know if I'll write other scat scenarios.

great story. I prever unaware and full tour I usually dont like because it is unrealistic and I want then micros get digested. But I loved the part of her taking a piss and the droplet on her anus that was really hot. would have been ironic if she just wiped her son away not looking on the toilet paper afer wiping.

I wasn't a fan of chapter 9 of your other project much because of the toddler plot, yet it was written amazingly. This story totally got me from the beginning towards the end. Fantastic plot and it keeps the usual style of yours. I am just a huge fan of your stories. Not sure if I feel bad about myself saying this, but I just love how unfair this plot is. And I would like to see more to come in the future. Hope you won't end the other story though too but this one I could see a few more chapters too. I always enjoyed SciFi plots. Noticed a few little mistakes here and there but nothing problematic.

perfect chapter totally enjoyed it, I enjoy the unaware aspects of the story way more. could see chad being used again by some boy pilots who maybe bullied him before made fun of him or something and they have no idea he would be their toilet like two brat pilots or something maybe who are also rich and twins.