Reviewer: arselover Signed
Date: March 09 2018
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Now THAT are some good news, the best I have heared in a while. What a great start into a new story. I love college plots, same as school ones, so this is already a huge boost. Hope to see some nasty scat, maybe involving unaware somehow, but I have to say this is also interesting how Ashley enjoys this it seems. He could even maybe inintentionally transform something, and then not knowing about it, that would be totally cruel. I think you should let the transformed people let them stay though with their awareness, dont let them die (so easily). The part of him begging was pure gold, and how he thought he had a chance to get turned back. And then ending as this stick wet puddle of slime and melting tissue on the bins bottom. Know what would have been even better? Him not dying thete, and him stay aware, and him drying over time. Know when wet meltet tissue dries again, it would totally glue because of the cum to the bins bottom, lol. Imagine how horrible that would have been, him stay there... for week,s months, mabe years. Every time the bin was emptied, the little glued tissue on its bottom would have been stuck. Hot story inc.