Mysteriously shrunken to a few inches tall and trapped inside the house, a group of teenage boys are picked off one by one by an evil younger sister.
This could have been so good.....
A young man returns home from his fall semester at college believing he's finally going to score with an old friend...
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Not bad. Story went a bit quickly, but it was interesting enough. I'm surprised nobody else has bothered to review it yet.
A game show where one person is shrunk and has to complete some tasks while the other is left normal size and has to stop the tiny under their own conditions.
The prize? For the tiny, tons of cash. For the giant? Tons of cash... and a special secret prize.
But it's all just virtual reality, right?
Aw, I was all excited for the next chapter, thinking you were just taking a small break....and then I see the 2012 reviews :( Nonetheless, this is/was a very interesting story.
Author's Response:
Yea... This story's dead. I think my newer stuff is a lot better tbh.
After drinking an experimental growth potion, Isabell grows into a giantess and takes revenge on her ex boyfriend.
This story has no reviews either? Once again, well done on the story, you poor, horribly-underrated author.
Author's Response:
Thx! :)
An adventurous teen who just happens to be five inches tall has been stuck in homeschool all his life. When he finally enters public high school and a new world of friends, bullies, and cliques, he quickly discovers challenges even bigger than he could've imagined.
54 chapters binge-read. 3 hours spent on it. 0 regrets.
I could give quite a few compliments, but I'll just stick to my biggest love: Sharon. I'm not sure whether or not I should hate her or offer her virgin sacrifices, and I feel like that's a good thing :) All that without her getting much actual "action" too.....it's impressive, the way you flesh out characters. Excellent work here, this is one I'll be following until the end.
Author's Response:
I hope they were hours well spent. I appreciate you taking the time to read through. Glad you like Sharon. She'll play a more direct part in the story later on.
Doctor Tom is sent, by the Galactic Alliance, to investigate and study the dominant species on a planet called Earth. On the way there, however, the ship runs into problems and he is now at the mercy of a woman, whom is ten times his size.
This story was pretty good. I'm not sure how five-odd years passed without it getting a single review.
Two twins with special gifts play with an unfortunate innocent.
Not sure you'll see this three years after the last review, but nice story :)
Author's Response:
I did, as a matter of fact. Thank you very much!
You and your classmates are coming home from a football game when you all shrink by a little girl who likes to play sick twisted games with little people.
I know you'll probably never see this, and it seems like you don't usually respond to reviews anyway so I'll certainly never know if you saw this, but I just have to say that I really loved this story......until the ending. Firstly, from a fetishistic standpoint, I found it to be a massive turn-off when Gloria was suddenly the one being tortured (and partially by a male giant, no less, without the Giant tag or size roles to warn of this- IMO the Couples tag really wasn't enough of a warning by itself), and from a plot standpoint, it just didn't seem to fit with the rest of the story. Yes, in theory it would be cathartic to watch her go through all that, but with this being more of a fetishistic story where some people might 'like' Gloria, for lack of a better word (what I mean is, with this being a violent giantess story, a lot of readers want the giantess to remain dominant and aren't really interested in seeing her receive comeuppance), as opposed to more of a plot-based tale where most people would actually root against the villain, that just didn't really mesh well with the rest of the story: to me, it seemed like a failed attempt to shoehorn in a happy ending just for the sake of having one, when it felt like one simply didn't belong there. Now, I'm not saying that having a happy ending in a violent giantess story is necessarily a bad thing, but in this case I don't think one should have happened-at least, not at that point in the story. On top of that, the execution just felt off, with several important plot elements appearing suddenly and making little sense (1. It's a little too convenient that Gloria's power just happens to come from such an easily accessible source, 2. There was really no reason for Gloria to spare Sarah, and plenty of reasons NOT to, and 3. If all it took to shrink people was a spell, Gloria could've easily shrunken both the protagonists even when she herself was tiny, especially when it's shown that she doesn't actually need the book itself to do so). I know that I'm asking for a lot from a fetish writer as far as "plot holes" and that goes, while simultaneously essentially saying that fetish stories don't always need a ton of plot, but this just bothered me to the point where I felt the need to say something about it.
I don't want to leave a star rating, as 1. A decent amount of my disapproval of the ending stems from my personal tastes (which I can't really judge you or anyone else on), and 2. I don't want to taint the story's image for new readers, but I'd give it about 7/10 overall........which, again, really sucks to say when I enjoyed most of it so much.
Author's Response:
Well thanks for leaving a review. I know not everyone likes happy endings and not everyone likes bad endings. I wanted to mix it up a little since I did a couple of 'bad ending' stories before hand. I'm glade you liked the story up till the end.
Jessica, a small girl, grows to gigantic size and wrecks havoc in Detroit.
How does this story have ZERO reviews? That's an absolute travesty towards such a solid story.
What happens when a girl makes the same birthday wish every year? AND she doesn't tell anyone?
Why, it comes true, of course!
This is a pretty solid, well-written story. I'm rather surprised that it hasn't recieved any reviews since April, particularly since I seem to recall seeing it on the Most Recent page between then and now.
I have only one question: What ever became of the blonde girl from Chapter 7? Has her part of the story been written out of the narrative, did she come and go in a way that I didn't notice, or is her arc still in the making?
Author's Response: Thanks! Actually the last time that I updated was back in April, though the review wasn't for that chapter. I appreciate the kind words, it's nice to know that someone is enjoying it. I like to think that the read count is indicative of its popularity since there aren't many reviews.
The blonde was meant to be her sister, Brie, but I'm aware that some of my storytelling is muddled. I'm actually kind of proud of the last chapter, though. :-) Thanks for reading.
The mythical history of a six-hundred-year-old ritual observance among the inhabitants of a remote, idyllic valley is revealed.
This is a fantastic story. Woman-led NWO is among my personal favorite topics, and you pulled it off extremely well.
Summary:
A drug known as the Red Spice lets Rome's wealthiest and most powerful women grow to enormous heights. Wealthy Roman aristocrats use and abuse their male slaves and servants, as the ultimate status symbol. The beautiful, busty God-Empress Cybele stands over a hundred feet tall, and has no qualms about crushing any man who dares to stand in her way. She rules Rome with an iron fist, indulging in every sort of pleasure her power affords her.
Cybele's two nineteen-year old daughters, Livia and Julia, are about to be made goddesses themselves. Livia is good-natured and gentle, while Julia is cruel to her male slaves. Soon they'll try the spice. Soon they'll grow to enormous heights. No expense has been spared for their coronation ceremony, and all of Rome is watching.
Meanwhile, one of Livia's slaves is carrying on a secret affair with the Princess. But love can be dangerous, especially when your girlfriend is thirty feet tall...
Definitely nice to see this get a proper ending.
And here I thought this story was done.....definitely glad that I was wrong :)
A girl invents a new game and invites her two best friends over to play it.
Shame this was never continued. Hope your being in the hospital had nothing to do with it....
Two students are stranded on a different planet where everything seems quite earthly, except it is totally small. This is a classic crush and vore story in a dark-fantasy setting with an overarching storyline.
With some 900 pages by now, I think we might as well call this one a book.
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This looks like one of the all-time greatest stories on this site :)
Life continues on after the incident with Ryan. Alex and Ava are now trying to go back to their normal lives and add Jaden into the mix. As their spring break is over and their now on a path to finish their schooling at the university that many giantess and regulars attend. What will happen when they find out that there are some secrets gong on that even Ryan didn't know about.
Shame to see this series go.....
(crosses fingers hoping that you update 2 days after I say this again)
Shame to see this series go....
I was getting worried there for a while. It's good to see this story being continued
Author's Response:
I had to take a very long break. I honestly had every intention on finishing this, but alot of stuff kept coming up and then writer's block. We all know how bad writer's block can be.
The Shrinking Disease is not inherently fatal, but disobeying the relative giants who find you certainly can be. This is a lesson that the small suburban Cooke Family was forced to learn at the hands of their immense and Immune neighbors.
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Warning: This material is intended for mature audiences only.
