Penname: Frizzle [Contact] Real name:
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Summary:

Denys é um cara que acabou fazendo uma escolha errada em visitar sua ex-namorada, e acabou se tornando escravo eterno de suas decisões.

 


Categories: Adventure, Breasts, BBW, Body Exploration, Couples, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m, FM/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6449 Read Count: 16568
[Report This] Published: October 25 2017 Updated: November 30 2018
Reviewer: Frizzlenidifizerizid Signed half-star
Date: October 25 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Visita

I'm not sure if you just don't speak english very well or what not, but some of your sentences make almost no sense to me. Your story is also all over the place, and I have no clue as to what's really even going on. This story needs a complete redo if you want to try and make it into something.

Summary:

After a hard night of partying, a young college student finds himself rapidly shrunk in a classroom.  He seeks out a friend to help him, but getting her attention proves more difficult than anticipated, and his dreams are crushed before he can even begin fulfilling them.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Giantess, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Instant Size Change, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2907 Read Count: 13356
[Report This] Published: December 02 2017 Updated: December 02 2017
Reviewer: Frizzlenidifizerizid Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 03 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Classroom Trouble

Interesting read. Did a good job of recreating the enviornment and the actions of Julie. Was able to paint a clear image of what was going on no problem. I'd also like to add how refreshing it is to read a story with above average vocabulary, though I must admit that for a normal reader your choice of vocab could actually cause some confusion, and a trip to the dictionary, so I'd recommend toning it down just a tad, but otherwise I enjoyed the read.

 

Good work.

Summary:

Out to steal some cars, Amber got more than she bargained for when she used her shrink ray without looking.

F/f Pred POV


Categories: Mouth Play, Giantess, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1353 Read Count: 7658
[Report This] Published: December 16 2017 Updated: December 16 2017
Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 16 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Swallowed By a Sick Thief

Great story! Very unique from what I've read before, so it was definitely an enjoyable read! It was interesting to see her use her snot filled saliva as a means to try and swallow the woman, which even though I'm not a snot person, I found myself enjoying the bit anyways! 

The only critisicm I have, is that you mentioned the car was shrunk down to a few inches (which would mean around 2-3 inches typically). So in my mind, the woman should been less than two inches tall if she's gonna fit in such a vehicle. I look at my ruler, and I just get the feeling it wouldn't have been as hard to swallow something that size as much was described in the story, but then again that's just the perspective I took from it.

Great story, certainly glad that I decided to read it, and I wish other one chapter stories were as detailed as this one!

10/10



Author's Response:

Thank you for the kind praise! And with that, I just figure that some people have trouble swallowing even tiny pills, their throats close instinctively, so if this tiny woman was even slightly larger than a normal pill a more sensitive person would have a lot of trouble! Thank you for reading closely!!

Like Glass by Juliet Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

Meenah gets eaten.


Categories: Giantess, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Scat, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2354 Read Count: 7351
[Report This] Published: December 17 2017 Updated: December 17 2017
Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 17 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Like Glass

Let me start off, by saying you have some great vocabulary use and I think you have a load of potential! 

Now then... I have a lot to cover here.

1. I found myself totally lost for the first half of this story. First I hear the name Wesley, then I hear Meenah mention a son, but never did you connect the two as one until the end of the story. I sorta figured anyways... but still, you gotta connect the dots for your readers ;)

2. If I had a penny for every time I read the name Willow or Meenah, I'd be rich. You overuse their names in areas that were totally unnecessary. After a characters name has been mentioned, particularly in one paragraph, it's safe to say that the reader can easily determine who which character is talking or acting within the writing. Of course you have to repeat the names here and there to show who is taking the spotlight, but not literally every time said person starts to talk or act right after they already did said 'thing'.

3. A lot of your sentences were written in a confusing manner, a lot. In some areas I found it hard to keep up with how fast the story was progressing. A perfect example is the transition from vaginal play, to oral play. The transition was so quick, that I actually didn't even realized Meenah had been placed in Willow's mouth till after an entire paragraph. I had to go back and re read two paragraphs to try and comprehend what even happened. I'd just say a simple solution is to draw out each act a little further, and add more explanation as to what is happening piece by piece.

4. "everything in the stomach was reduced to a much more manageable slurry" Slurry's definition doesn't fit this description, and I think 'mush' may have been a better fit.

 

On another note... I was super pleased when I read "where villi drained it of any and all nutrients" because I've never seen ANY vore story that has gone into great detail of the anatomy of the stomach and the small intestine such as you have!

 

I know it seems like I criticized your entire story... but don't let that give you the wrong impression. I sincerely enjoyed this read, and simply want to see your next piece of work come out twice as good! With your vocabulary and writing style, I'll without a doubt be keeping an eye out for your next work!

Bravo! 10/10 fo sho

Summary:

English translation of a short story by RNA (あーるな).

Short parody of an orthodox RPG where a party of adventurers encounter a giant nymph sleeping in the middle of their path.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Fantasy, Growing Woman
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 730 Read Count: 4962
[Report This] Published: December 17 2017 Updated: December 17 2017
Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 17 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting read. Was like viewing a boss battle... only in text lol. For nostalgic purposes... I'll give 10/10. Let the OG author know! :)

"Swallow Her!" by Juliet Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

Some broads try to prank Anali, but it goes disastrously wrong.

 

Note: This story shamelessly steals two characters created by Vintovka, named Fulda and Olga. Go read his stories because he's a very fantastic author too.


Categories: Giantess, Entrapment, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, New World Order, Scat, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4338 Read Count: 34027
[Report This] Published: December 19 2017 Updated: December 19 2017
Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 19 2017 Title: Chapter 1: "Swallow Her!"

First off, major improvement since the last story! Second... I nearly was in tears when Anali dissolved into nothing.. the way you wrote her passing.. like it meant nothing to Olga and the others except Fulda. It was so cruel and heartless that it really got to me... 

Expertly written. I'm certainly keeping an eye out for new stories by you.

The Big Day by supernova Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

It's finally the day Leah was waiting for: Her thesis defense. Nervous about the appointment she banked her future on, Leah's walk over to the university doesn't quite go as planned.


Categories: Scat, Giantess, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Nose, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: FF/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2996 Read Count: 10278
[Report This] Published: December 26 2017 Updated: December 26 2017
Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 26 2017 Title: Chapter 1: The Big Day

I simply love the cruelty of your stories! I wish I only knew who it was that mistakenly shrunk Leah, that part really interests me. Once again a great read. Looking forward to the next one!

Summary: This is a story about the slaves perspective. Its a diffrent kind of story. It is so inspirational and true.
Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: vore
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2304 Read Count: 11337
[Report This] Published: January 01 2018 Updated: May 03 2018
Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstar
Date: January 01 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Listen up

Interesting to see the expressions of the tiny man (or woman, didn't specify) interested to see how this story pans out!



Author's Response: Thank you!

Summary:

Valerie and Crystal are two good friends who just want to enjoy a movie together.  However, during the movie a shrinking epidemic hits the world, and the dynamic between these two friends changes as one's darker desires get brought to light.

 

Several months after the world was hit with the shrinking epidemic, private investigators Joey and Robyn are hired by an unknown source to investigate Infinity University, where Valerie and Crystal go to school.  Apparently, a lot of the shrunken students have gone missing, causing campus-wide concern.

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Fantasy, Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Crush, Insertion, Lesbians, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 94049 Read Count: 233682
[Report This] Published: February 07 2018 Updated: May 28 2019
Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 19 2018 Title: Chapter 1: ACT 1: Intro

Amazing. Wish I had started this story sooner. The but where Crys was casually mistaken for popcorn and tossed in Val's mouth was awesome and totally erotic. I love the dialogue between the two as well. I loved how you narrated the fact that there was no flash of light or sci fi sfx as if it was a cliche, bloody brilliant and gave me a chuckle.

 

Was fairly well paced as well, so not much to criticize imo other than a few sentences seeming a bit out of place. 

 

Solid work. Can't wait to read more once I get home!

 

(I'm very picky with stories I read. If I don't get hooked quickly I abandon it. So trust me you did some good work!)



Author's Response:

A positive review from another great author on this site!?  It is an honor :D Thank you very much, and I hope you find the rest of the series just as enjoyable!

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 19 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Boob Ride

The dialogue between these two are excellent. Very clearly expresses the loose/easy going relationship they have with each other. Cannot wait to see Valerie realize her unsurfaced desires and begin to inflict them upon a helpless Crystal.

 

This story deserves far more reviews for the amount of chapters you have written. I feel as if it's been under rated which is a damn shame.

 

Keep up the incredible work!



Author's Response:

Muwahaha.  Just you wait and see how terrible of a person I am.  Thanks though :D I really never felt like it didn't get much attention though.  I get lots of views, so I figure no news is good news and people must enjoy it alright.  Still, I shall always strive to be better.

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 19 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Sweet Dreams

Valerie is the epitome of what I desire in a giantess. Only makes me love this story that much more. Ugh I hope she swallows Crystal whole lmao.



Author's Response:

Be careful what you wish for, kind sir!  :D

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 19 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Minty Fresh

Oh boy, Brittany reminds me if my hot ex. Always had vore fantasies with her, and she had great feet too. This is awesome!

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 19 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Butt Buddy

Damn that was hot. Great desription on the sequence in which Crystal was crushed. I really hope there's more unaware stuff with Brittany!

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 19 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Miss Hyde

This is among the top 3 best vore moments in all the stories I've ever read. Suzy and amazing. Interesting how Crystal appears to dislike her friend entirely, makes me wonder what the toll will be on their relationship. 

 

Also I love the whole Hyde idea of 2 persona's. Suddenly your title makes more sense ;)

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 19 2018 Title: Chapter 7: Hyde's First

Holy shit... I can't believe she's gone! I have to admit that my heart breaks for her... Though I wanted it initially, the way Valerie disregarded her friends life was so indescribably cruel, that I can't help but feel a deep hatred for her.

 

Crystal was really making the story for me, and now that she's gone I feel empty inside :(

 

R.I.P. Crystal

 

 

Otherwise hot damn is Valerie a sexy deviant.



Author's Response:

She certainly is.  I had mixed feelings about this chapter, since it pretty much set the story to a certain tone... but much like Valerie, if I could do it all over, I'd have Crystal's story end the same way again and again.  But these first 7 chapters were always my favorite because of the dynamic these characters had, and what Valerie ended up doing with Crystal leaves some permanent repercussions to Valerie's other relationships.  I feel like the story became darker as a result, but I guess that's expected given that Valerie is like sprinting down said dark path.

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 19 2018 Title: Chapter 8: ACT 2: Two For One, Twice

Though I miss Crystal I'll say that you reinvigorated my interest with the new turn of events! Valerie is now a serial kidnapper possibly killer to boot. And investigators? Fuck yeah baby! This will be so good. Nice job bro



Author's Response:

Haha thanks :D really glad you're into it so far.  I think I'm most anxious about how you critique the last set of chapters... I can't help but feel like that was where some of my weaker writing was, even though I try to put the same effort and care in every chapter.

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 20 2018 Title: Chapter 9: Bye bye Little Girlfriend!

Oh God yes. Now Anne gets her turn at digestion. This is easily the hottest story I've ever read.

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 20 2018 Title: Chapter 10: Best Laid Plans

Valerie forcing Steven against her throat as Anne was swallowed was HOT. And I'm loving the detective segments it's super cool! I cannot believe how underrated this story is it deserves far more attention!!

 

My heart still pains for Crystal... actually teared up by the mention of her name. 

 

And omg I'm fantasizing hard for Valerie. God damn let that woman EAT ME!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much :D And yeah.  There's one part later on that really hurt me to write out.  Weird how attached we get to our own characters.  Hurt me right in my author-parts to write it.  You'll see.  And Valerie is by no means picky, if you're small enough for her to swallow then you'll be in her stomach before you know it ;)

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 21 2018 Title: Chapter 11: New Player

Oh boi Rachel and Brittany both know the truth! The more that know the more screwed Valerie gets! CRYSTAL SHALL HAVE HER JUSTICE!



Author's Response:

Indeed.  It might seem like Valerie has the whole thing barely contained, even.  I wonder what will happen.  Hashtag justice4Crystal.

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 23 2018 Title: Chapter 12: Butt Why?

Just when I didn't think the story could get any hotter. And now theres two cruel women!? IM IN HEAVEN!!!