Reviewer: Melquiades Signed
August 09 2018
Chapter 1: 1st chance
All your stories are gold, sir, and you know that. And as I saw even the great Mr E had submitted his praise, I suppose I have no choice.
This story in particular... That dialogue, that ending, that realization and fulfillment. There is something that speaks to us all. The mischief, the tenderness, that deep aggression, but still, that humaneness.
There is deep beauty in this story of yours. A young man with promise of life forgoes that all to service his love. A majestic donation. And even death is impotent.Author's Response:
Makes me happy to read your review. thank you very much.