This was the most unique and interesting vore story I've read in a long time! I loved the way you used it here! Good message! This was also very well-written in general; sharp in it's realism and very sensual in language and presentation. A very refreshing read!

Author's Response:

It's always a fun surprise getting reviews on old stories. Thanks for reviewing, and I'm glad you enjoyed the read!

I LOVED this! And I love your commentary towards the end about violent vs gentle. This website (and particularly the vore tag) is in dire need of more gentle giantesses, and I love the spin you’ve given it! It’s so close to my own daydreams in terms of musing about what it would be like to go back and enter your childhood brain, and I’d never thought to turn that into a G/t story. I really hope you continue this story as they explore their new relationship, or others like it if you decide to let it be. Good work!

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So, being the 15th person to leave a review, it might seem superfluous to shower you with praise. That said, I really think you stumbled upon a very uniquely fun and erotic method for people playing out their g/t fetishes in terms of world-building. Most of all, you were rigorous about it. I really appreciate your attention to detail in terms of writing both a coherent plot and deft descriptive clarity. You’re a good writer!

While I enjoyed the story in and of itself, it really left me fantasizing about what I would do if a place like that really existed, and that sort of imagination-stoking stuff is what keeps me reading in general, let alone on this particular website. Good work! Cheers!

Author's Response:

I mean, you know, I don't really *mind* being showered with praise :D

If this is a slow burn vore story, then I suppose I understand why so few people who begin to read mine have finished! In any case, I thought this was profoundly well-executed. The introduction was adequately stage-setting and didn’t drag, and you spent a tantalizingly thorough amount of time on every subsequent step of the process, from establishing the characters and declaring the plot, to getting him firmly situated beyond the point of no return.

If I had to pick one word to describe this little work, it would be “diabolical.” I really enjoyed it. As someone who’s favorite aspect of g/t is vore while still very much liking the gentle aspect, this story really suited my fancy, and had me simultaneously rooting for the victim to somehow talk his way out of it while also taking satisfaction in the pred getting her way. This story delivers, And it was well-written. I rate it five stars.

Really good first story! You actually had me rooting for the little guy in this one. I was silently praying that he’d somehow maintained possession of the device during the “ordeal” and would just beam out of her stomach in the end, and have a helluva time approaching her about the bizarre experience later. But, alas, as I said regarding your other story, I always enjoy a vore ending for want of a “happy” ending.

In terms of writing and style, there was only one glaring error that stopped me up in my first read through in the fifth paragraph. Looks like you omitted the words “hear the” before “mutterings.” I always like it when others take the time to point such things out to me, so I hope that’s helpful.

Otherwise, I really enjoy these crisp little voyeuristic vore vignettes you’re putting out. Keep it up!

I really enjoyed this story. It had some of my favorite components: being well written, plenty of vore, a pleasant mixture of gentle and dominating, and realistic characters with relatable personalities and motivations. I also adore the occasional happy ending.

Not being familiar with your OCs, I still found the characters very easy to familiarize with, as you included just enough background to establish the relationship enough for me to follow their actions without bogging down the story with too much orientational materials.

I liked that the relationship, while obviously unconventional, and some would say borders toxicity (though Jill seems to have known what she was getting into), is still obviously reciprocal and very nurturing. It was gratifying to see that Vivi prioritizes the emotional health of her lover over her satisfying her desires, even if a witch’s urges are difficult to control. It was refreshing to see a healthy dynamic when there’s such an imbalance of power. I especially appreciated Vivi’s reassurances at the end.

I’m sorry to confess that you didn’t have me going, though I didn’t feel like you really wanted to have your readers fooled. When Vivi thought of the win-win scenario in which Jill could sleep and Vivi could sate her hunger for fear, I assumed the rest was a dream. Though that in no way detracted from my enjoyment of the subsequent events as they unfolded. On the contrary, I relished in the terror with Jill at how devastating it would feel to be tossed aside by my lover in such a cruel way. Jill was still very easy to relate to in that situation, so it was still a terrifying thrill, even if I knew it wasn’t “really happening.” At the same time, I could relate to Vivi’s guilty-pleasure at pushing the envelope. How does one balance eliciting a genuine reaction with their compassion toward their partner in what ends up being an elaborate ruse? It’s almost unfortunate that Vivi wasn’t in control of the nightmare, or couldn’t dream “with” Jill, so to speak, so that she could keep it from getting out of hand. As it happened, she ended up missing out on the majority of the terror her dream-self inspired, and didn’t get to enjoy the waking fear, because Jill’s worst fears manifested in a way that even Vivi at her most devious may not have been willing to carry out.

Anyway! Thank you for the short, sweet, gentle vore story! There’s simply not enough of this kind of content on here, and I’m constantly on the hunt for it, so I delight in this addition to my favorites. Please write more!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the detailed review! I'm glad you liked it! 

I really enjoyed this! Your form is superbly easy to follow, and the content is delightful to ingest. It’s never occurred to me what a good vehicle for unaware vore boba tea could be! And the fact that Elizabeth “blessed” unwilling tributes to her beloved is just so tantalizingly twisted. I love it.

The arc of this story kept me guessing until close to the end, and I rather enjoy that. Way to steer clear of being to predictably formulaic. While I was able to guess who would end up drinking that last tea based on your reuse of the epithet, “the prettiest girl in the cafe,” I did not guess who would end up in it, and that was quite the satisfying surprise to say the least. What a darkly poetic dose of justice!

Your descriptions are compelling, the characters interesting, and the plot and execution stimulating. Thoroughly enjoyable read. Please write more!

Author's Response:

This comment means a lot to me! Thank you very much. I have another story in the works so you won't have long to wait! 

I thoroughly enjoyed this! I got my hopes up for the quality of the characters and the dialog based on the description, and you did not disappoint! Shy/unsure predators are definitely one of my favorite, mostly untapped scenarios. It's a very close second for me to willing/sexual vore, and it's equally hard to come by, especially executed this deftly. So glad you got this commission! 

I enjoy the little bit of world-building you fleshed out in this brief story, because it's a lot easier for me to accept the extreme sociopathy required to swallow another person against their will when it takes place in a world wacky enough for congress to have passed such draconian legislature as shrinking people and revoking their status as persons for petty crimes. 

I think my favorite aspect of this story is that Erin sort of ironically overcomes her shyness and aversion towards consuming a person once she's better able to view them as former-equals. Like a private victory for the critically introverted. I also really enjoyed that, while devouring him and feeling him squirm inside of her really excited her, she seemed to still be too shy to capitalize on that excitement "properly" until she was certain he could no longer bear witness to it, even if it's of no real consequence, since it's not like he'd see anything compromising to her from his unfortunate vantage point. 

I'm sure that because this was a commission, it will probably be a one-off, but I'd definitely read anything else you write exploring her future experimentations in "trying new things." 

Great story! Thanks for being a writer! 

This was a really fun little story! I love full-tour, and your plot devices were very intriguingly applied. The "I shit you not," was both a fun play on words and a good story mechanic to accomplish your goals here. I was a little shocked by the little "development" that took place between getting him out and making things right, but the follow-on dialog just made me think that Frankie is shamelessly kinky, so it fits, and that's great. Seems like she's down for anything! Frankie and Steve Just discovered something very new about themselves. 

I know this was a request, so I doubt you'll continue on with it, but I'd definitely read more smut involving these two. I always enjoy willing tinies and happy endings! 

Your writing was smooth and intelligible as always, keep up the great work! 

Well this was a succinct and exquisitely written tale of epic terror. You put so much time love and care into carefully crafting your playthings only to destroy them in a flash of brilliance that's awesome to behold! I enjoyed Antonio's thoughts and feelings with regard to the slaughter till the bitter end. Bravo! 

Also, thanks for that list in response to my earlier review. I'll be sure to check those out.