This is my favorite of your rightly celebrated series, it gives a good variety of middle aged giants with different aspects of the foot fetish as well. With her faux-friendly but inescapable personality Jill has been my favorite of all your characters, but I've always wondered what she looks like! Can you elaborate please?

Author's Response:

Thanks very much. Interesting you say Jill is your favorite; I can't say I've ever heard anyone say that. I realize I didn't really talk much about their appearances in this story since it's mostly about Scott being at their feet. I imagined her with brunette shoulder-length hair and of somewhat average build, maybe with just a little extra meat on her bones but by no means overweight, and green eyes. And she frequents spas for her hands and feet.

You do a good job of mixing some "culture" and how people adjusted into this. Probably your most vicious and unfair universe.

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot, ikkle.

The cultural parts are what really excite me. Something about 1. Being completely subjugated and 2. Losing your own sense of self by not having your 'own' culture;these really add to the excitement of the story for me.  

Woah, this story really drives home how awful life underfoot might be outside of idle fantasies.

Author's Response:

That it does. Thanks for reading!

Yes! Best girl has arrived! (Personal bias) beyond that your writing continues to be excellent. I like the character writing bits that make the foot stuff even better when it arrives.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

I've thought about something similar to this with Marie Kondo before!  Didn't expect a well written story of it to actually appear though!  Wonderful job on this, great work on the dialogue as well!

I think the short chapters help give you choices/inspire you to write more.  It looks like it's going to be a very ambitious story with a lot of routes.  If you haven't already try to keep some kind of record of how the story is branching out.

My only criticism is it seems a little rushed in places, with the level of description dropping off and just kind of bouncing back and forth between dialogue/character names.  Not a huge deal.

Character descriptions are ok, I'll look into this again later!

I really loved how this both seemed in character for the characters and was non-stop material. Good writing, voice changing and ideas.

My favorites are Kiara, Martha and Sanzang and I’m a big fan of foot stuff. (Maundy Thursday for Martha?) Agartha obviously kicks any femdom ideas into overdrive as well.

Author's Response:

I sadly haven't gotten to Agartha yet. I'm trying to take the singularities slowly to enjoy the story as much as I can. That said, however, it definitely looks like it will be a lot of fun to write about from what I've already seen. :P 

Nasal wasn’t my idea but if you were looking for ideas on it, I love when tinies get reduced to commodities, so I can imagine little guys being sold as over the counter allergy relief.  I think an ordinary girl would really hit home with what they’ve been reduced to, like a picnicker, office worker or PokeFan.  The difference between the relief she’s getting and what the tiny is experiencing would work well with your styles.

Wow the chapter with Grace using Ava is pretty much the kind of scenario I’ve been hoping for out of this story, really great job as always. Will either of Graces parents get to use Ava?

This story is great!  I also love variety.  I know there's a ton of story left, but I still really hope Yuan and even the Church ladies get a spin.  Something about getting rented out as a foot licker.