Penname: Barrowman [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: June 23 2015
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Bio:

I love al good shrinking/GTS/Size change stories with good characters.


 


E-mail: praatzak@hotmail.com


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Summary:

Alvin Summers, seventeen going on eighteen has enough on his plate. Bullies at home and in school, a social life as alive as a fossil and under immense pressure to get to a good college, these don't even come close to the biggest one of all.

 Maybe things will get better, maybe he'll rise up. If it does, the path ahead is fraught with danger and he'll need to be at his best to fend off whatever threats may come his way. 

A story set in the Interiszables Universe created by vgiv. 


Categories: Giantess, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, New World Order, Sci Fi / Fantasy, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: Intersizable Universe
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 86192 Read Count: 242834
[Report This] Published: September 11 2014 Updated: March 04 2016
Reviewer: Barrowman Signed
Date: December 19 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Two Timer

Not much happening in this chapter. But the story it self was enjoyable. The slice of life with size difference in it, is always interesting.

 

 



Author's Response:

Yeah I thought you might like seeing how businesses in this world function, how it has changed from ours. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed
Date: September 26 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Bios

There is just no hope for people like Patricia. There is no cure. Too bad Cassie couldn't flush her down the toilet without consequenses. Alvin is almost free from that house.

 



Author's Response:

This isn't that kind of story and I think Cassie is risking a lot already by even threatening that, any further and she'd go to jail for a long time. Alvin doesn't need to be free from it, just redecorate it and give it a regime change.

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 06 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Bios

Titans must feel so akward, because there are so few of them and they stand out. That must give an uncomfortable feeling. At the same time it must feel strange to be so big and strong. Do they realise that they are never in physical danger like normal people. No animal, car accident, train accident, collapsing building can hurt them. Mountains look like hills to them. Their perception of the world is so much different than normal people. The Titans who travel with normals somewhere must often forget how dangerous the world is to normal humans. I like this strange Titan world and like to know more about it.

About this chapter. Patricia is just being horrible again. It would be funny when Cassie confronts Patricia



Author's Response:

Titans in the US are kind of a minority but there are countries out there where Titans are the majority. Most of the Middle East consists of Titan women and their normal sized men. Its less strange than you think though, the first generation would have been strange since they were the true giants of the world but now its just an everyday thing, nothing too special. They can be hurt by trains, Titan trains do exists and there are buildings capable of hurting them if it collapsed. Most Titans undergo mandatory training , where they learn how to be around the other sizes and how dangerous it is to them if they aren't careful.

 

You'll learn more about this world in future stories , I guarentee it. The world you're seeing in the stories released so far is only a glimpse , not a true representation of it. 

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed
Date: August 24 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Bios

No Osama is a little worse than Patricia. ;) Patricia wants to steal money from her children. When someone steals from their children to satisfy an addiction as if it is the most normal thing in the world, than they are truly lost. She clearly doesn't want children, but pure slaves where she has to put as little effort into loving them as possible. Not a shred of guilt or shame for her actions.

 



Author's Response:

 I might have overstated there but both are horrible people .Patricia definitely feels no remorse or she would be looking for him ,even before the money reveal.

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 24 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Bios

I have accepted Wendy as a somewhat human being. But you can never make me like Patricia. What a terrible selfish human being.



Author's Response:

Wendy will be touched by it but I think it will be easier to make you like Osama than see the same in Patricia. 

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed
Date: July 22 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Bios

@Nostory.  

"I'd just add that Wendy is not that cruel, she wouldn't intentionally do something that would kill Alvin or hurt him seriously. Even at her worst she was able to control her blows to the point that Alvin would not be hospitalised."
Isn't that because else her mother would find out what she was doing to Alvin al that time? She is sneaky too.

What do you think what she would have done if Cassie posted those photos of him and mentally break him. Would you think Wendy would mind that she totally destroyed his life? The answer is no.

And the manner how she tries to apologize to Cassie in chapter 13. That arrogant tone and how she is setting the terms of how that discussion must take place. Al her sentences make you cringe with disgust. Here we have a few.

Wendy:
“Point taken, now can we talk in a more private place? My personal life isn’t supposed to be broadcasted to the entire school,” Cassie relaxed her grip which gave Wendy an idea.
“No matter how much you think it, I’m a not monster. At least, I didn’t start out as one, no ever becomes one just like that,” Wendy snapped her finger.
“ Thank you Cassie, it’s the first nice thing you’ve done for me,”
“ I’d like to continue, if that’s fine with you,”


I don't mind. I like those discussions and different views. I'm also interested in the view the writer has.

 



Author's Response:

That and the laws covering the abuse of a smaller size leave you with no room to breathe once you get caught. 

 

If Cassie had done that, Wendy wouldn't have been bothered at all, she'd just go right in and laugh at him. 

You're probably going to ask, why doesn't Alvin report Wendy to the police then? Or any adult to get rid of her? 

As a victim of bullying, I tell you its not that easy and even after I did , the adult either didn't do enough or brushed it off as teasing and told me to be less sensitive. After a while you just learn to put up with it, that's it. 

It was supposed to be in a more sympathetic light, the first part especially of the quotes you brought up but it could be due to my subpar description of the scene that led you to believe otherwise. the third line too. In fact all of these are supposed to be from a girl trying to be polite. 

I've always wanted to write a story that got the readers into discussions with either each other or the writers involved. 

 

 

 

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed
Date: July 22 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Bios

@vgiv. I too am an only child. I hold friendships and family in high regard. But check out how short that period was where she supposedly loved him and how long that time was when she tortured him. When his father died, there was no love for him in that house.
That last act of her was nasty. She knew that would destroy him. She didn't even worry when he didn't came home and probably would have liked it when Cassie would had gone trough with her plan for Alvin. She would'nt have cared if died.

When he comes home. See the way she talks to him. Not satisfied because Cassie didn't mentally destroyed him with is not far away from killing someone. Sounds pretty sadistic to me.
Those eight years of torture just because of a few words Alvin said?

Maybe you see something in Wendy that makes it worth it to give her a chance. But I wouldn't if I were in Alvin's shoes. That boat sailed away a long time ago. Just leaving them isn't even an evil act compared to the eight years of torture and lack of love.

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

I'd just add that Wendy is not that cruel, she wouldn't intentionally do something that would kill Alvin or hurt him seriously. Even at her worst she was able to control her blows to the point that Alvin would not be hospitalised. Bullying Alvin is a drug for her, she feels powerful doing it and it masks her insecurities. 

I'm not against what you feel about Wendy since I was trying to get people to hate her when I wrote it and not believing her turnaround is expected. I totally respect your point of view, you and everyone have good reason to be skeptical of her. 

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed
Date: July 21 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Bios

@vgiv,
"as they did have a civilised conversation in Alvin's car in Chapter 1 I think"

Wendy:" I don’t get why Mom always asks you more questions. Am I that uninteresting?”
Alvin: "I don’t know. Honestly, sometimes I wonder why she gets so quiet every time I say the word scholarship?"
Wendy: "Alvin,"
Alvin: "Yes sister dear?"
Wendy:"Try not to make it too easy for my friends I to push you around. We like a challenge"

That was the conversation in the car. A civilised promise of a massive beating like she had done so many times before. Impressing her friends has nothing to do with it, because she is the leader of the group. You can clearly see from the behaviour of her friends that they don't care about beating Alvin up or not. They already respected her and she already stands out.
That guy cooks for her and doesn't look for trouble. But eight years long, abuse inside the house and at school non-stop. She is either cruel or stupid or both or something in between. That behaviour would have continued if Cassy hadn't befriend him and treathened her multiple times.

If he leaves the house, he is finally rid of Wendy and her mother. No more stress and a good life ahead. No need to hate them either, just erase them completely from your life. Don't give them your phone-number, don't tell them where you live. Move as far way as possible. Wendy and Patricia deserve eachother.



Author's Response:

Damn I forgot about that line...

Might have made Wendy a lot creepier than I intended there. 

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed
Date: July 20 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Bios

@Nostory. You have point. And it's not unrealistic either, but she is still creepy. Acting so nice after many years of complete opposite behaviour. That character can't be gone. She good easely fall back to being rotten again if Cassie was gone. It's best if Alvin moved out of that house as soon as possible, just to be sure. He can go live with Cassie and leave al his troubles behind.

 



Author's Response:

All of what you mentioned are valid concerns and it is up to Alvin to trust Wendy, he and Wendy had good times before the bad so Alvin has to put his faith in that Wendy still has good in her. 

There's still 9 chapters to see if Alvin chose poorly and the story ends with him in a ditch, body mangled from Wendy's fatal beating. She is an Amazon and while they don't have the strength a Titan has, it wouldn't be too hard for them to a man or normal woman with their fists. 

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstar
Date: July 20 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Bios

Fun story of day to day school life in a world full of Titans and Amazons. But I miss a size class between Amazon and Titan. Something around 15 metres to 20 metres.

Wendy is creepy. I don't know what to make of her. Patricia Mathers is a typical bad mother.

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

vgiv came up with the sizes, I just followed the rules set by him for those. I might do a story set with a 50-60 foot giantess but outside of this series. 

Patricia defintiely not Mother of the Year, its obvious but how far have you read? Wendy isn't always creepy.

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed
Date: July 20 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Bios

@Nostory

I've read it to chapter 18. I find her behaviour patterns very disturbing. ;) First normal treatment when his dad was alive, than super cruel for a long time and than be able to have selfreflection at her friends house and with Cassie and after that acting nice to Alvin. She wasn't only cruel to Alvin, but to others too for years. Wendy left him in a life treathening situation with Titans. That rotten character can't be gone in just a few moments off talk with Cassie.

 

 



Author's Response:

Hmm good point but remember she went through quite a few ass kickings from Cassie before their talk so she has the bruises to show for that, her turnaround isn't just because of a few words. 

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed
Date: July 30 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Bios

I also disagree with gadgetwambo. Because she is so uninterested in her children for years. She therefor doesn't deserve to respond like that. If she was a good mother, she has a right to be angry. But she is terrible for so many years, that she must shut up and be a good parent for a change. Selfish mother.

"She’s hardly spoken to Alvin, other than to make sure he keeps the house spotless and that the cooking is done properly, she feels little to no obligation to go beyond this. It hasn’t come back to bite her in any way so why change something if it ain’t broken?"

@nostory
I can understand your point of view and that some adult might not believe you or brush it off as something light. I can understand Alvin's actions not to tell. But in this setting of events, Alvin should leave Wendy and Patricia.

Wendy and Patricia deserve eachother.



Author's Response:

Your assessment is pretty spot on , she is pretty apathetic with regards to her children.

I will have to disagree with Alvin leaving both of them, he does deserve a reformed Wendy at this point and if he chooses to stand up for by leaving Patricia, then Wendy is good enough for him. 

 

Summary:

Kai was born smaller than any other human. He is now a measly 1' tall and has lived with his mother and his sister since he was born. The time has come for him to move on and take the biggest step of his life - College.



Categories: Adventure, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Odor, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 28463 Read Count: 80971
[Report This] Published: November 01 2014 Updated: March 13 2016
Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 14 2015 Title: Chapter 3: 'Appartment'

Nice story about life in college as a 1 foot person.

S Class by faintsmile Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 66]
Summary:

In a world where there is a strong correlation between wealth and size, two people come together, despite their obvious differences.


Categories: Body Exploration, Teenager (13-19), Mature (40-49), Gentle, Giant, New World Order, Sci Fi / Fantasy, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FM/f, M/f
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26080 Read Count: 70608
[Report This] Published: November 12 2014 Updated: January 12 2015
Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 24 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What a super interesting world about size classes and the change for Hadley and Isabelle in S Class and Isabelle in F class. What a fun world this is.

 

 

Summary:

A woman becomes engaged to her three-inch-tall beloved, but her staunchly conservative family may be prepared to go to extreme measures to prevent this union.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Middle Age (50+), Couples , Gentle, Humiliation, Mouth Play, New World Order, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Omegas
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15861 Read Count: 61377
[Report This] Published: November 24 2014 Updated: December 24 2014
Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 04 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Tidings

Good story. With every Omega story we get a better understanding how this World/Universe works.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks. That's definitely the goal.

Summary:

Vick finally opens up the world with his height, and it all starts with his new roommates.


Categories: Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Breasts, Entrapment, Giantess, Body Exploration, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Young Adult 20-29
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27629 Read Count: 172993
[Report This] Published: January 16 2015 Updated: June 05 2016
Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 08 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Double Success

Yeah, finally. I hate Aruna. Beat her up, rape her, humiliate her and never let her grow back again. I hate her pretence in the beginning that she is a person with honor and only to pull that kind of shit. She only has size, for the rest she is a simple minded fool and a coward. She is the type that after all her stunts would say, "I was only joking, it was a harmless joke". Hate these kind of people.

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 06 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Evicted

I hope Aruna and Lauren will never be normal sized or bigger than that again for the rest of their lives. Worthless human beings. I would love to see how all their hopes and dreams in life get ruined because of their size. Hehe, Love to see Aruna play sports and that the normaly physical weaker girls totally humiliate them in those sports and gets bullied afterwards. Hope she gets raped to occasionally.

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed
Date: October 24 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Roommates

I totally don't like Aruna. Selfish bully and totally not fun to hang out with. A bad and untrustworthy person. I would never want her as a friend or girlfriend. I love intelligent giantesses who are fun to hang out with and who makes you stronger as a person.

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 14 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Trifecta

Love those series where you see the day tot day life of a small person in a world of giantesses

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed
Date: September 28 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: The Book

Vick should avoid Aruna at all times and warn the others. Aruna is dangerous, she wants Vick to feel vulnerable and wants to hurt him. Jealous, bully, can't handle power and must abuse because is insecure.