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Living Together by Navar51 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 85]
Summary:

 

Ryan lives a normal life for a tiny: he works online, he keeps in shape at the local gym, he games online with friends he never meets, and he tries his best to avoid getting stepped on. Of course it was just his luck that the apartment he lived in got foreclosed on and now he’s been evicted.

Thankfully one of his online friends, Lena, offers to let him crash with her. Of course, having never met, Ryan doesn’t know she’s a bit bigger than he thinks.

 

 

Note: There will be no deaths in this story.

 


Categories: Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 67589 Read Count: 98617
[Report This] Published: April 08 2021 Updated: August 20 2022
Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 14 2021 Title: Chapter 3: CH3. Teased and Confused

Love the characters and slow build. Fingers crossed they get over their jitters soon though haha.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it! They're fairly jittery people, but I hope so too!

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Date: April 27 2021 Title: Chapter 4: CH4. All Work, No Play

Amazing chapter with equally good pacing. I'm glad it picked up a bit in the end though. It reads as a bit of a transition chapter for them, in a good way of course, very natural!



Author's Response:

Glad you like the pacing, hope you like Chapter 5!

The Adventures of Jen and Jerry by Zerda Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 31]
Summary:

Jerry finds himself the guinea pig of an experiment at a friend's party. He only wanted to impress his ex-girlfriend; the stunning, sexually assertive Jennifer, but when the experiment goes horribly wrong, embarrassing him in front of his friends, he is certain he has dashed any chance of winning back her love.

He may be wrong yet.


Categories: Humiliation, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 124581 Read Count: 142489
[Report This] Published: April 14 2021 Updated: June 16 2021
Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 14 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The State of the World

Amazing premise, big fan of the two main characters. I see you posted a lot of 1 chapter stories just now. This is by far the best and hope you continue it.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I try to make characters who are each different and memorable. I plan on continuing the stories I've posted, including this one. 

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Date: April 20 2021 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: The Morning After

This story is exceptional, the writing, characters, I just read all four chapters you added in a single sitting. Can't wait to see the next update :)

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Date: May 05 2021 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: The Bath

Wow, this is my new favorite story here. So well written. This line, in fact, the entire paragraph it exists within, is so eloquently written. -"She was in absolutely no rush to break my trance, like a cat who had just finished eating before it saw a mouse; keenly interested, but not in immediate want." I can't stress how much I hope you continue this enough. Well done!

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Date: May 11 2021 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Gaining Independence

Keeps getting better and better. Love the title change as well. It fits the story perfectly.

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Date: May 15 2021 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: The Puppet Master

This story is epic af. Please continue the pace and don't stop lol.



Author's Response:

Thanks johnsmith, I'm glad you enjoy it. Much more material is yet to be posted

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Date: May 21 2021 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Natalie Cont'd

Man this is quite the adventure. Definitely looking forward to this new character, but eventually more of Jen of course.



Author's Response:

Don't worry, I'm not departing from the main narrative altogether. The title of this story is very deliberate.

Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 26 2021 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: The Toy Life

Holy fuck that was good. Wonder if that last bit was actually a hallucination or if Jen really did find him. Also, he went to a vet. Wonder if he was unknowingly chipped...



Author's Response:

I see what you're getting at -- a chip to locate him. Cool idea, I didn't think of that. In retrospect it's the type of thing she would have agreed to (for his safety, of course...), but if Jerry found out, he would demand to have it removed and probably never trust her (or any vet or doctor) again. 

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Date: June 01 2021 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Let the Games Begin (Again)

Although the rescue was predictable, I don't think it was meant to be unpredictable. It was awesome and well-earned. I truly hope he tells her how he feels at one point. It's quite clear he gets off on her dominance just as much as she does. In any case. Great job and thanks for being so consistent with this gem. Hope to see it continue, I'll certainly be here to read :)



Author's Response:

I appreciate your kind feedback. There was going to be a scene where Jennifer confronted Samantha and rescued Jerry. But it raised all kinds of problems and I had to drop it. It also cheated the story out of a proper reunion. In the drawer, Jerry is in no condition to have a reunion with anyone, and seeing Jennifer again needed to have a big impact.

The entire story is planned out so things will get resolved; this is not going to be one of those stories that just continues endlessly without resolution. 

 

Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 04 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The State of the World

Yup. This is the best story on this site, and IMO, on par with my other favorite story, nexifem. Thank you for this treat Zerda, and see you next week, hopefully ;)

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Date: June 09 2021 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Massage

Wow. These last 3 chapters had so much happen in them. You took a risk including that much in such a short time, but the risk paid off. The flow is impeccable and the story is better for it. Still can't get over the fact that he finally said the L-word. Huge fan as always and can't wait to see her reaction and of course, Stuart's. I wonder who Stuart was texting? Could it be the ex-girlfriend he reconnected with at the restaurant?



Author's Response:

Thanks for your consistent feedback, johnsmith! I'm glad you're still reading!

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Date: June 17 2021 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue: Remy's Machine Pt 3

Loved the entire story except the epilogue. I dunno, it just felt kinda rushed lol.with that said, this was an epic tale. Tysm for sharing!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your feedback. Ch 37 was intended to be the 'true' ending, with the epilogue as a short 'gag' ending, sort of like an 'after the credits' scene in a movie, so people can finish the story at 37 and the epilogue is not essential.

Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 20 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The State of the World

I definitely support a sequel, though not with the sizes you teased in the epilogue. I'd hope that was just a nightmare and he's actually still the same size in this. I find the interaction to be perfect in this round. I could see you continuing their relationship and how they evolve as a couple. What would a proposal, wedding plans look like. How would she feel about his fame? I'd imagine more and more news crews would want to get a piece of him. Then of course there's your best character, the vet. I'd want to see her with a bigger role. Perhaps Stuart's relationship didn't work out and he's dropped off with her. I wonder how Jen would react seeing him there with the Vet as her little assistant. All sorts of theories she'd like to test out with him. Could even do a chapter or two with just them. SO many possibilities :)



Author's Response:

I appreciate the interest in a sequel! Can't say too much about the plot, but Jerry will be very small briefly in the beginning but in a way that keeps the interaction and content style intact, as much as possible. However, most of the plot events will require him to be at least mouse size again. 

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Date: July 06 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The State of the World

Any progress on the sequel?



Author's Response:

Thanks for your interest, johnmith! So far the first 9 chapters are done. I plan to start posting once most of the story is finished, so I can stick to a weekly posting schedule, as I did with the first one, and finish the remainder of the story during the weeks I post. Wish I could give you an estimate as to post date, but I can't guess at this stage. But writing output has been pretty consistent so far, so hopefully shouldn't take too long. In the meantime I am happy to give future updates.

Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 09 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The State of the World

That's great news! Wish this website had a better format for chatting between authors. Do you think you'll have enough to start posting in august?



Author's Response:

Not sure about August, but maybe September -- maybe. It feels close but I'm not sure. Currently 24 finished chapters with a bunch of unfinished/unformatted material across the entire story. It's been slightly more difficult than the first one because I'm trying some new things. 

An Innocent Man 3: Vindication by Pluto Pendragon Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 56]
Summary:

The story of Allison Starr and Brian Bentley concludes! Brian’s innocence has been proven to the world, and he is about to reveal that he is actually alive, but only one inch tall. Now that Allison and Brian no longer have to live in hiding, they must adjust to a brand new world - one that owes Brian a lot of apologies. This becomes even more difficult when they are reunited with faces from the past, such as Brian’s little sister. However, their relationship is stronger than ever. As such, they’re confident that they can overcome any challenge, so long as they do it together.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Mature (40-49), Couples, Feet, Gentle, Maternal, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 52028 Read Count: 49462
[Report This] Published: April 30 2021 Updated: February 13 2022
Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 01 2021 Title: Chapter 1: A Brand New World

That's one longass teaser, lol. Didn't expect you so soon, but good to have you back all the same. Oh, and as far as this chapter goes, you knocked it out of the park. Couldn't put it down, it felt like I was in the room with them. I hated his mom in parts 1 and 2, yet somehow, you made me want to give her a big hug in this one. Fantastic job.



Author's Response:

You know what, you're right. Maybe I should have called it the prologue instead. Oh well, no take-backsies. 

I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter! I'm definitely really interested to see people's reactions to his mom in this story, so I'm glad you're feeling sympathetic towards her. I hope you enjoy the future chapters!

-Pluto

Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 22 2021 Title: Chapter 4: Jennifer, Part 2

Good stuff, and what a note to leave it on, in a good way of course. Here we go!



Author's Response:

Yes indeed! Thanks for the review, and I hope you enjoy what happens next.

-Pluto

Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 24 2021 Title: Chapter 5: One-on-One

Wonderful new chapter. I hope you don't betray the characters though. Laura Bentley may feel regret and guilt, but everything is how it relates to her. Elizabeth hit the nail on the head when she accused her of wanting to apologize to make herself feel better. I just don't see anyone who'd say that she'd kill him herself actually growing. I hope the chapter where he meets her is more him gaining the closure he needs.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I'll definitely do my best to craft their reunion in a logical/sastisfying way, and I hope it doesn't disappoint. Definitely, both she and Jennifer need to think less about what Laura wants, and more about how it will make Brian feel. I hope you enjoy what happens next!

-Pluto

Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 25 2021 Title: Chapter 6: Laura

Mic drop



Author's Response:

Thanks much!

-Pluto

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