A man regrets having asked his friend to crush him underfoot, and laments his decision in the afterlife.
I think I know what your going for, kind of an artistic look at the regret of a willing victim. It still feels like a chapter is missing though. Probably cause I don't know anything about Lillian.
Yeah I can understand that, this story was originally written for a crowd who knew the character very well already so I didn't put any effort into expanding on it any further. So it is completely abstract as to who is who and what is what, and I imagine it is quite confusing as to what is going on. This is just meant to be a short, but thanks for the honest review, I appreciate it! ^^
Issac finds himself in quite the predicament when he decides to snoop through the reserved section of the library. He learns that magic is dangerous for the uninitiated. This story is shows a boy entering a new world of magic. It contains romance, character development, action, mild butt and feet gts content, and fun. This is an actual story and not just pure fan service. Guys I implore you to leave a review and give me more feedback! I have chapters ready to post the more reviews I get! Let me now if you guys want this to be a series or only one story!
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Story is going good so far, maybe could use a bit more description of where Isaac is in relation to Michelle at any given time. The conversation in this last chapter played out as if they were both the same size and nothing was out of the ordinary. I understand you were trying to give some exposition on Michelle's power's while moving the story along, but don't forget its a Shrunken man story :)
Gotcha, I appreciate the feedback. In the later chapters I have written I was a bit more descriptive and I wrote the orientation of the characters better. Hoepfully those improve your opinion on the story! Also, specifically in regards to chapter nine, I wanted it to seem like he wasn't shrunken to show that they are close enough to ignore the elephant in the room.
San, a tiny lizard boy, is introduced to a giant while hunting. Will he survive the encounter?
Well done perspectives from the giant and the tiny lizards. Very sexy macro stuff. That was a suprising ending too, how nice of him not to just crush him after that. Is this the end or will there be a follow up?
Fairly typical setup. Real world, everything is fine until one day a race of giants not unlike the humans of earth arrive. They aren't organized, in fact they don't even seem to be working together. Yet, in a matter of months most of the world is overrun. Most centers of civilization are wiped out, causing many people to flee to refugee camps. Years later, whilst humankind still struggles to survive, a mysterious organization has begun building special containment chambers to house the few caught. This story follows Ellis, a young man sent to question these captives. His mission is simple, find out what the giants know, find out where they came from, and determine whether or not each captive is too dangerous to keep alive...
This is my first serious story series, so I'm straying from overtly sexual content. But, as things pick up it'll get more interesting.
Really digging it so far, I kinda hope Vera breaks out just to see what she will do :). The way you've wrote Ellis is very belivable. He is scared to death, but passionate enough not to give up. I'm glad Vera seems to have taken a liking to him, I wonder what she would do with him if she escaped with him.
Haven't seen this type of personal 1 on 1 interaction with a giantess of this size before. You tagged her mega so it would seem even if she tries to be gentle with people she can't help hurting them even from vibrations from her moving. Ellis seems kind of hoplessly optimistic about Vera, however the alternative probably wouldn't allow him to get as much information out of her. Very tense yet enjoyable read.
That wad one of my favorite chapters of the year on this site. I think we have all been dying to see Vera escape. To see Ellis approach her even knowing he might die was very emotionally captivating. Vera isnt a "good" person, but I feel like she will try her best to protect Ellis no matter what happens. I don't know how they will take on 3 giants though. This is going to be an explosion of action I would think it works well since your charachters have been literally pent up for so long. Sonce your story is in such a bleak dystopian world, i think Ellis and Vera simply surviving would be a very happy ending. Id like to see them together though.
Velia Valspar is a typical heroine just trying to get through life. She fights crime, doubles as a waitress to pay the bills, and has to wait in traffic like everyone else. As far as she is concerned the world is just as simple as Heroes and Villains and very little else need be said on the matter. That is until a chance meeting with a villainess in a Laundromat has her start to question what she thinks to be true and false. Soon enough she finds herself exploring long dormant fantasies with a woman who's day job is mayhem and destruction.
Everyone needs a little crazy in their lives.
Hmm I think I have some similarities with Velia haha. They seem like the perfect pair for each other. Nice to see even a crimnal like Alatha can have a hobby she really enjoys at the aquarium.
I'm glad Alatha doesn't seem like she's going to be an abusive partner or something, she was interested to see what Velia was down for like a normal caring partner would be.
Can't wait to see more.
Ooh you answered a question I had without me even realizing I had it. So Velia can shrink other people if she is touching them when she shrinks maybe? It will be interesting to see how Velia functions as a dom and how Alatha does with being shrunken. She's not used to it like Velia so I could see it being very frightening for her.
Nice to see the little touch of Alatha having tears welling up at hearing how much Velia trusts her at the end there. That chapter had a great mix of size play and regular size sexy S&M stuff.
No doubt, for Velia its old hat but for Alatha its most certainly not! The world can be rather terrifying when tiny, as countless stories on here outline!
Figured I'd try a mix in this chapter and see how it would go, pleased to see it went over well.
I knew the dramatic outburst was probably coming soon, still kinda cought me off guard the way she saw her on TV. I kinda figured that Alatha was doing things far away from the city to avoid conflict with Velia. She'd rather be gone for weeks away from Velia than do something nearby where they could potentialy have to fight again.
That fight between the characters and the following anguish from Velia and the resoulution was very executed. I'd been wondering if Alatha would be the one to cave or Velia. Alatha seems very strong willed, but also is getting closer to Velia than shes probably been with any of her partners in a long time.
I'm torn between wanting to see more sexy dominant fighting from Alatha and wanting to see a happier ending to this story. Overall good plot development chapter I'm sure there will be lots more sexy times to come :D
Ah, that puts me at ease. Here I was a bit afriad it might come off as more forced.
As far as Alatha caving... I wouldn't say that exactly. Depends on if Velia can come up with something that holds her interest as she does rather enjoy fighting.
Oh, I still have quite a few ideas in regards to more sexy times/GTS related things. Rest assured of that.
You've done it again, another great set of characters. I think this story in particular highlights something I love about this fetish. Something dead sexy about one character having the power of life and death over another and choosing to spare her. Velia is clearly a younger and more innocent character. It seems now like she really had no chance against Alatha considering her heat has no limit. The fact that Velia is only alive because of a chance meeting and her decision to help Alatha get a quarter is just too cute.
I wonder if there will be more depth to Alatha or if she is truely just stealing things for personal gain. Will love to see how their relationship evolves.
Howdy, Combine! Glad to see you like this one of mine as well.
Hopefully it can keep your interest as much as my others have as it goes along!
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Wow that was a very well done in shoe section!!! The way you describe the smells and sensations she was feeling was very well done. It would certainly seem you know a thing or too about female orgasms :). Again I'm amazed at how well you are doing this Caring relationship. Alatha despite her villain self obviously spent alot of time thinking about how to please Velia while keeping her safe. Despite us keeping in Velia's perspective you can tell that Alatha is eager to please her too even in her sadistic persona.
Not having to fear for the little character's life every chapter is certainly something new from your storys and I'm liking it so far. Their S&M relationship allows you to keep using your strengths in that front as well. I'd say I'm curious whether Alatha will corrupt Velia or Velia will get Alatha to give up her life of crime, but I'm enjoying the journey so much that I don't really care to think that far ahead right now.
Thank you! Good to know I didn't botch it.
Caring relationships have never been my strength. Even in my writings outside of GTS type stuff I tend to enjoy writing the darker things. Powerstruggles, fights for dominance, and cruelty tend to flow rather easily. Building a healthy and loving relationship and keeping it at least halfway believable is actually pretty hard as it turns out. Nice exercise though!
Anyway, thanks as always for the review and the thoughts!
A nobleman's private dinner is interrupted by a couple of unexpected guests.
Aha, a return to your normal form. This was an exceptionally cruel one, Alicia seemed clearly insane and capable of using horrific magic.
The thought occured to me how elves are nearly always portrayed as being more powerfull than humans in alot of fantasy, but they are usually very peace loving and tranquil never exploiting that power. Lilisila being terrified of her own daughter made Alicia just that much scarier. Not the type of story I normally enjoy, but you had me anticipating what would happen if Alicia snapped, and dropped the little girl persona.
I'm not honestly sure where it came from, just kinda appeared on the page one evening.
Indeed, its a trope I always kinda lifted an eyebrow at since mythologically speaking Fae were generally not nice creatures. As for them being more powerful, probably the age thing.
That scene in particular was a spur of the moment thing. Usually its the mother controlling the daughter, but here I figured I'd switch it up. Might be elaborated on if I ever opt to use the setting again.
Well, I'm happy it kept your interest at least! Trust me, I know what you mean in that account. Sometimes something just isn't your cup of tea.
Anyway, thanks for the review, and letting me chat your ear- er, eyes off!
In the deep and dark cells of Elsira, Lilisila Tylsiva faces punishment and torment at the whims of her sadistic and mad daughter, Alicia.
This is actually working out really well with these few chapter long stories you are doing with these settings and characters. Alicia backround of simply being an honor student type gone bad is shockingly buyable and makes Alicia that much more terrifying. The gloria reveal was pretty shocking too.
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Aww, nice to see a story with a happy ending for once even after all the shit they went through.
The rather narcissistic shut-in prince of a rather dimunative race is sent out into the world with the goal of finding the right suitor to marry. A rather simple goal... if every single one of his 'matches' weren't bigger than he. Not all are proper benevolent ladies either. With an informed retainer that is never around when he needs him as his only companion the prince sets out on a journey of self discovery, peril, and the occasional steamy encounter.
Intresting how the most severe looking women have turned out to be the friendliest. While the fair and proper women have been cruel and airheaded. This is certainly your most lighthearted and comical story so far. Its been a treat to say the least. I laughed at Lucina's comeuppance in the last chapter. Is this story really going to have 100 prospects. If so this will be an epic of all epics.
Well, 'friendly', compared to the others at least. With a possible exception for Lea.
I'll certainly be trying to shoot for that, I'm just updating as it comes to mind!
Daughter to the richest man in the world, Ariande faces the struggle between who is her friend, and who is her enemy. She likes to blow off steam by stepping on tinies, but now she is tasked with working with three others to save the world.
The story focuses on Ariadne, A bright one young woman with a thirst for being a giantess and wreaking havoc, and Ansam, A man with a troubled, but yet so shrouded past as they struggle to protect the world, and more importantly, stand each other.
The story is a superhero story, with the main characters having superpowers fighting supervillians, with Ariadne's power to grow into a giantess.
Suprised to be your first review. I really liked Adriadne's charachter, seems like she resents her father and is a very angry and confrontational person outwardly while feeling like other people are out to get her inwardly. The way you portrayed her intoxication with growing was awesome too. I wonder if she will err more toward villany in the future or how her relationship with Ansam will progress. Having her crush clones and people in a simulation is a great way to keep her character in a grey area while showing how much she enjoys her power. I'd imagine anyone on her squad would always be looking over their shoulder afraid of being crushed.
Hope to see more soon!
Thank you very much for the review combine45. I appreciate you taking the time to write one. I do indeed have plans to put Ansam in the spotlight a little more, and that will definately include interactions with Ariadne. I'm working hard at part 2, and want to it be as good as i can make it. stay tuned !
This story takes place in an alternate reality where an ancient civilization employs magic and potions in its everyday lives. The Metzakal Ritual is at the heart of the Huhmtakil Culture. Every year all men at the age of 18 are gathered to display their prowess and engage in a fighting competition to determine the strongest. Those deemed worthy become warriors and are given the right to mate with the most beautiful maidens. Those that don’t make it are assigned other tasks. Some, in accordance with religious beliefs, are shrunk and devoured by the maidens. This story follows Jumko as he gets ready for the most important week of his life.
I'm really digging this so far. The sense of abandonment and lack of compassion from Jumko's family really sets up his despair. Seems like he eather has to accept his fate and go with the girl he loved or take his chances with the suspicious but beautifull Xanthe. Personally id take my chances with her but she could be planning some even worse things than a quick death with Nadia. I'd like to see things swing back in a positive direction for Jumko. First step avoid castration somehow hopefully. Don't worry about the impatient readers. I think youve realy set things up well prior to his shrinking.
Ultimatly it was anticlimactic for me. I felt like you set up some grand story where there was going to be a rebellion against a corrupt government and it boiled down to a cruel breakup. I will say the story was very engaging and you delt with the emotions very well, but the story ended up being more about conventional sex than any real interaction between sizes.
To imagine a world like that I guess you can't really blame Nadia for the way she acted, but to fall in love with Ziv so quick... I feel like its breif infatuation and she would grow to detest him after years of marriage. The sex will lose its luster and she will realize ultimatily what a waste it all was.
I still look forward to your future stories.
Starting to think there is no light at the end of this tunnel. Oh well this story has been very engaging. I would love to see one of the many women in Jumko's life have a last second change of heart and protect him, but I don't see it happening.
Damn, fuck Nadia. I'd much rather go to Xanthe just to spite her at this point. She really checked out on Jumko right when he got KO'd i bet. I hope ahe gets a come uppance somehow.