Reviewer: SomeRRight Signed 
Date: May 04 2016
Title: Chapter 21: Epilogue
Your word choice and worldbuilding are top-notch here, and i almost want to steal the idea of the tiered societies from you because it's such a good premise. I do agree with gerald's critiques of the story for the most part.
You don't really set up Priyanka(?) as the type of person who'd drop her guard so quickly with a stranger.
But my main critique is that I kinda wish there was more! I really enjoyed this. A lot of good action and well thought-out scenes, but I wish there was more! Perhaps a slower pace to draw out a lot of the scenes, more description so we can get inside of Marco's head, etc.
Still, I'd give this at least a 9/10. It's (some of/perhaps) the best writing I've seen on this site.
Author's Response: Thank you kindly. This was the first fetish story I ever wrote down, and the first creative writing I'd done in a very long time. I think it's somewhat obvious that it was provoked by years of reading size smut that didn't quite scratch my precise itches, and I tried to scratch as many of them as possible in one go. Still, I had a blast writing it, and it still have to rub one out after re-reading it. I learned from it and from the feedback it's received.
I've had a couple of ideas for further stories set in the world of Big Sky, and they're'as likely as any to command my industry. I don't have as nearly much time as I'd like for writing, but I can't tell you how gratifying it is to have even a handful of receptive readers for this stuff.
