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The Escape Redux by Nostory Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 54]
Summary:

What happens when a young Englisman on vacation finds him washed up on an island? An island containing a sexy sassy giantess to boot? Fun and adventures of likes of which Jack Erikson has never experienced before!

This is a re-write of The Escape, I'm redoing it to address plotholes and the quality of the writing, it could do with an improvement. 

Credit given to fellow user vgiv, who gave me advice on character development, fact checking, someone to bounce ideas off and to critique my writing when needed! 


Categories: Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: The Escape
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54558 Read Count: 147983
[Report This] Published: July 18 2014 Updated: July 14 2015
Reviewer: 8D Signed
Date: December 30 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Meals and Monopoly

Most intense game of monopoly i've ever read about on this website!



Author's Response:

So far I think its the only game of monopoly on this site XD!

Reviewer: 8D Signed
Date: December 30 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Never Piss Off a Giantess

Is there gonna be the whole lauren and the leginton company scandal and the terroist group hostage situation all over again?

 



Author's Response:

I can't spoil that so I'll just say wait and see.

Downtrodden by Nostory Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 238]
Summary:

Alvin Summers, seventeen going on eighteen has enough on his plate. Bullies at home and in school, a social life as alive as a fossil and under immense pressure to get to a good college, these don't even come close to the biggest one of all.

 Maybe things will get better, maybe he'll rise up. If it does, the path ahead is fraught with danger and he'll need to be at his best to fend off whatever threats may come his way. 

A story set in the Interiszables Universe created by vgiv. 


Categories: Giantess, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, New World Order, Sci Fi / Fantasy, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: Intersizable Universe
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 86192 Read Count: 244228
[Report This] Published: September 11 2014 Updated: March 04 2016
Reviewer: 8D Signed
Date: December 30 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Pasta and Meteors

You said "As he walked back to his house, a simple two storey building, the second floor was where all the bedrooms were, his load felt a lighter."

You mispelled story



Author's Response:

I used the British spelling for this since where I'm from we normally the British format.

Reviewer: 8D Signed
Date: December 30 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Pasta and Meteors

you said "Alvin calmly  wiped some spit off his cheek, Patricia’s tirade feeling limp and impotent."

You mispelled tired



Author's Response:

No no, tirade as in a scolding of some sort, I wasn't describing her energy level.

Reviewer: 8D Signed
Date: December 30 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Pasta and Meteors

I like the story though! 

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Author's Response:

Thanks, I noticed you created an account on the same day you reviewed my story, did you do it for this?

Reviewer: 8D Signed
Date: December 30 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Bios

do thier cup sizes really have to be on the bios????  Thats kind of.... weird....



Author's Response:

I find it helps to visualise the character better, I used to include eye and hair colour but it was kind of obvious so I dropped that.

Reviewer: 8D Signed
Date: December 30 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Payback's A Cassie

You said "“ Cass-” Alvin’s SOS call was cut off by Camilla’s hand clamping itself on Alvin’s lips like a facehugger, her vice like grip squeezing his cheekbones, A lvin swore they would break if she so much as increased the force on them."

There is no space in Alvin



Author's Response:

Ah, good of you to notice. Must have missed it during editing. I'll fix it later.

Reviewer: 8D Signed
Date: December 30 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Bios

I did create the account to rewiew this.  I am the same person with the account "joemomma" that commented on aftermath a few years ago(i forget how long)



Author's Response:

It was only last year but it does feel like a few years, what with all the writing I've done. I recall someone with that user commenting, thanks for the review there and many reviews here. 

Reviewer: 8D Signed
Date: December 30 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Counter

 “ Oh really? You can’t even reach the top of the shelf without a stepladder and you’re talking about hitting moi?”

Is the "moi" on purpose?



Author's Response:

Yep, just for Wendy to further insult Alvin.

Reviewer: 8D Signed
Date: December 30 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Bios

You should do a story that continues this one.  The author does not update it anymore, but it is intresting.



Author's Response:

Wait, I'm confused. Did you mean another story?

Reviewer: 8D Signed
Date: December 30 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Bios

oh, i put a link on "this one"  to the story, but it didnt work. copy and paste it into your browser.

http://www.giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=3646



Author's Response:

   I read it and I'm sorry, it doesn't really interest me. However I do have plenty of stories planned once I finish what I have at the moment so perhaps you'll enjoy those. 

Reviewer: 8D Signed
Date: December 31 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Bios

how about cassie takes allen home for the remainder of the month, then there is no cinderallen at home.  Wendy will have to cook and clean for herself, and patricia will be too busy finding a job to care or notice.



Author's Response:

That's an idea, it would certainly solve a lot of the problems you mentioned. But it's a little too easy don't you think? 

Reviewer: 8D Signed
Date: January 02 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Bios

Why does he only have to go through this until the end of the month?  What happens then?  Did I miss something, or is it a secret?



Author's Response:

His graduation is at the end of the month, that's all really. 

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