I find writing provides me a release to understand this unusual fascination I posses and allows me to express my thoughts and stories in a forum of likeminded people.
Two girls and two boy-toys make for a fun evening.
Another excellent story. It is always nice to see a writer's evolution of style and voice through time, not better or worse, just more defined. Nice job!
As always, a veritable wealth of information and dedicated research, merci!
I think one the most appealing aspects of your writing is the attention to detail. Creating anticipation is a subtle form lost on some with a need for instant gratification. I myself am in no particular need of a rampage and shall continue to enjoy! (Love the mythological tie in)
Hey Carycomic,
Checked out your stuff, digging it. When I read Jotunheim, made me laugh, next installment in The Book starts there :P
I wrote something for someone who touched me in a very special way.
Thoroughly enjoyed this tale, nicely rendered.
It has been awhile but worth the wait. Still very much enjoying.
Progressing very nicely.
The plot thickens... or at least the semi-aquaeous undigested jellyfish remnants :)
Nothing catches a girl's attention quite like a box full of alligators.
I like the start, particularly the attention to detail typical to your work, and I'm curious to see where you take this tale.
I continue to enjoy this narrative as you weave this story together.
Nice, I got a feel like Darwin's journey aboard the Beagle.
All caught up! I still enjoy the voice you've employed to tell this tale and as always your attention to minutiae weaves a compelling and plausible framework to gives this story. All this horsing around...
Suddenly I have an image of John Hurt aboard the Nostromo...
You are going all out! Keep it up.
Interesting depiction of the food chain. Quirky interlude. Let's see what machinations you've in store. :)
I must concur with our intrepid hero about the desolation of the friend zone. You have been relegated to girlfriend status. Again maybe it's just me but the unfortunate visual complete with auditory soundtrack is of the fishtank throughout Monty Pythons The Meaning of Life. Probably is me plus I may have been drinking when I read this :P
I think setting some context is always beneficial to help flesh out characters before the giantess makes an appearance. Let's see where you take this one
This is my first true vore story, and it’s also my first story with a female protagonist. There’s a male pred, a female pred, some male prey, some female prey. All the vore is fatal, and almost all the vore is soft.
Dedicated to everyone who helps someone else try something new.
Very enjoyable culmination to this story. Your use of language and style of delivery are very appealing and make the cadence of the story engaging.
Thank you kindly. I always try to consider my stories as normal fiction that just happens to have a lot of size smut, so I hope I'm getting the pacing and characterization right as well as the sexytimes.
Teenager Michael Hearst born with a silver spoon in his mouth and a sense of entitlement given his family name, offends the wrong person. Shortly after, he begins to feel ill, returning home to a house where his younger sister is coincidentally having an unsupervised sleepover with a handful of her girlfriends.
@beardless bard my apologies for addressing your review as Brad. I responded off my phone and misread it.