Reviewer: madeofwin Signed
Date: February 18 2024
Title: Chapter 1: Introduction or The Tall and Short of it
First, I'm really liking this story! Big fan of giantess little siscest.
As far as the story goes, SPOILERS
I'm glad Hannah is expressing sexual interest in him/enjoying soft domning him. From how you've written it, the dummy has realized she kinda fucked him for life with her little hypnosis thing. My hope is she started teasing him out of pity/because it was funny and it's evolved into her actually having some feelings toward him. That's me.
I'll be the bad person and say I don't want Sam and Nate to reconcile. I like that downer moment, hopefully with him getting some good closure. I think you did a good job with Kerry, with hopefully a followup on what you put at the end of her section.
That's what I'd recommend, at least. You seemed to imply Kerry was done etc. But if I may, I think that and where I think it may be going might be a mistake? Or at least less ambitious? Kerry basically being ruined for other men by having experienced her fetish with Nate is awesome, as is her having to basically learn to be nice in order to get with him. It'd even be funny for a bigger Hannah to disapprove of her cause she's not good enough for Nate.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
The end of the next chapter will really get into Hannah's feelings and motivations. I've been kinda limited so far due to Nate being the POV character. Hopefully, I'll stick the landing there. 😅
I don't have anything further planned with Kerry, but honestly, I don't have much planned at all past the end of the next chapter, lol. I am definitely going to continue the story, it's not even close to being done, but I don't know what shape it will take yet. That said, Kerry is really fun to write, so giving her more to do in later chapters sounds good to me. 😀👍