Reviewer: Nothingness Signed
Date: July 08 2017
Title: Chapter 17: A minute of peace,
Yes! The return of Em and Ella! I love how quickly Abby excepted her role as "Little Big Sis" so quickly. She's really getting use to the girls. The scene when her and Casey got it going on was what really got me laughing. Kari being able to manipulate time makes me think a witch might actually have the potentail to be rank an A-class hominal but I could be wrong. So I guess Casey is starting to develop a crush on Abby, makes me think there might be a scene very later on in the story when Abby will choose who she wants to be her plus one ;) Excellent work as always!
Author's Response: Sorry for the delayed responce Nothingness, you didn't offend me or anything so please don't think that. D:
Your last review had some kind of a bug on my end so I never wanted to mess with it because I didn't want to have it do it again. For this one, I just haven't logged back in in a couple days. >.<
I really appreciate your reviews, so please forigve me for not writing back, I really do try to do it as soon as I can.
I'm glad you enjoyed Emma and Ella, lol. They're always a fun pair to write for, especially when Casey is involved. The thing about the ranking system by the way, is there more of guidelines. D - A isn't set in stone. Some from one ranking can be more powerful then others of their kind. Em and El are examples of that since they're Eve's familiars making them stronger then normal Imps who are generally slower and frailer. Witches can be just as dangerious as any other Hominal, but you need to figure out how their Energy is being used. If they use it to quickly, they're basically just Humans then making them rather weak in contrast. I hope that helps clear that up.
As for Casey's, hehe, attachment to Abby... Yeah, that one kind of snuck up on me actually. But, I plotted it in and I like what I've made so you'll see what unfolds in time. I hope to have the next chapter up soon so stay tuned. :D
Once more, I'm really sorry for not responding back till now. I absolutely don't want you to think I'm neglecting you or mad for some reason. Thats not really my nature to be. :(
See you soon