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Summary:

A son helps his mother, a reluctant and conservative woman, become the goddess he always knew and felt she was.

 

 

So this is the commission I posted earlier on my actually commission's collection, but I realized that there's going to be a few chapters, so why not make it its own story? Might be easier. 

Anyhow, here it is again. This was made for Lockboxes. 


Categories: Giantess, Breasts, Crush, Destruction, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Incest, Insertion, Lesbians, Maternal, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 28523 Read Count: 93808
[Report This] Published: October 29 2016 Updated: February 25 2017
Reviewer: Nothingness Signed
Date: December 17 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Clare is SO hot! You did a good job portraying her dialogue as she kills the little people by her feet! =3 too bad she didn't get to enjoy her breakfast, though -_-

Author's Response: Well, let's just say that sometimes if you skip breakfast, lunch is a whole lot tastier. >D

Summary:

When someone does something nice for you, you return the kindness. Orphened and raised by her villages local Doctor, Abby struggles to do just that when she winds up in a circumstance she never thought possible. Faced directly with her fears, she now has to try and help the very ones she hates the most...

Monsters...

 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Butt, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 341499 Read Count: 224576
[Report This] Published: October 31 2016 Updated: April 10 2021
Reviewer: Nothingness Signed
Date: May 16 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Curing the disease...

I dont even know if Ebon could be redeemable at this point. Obviously we could tell she's had an horrible experience with humans but the least she could have done was tell the girls to take Abby out of the cave. (Even though that would have still been bad.) After all, Abby was helping Naija. I couldnt even care to look at her caring side towards Ivy after that. I also owe Casey an apology lol. She might be hot headed and foulmouthed but she really is a sensitive person on the inside. I figured that out when Ebon mentioned she was a crying mess when Naija first took her in and man did Casey put up a fight! Eve appearance was more like one of an anti-heroine who was really protecting Abby for her own personal gains. I dont really trust her but thank goodness she came when she did. You and Franchise are doing excellent work here. I'm always looking for an update, it really is an amazing read. Oh and about the girl thing, I was only referring to KentaRyu because I saw he/she mentioned they fangirled in one of their reviews. Sorry for the misunderstanding lol.

Author's Response: Ahh that cleared it up a bit lol. Was a little confused there XD Ebon is an unusual case so I wouldn't condemn her until you know her tale. If they let a human leave knowing where they were she could go and get others to get rid of them. All sides should be considered, not just the ones you currently know about. :P I'm glad Caseys grown on you. I'm hoping all my characters will with time. As for Eve, expect her agenda to be known shortly. That's all I'll say for that. Thank you for the review Nothingness, you know how much they cheer me up. :D

Reviewer: Nothingness Signed
Date: January 01 2019 Title: Chapter 39: Communication.

Hey man. I apologize for the lack of reviews on my part. I'm not in a good place as far as mindset goes right now but your story always lifts my spirits. I'm glad we might be seeing what made Ebon the misanthrope that she is today. It was shocking seeing her bribe Abby with her "metal" seeing how prideful she is. I hope Eve threatening to kill Ivy was just a threat because I don't think Eve is cruel enough to kill a baby like how we saw in her past lol Ivy is a baby, right? Anyways, I guess we better prepare for another painful past because with the hate Ebon harbors for humans, something tells me it's probably going to be the most tragic. 

 

Happy New Years to you and FW :)



Author's Response:

By all means Nothingness, don't feel guilty about anything. I didn't want to make anyone feel bad with my comments. Any time someone messages me it lifts me up and fills me with joy. I know what you mean about being in a bad place, so take your time to yourself.

As for what Ebon and Eve discussed, you might never know. Or maybe I'll elaborate later. Who knows~

And yes, Ivy is a baby as far as Dragon's are concerned. Think a one or two year old in appearence, although, more feral.

 

Reviewer: Nothingness Signed
Date: June 15 2018 Title: Chapter 35: The Bad News...

I'm sooo glad you're back! T-T I was just thinking about your story and then... Boom! I see an update. Firgive me for not leaving reviews up frequently but I hope you know that I caught up and read this insane chapter! 

 

At this point, I'm with Abby. Both Casey and Eve put their heart and souls into their respective dates with Abby and truly loves her as she does them and this mate thing is really a sacred thing. I should have known there was more to Casey's past. I don't remember if I said this in a previous review or someone else said it but deep inside, Casey seems to be the most sensitive out of the girls despite her tough exterior. 

 

In all honesty, IMO I think Casey has the best powers. I alway thought the ability to manipulate shadows was pretty cool plus, her shadows seem to take on almost any shape or size so versatility plays a factor in that. 

 

I had a feeling that was what Kari was going to say :( but I was hoping against hope it might be something different. Perhaps Naija might have a solution?

 

And about Naija, I just have a speculation here but the gang seems to think Naija will let Abby stay in the cave but what's Naija's backstory? I may have overlooked something but she doesn't seem to have a huge disdain humans but what if she does deep inside her heart but doesn't show it in order to be a strong role model to her girls?

 

Lately, I haven't been seeing a lot of stories that catch my eyes pn the site so you do not know how happy I was when I saw an update from you! I love this story so so much and hope you can keep updating! :)



Author's Response: I’m glad you liked the chapter Nothingness, and I’m glad to be back and at it again. :D I’ll try to have a new chapter up shortly so I’m glad you caught up. I was worried everyone might have forgotten about my story but it doesn’t look like that thankfully. “XD As for Najia, don’t think I plan on leaving her past unanswered. She will have some story time and there will most definitely be a point where she has a one on one with Abby about everything. That, I can assure you of. Thank you for leaving me a review. It really made me feel welcomed coming back to read it after all this time. :)

Reviewer: Nothingness Signed
Date: February 19 2018 Title: Chapter 30: The Cycle Continues...

That was an intense chapter. I got a new found respect for the imps. That was really badass how they protected Abby from Ebon. I know Eve isn't just pissed about Abby getting hurt, either. I found myself laughing when Casey mentioned Amy's obsession with "shiny shit." XD

 

I'm kinda glad Ebon showed up again but not happy the Twins and probably Casey, got hurt by her. I swear, everytime I read this, I think of it like a manga. I'm curious about this new girl, too.

 

Awesome work as always, you two. ;) 



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot, Nothingness! Hearing you say it's like a manga is a compliment of high regard to me. :3

I'll be going into what occurred there after both with Abby and with Eve and Ebon soon but probably not at the same time. There's a timeline in my head and certain scenarios need be filled first so please be patient with me. ;)

Reviewer: Nothingness Signed
Date: February 09 2018 Title: Chapter 29: Face, Faith, and Feathers!

I'm liking Abby more and more. The way she's taking control of most of the girls like a loving older sister is nice. Casey tsundere moment was funny, too. It's interesting how Amary or "Amy" called Ebon of all Hominals "nice face." This was also a relaxing chapter. You usually end chapters with some cliffhanger that has us thinking, "he loves torturing us, doesn't he?" 

 

Btw, have you checked out Johnrussi's Puberty story? He's a new and might I add, exceptionally good writer on this site whose story focuses on a loli giantess. Someone even mentioned your story, Precious Little Demons in one of his reviews. I recommend it plus, he's a really nice guy.

 

Keep up the awesome work as always, guys :)



Author's Response:

I do take pleasure in my cliffhangers, but, that wouldn't fit for this chapter. I'm glad you liked it Nothingness. I plan to expand on the next chapter for Amy don't you worry.

Also no I've never read the story Puberty yet, but know that I know a little bit about it I'll give it a read, thanks. :)

Reviewer: Nothingness Signed
Date: January 07 2018 Title: Chapter 27: Paving a way for their future,

I think I get Eve more now. That was one flashback. I'm also glad that she somewhat accepted Abby not wanting to be her mate. Good for Abby! I think she made the right call not going into something as serious as become Eve's mate without putting thought to it first. 

 

Hope Franchise gets better, having a cold sucks. Trust me, I know -_-



Author's Response:

I wanted an impact like this for awhile but I didn't quite know how to utilize it until now. I'm glad the rejection was liked as much as it was... albeit, a sad one at that. But don't you worry. I have more on the whole Mate part to come into play later in. 

Also, I'm with you. I hate getting sick! T~T

I'll pass on your wishes!

Reviewer: Nothingness Signed
Date: December 15 2017 Title: Chapter 25: Something Lost - Part 3

I guess Abby to reminds Eve of Najia. They both gained the love and affection of the other girls or at least in Abby's case, some of the girls.

Author's Response:

More to come soon. You'll soon understand more.

Reviewer: Nothingness Signed
Date: October 30 2017 Title: Chapter 24: Something Lost - Part 2

Hi Sterben. I know it's been really long since I left a review. I hope you and F.W. are well. I've been REALLY busy with life but at least I could owe you a review now lol.


Last time I read, it was about Poppy telling her tragic past to Abby. (You did a great job with her dialogue as well btw.) Poor girl, at least Abby was there to comfort her.



Eve's past was a an emotionally rollercoaster. I knew her father was going to abandon her but I held on to some false hope it wouldn't go down that way. He was definitively an asshole from the minute he was introduced so I wasn't too surprised by his cruelty.



It was interesting seeing Eve's feral side in her backstory during her first few days into vampirehood, especially with how refine and sophisticated she is now but her past was no doubt horrible. I'm also glad we got a glimpse of Naija too! :)



You guys keep up the good work as always.

Author's Response:

I get it, life gets in the way lol. :P

I'm glad you liked the chapter too!

I knew a bit about what he planned for Eve but I have to agree, it certainly caught me by surprise to see her in a Feral state. I guess that's why he added weeks instead of days to show time. I'm eager to know how she'll act now that she's been fed though. :3

 

Reviewer: Nothingness Signed
Date: July 21 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Doctor, doctor...

Awesome! So we finally get to see Poppy! I'm not surprise she's an alcoholic. - _- Oni's are famous for their liquor afterall. 



Author's Response:

Couldn't have one in here without it. But, expect the unexpected is all I'll say. :)

Reviewer: Nothingness Signed
Date: July 09 2017 Title: Chapter 17: A minute of peace,

Did I offend you, somehow? Just curious as to why your not answering my reviews.



Author's Response:

Not mad, really not mad. ;-;

Reviewer: Nothingness Signed
Date: July 08 2017 Title: Chapter 17: A minute of peace,

Yes! The return of Em and Ella! I love how quickly Abby excepted her role as "Little Big Sis" so quickly. She's really getting use to the girls. The scene when her and Casey got it going on was what really got me laughing. Kari being able to manipulate time makes me think a witch might actually have the potentail to be rank an A-class hominal but I could be wrong. So I guess Casey is starting to develop a crush on Abby, makes me think there might be a scene very later on in the story when Abby will choose who she wants to be her plus one ;) Excellent work as always!



Author's Response:

Sorry for the delayed responce Nothingness, you didn't offend me or anything so please don't think that. D:

Your last review had some kind of a bug on my end so I never wanted to mess with it because I didn't want to have it do it again. For this one, I just haven't logged back in in a couple days. >.<

I really appreciate your reviews, so please forigve me for not writing back, I really do try to do it as soon as I can.

I'm glad you enjoyed Emma and Ella, lol. They're always a fun pair to write for, especially when Casey is involved. The thing about the ranking system by the way, is there more of guidelines. D - A isn't set in stone. Some from one ranking can be more powerful then others of their kind. Em and El are examples of that since they're Eve's familiars making them stronger then normal Imps who are generally slower and frailer. Witches can be just as dangerious as any other Hominal, but you need to figure out how their Energy is being used. If they use it to quickly, they're basically just Humans then making them rather weak in contrast. I hope that helps clear that up.

As for Casey's, hehe, attachment to Abby... Yeah, that one kind of snuck up on me actually. But, I plotted it in and I like what I've made so you'll see what unfolds in time. I hope to have the next chapter up soon so stay tuned. :D

Once more, I'm really sorry for not responding back till now. I absolutely don't want you to think I'm neglecting you or mad for some reason. Thats not really my nature to be. :(

 

See you soon

 

Reviewer: Nothingness Signed
Date: June 15 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Doctor, doctor...

Every girl you've mention, including Abby, have been adorable but when you introduced Goomie, I couldn't take her cutest. IT'S OVER 9000! I literally was enamored with this sweet little slime girl that I simply could not explain it... but I'll try. The way she said "hooman." The way she tried to thank Brook. I almost whimpered when this precious baby whimpered! Just stop... Your killing me with these cute girls! Again, Eveline just keeps on getting more mysterious. Like Abby said or thought I guess, Kari and Casey made her out as a girl who is utterly dangerous yet Brook seems to adore her which of course is understandable from how kind Eveline is to her even going as far as to keep her secret of Goomie. I'm also glad Eveline and Brook are good friends cause, well... I'd rather be Eveline's friend than enemy ._. Again, awesome work, you and Franchise. 



Author's Response:

Thanks Nothingness, I appreciate the input. I was worried about Goomie's appearence but it's good to know she was liked. The only way I have to determine if I'm going in a good direction is through reviews so thank you for your opinion on how it is now. :)

Also, no promises on the girls getting any less cute~

Reviewer: Nothingness Signed
Date: March 28 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Doctor, doctor...

Congrats on posting your second story, man. Pretty good stuff here. Keep it up!

Author's Response:

Thanks Nothingness :D

As for why I never used FF/f mostly because at any given time there isn't more then 1 girl. I might adjust it later depending what happen's though. Thank you for messaging me. :)

Reviewer: Nothingness Signed
Date: March 28 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Doctor, doctor...

Also, why not use the FF/f size role tag? I'm sure it will draw more attention to your story.

Reviewer: Nothingness Signed
Date: March 29 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Doctor, doctor...

Geez, what a foul-mouthed Dullahan Casey is. You nailed her accent perfectly, too. She seems to had a very bad experience with humans and I'm curious to know what it was.

Author's Response:

Oh thank god, xD

I was scared I butchered her accent. This is the first time i've ever written one. I had to study for it for a full day before attempting it. lol

Things will be revealed shortly, just you wait. ;)

Reviewer: Nothingness Signed
Date: April 09 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Doctor, doctor...

Thank you for making my heart ache yet again with your stories. When Casey revealed her tragic it pasted, it reminded me of that scene from Tokyo Ghoul when... No. Thou shall not spoil. Thou shall not spoil. Thou shall not spoil. Anyways, poor Casey. Poor Casey's Mom! And poor Abby. The fact that you brought that up made things all the more realistic but that's the fucked up part: Reality can be cruel. At least Casey and Abby were able to comfort one another. I guess species doesn't matter when you could share in each others pain.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you can see where comfort in other's tragedies can coexist. It was a hard chapter to write but the tone has been set now for whats to come. Thank you for not spoiling Tokyo Ghoul, but i've already seen it xD

Thank you for the review as well. I really appreciate it Nothingness. :D

Reviewer: Nothingness Signed
Date: April 12 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Doctor, doctor...

I actually envy your ability to update these AMAZING chapters so quickly. I use to be like that with my story but sadly I'm suffering from a lot of writers block lately -_- Anyways, another great chapter as always! Given by the species the twins are, (I saw the pics. Oh gosh...) Abby will probably understand the true meaning of pleasure ;)

Author's Response:

Don't give up! I had lots of that when I was writing for PLD. It will come and go, don't worry! As for the species, a lot of people think their succubus but you'll be surprised to find out there not what they appear to be. Thank you for the review Nothingness. :)

Reviewer: Nothingness Signed
Date: May 02 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Twice shy,

I like the way Abby reacted when Kari told her Casey went to see Ebon to get her back which was a great way to show us both how potentionally dangerous Ebon is and how much Abby is starting to like the girls more, even being ecstatic to see Nya again. You left us with a awkward and funny cliffhanger there too which also made Nya all the more lovable lol. I find it actually nice that Abby is starting embracing the pleasure she's getting from the girls. Poppy is also going to be introduced next chapter I'm guessing (No need to tell though lol) so that's another monster girl for us. I'm curious about her dialogue too, she's really cute! :3 Btw I owe you a rating but this is the best I can do: 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Author's Response:

Hmm, intresting guess, you'll have to wait and see ;)

Thank you for the review Nothingness, you know how I love them so~ :D

I'm glad you liked seeing how progression is going with Abby. Expect more things to go in that way as the chapters come out. I'll be doing more with Eve as well in the future, her hand has yet to be revealed. See you soon. :D

Reviewer: Nothingness Signed
Date: June 26 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Lover's, Quarrel

The argument between Casey and Eve was hilarious! I could see their personalities clashing. What shocked me was when Eve broke her sophisticated dialect when she said, " Don't piss me off, kid." To Casey. Cant wait to see Abby interact with the other girls in the cave! Awesome job again you two! P.S. I copy/pasted this review in case it gets deleted by accident again. ;)