Reviewer: Hubble Signed
Date: July 21 2014
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
Even though this could be about the one hundredth story I've read on this site, it is the one only so far that urged me to register an account to say:
THANKS! THANKS FOR WRITING THIS!
I love your storytelling, how pieces add up together to a larger picture, how the characters develop and how you, despite all the science fiction, manage to keep it real and lively.
I'm desparately looking forward to the inevitable confrontation between Aviel and Sanders, and I hope she will find herself in almost the exact same position Lutice has once been in, towering above him while he's down on the ground at her full mercy.
I hope Aviel realizes what she has done, and, regrets it. After all, she is a character one was able to symphatize with, and despite her urge to take revenge, had a noble goal.
Can't wait to see how the story continues, please, do NEVER abandon this story until it is finished! It is far too good to be left in the open like that.
Personal Request: I hope one day you write a (bonus?) chapter in which we can see the growth and first giantess experiences of Aviel in her own perspective, being able to read her thoughts during it. I would love it.
Author's Response: well, you are welcome.
Thanks, I try to keep things futuristic, but still in the realm of believable.
Hehe, I can say that Aviel and Sanders will meet again. As for having that kind of scene...we will have to wait and see.
Maybe she will, maybe she has gone full on evil and turned her back on everything for her revenge. We haven't seen much of her in Act 2 so its hard to say. Though she did try to kill Sanders in Act 1.
I don't plan on it unless something crazy happens.
Once Act 2 is done, I figured I would hold a poll somewhere where you guys, being the readers, could decide if we just move on to Act 3 or go back and see the events of Act 2 from Flonne's perspective. Persoanlly, I would like the latter as there are some important stuff that happens that Sanders and co never see, but Flonne does.