Reviewer: Ravean Signed
Date: October 23 2014
Title: Chapter 1: Intro - Deus ex Tenebris
This is an outstanding awesome story so far and I am glad you are kind of greedy when it comess to the gory scenes... it makes it much more interesting than going from one cruah to the next vore and so on. I would have loved some more full weight foot crush action without grinding but as I said... it´s perfect the way it is. I adore your patience because it gives you the ability to get deeper into the details of everything. Also... the story is very interesting and unique, only thing that i can´t buy so far is that change in Maia from Icequeen-Primal Beast-Evil Temptres into a purring kitten with Mathew... but I´m sure you´ll have your ideas already set. Oh, and... don´t have her kill him please... better find a way how they can be good for each other. Can´t wait for the next parts...
Author's Response: Thank you for your generous review!
I get what you mean by going from crush to vore and so on. It's like reading a template, it get boring very fast and stories like that remain largely unmemorable.
The story still has a lot to go through. The next two or three chapters are going to be a little boring too, but as you said, I'm not rushing it and I'm keeping myself patient. But afterwards, I think you'll like it since it'll include some of what you're looking for.
And the change in Maia's attitude towards Matthew is intentional and not a simple as it seems, don't worry. Everything will become clearer as the story progresses. But how it's going to end for Matthew though, that's something you'll just have to read to find out. :)