Penname: Tid-bit [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: July 02 2014
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Summary:

Johan attends a party hosted by his eccentric brother, Greg. He has no interest in seeing his brother, whom he despises, but goes to see his 13 year old niece Emi, but things take a turn for the crazy. Everybody in the house is shrunken down to near microscopic size and the only one left at normal size is Emi, who is completely unaware that her simple actions such as walking, sitting and eating is exterminating the lives of many defenceless party guest. Can anyone survive the unaware Emi and potentially a late party guest that Johan and Greg know all too well and how will Johan handle his evil brother Greg who is the root of all of these problems?


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Feet, Growing Woman, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, The Following story is appropriate for all audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24294 Read Count: 185909
[Report This] Published: June 25 2014 Updated: November 17 2014
Reviewer: Tid-bit Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 02 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Welcome to The Party!

Love this story, and im glad i accidentally clicked "most recent" on the day u posted this. In fact, i like where its going so much i finally made an acount just to tell you to keep it up, your doing great! ^_^

Author's Response:

Thanks, I am also glad you accidentally got to this story as well LOL. I am glad you enjoyed this and promise to keep the story going and deliver on creating a good story (at least i hope I can). Thanks for your support, I hope the future chapters will be to your liking. 

Reviewer: Tid-bit Signed
Date: August 21 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Welcome to The Party!

Decided to read through the reviews again. Doing a great job still! Just wanted to stop and say i partially agree with simpson3k, cuz im more of a butt crush fan (neck and neck with soft vore) but i do like the parts that do include butt crush. Personally i'd like to see more.

Also i partially agree with userdoesnotexist im not big on the caps. Mainly because like they said we already know she is big, and to me caps looks like the person is shouting, which kinda throws me off balance a little but i can still deal with it.

Gl for the rest of the story! ^_^

Author's Response:

Butt crush is not really my thing, but I will try to find a way to include some more into this story or save a good butt crush scene in another story. I removed the all caps on my later chapters, so that wont be an annoying issue in the future.

Thanks for the review, I am glad to recieve feed back and hear what people want to read.