Reviewer: tinyguy Signed
Date: June 14 2014
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Bad Day, huh?
Well, sorry to reveal any spoilers to other readers who are browsing the reviews section... That was not my intent :)
If it's no good in this story, that's fine... Maybe something to keep in mind for another story, or maybe another student Sam meets (other than Tina, Ashley & Kyle). Also an idea ton pet in a sequel depending on how everything plays out
Sorry if I sound like I'm ranting/repeating myself, but ya, a guy who's just friends with another guy was what I was going for... I find with these shrinking stories, it's not always the sexual stuff I'm into, so that kinda stuff is sometimes nice to throw in... Even if Kyle isn't such a nice guy, it'll be interesting to have them there as a giant... He'll, just look at Ryan from Life is Funny that Way... Having a giant guy as the main bad guy just seems to add depth to the story.
Anyway thanx so much for taking my ideas... Love it when authors interact with their readers, and are willing to be open to new ideas.
Author's Response:
I'm half way through the second chapter of your story, as it just so happens. I must say, Madeline seems like my kind of girl XD
Nah, neither of us revealed any spoilers =P and if readers guess anything about the plot by reading the reviews section, it's simply because they're too smart :D
No, I totally got what you're saying. I'm cool with that too, it's just the sexual stuff I don't like, same as you.
It's quite possible to have another male student taking Kyle's place, but I need to think about it for sometime, only because it wasn't included when I was generating ideas and developing the outlines of this story. And that's a problem with me, for not having thought of it. Probably because it's not that prevalent in giantess/tiny stories.
I do enjoy our correspondence here, and appreciate you taking the time to exchange ideas with me =)