Penname: The Reviewer [Contact] Real name: rev
Member Since: March 28 2014
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Kyra by little mikey Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 96]
Summary:

A loving father of one inexplicably starts shrinking.  Unfortunately for him, his daughter soon realizes that she doesn’t have to take orders from him anymore – and their relationship starts to take an entirely different turn …

 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Humiliation, Incest, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 199743 Read Count: 718806
[Report This] Published: March 06 2014 Updated: September 07 2014
Reviewer: The Reviewer Signed
Date: April 01 2014 Title: Chapter 6: After School

I love the way he gets spanked back



Author's Response:

Thanks -- and good to see you living up to your screen name :P

Mrs Riesin's Son by DirtyOldBukowski Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 59]
Summary:

Luke finds himself subject to the whims of his beautiful mother and sister after an unfortunate illness.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Mature (40-49), Odor, Scat, Watersports, Butt, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Maternal
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23004 Read Count: 160207
[Report This] Published: April 22 2014 Updated: September 02 2016
Reviewer: The Reviewer Signed
Date: April 22 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I must agree with Jay post, keep the ass and also try to include some smelly feet and swampy socks of his sister after school sports or hisr mother after a hard job on yoga...

Also It would be really epic if you start the mother action as 'unaware' style making his mother like the sensation of her son at her mercy little by little.

 

And with his sister totally the opposite, she would love to torture her brother with many creative ways..

 

Realy man you did a hell of a chapter there, I'll be following this whatever you do!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the kind feedback! It definitely helps with the motivation to continue writing. I don't know exactly where the story will go yet, but I'm sure we'll see some of what youmenti oned above make the cut as it progresses :) 

Reviewer: The Reviewer Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 23 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Well I like the way you're taking your time to put all things giving the scene-setting.

Perhaps now you could write about how Margaret is gonna do some fart torture on her little brother... like farting on the pillow he sleeps etc etc ETC!!

Descent into madness by FTFeet Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 51]
Summary:

This is the story of a 20 year old guy named Paul. After falling vicitm to his Sister's black magic, Paul begins his descent into the world of feet. 


Categories: Unaware, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20447 Read Count: 190260
[Report This] Published: December 01 2014 Updated: June 20 2015
Reviewer: The Reviewer Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 01 2014 Title: Chapter 1: The shrinking

Brilliant. Feet torture incoming!

Miss Smiths Revenge by amazonianniall Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

A young teacher fulfils her desire for revenge on an old pupil using her unique powers. But things turn sour for all invovled.

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, BBW, Butt, Mature (40-49), Crush, Humiliation, Insertion, Odor, Scat, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2715 Read Count: 25465
[Report This] Published: February 12 2015 Updated: February 27 2015
Reviewer: The Reviewer Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 13 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The beginning

Holy shit! THIS IS EPIC! KEEP IT COMING! You write the way I like it

Reviewer: The Reviewer Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 01 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

A clumsy overweight teacher who killed her brother unaware with her belly button trying to get revenge on her ex-student  for a stupid reason while being clumsy without malice?

This is gold.

Like Mother, Like Daughter by Jacksmith Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 31]
Summary:

A shrunken teen, newly on house arrest, finds himself underfoot when his mother decides to instruct his younger sister on how to lovingly yet firmly handle him.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Oversight
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6049 Read Count: 57431
[Report This] Published: March 01 2015 Updated: March 09 2015
Reviewer: The Reviewer Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 01 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love the corruption process of the sister.

This will be a hell of a story! 10/10



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

Rétrécissement (french) by italykeke2 Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

Reprise de l'histoire publiée sur mon ancien compte adaptée en nouvelle version fr


Categories: Slow Size Change, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, New World Order, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18528 Read Count: 36960
[Report This] Published: March 31 2015 Updated: April 01 2015
Reviewer: The Reviewer Signed
Date: April 02 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Confrontation avec Jade

chapter 3 and 4 are repeated. Can you fix it?



Author's Response:

Done !

Reviewer: The Reviewer Signed
Date: May 10 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I want more :(



Author's Response:

Sorry , I've kinda stopped writing here , I don't have too much time for that anymore .... I've had another story on writing.com here, it's an interractive one : https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1947422-Girl-domination-stories-feet

You can check it out and add some features if you want. I'm sure it'll please you  

Reviewer: The Reviewer Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 01 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I remember I used to googletranslate this cuz I loved the story..

Is it 100% dropped?

Changing reality by christiawi9 Rated: X Round robin starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 31]
Summary:

Tom, a normal guy, gains the ability to change reality in whatever fashion he pleases. And whatever changes he makes becomes the norm with everyone acting as if the changes were always present. Even though many changes are possible the only changes Tom will be creating is size related


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Growing Woman, Odor, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26780 Read Count: 218244
[Report This] Published: November 25 2015 Updated: July 02 2021
Reviewer: The Reviewer Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 28 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction with vore

Im glad you're back master.



Author's Response:

Master? What an interesting title. Yes, I'm sort of back. I wanted to write a story with no plot so technically it can never end and there's no pressure to write a full story. I truly see these chapters as nothing more then jerk off adventures. But thank you for your support.

A Summer Stolen by Badguy Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 31]
Summary:

A student must spend his summer imprisoned and shrunken as punishment for his failing grades while trying to suppress his burgeoning foot fetish around his unsuspecting family. 


Categories: Incest, Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Legwear, Odor, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6491 Read Count: 114519
[Report This] Published: December 28 2015 Updated: January 10 2016
Reviewer: The Reviewer Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 10 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Giving In

This is good.. THIS IS DAMN GOOD!!!! PLEASE KEEP THEM COMING!

Sister Knows Best by pseudoclever Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 29]
Summary:

As his sister slowly grows, Kyle finds himself losing control of their relationship...and of himself.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breast Enlargement, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Incest, Maternal, Odor, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, The Following story is appropriate for all audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14660 Read Count: 225153
[Report This] Published: May 25 2016 Updated: June 29 2016
Reviewer: The Reviewer Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 18 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I wonder if this will be finished? I wanna read more about the teasing of big sis



Author's Response: It’s finished. Whatever happens next is left to your imagination.

Inconvenient Coincidence by Max333 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 57]
Summary:

James loves his life. Though, one day, his best friend, Yuna, and his sister, Faith, get convinced he is a perverted masochist. Will he manage to prove them wrong ? Will they let him ? 


Categories: Butt, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Odor, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 20434 Read Count: 128344
[Report This] Published: August 07 2016 Updated: September 29 2018
Reviewer: The Reviewer Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 01 2018 Title: Chapter 13: Bike ride

I'm glad that one of the big ones around here has come back to write a bit!

I really hope Faith gives his poor little brother some "fresh air" to keep him alive.. 

Being saved by a fart.. Damm! That's really humiliating *_*

Reviewer: The Reviewer Signed
Date: May 24 2020 Title: Chapter 13: Bike ride

dont let it die T_T

Reviewer: The Reviewer Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 21 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Yuna

Who are you and what have you created?!

This is so good so disturbingly good!!! The unaware factor that they are actually doing something he hates its really really good. And the english you're using it's excellent! I've got an eye on this story. WTH I've got both eyes and my mind eye on this!

A drop of this story won't be tolerated! 10/10



Author's Response:

Hahaha, thanks a lot for the review! That enthusiasm cheers me up a lot! :)  

Damn it, if you won't tolerate a drop, now there's no way I'll stop... 

Allison by madeofwin Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

A sister and brother go through changes.  


Categories: Slow Size Change, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Breast Enlargement, Butt, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Lesbians
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11617 Read Count: 190345
[Report This] Published: May 03 2017 Updated: September 30 2017
Reviewer: The Reviewer Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 06 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Cooking

i like how her previous little sister is now humiliating him. pls keep going



Author's Response:

Thank you

Growing Closer As A Family by Confused Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary:

Alex's sister is about to leave for college and with her gone, the family will no longer have her holding them together. Alex's sister Jessica gathers her family at her grandparents' house and stays a few days before leaving. Little did she know in her absence that her family will grow more closer than they could have ever imagined.

Read Bio!



Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Middle Age (50+), Breast Enlargement, Butt, Couples, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Footwear, Futanari, Gentle, Giant, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Maternal, Odor, Scat, Slow Size Change, Unaware, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/m, FM/m, M/f, M/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59395 Read Count: 191279
[Report This] Published: May 09 2017 Updated: May 24 2018
Reviewer: The Reviewer Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 01 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Introduction

This story got lots of things, i seriously love it. Please continue!

Reviewer: The Reviewer Signed
Date: June 20 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Introduction

I beg you, please continue

Reviewer: The Reviewer Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 23 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Introduction

Dont let this die I beg you... T_T



Author's Response: I will continue it. I just did not have any free time, so I will try to upload a chapter soon.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.