Penname: VividImagination [Contact] Real name: Vivid
Member Since: March 20 2014
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Summary:

What happens when a girl makes the same birthday wish every year?  AND she doesn't tell anyone?

 

Why, it comes true, of course!


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Body Exploration, Butt, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 64345 Read Count: 312161
[Report This] Published: May 07 2013 Updated: July 23 2018
Reviewer: VividImagination Signed
Date: March 30 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Like a Virgin

Uh oh. Sounds to me like she really enjoyed that, and considering she was a virgin(still is? not sure how that's classified), I'm geussing she'll want to keep Steve around for a while. Either that, or she's gonna think that he just violated her and things are about to get heated. I'm interested to see how this plays out.



Author's Response: Yeah, I haven't quite worked out the exact tone to take regarding the loss of Erin's virginity, or even if it was technically that at all. I know the intended result I want this to have, now I just have to figure out the best way to get there. But I'm excited to have this new character introduced because it solves a huge problem I foresee happening eventually. I'm hoping to have a new chapter before the weekend. Thanks for reading. :-)

Reviewer: VividImagination Signed
Date: April 04 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Living Large

Well. I don't think that could of gone any smoother. Good to see that Erin doesn't harbor any anger towards Steve or Kelsey. And I also like how Kelsey is starting to view Steve. Their relationship is definitely progressing quickly(and in the right direction imho).

I didn't think you'd have this chapter up so soon. Hell of a way to start the weekend. ;-)



Author's Response: Haha, to tell you the truth I didn't think I'd have it done either. :-) I was hoping I had introduced some ambiguity about how Erin feels about what happened, or at least left the possibility open that she may be the slightest bit unstable. I will further explore her feelings in future chapters. Thanks for commenting. It's nice to know that there's people out there behind the read counts.

Reviewer: VividImagination Signed
Date: April 10 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Turning the Tables

Seems like Erin is taking full advantage of her newfound friendship. I'm starting to expect that the next chapter(or possibly next couple chapters) might entail some blackmail. She seems to be enjoying it a little too much to just stop with a 'fingerjob'.

Also, I went back and read Chapter 12 again and although I saw that Erin seemed to be a little rattled, it didn't feel like she showed much resentment. But that's just how it looked to me. I'm not the best at reading between the lines and seeing indications of emotional stress.

Loved this chapter. Mostly because of Steve's reluctance. It shows that he's not just in this for the sexual pleasure. And also because of Kelsey's reaction(however little of it we saw). I don't think she will like sharing her new boyfriend/boytoy.



Author's Response: Eh, you're probably mostly right about Erin. I had kept her feelings and motivations kind of ambiguous in chapter 12, partially to make her a little mysterious and also because I hadn't exactly worked out how she felt. But now that I have a better idea about her feelings she should be a little more consistent. :-) Glad you're enjoying it. And hey, feel free to star those reviews, good or bad. Thanks for keeping me on my toes.

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Date: April 14 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Turning the Tables

Sorry about that. I never remember to rate when I review. I have to give this chapter a 10, which is basically the rating I'd give to every chapter you've written.

I enjoy reading about Steve with Kelsey, but Erin's forcefullness is just so hot. She just lost her virginity and now she's just raped a man. I hope to God that she's just starting to experiment with him, but I know I'll enjoy whatever direction you take.

Lastly, what the heck is with the 23(now 24) reviews for this story?? But I see a Read Count over 71,000. Come on guys. This is excellent writing. Very satisfying amount of smut with good character development. And it covers a wide range of the fetish(speaking of mouth play, insertion, ect.) I've been a lurker, but speaking with the authors and sharing my opinions is much more satisfying. Give it a try.

I'll stop now...God I can't wait for the next chapter! Ok, done.



Author's Response:

Man, you just made my day.  Thank you for your incredibly nice praise.  You'll have to be careful or people are going to think you're a sock puppet.  ;-)

 

As for the lack of reviews, I'm slowly starting to get over it.  For some reason this story seems to attract more lurkers than usual, probably because it's a little smuttier than most.  But the read count is a pretty good validation of its popularity.  And then there's you, who have perfectly illustrated the ability of commenters to have a chance to affect the story.  

 

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.  I hope you enjoy the latest chapter.

Reviewer: VividImagination Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 15 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Finishing the Job

Wait...so all we have to do is ask and you'll quickly deliver another chapter?! I will use this information wisely and very frequently.

And me, a sock puppet? Please. I have way too much personality for that. Several personalities in fact. In which case, I may be you and simply not know it. Let the paranoia insue!

I should probably start the actual review now, right? Ok, so I've only read of sex with a milk duct once before, and have found it be a very attractive idea. So bonus points for that, because it's part of the reason I'm drawn to the gts fetish.

Steve's reluctance, as well as Kelsey's need to protect(and in a way...possess) him is one of the things I really enjoy with this story. I see it in a lot of different writing, and it always makes me smile. Seeing their devotion is just heart warming. I know it's only been about 15-17 hours since they met, but it feels much longer. So much content in such short time.

Another chapter at your earliest convenience, please. But don't rush things. It's a very detailed and entertaining piece of fiction, after all. I appreciate all the work you've put into this story already, as well as what's to come. Thanks so much.

 



Author's Response:

Haha, well maybe it's not that easy, but your frequent commenting, along with your inshights and suggestions, have certainly made it easier for me to write the past couple of chapters.  So use your powers for good, please.  And while I sincerely hope I'm not Tyler Durden-ing myself, I could certainly do worse.

 

I thought I may have stolen the milk duct sex from someone else.  Seemed too good for me to come up with by myself.  You don't happen to remember which story you read it in, do you?

 

Thanks for another kind and motivating review!

Reviewer: VividImagination Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 20 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Coming Out

To answer your question, it was The House of Tiny Men. It was one of the first stories I had read when I found GiantessCity. Although the milk duct scene was incredibly brief, I couldn't help but be fascinated with the idea. I enjoyed your version much more, as it had a hell of a lot more detail.

Here's the link if you're curious. Took me almost 20 minutes to find it and it's not even on GiantessCity anymore! Luckily the Admin(s) of this site are incredibly thorough, as they had put it in the Old Archive.

http://giantessworld.net/Stories2/house_of_the_tiny_men.htm ---About 1/8th into the story, I think.

Also, since I had to pick a chapter for the review, I chose my favorite. Sex is great and all, but the bonding is what gets me. The look into Kelsey's past was nice, because it made me like her character even more. Even if I still want to beat Brad into a bloody pulp. And the fact that she recognized Steve as a real living, feeling person really sold me on it too.

And it's funny that you'd mention Fight Club, because that's exactly what I thought of when I wrote it, although I had to Google Tyler Durden. You're movie knowledge surpasses mine. :(

Lastly, after reading the chapter end notes, if I had to geuss what Brad's fetish might have been... Well, it's tough, but considering Kelsey's surprise at how hostile he was towards her own fetish, I'm geussing it's Anthropophagy. No? OK fine...if it's not Plushophilia then I really don't know.



Author's Response:

Haha, dark but good guess.  No, it's just a simple balloon fetish.  :-)

 

Thank you for the link!  Your internet search hand is strong.  Talk about a blast from the past.

 

Thank you again for another kind review.  Hope the newest chapter rates similarly.

Reviewer: VividImagination Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 08 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Rubbing One Out

Holy...

I uhh...fuck.

So... That was really hot. Full body sensual massage...happy ending...then ultra happy ending. Where in the heck do they make women like that? She was brought up a Christian, she's extremely kind and caring, and then there's the sex cravings. I just... Damn.

Ah well. My turn will come someday. I just have to learn some patience.

Harsher and frightening you say? Not my cup of tea, but considering that this was what followed, and that Steve is quite indestructable, I'll just have to keep those things in mind as I read it.

I find it's better that you jumped ahead. At least now we know that whatever cruel and violent things may happen during the sleepover, he'll be ok. Then again, it'll probably be a day at the beach compared to what Brianna has planned.



Author's Response: I have some loose ideas for the next chapter, and I'm pretty sure you'll like it, given your past responses. As for Kelsey, she's definitely one in a million, though not without a darker side.

Reviewer: VividImagination Signed
Date: May 09 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Awakenings

Perhaps it would be best to remove the aforementioned tag then. It definitely turns some people away from the story. Now that I think about it... A threesome between two sisters and some random guy isn't considered such, right? I hope not, or that'd totally ruin the fantasy for me.

I think that when I found this story I basically just searched for insertion and checked out all of the ones that looked interesting. Not for the smut, mind you. It was purely for the interesting characters and storylines. :-D

 



Author's Response: You think so? I was afraid of losing readers if I were to drop that story arc on them when it finally does arrive. But being fifteen chapters in without it does mean that anyone looking for it or avoiding it might be disappointed. Hmm. I'll give it some thought. If I do remove it I will probably remove the "feet" tag too since I haven't written that yet either. Thanks for your insightful feedback. And I, too, may have occasionally searched the "insertion" tag for, ahem, research purposes.

Reviewer: VividImagination Signed
Date: May 09 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Awakenings

Oh, well if you're thinking that you may include it, then by all means, leave it in. I guess the read count is an indication that most people just don't care, or they actually prefer it.

As for the 'feet' tag...

So many guys are into that for some reason. I really can't understand it, but hey, I'm into women that are 13 times my size(usually a shrinking preferance of 4-5 inches). So I can't really judge.

If you felt so inclined, you could write a short foot scene, just to expand on the diversity of the story. Perhaps some unaware scene with Alicia. I don't think she'd willingly play with Steve, considering what I've seen of her so far. Her thoughts seemed a little too pure.

Ok, my next review will be of the 16th chapter. Promise. Can't let this become like the Titan stories where the reviews are flooded with conversations and debates. ;-)



Author's Response: Haha, as long as the conversations aren't starred I don't mind too much, but there's also something to be said for keeping the review count honest. Either way, I do enjoy your feedback. It helps give me some direction when I'm stuck on a plot point. To be honest, I'm not super into feet either and don't usually like stories that focus on them, but I do really enjoy well written chapters that feature them (no pun intended). And I don't know where you got your crystal ball from, but I want it. ;-)

Reviewer: VividImagination Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 27 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Awakenings

I really love this story. The dream sequences are just incredible. It's definitely in my top 5.

I just wish the wait wasn't so long, but every time I check out a new chapter I know it's been worth it.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your kind words!  I hope you enjoy the latest installment.  

Summary:

Thousands of years ago a powerful and highly advanced civilization attempts to retrieve one of its most prized possessions from the surface of a planet inhabited by a race of giants.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 28165 Read Count: 49185
[Report This] Published: July 26 2013 Updated: July 22 2014
Reviewer: VividImagination Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 20 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Into the Arid Wastes

Awesome! As if the gts genre wasn't cool enough, the sci fi aspect makes it infinitely better(for me anyways).

I liked the idea of Michael having a bit of power himself before, but now that they're on Nibiru, he's pretty helpless. Oh well. I think the 35 or so bodyguards should help keep them safe. Hopefully they aren't expecting some truly impressive demonstrations of Nephilia's power though. Because jumping high and running fast seem to be all she can muster.

Can't wait to see more!

 



Author's Response:

It always brings a smile to my face when the first word in a review is "awesome"

Also, Michael isn't entirely helpless. He's got his intelligence, and his resourcefulness to keep him safe. And in regards to Nephila, wait until you see next chapter.

Summary:

Follow Nathan Pierce. A young, 19 year old high school dropout who finds himself in quite the predicament as he awakes within a strange new gigantic land. Merely two inches tall, and suffering from Amnesia, the poor soul is soon to find himself back exactly where this all began as he searches for answers, and a way out of this new hell.

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Universe: Alpha. [Involved] (See profile for details.)
Title #: 01. (Of series.) 

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This story has nothing to do with disco's. 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Giant, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25102 Read Count: 81576
[Report This] Published: August 08 2013 Updated: April 21 2014
Reviewer: VividImagination Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 22 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Within Terrors Grasp II

All caught up on this! I really hope Elysse is going to be ok. She obviously has a good heart, and doesn't deserve death.

Also, I've now learned that when attempting to stab and shrink a giant woman, only shout a battle cry AFTER stabbing said giant woman. Filing that away for later. Never know when I might need it.

I liked Chanel a lot more before discovering that she's well aware of how sadistic Britney can be. And Seung, well she's quite evil herself.

I'm more attracted to Gentle stories with minimal foot content(not my thing), but I'll keep reading and reviewing to show my support!



Author's Response:

Glad to hear it! :D
And agreed! She's a really nice girl, isn't she?

LOL, yes! Truth! But here's hoping you never will. o_o''

I'm sorry to have disappointed you on that! In her defense she has little choice other than to tolerate it, though I wouldn't want to say whether or not she was accepting or even encouraging of it to any great degree. Indeed, Seung is probably the worst so far. But I find her quite entertaining.

Fair enough, my friend! I appreciate the support!

Thanks a lot for the review! 

Summary:

A woman plans a birthday party for her stepbrother. Once the party favors arrive and are prepared, all that remains is for the birthday boy to show up and enjoy his gifts. But that's not all she has planned for him. 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Gentle, Giant
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18180 Read Count: 111760
[Report This] Published: September 15 2013 Updated: May 08 2014
Reviewer: VividImagination Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 10 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Little Lori pt I

Damn. I'm not even into feet, but that was awesome!

Haha. Shelly has quite the libido. She tires out Roger, and now she's moving onto the girls. I hope they can help her with those hard to reach places during their bath.

I'm hoping that Roger and Lori will also get some alone time. Same size sex is still fun too, ya know. :-D

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As for the incest discussion...

I don't even try to understand it, because there's just no way that I ever could. I grew up with my step sister, and the fact that people could have sexual urges towards siblings(related by blood or by law) is inconceivable.

However, when I read this, I put that out of my mind and just think of Shelly and Roger as friends and nothing more.

Hopefully no one hates me for my views on the subject. I just felt the need to throw in my opinion.

Reviewer: VividImagination Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 06 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 The Inside Man

That was umm...wow. I think I almost passed out by the end of it.

I remember reading this a couple months ago before making my account. I guess I forgot to come back and review. Sorry about that.

I'm glad you're still working on this...even if it's only once in a while.

Now that I think about it. Isn't this the first night of the four day weekend? It seems as if the fun has only just started.

I'm definitely favoriting this one. Can't afford to miss out on the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you! And yes, its the first night. There is quite a bit Sheely wants to do still, as well as her dolls! I hope not to disappoint! Thank you so much for your review! I promise to update more regularly.

Summary:

Three girls must face the consequences of their actions after they assault a member of a smaller race.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Mouth Play, New World Order, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Omegas
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94864 Read Count: 290264
[Report This] Published: January 10 2014 Updated: July 03 2015
Reviewer: VividImagination Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 24 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Clear

Awesome. Can't wait to see Ashley and Marion meet. I kind of hope that Claire hasn't been able to break her...and that she's still defiant.

Ahh, Jenna. Always sceptical of Beta abusers. It must be so annoying for her...having to babysit Naomi and unable to punish her in any way because she's been cleared.

10 stars for this one! But try anything like that last chapter again, and I won't hesitate in giving you a harsher rating. :P

Reviewer: VividImagination Signed
Date: May 18 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Imprisonment

@MrSirk

But I guess if you could get away with killing humans and not going to jail why wouldn't you?

Whaat? So many reasons as to why that's so wrong.

As for the Alpha's lack of empathy...

For some sick reason there are Alphas that see Betas as nothing more than rodents. So yes, there are some sick kids out there that kill small animals for their own amusement. It's disgusting and wrong, but either they weren't raised properly, or they were born...broken.

Just felt the need to throw in my two cents. Hopefully I didn't offend anyone.

Reviewer: VividImagination Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 10 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Imprisonment

All caught up on this! Now all that's left is Tough Love, which it appears I've already seen a small glimpse of what will happen to Ashley through this story.

This is a very interesting concept. One all powerful goddess who imparts her gifts to others in order to protect Betas. We've seen a small amount of Kayla's past so far, and I'm interested to see what caused her to become who she is now.

I'm in agreement with Claire. If she's allowed one 'accident' with her initial charges, then there'd be no better use for it. It could be possible to rehabilitate Marion, but is she really worth the effort? I don't think so. She's a serial killer who shows no remorse over what she's done. Perhaps Kayla has plans for her that we've yet to discover. In any case...she shouldn't be released back into the world. Not in a year. Not ever.

I hope that Melody will get some alone time with the three girls. Now that Corey has given her some of the specifics of his injuries, I'm wondering how calm and restrained she'd be around them. If one good thing came of his tragic assault, it's that Melody was able to confess her feelings for him.

Whelps...I'm very interested in this story and I'm eager to see more.

Reviewer: VividImagination Signed starstarstarstar
Date: May 18 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Accounts

Well...

That's gotta be the saddest chapter I've ever read on this site. I knew that this story contained some violence and sadism, but this...damn. 8 stars for ALMOST making me cry. Bastard. I'm sure that if I had gotten to know Sophie better, then it would've been so much worse.

Ok. Back to the present, and the light torture that comes with it!

Control by Bianca Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

A woman has shrunk various people in the course of her day and plans to have fun with them. But what she sees as fun, they may not. Will they survive the night?

 

This is a departure from my normal style and not my normal gentle fare. it will only be two or three chapters and the chapters will be fairly long. I hope you like it!


Categories: Violent, Crush, Body Exploration, Humiliation, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4350 Read Count: 9231
[Report This] Published: February 23 2014 Updated: February 23 2014
Reviewer: VividImagination Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 08 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Workout

Well...

I don't usually care for a violent giantess. But she's not really sadistic. If she was shrinking people just to stomp on them for her amusement, then I wouldn't be interested.

This, however, is completely different... Breast play and insertion? Yeah, I'm into that. She's interested in more of a pleasureable experience, and I can understand that. :-)

I hope she decides to keep one. Not that all stories have 'happy' endings, but it's fun to fantasize.

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[Report This] Published: January 01 1970 Updated: January 01 1970
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Date: May 21 2014 Title: None

He cares for money, and money only. That and power of course.

You...how dare you. Call me out as a hater, eh? Well looky what I found! An oxymoron! And a very obvious one at that!

Also, why is Abbas the only one with his weight listed in the bios? Now I want to know what they all weigh! And I don't know why...but I blame you for this new found curiosity.

THIS is for the bio update only. I can't wait to see what I find in your latest chapter! I bet you can't either.