Zach's 8'11" cousin comes to stay with him and offers to return the favor any way he pleases. (original story concept by Chelgi)
So hot you forget it is technically incest.
In the story we find out that Zach has no blood relation to his "cousin".
A shrunken brother has been the property of his sister Carly for the past 5 years, but finally discovers what might ultimately save him from the cruel enslavement of his giant sibling.
You know what they say! Complete sadistic b*****s befriend each other!
Heck yes they do!
A college women's gymnastics team and the coach are hit hard by the desires arising from the Rebalancing of Sexes. It's made worse when their boyfriends and husband are kidnapped by a rival team, forcing them to grab the last male on campus to meet their needs.
I thought this story was dead. I liked the first few chapters, but got turned off by nothing more than sex every chapter. Only character I honestly liked was Carmen, and she gets very little time on screen. But, I do love this at the same time, a light hearted story is needed once in a while.
I know it's not everybody's taste. But I like a lot of sex and intimacy in the Rebalancing of Sexes universe. Part of what I like about the stories is how men and women find their way back to sexuality after such a tumultuous event. Carmen is a great character and she unashamedly enjoys the power that comes from being so much taller than men (and a few women), and being able to literally enclose them in her underwear and her sex. Both powerful and playful, as well as lustful, she just seems born to be a giantess. She may figure in another plotline in the story later on.
Jack, a 'regular'-sized 17-year-old in a world now populated predominantly by humans twice that height, struggles to cope with life in a school and society built for people far larger than he will ever be.
I disagree with gadgetmawombo however.
Calling the police would simply worsen Jack. For one, Caitlin is rich, with a well connected father. The police would see the claim as being an attempt to blackmail her, or be a result of a kid with no friends trying to get attention. Plus Alex, Hannah, Caitlin, her rich family, and Amber would all refute Jack. Compared to Jack who has no one. Delon even thought it might be a sick joke, and he was one of Jack's only friends.
Things similar this happen in the real world, but with normal sized people, there is a reason you never hear about it.
This is the sort of thing I'm going for.
In theory, calling the police could easily sort this problem out in a very deus ex machina sorta way - they'd come round to check, find a Beta boy being humiliated by at least one Alpha girl, get him safe and charges might be made if Jack wants to (he might not just so as not to take on the Reids and risk a legal battle). This means that a lot of people get involved, which leaves the story very little breathing room and makes it very complicated to continue without everyone being aware of what's going on - his parents will keep him at home and everyone will know what's happened to him, it'll become all about the aftermath of the event and not about pushing the story on.
In practice, as pointed out in the review, justice is rarely simple even when it should be, and I've chosen to take a more guarded view on the situation to reflect the kind of loaded deck stacked against Jack even if he is 100% honest about what's happened. I've tried to paint the picture that this sort of thing has happened before, and the Reids have managed to evade prosecution and even set up the precedent of people blackmailing them. The police therefore have reason to be cautious in steaming over to the Reid household and gaining entry, and who's to say that they've not been warned or incentivised not to follow through with this kind of claim by a higher authority who has had his wallet filled by Caitlin's father to keep this stuff at bay?
Four boys head too deep into the forest, and end up very far from home.
Will you be continuing this? I really like it!
A woman plans a birthday party for her stepbrother. Once the party favors arrive and are prepared, all that remains is for the birthday boy to show up and enjoy his gifts. But that's not all she has planned for him.
This was original, interesting, and powerfully entertaining. I reviewed your other story control, it was good.
Again, i cannot dress the description of what is going on, it is very easy to imagine this happening in my mind.
Love your work.
By the way, I would like your opinion on one of my stories...
Thank you so much vgiv! I will reciprocate!
Much less awkward than I had thought. Short, but gets your point across just fine. Pretty well too. Most of my stories transition chapters are pretty short as well.
I just read a few of your shouts, after reading 'Control', it's hard to imagine somebody as jovial as you would even consider violent stories. I did like Control however.
Awww, thank you so much vgiv! I try to be jovial and have fun. And I hope that comes out in my stories. But every once in a while I have to let Dark Bi out ;)
I have new stories in the works, most like this, but one where I get to be evil to a man who thinks he is above every other woman. he soon finds out he isn't. Right Guy? <3
My tablet won't load this story for some reason. I really want to read it and this thing keeps saying that the URL won't load because: blank. WHY!?
I feel like as this story has progressed, it has become more convoluted. Nice, but makes me think: "What the hell? Who the fuck is this? What happened to, eh, nevermind. Maybe it'll get clearer, or not."
I feel like the original, older chapters were much more immersive. I still like the story, but got so confused with the plot I got out of reading it.
What got me confused was the transition. One moment, Shaun isin't a bathroom, in deep shit, Zarelda frequently assaults him. Then, in the next moment in another chapter, he is rescued. After that, a bunch of characters get introduced, and while I'm trying to get clarity on their rules and positions and even remember their names, the story begins to limit Zarelda, a strong character actually being in the story, conversing with other characters. And while all this is happening, I begin to forget why and what exactly the protagonists are doing to stop her.
Summary:
A drug known as the Red Spice lets Rome's wealthiest and most powerful women grow to enormous heights. Wealthy Roman aristocrats use and abuse their male slaves and servants, as the ultimate status symbol. The beautiful, busty God-Empress Cybele stands over a hundred feet tall, and has no qualms about crushing any man who dares to stand in her way. She rules Rome with an iron fist, indulging in every sort of pleasure her power affords her.
Cybele's two nineteen-year old daughters, Livia and Julia, are about to be made goddesses themselves. Livia is good-natured and gentle, while Julia is cruel to her male slaves. Soon they'll try the spice. Soon they'll grow to enormous heights. No expense has been spared for their coronation ceremony, and all of Rome is watching.
Meanwhile, one of Livia's slaves is carrying on a secret affair with the Princess. But love can be dangerous, especially when your girlfriend is thirty feet tall...
Next chapter is the one we're all waiting for...the suspense is killing me.
I like how you add "involves sex, viewer discretion is advised", after all of the other chapters of gore, cannibalism, rape and more.
LOL, fair enough. I copied the warning (along with the text) from DeviantArt, where it's more likely for people to stumble upon a later chapter not knowing what to expect. But hey, if you're okay with violence, rape and cannibalism, but consensual cunnilingus freaks you out, I figure you deserve a warning.
18 year-old Liz is a British Princess who just happens to be 300 feet tall. Slender, young and beautiful, she moves to America, and becomes a celebrity after she accidentally knocks over the Statue of Liberty. But don't get in her way, or you could end up underfoot...
Celebrity Crush is a broad satire of celebrity culture and the folly of ignoring wealth inequality, wrapped up in a rollicking giantess adventure that's bloody-good fun. Liz stomps on her fans and employees like the insects they are, and one-ups Godzilla when she takes a shortcut through a busy highway. With a special guest appearance by Christina Hendricks.
You made me hate, and somehow love Elizabeth, how?
Cannot BELIEVE the president is allowing for such horrors to be commited against his countrymen. Ted is such a soft pu**y, hope a sniper blows his f****ng head off! Same goes for Liz.
Ted is a terrible person, but being soft is the least of his problems. As for Liz, they'd need a pretty big bullet.
A rivalry between co-workers produces a bet.
A bet begets a baseball game and stakes.
The game and stakes proclaims a winner and a loser.
Said stakes are honored, albeit forcibly.
The vocabulary differences and use of different words show a more experienced writer, hope to see more.
Ben gets in trouble and serves his punishment with his teacher.
Good story, though I would personally enjoy seeing a bit less one sided talking between Ben and Silva. Like, she taunts him, he responds with more than just a plea. Also, as she is a teacher, maybe she speaks with him in a more teacher like way than maternal way, which she is doing currently. Maybe you could add in a bit more than just Panties and Bra's to show a bit more diversity, and differences in each chapter?
I do like the less gory nature of the story, as Miss Silva is being much more playful than other stories similar to this one, which is a plus in my book!
Tom Loon a 10 year navy seal is sent on a mission unlike any he has ever encountered.He is told to infiltrate the castle of a young princess and get information from her.The catch is that since the government doesn't want to endanger the relationship between the two countries Tom is told he had to be covert.This entails him being shrunken down to 1 inch tall with enough provisions to last one month.Can he survive his latest mission?
I like where this is going! Keep it up. I really do hope this is not going to be a unaware story only though, interaction between sexy Jasmine and Tom would be amazing, assuming he lives that long in the story.
Welcome to the site! :) :) You'll do great.
Thank you,hopefully the rest of the story is as enjoyable.
in the year 2020, the government has undergone a project where the giantess that they created from a small piece of the female population and regular sized individuals live together in a newly built community. Can the two coexist, while they try to continue on with their daily lives?
Nicely done, I just hope that you don't have them go easy on Ryan. I wonder how Tasha dispatched two others GTS but had trouble with one earlier....
There was a quote from Assassin's Creed 4 in there....