Penname: realRS [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: January 13 2014
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Hi FTH detectives!


I prefer gentle stories with lots of power dynamic fun, not a fan of violence or sociopaths.  I love to chat about writing so if you want to discuss anything shoot me a line at realtime.k62@gmail.com.


 



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Castaways by RMWALA Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 46]
Summary:

Three friends get in a huge and messy accident, findind themselves stranded on an island completely uninhabited by people. There's a few species however that should be taken note of on the island, and a mysterious force surrounding that said island has left them with a big surpirse and unknowingly to them a big gift as they enter and attempt to survive their predicament. 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Butt, Body Exploration, Couples , Crush, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Maternal, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25593 Read Count: 106622
[Report This] Published: January 14 2014 Updated: March 21 2015
Reviewer: realRS Signed
Date: January 20 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Love Lost and Love Found

Cool chapter, seems like the end of Act 1.  The group has reached a solid dynamic (still with issues to play with) and they see their next big mystery.

I'll be curious as to what caused Natalie to grow and the stranger to grow even more.  At first I thought that this would mean that Natalie would continue to grow, but if the stranger's bra is larger than Natalie then the stranger probably reached her present mega-height right away.  We'll see.

 

 



Author's Response:

It's true, both of there's was instant, but there may be a little more growing due to a certain something

Reviewer: realRS Signed
Date: January 20 2014 Title: Chapter 1: The Failed Sail

Oooh, I know!  They could find a hatch deep in the jungle, and when they open it there's an old computer and a long string of numbers that needs to be entered and Natalie could fight a smoke monster.....!



Author's Response:

Bits and pieces of your idea are in use, thanks very much!

Summary:

Holly is a two-inch tall 19 year old attempting her first year at college. Along the way she'll have to learn how to handle her ravenous roommate and the struggles of being surrounded by new people.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Body Exploration, Entrapment, Gentle, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, BBW, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 41244 Read Count: 351862
[Report This] Published: January 15 2014 Updated: July 20 2019
Reviewer: realRS Signed
Date: January 15 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good start, keep it coming



Author's Response: Thank you. I appreciate the review.

Summary:

A young successful man got the shrinking virus, a disease his father got before he did. How will he cope up with the fact he gets weaker ? And how will act his family and friends ?


Categories: Slow Size Change, Giantess, Adventure, Butt, Body Exploration, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 46432 Read Count: 259123
[Report This] Published: February 08 2014 Updated: April 16 2014
Reviewer: realRS Signed
Date: February 14 2014 Title: Chapter 1: The shrinking virus

Seems like you're going a little slower in this translation.  Thanks for writing, enjoying the chapters.



Author's Response:

Thanks.
Yep, I'm taking more time, the action will happen soon so don't worry about that ;). 

Reviewer: realRS Signed
Date: March 18 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Confrontation with Jade pt 1

Neat, you're really taking this version of the story slower.  I'm enjoying that Steve has some realistic coping methods.



Author's Response:

I try to focalise on the psycologic aspect of the story, making the shrinking occurs less often makes it more feared and more dramatic for Steven. If you want the story to go faster, please feel free to tell me , I'll take it into account.

Reviewer: realRS Signed
Date: March 19 2014 Title: Chapter 1: The shrinking virus

In response to your comment about seeing the story go faster.

I'll probably just be checking in until we see some real reduction occur in Steven, but until then I appreciate your laying the groundwork that will make it richer.  Take your time and write what you want, it will be enjoyable.



Author's Response:

Thanks ! I'll try to make as much scenes as possible to please anyone. I know on this website many persons prefer to have directly little persons and really tall one. But I'm part of a really few minority that prefer the symbolic aspect of that.If my story shows all the things the character loses as this scurge strikes him, I'm also aiming to show the psycological impact those changes have on the characters, as they get smaller they lose respect/self confidence and become more and more weaker. (I'm not saying that my main character will ;) ).I think it's also important for the reader to feel concerned for the character. For exemple I think the way I'm writing is kind of better (for me at least) to feel like the character is real or even to think it could be you, a thing I think is hard to feel when you read people immediatly shrunk to an insect size. Fortunately if Steven is taking too much time to shrink , Scott is there too, and thanks to this character I still will able to add unaware and giantess scenes soon.
Thanks for your support realRS, I appreciate that a lot ;) 

Summary:

Different entertwining stories from a world much like our own yet incredibly different. 


Categories: Violent, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Couples , New World Order, Crush
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 39561 Read Count: 84798
[Report This] Published: February 17 2014 Updated: June 29 2014
Reviewer: realRS Signed
Date: February 20 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: New

Great chapter, I love the dynamic and am curious about this world.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: realRS Signed
Date: April 27 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: A Day in the New World

Hey, heck of a chapter.  All of the tangents are coming together in an impressive fashion. 

There were plenty of times where I had to take a moment to remember who a particular character was, but it never took long.  They each have a unique situation and outlook that it always clicked in after a second.



Author's Response:

Thanks. I knew there would be a lot of characters based soley on the nature of the story. Aware of this I tried to limit the amount of charaters in each chapter making sure that chapter focused mostly on them. Until this point at think "Runt of the Litter" had the most characters in it at one time and that was because we were focusing on Tyler and his family. Sadly it still seems people are confused so I'll be trying to remedy that soon. 

Reviewer: realRS Signed
Date: April 24 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Plight of the Common Man Part 2

Neat chapter, good on you for exploring new types of scenes in this world.  It was interesting to see that just because someone elevates doesn't mean that their life doesn't still suck.

I'll be curious to see how this affects Greg's life.  Whether the trauma causes him to become further dependent on Ramona, or if it (along with his small success in the fight) inspires his growing independence.  

Also a neat look into the way business is done in the New World.



Author's Response:

You bring up an interesting point with Greg's reaction to this. It's kind of a coin flip right now.

Reviewer: realRS Signed
Date: April 16 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Arrangement

Ya know, when Rain first elevated I was all for having her explore being a Class 3 and it's been awesome.  But I'm going to be an infuriating hypocrite and note that I'm now getting really curious what a girl's life would be like in the first days of being a class 2.

Coming home from school to find her family looking like dolls, her best friend so delicate, a new group of big girl friends.  I suppose I'm interested less in Tyler's perspective of Rain, but more in Rain's perspective of Tyler and the world (such as her amazing realization upon elevation that Tyler really did need to be put into his place).

Well that's why we keep writing.  Love the series, excited at whatever new avenues you explore.



Author's Response:

I still plan on exploring a lot of that with Rain even as a class 3. In my universe every class is considered special and equal in different ways. We'll find out soon that this class system if very flawed when I eventually get to the chapter where Ramona finally visits the doctor. A lot of people don't fall into either of the 3 classes the government designated. (I'd recommend looking at the tags in particular one I haven't used yet.)...And hey just because Rain was the first to elevate in this story doesn't mean someone else won't elevate to class 2 later.......Maybe a side story. Hrmmm-_-....I don't think I've spoiled anything. 

 

Reviewer: realRS Signed
Date: April 15 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Plight of the Common Man Part 1

Happy to check in with Greg.  He seems to be doing a good job adjusting his masculinity in the New World and mostly living a good life.  I'm curious how his relationship with a class 3 might differ from Tyler & Rain.

Reviewer: realRS Signed
Date: April 03 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: The More Things Change

I'm glad you were able to recreate this one, it's one of my favorite chapters.  I think you recaptured the original and added some nice new moments.

I'm curious how Mary & Emily's relationship will develop.  From the previous chapter I didn't get the impression that Emily was looking for a girlfriend so much as a toy to torment, but I guess in the new world there will be some pretty extreme relationships.  I hope Mary is able to find a dynamic that can make her happy, but I'll be sad if Emily gives up the joy she gets from having Mary under thumb. 



Author's Response:

Emily's true feelings haven't been fully discussed yet besides admiration, which can easily turn into other things and most people don't think about someone staying with them indefinitely because they like them as friends, but I'm just rambling now. Feel free to make your assumptions Ramona doesn't seem to have a problem doing so. Whatever I decide the power dynamic between them probably won't change much.

Reviewer: realRS Signed
Date: March 30 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Elevation

Oh man, you lost a chapter?  What a bummer.  

I certainly looked at that chapter.  Any IT folk with tips on how to recover a previously viewed web page?

Dug the newest chapter.  It was really interesting how Rain almost immediately realized that Sheila had a point about the helplessness of non-elevated people.  It's like even the kind elevated people view the struggles of the normals as a little pathetic.  Makes Ramona's casual domination of Greg a little more understandable if even through her love he seems just fundamentally inferior.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comment. The relationships between elevated and normal is the entire point of this story and I hope I'm conveying the changing dynamics well. Not all elevated are as harsh as Sheila or conceded and dangerous as Walter but at a fundemental level it's hard to argue that there not superior. it's up to Rain to decide how she'll deal with that now that she's elevated herself. 

Reviewer: realRS Signed
Date: February 21 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Runt of the Litter

Loving this series.

Very fun chapter, I really like how your elevated characters aren't overtly evil (except maybe Emily in chapter 3).  They're just a little full of themselves, which is more than enough to make the non-elevated's lives pains in the ass.  

 



Author's Response:

You have no idea how important this comment was to me. You know why? I accidentally renamed Emily from chapter 3 Erica! Which is only okay it you don't give a shit about continuity. So yeah Emily from chapter 3 this is her family....suprise? Anyway thanks for the comment and I hope my mistake didn't ruin the story for anyone....Also I'd like to think Walter's a bit of a jackass, but who knows maybe he's just misunderstood and needs the right women to come along and change him. 

Reviewer: realRS Signed
Date: March 28 2014 Title: Tales of the New World

Neat, love the dynamics between the relatively same-sized class 3's and the normals.  Always interesting when there's mention of of the elevated's enhanced minds and senses.

 

Reviewer: realRS Signed
Date: February 20 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: The View from Below

Great chapter.  

My only criticism is that I'm unclear on physically what is happening in some of the scenes, how the characters are geographically located.  

Really fun dynamics though, I very much enjoyed it. 



Author's Response:

I think I get what your saying. The problem is once you fully commit to specific location or words like "Earth" you've locked yourself in to those perameters. Then you have to ask questions like if this is Earth. Is Obama still president? Is Rihanna an elevated being? These are good, fun questions just not ones I feel like answering. Thank you for the comment. You've actually given me a lot to think about. For now let's say it's a world similair to Earth but the names of places and locations are different.....Or am I totally wrong and your just confused about whether a character is to the left or right of another character. 

Reviewer: realRS Signed
Date: February 20 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Arrangement

I more meant in chapter 3 I was unclear on where the large & small character were located in relation to each other.  If Mary was on the ground looking up to Emily, or if Mary was on a raised plane putting them equal elevation.



Author's Response:

OH. I thought I'd made it clear that Mary for the most part was on a end table so she was maybe waist high to Emily. The door she left though is cut into the wall the table is pressed against. It was specifically installed for Mary's use. You'll see more interesting retrofits in later chapters The idea is that the world is in a transitional period and a lot of architecture is being retrofitted to accomdiate the new significantly larger populous. 

Reviewer: realRS Signed
Date: March 27 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Friends Like These

Fun surprise, I was looking forward to a new chapter.  This was a fun dynamic, and as always I love the way your chapters have specific scenes/stories to tell.

I'm most interested in the super people you've introduced, such as Ramona from Chapter 2, so I'll vote for Rain becoming a high powered normal sized level 1.  

Reviewer: realRS Signed
Date: March 27 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Arrangement

Ah, just saw your clarification.  I had thought Ramona was a super powered Class 1.

I'd vote Class 3 in that case.  I'd be more interested in Rain maintaining her normal size, but adjusting to the physical perfection and super powered superiority seen in Ramona.

 

 



Author's Response:

Cool Class 3 the mystery catagory sort of. WhoooOOOoooOo.

Reviewer: realRS Signed
Date: February 21 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Arrangement

I was wondering about that Emily/Erica change, I decided that they were different characters since Mary seemed so much more comfortable vocalizing her complaints here.  Still works great, and I love the idea that Emily stuffs Mary into her cleavage when she doesn't need her.



Author's Response:

Thanks you again! As far as Mary is concerned the idea is she's not exactly "on the clock" so is more okay speaking out of term.