Penname: realRS [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: January 13 2014
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Hi FTH detectives!


I prefer gentle stories with lots of power dynamic fun, not a fan of violence or sociopaths.  I love to chat about writing so if you want to discuss anything shoot me a line at realtime.k62@gmail.com.


 



  • https://amzn.com/B01LWPPXXK:  Check out Erica's House the full length shrinker novel.


 


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Small by NotSirk Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 90]
Summary:

A while ago I received permisson from realRS to write a story in the "Erica's House" universe. This is that story.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Crush, Feet, Gentle, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 80668 Read Count: 92491
[Report This] Published: July 13 2017 Updated: September 30 2017
Reviewer: realRS Signed
Date: July 25 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Izzellah

Oh my god, this is fantastic.

Love chapter 2 where Izzy deals with her change in status pre-shrink.  Great dynamics.

Her friends debating their merits as owners?  Fantastic.

The mother sipping coffee while giving her the talk?  Such a great detail, wonderful scene.

Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Y'know it occurs to me that this story might be "inspired" by (straight up plagiaerising) The themes of a short story you wrote called. "Bigger Better Sister" That was not intentional. I definetly wasn't thinking about that when I started writing this but........I also have NO defense. I expect my legal papers in the mail soon. Thanks for another review. There will be more on Thursday. 

Reviewer: realRS Signed
Date: July 26 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Izzellah

@Nodqfan

DO IT!



Author's Response:

DO IT! DO IT! GIVE INTO ANONYMOUS PEER PRESSURE! 

Reviewer: realRS Signed
Date: July 31 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Schooled

Good lord, I thought Erica had become a badass by the end but Sabrina is brutal.  Looking forward to seeing if Izza is grateful for the rescue or angry at being put in that situation in the first place.



Author's Response:

Brutal?! Naaaaah. Not sweet little Izzy. What hidden overly possessive dark side? She definitely isn't learning she might slightly enjoy the misery of others or love her new little sis way more than she thought she did! Sweet, innocent, Sabrina will never change. And Izzellah's gonna be happy forever! Oh and I replied to your email....almost a year late apparently. I've been busy, but by the time you read this you've probably already read thar so I don't even know why I'm bothering to type this.....Thanks for the sweet comments. They feed me in the harsh winters of mid summer California!

Reviewer: realRS Signed
Date: August 02 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Sabrina

Man, you're really sparking an itch to get writing again.  Big fan of this story.

Love your casual use of terms like "augmented" and "small comfort".

I was thinking about doing a story that inverts our "big sister has to deal with begin dominated by little sister".  I'm thinking of a relationship where an older sibling shrinks, and to deal with the big scary world tries to adopt the cute pet role to a reluctant sibling/friend.  How would it be if someone like Izzy were the one trying to push the master/pet relationship?



Author's Response:

Hmmmmmmmmmm.....good question. That's actually so unlike Izzellah as I imagine her it's tough?

Okay here's what I'd do. I start by playing up the irresponsibility angle. I'll just use my characters as examples. Sabrina would see the shrink as no big deal, Izzy can take care of herself. Moving her around is annoying, she has friends she wants to hang out with. Izzellah gets abandoned accidentally and has a horrible experience. Maybe nearly dies by an animal or gets used by a human. You decide how dark it gets. She survives and reunites with Sabrina. Now the campaign begins.Izellah starts tagging along in secret. Starts doing small favors for Sabrina. Sabrina's friends like her now. She's a great accessory to have. Her intelligence (Izzy's main advantage) proves useful not just in school but in life. She starts getting invited to parties, her grades go up, she talks mom into A NEW CAAAAR! Whatever.

Sabrina being the uniquely possessive girl I've deemed her eventually forms a connection. Sure theres plenty of skepticism at first, maybe even flatout rejection. Izzellah could never relate to her sister and mistakes are made.....but Sabrina's starting to like her daily foot massage, or tiny hands working hard on a full body rubdown, someone to talk to, to ACTUALLY talk to. Big moment. Sabrina gets in too deep, maybe a boy gets grabby. Izzellah actually saves her! Position secured. Sprinkle some teaching moments in there because Sabrina has absolutely no idea how to care for a tiny and your ready to start.

I don't know if this works or is what you wanted. Feel free to change, add, or ignore all of it. Except for the part about Small Comforts being garbage! That's never not true!! Thanks for the comments. I'll pick em up later.

Reviewer: realRS Signed
Date: August 10 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Training Day

Oooof, bumming me out.  Great chapter, feeling sorry for Izzy and looking forward to seeing where it goes.



Author's Response:

Don't be bummed out. Izzellah had to learn! She was way too full of herself! She's "rough around the edges"....Next chapter will be significantly lighter so you can look forward to that. Gracias for the written input!

Reviewer: realRS Signed
Date: August 18 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Loving Relationship

Getting to some real interesting places with Izzy, as she figures out how to negotiate her dynamics rather than just futilely fighting.



Author's Response:

Yes. Izzellah is learning. Maybe she can make it afterall. Thank you for the c to the o to the m to the ment! 

Reviewer: realRS Signed
Date: August 24 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Gloria

Neat change of pace.  I must admit I'm feeling pretty bad for Izzy, I hope she catches a break somewhere down the line.



Author's Response:

I can neither confirm nor deny any "breaks" that might be happening for Izzellah in the future. That is all. Thanks again. 

Reviewer: realRS Signed
Date: September 07 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Therapy

Jesus this motherfucker has gotten nuts. Great story, going to some crazy heights i didn't see coming. I think you've taken a lot of elements that exist as subtext in stories like Erica's House and made explicit, while not going to that crazy unbelievable fantasy place that most tiny slave stories exist in where everyone is a sociopath.

Loved the therapy session, could have seen it go on much longer. Loved that the therapist called both Sab and Izzy on their bs, and would be very interested to know what relationship compromise she envisions them getting to.

Would be very interested to read or co-write a conversation between Izzy and Erica. Not sure if it would end in mutual admiration or war.

Author's Response:

A Mutual War of Admiration? Don't know what that is but it would make a good title to something. It's good to get a comment from you! Glad you're enjoying the story. I really like the next chapter for dumb reasons and can't wait to upload it.

I'd also be down to write or collab on a scene with the two main characters of our stories although I don't know what ot be about. The Izzellah presented right now in this story would flip Erica the bird and be on her way while Sabrina just shrugged and walked off with her because Izzy's too small to really go anywhere. I do imagine when they meet up Izzellah will dislike her. As you can see that totalitarian shit doesn't fly with her. Anyway depending on when you're reading this I've fallen asleep so I'll contact you or have already contacted you or vice versa something.

Reviewer: realRS Signed
Date: October 25 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Izzellah

This was an astonishing series, and I love it.  With a committment to character exploration over kink you've created a very real world, one whose path I never guessed.

I had trouble getting around to reading the last few chapters, which always puzzled me.  The story subject is one of my absolute favorites (bratty little sister trains shrunk big sister), the writing is stellar, and I even had a personal connection to it.  So why wasn't I dropping everything once a new chapter came out like I did with the first few.

The reason I had trouble getting myself to sit down and read is that your characters have such ugliness to them.  Not buried deep down, not presented as sexy and fun flaws like I do with my stories, but right at the surface and driving their actions.  They have real trauma, and in many ways were people who the more I learned about them, the more I realized that I didn't really like them, and wasn't on their side.  They definitely stopped fulfilling my kinky fantasies, and in some way I resented that loss.

Having now finished, I love the Izzy, Sabrina and Gloria, ugliness and all.  They are beautiful developed women, and I'm glad to know them.  

 

Great ending, loved watching Izzy give in to her submissive side and embrace pethood, especially since I knew it wouldn't last.  I feel bad for Sabrina, even though she made things so much worse by giving in to her cruel and abusive traits.  I admired Gloria's wisdome in recognizing that Izzaleah was going to fight for freedom until it killed her, so she might as well have a backpack.  And I cheered Izzaleah as she climbed the desk, fully aware that she was barely capable of even the first pathetic step to freedom but not letting that stop her, suicidal odds or no.

I look forward to the next volume, and fully expect to have my fantasies ruined by the ugly truth about people.



Author's Response:

Oh! I didn't expect to find anymore comments on this one.

Hey it's realRS!! First just....thank you. This story wouldn't exist if not for your permission and of course the seed of an idea planted in Erica's House. Thank you!!!

So I've been dying to know your opinion on this and I must say "ugly" is never how I thought of these characters but it somehow fits. I would prefer to say "real" but that feels self aggrandizing to me. But yeah I really wanted to stay loyal to the characters I imagined and blah blah writing blah blah. Not just do kink even though that might have gotten this more popular. I don't actually know what people want to read. I'm really happy you liked the story ugliness and all. Let me tell you though ........Small 2 (working title) I haven't even started it but it gets to places I think. Deeper valleys and higher summits, but that's just hot air for now. Gotta do more in MAJOR/minor. See you on the next round!

Reviewer: realRS Signed
Date: October 25 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Izzellah

Also, I'm really curious about how the Tiny's nanotech enhancements function in your world.  You touched on Izzaleah's enhanced agility and grace, and clearly she was able to heal from being crushed in a relatively short amount of time.  But I still felt a sense of mortal danger in her interactions with people, moreso than I featured in Erica's House.  It was very interesting and I'd love to learn more about how Tiny's physiology functions in this world.



Author's Response:

Well that's stuff that will probably get explored more in Small 2 if I can get away with it. It's all inspired by that one girl from Erica's House. Brittany's sorority sister who might have some sort of enhancement. I don't remember her name and can't find the chapter it's in anymore for reference, but that's one of the things that attracted me to your world. Just the idea of nanomachines in general is a pretty solid excuse for shrinking. More than the typical shrinking excuse: like #15 (It was some random virus) or #4 (magic....just magic. No explanation just that magic exists for this one reason). So yeah there was room there to elaborate. Best part is you already hinted at it yourself briefly within Erica's House. I pretty much just use it to make the tinies slightly more capable. It's hard to tell a shrink story and give the tiny any agency. Realistically they wouldn't even be able to breath. I think I hit a happy medium. Izzellah has some fall resistance but can still die from to far up, she can survive being stepped on with bare feet but hard shoes and enough pressure can crush her as you've see. She has more speed but nothing compared to a human and she may be marginally stronger than she should be. There's other stuff. I imagine that just process of this shrink effect. The machines burning out all your mass for some unknown purpose probably super charges them! You could probably heal from anything short of regrowing body parts if you didn't die of blood loss. That's my rational anyway. 

Summary:

Three broke roommates agree that one of them at random will permanently shrink to be the subject of a new vlog, though the two "winners" may have a change of plans.

Done as a commission.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Entrapment, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Jacksmith Commission Stories
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6371 Read Count: 38873
[Report This] Published: August 30 2017 Updated: September 08 2017
Reviewer: realRS Signed
Date: August 30 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great so far.  Love the quick setup and dynamics, and I think it's a really fun idea.  Curious where it will go, and if there's any vlog at all.



Author's Response:

Thanks! More of this will be up soon

Reviewer: realRS Signed
Date: September 02 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ooooh, last straw!  Would love to know what form Wanda's rebellion could possibly take.



Author's Response:

Given her size, it may not be much

Reviewer: realRS Signed
Date: September 03 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sure would be a shame if Wanda snuck a dose of the shrinking drug into her roommates coffee

Author's Response:

If she can get high enough to reach it, anyway

Summary:

This is a anthology of several multi-chaptered stories showing various things happening in the universe created by Nothingness' Giantess Bully. This is a world where giantesses are rampant and more or less can do as they please with the tiny normal sized humans. Don't worry, you don't need to read that story to get this one. As I add more story lines, I'll include breif summaries of what those will entail.

First there is Anaya: Goddess from the Ghetto: A young adult black giantess named Anaya who is NOT a dumb racist stereotype has a idea one day. She offers a city her home as a safe haven from all other giantesses. In exchange, they are hers to use as she sees fit. Anaya cares deeply about her tinies, but loves to use them and flunt her power over them. Since she's bisexual and sexually active, big orgies are common. Also, Anaya's whim is law, no matter how compromising or against the social norm.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, BBW, Gentle, Humiliation, Lesbians, Mouth Play, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8055 Read Count: 8968
[Report This] Published: September 27 2017 Updated: September 27 2017
Reviewer: realRS Signed
Date: October 04 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Anaya Chapter 1

Oooooh, I love morning inspection!  Really awesome setup, love this little community.



Author's Response:

I had a feeling you would, since the inspiration for that scene came from your story! lol. I think you know which one I mean. ;)

By the way, I seem to having a little trouble fleshing out the other concepts for the anthology collection I intially envisioned. Would you be interested in maybe offering some help in allowing me to find the inspiration that has been kind of lacking? After all, you've already inspired me at least once, already! lol 

MAJOR/minor by NotSirk Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 111]
Summary:

Izzellah Ivory struggles to cope as a minority in a world of superior beings.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Gentle, Humiliation, Muscle, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 99115 Read Count: 99199
[Report This] Published: October 11 2017 Updated: May 18 2018
Reviewer: realRS Signed
Date: October 13 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: A minor/Surprise

Good lord, you are a machine and an inpsiration.

Neat world.  I'd love to see what Izzy's history with Majors are.  It almost feels like she's been living in isolation, like she knows about Majors but isn't accustomed to them.


This reminds me a bit of Izzy's fantasy world in SMALL, where she has a romance with her Amazonian heroine Sabrina.



Author's Response:

Isolations probably a close enough description. She's been around MAJORS when she goes out with her dad and of course she has MAJOR family, but the only MAJOR she's spent any real time with is Ignacio and by virtue of being his daughter he treats different than most MAJORS would. That's gonna change real soon though. Next chapter probably! And yeah I czn see how that fantasy might be a reality here. But will it be one!!!!!?!?!?!?!?..........maybe.

Summary:

A giant raider returns to camp after a successful raiding session, and decides to spend her newly made money on one of her favourite pastimes. A pastime that may include human women.


Categories: Mouth Play, Giantess, Breasts, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Lesbians
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6271 Read Count: 9757
[Report This] Published: October 11 2017 Updated: October 11 2017
Reviewer: realRS Signed
Date: October 13 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Neat

Summary:

A high school girl's life is going to slowly change as she adapts to her new place in the world. After being infected with an unkown virus, the unlucky Maryam will start looking at her life and the people in it in a whole other way.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Maternal, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: FF/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7530 Read Count: 42326
[Report This] Published: December 02 2017 Updated: January 15 2019
Reviewer: realRS Signed
Date: March 07 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Day 2 - An Apple a Day

Cool story so far, the protagonist has a real voice and you know your way around a sentence.

Ash being male would be fun, not a lot of Mf content around here.

Looking forward to the world you're building.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Most that have commented seem to gravitate more towards only females, but I'm gonna keep the posibility of some M/f content, open.

Reviewer: realRS Signed
Date: January 14 2019 Title: Chapter 4: Day 3 - Socrates, or something

Very well written with great characters, looking forward to things getting into gear.  Thanks for writing



Author's Response:

Thanks for your support!

Elite Sister by Link Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 43]
Summary:

A cure for cancer. A cure for aging. Peaceful societies governed by the Elite — teens and preteens gifted with size, strength, and eternal youth.

Perfect, right?

Kyleigh certainly thought so. Outgoing and overconfident, she began training her shy and awkward sister for servitude at the age of nine. Two years later, as predicted, one of them did indeed become an Elite...


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Gentle, New World Order, Slave, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 27543 Read Count: 74098
[Report This] Published: January 16 2018 Updated: March 03 2019
Reviewer: realRS Signed
Date: January 17 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great world, great characters, great writing. I am in.

Author's Response:

Welcome to the world of the Elite. :)

Reviewer: realRS Signed
Date: January 19 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ha, as soon as I read Ky's reaction I thought "NotSirk is going to love this girl".


Great chapter, and I love Les' genuine resistance to elevating.



Author's Response:

Thanks, realIRS.

We'll have another Les POV chapter soon, so we can see if she maintains that resistance.