Penname: Ancient Relic [Contact] Real name:
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Make America Big Again by Asterisk, Inwiththebooks Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 64]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Nobody ever expected her to win, but now that she has the new President is gonna live up to her word and Make America Big Again


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Middle Age (50+), Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, New World Order, Slave, Slow Size Change, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29402 Read Count: 261628
[Report This] Published: February 18 2017 Updated: April 07 2017
Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: February 27 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Workplace Woes

The way things are going, it looks like all men are going to be three inches eventually, unless they decide to leave certain men alone.

This really is a lot of fun considering the subject matter.

And I think it would be great to see Dianne make herself taller.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: March 04 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Civil Disobedience

I second seeing the First Husband at whatever size he's at now.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: March 07 2017 Title: Chapter 6: This Week Today

We may or may not have been having too much fun with this.

Most definitely.

Read the Fine Print by NRawkGTS Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

It happened suddenly one day.  A being calling itself Sancus announced to the world that he had had enough of human deceit and dishonesty in the commitments and contracts they themselves enter into.  The so-called God of Contracts claimed that for those who wished to invoke his power, they need only write an agreement in his name and what was agreed upon in the document would be enforced by his power.
There were, however, several conditions for his power to be invoked.  Chief among the conditions are that no parties involved in the contract may be tricked into signing and that one cannot offer services or goods that do not belong to them.  These contracts need not be formal, dense documents to be overseen by Sancus, even an informal written agreement on a napkin will carry the weight his power so long as it is written in his name.
Through Sancus' power, corruption in society plummeted and everyone was using the fair ruling of the God of Contract's authority to conduct business on all levels.


Categories: Humiliation, Breasts, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Insertion, Teenager (13-19), Object, Incest
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7095 Read Count: 10591
[Report This] Published: April 21 2017 Updated: April 21 2017
Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: April 21 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Read Carefully Before You Sign

Interesting concept. You could have all sorts of fun with it.



Author's Response:

I know, right?  I thought of the concept for Al about halfway through writing it.

Paul in Wonderland by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

Paul's love of all things Alice in Wonderland sends him down the rabbit hole when his entire family discovers his fetish and decides to do something about it.

Done as a commission.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Mature (40-49), Crush, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, Odor, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Jacksmith Commission Stories
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9182 Read Count: 52253
[Report This] Published: August 23 2017 Updated: August 29 2017
Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: August 28 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I have to admit, I see why he'd like women in dresses and petticoats so much. Especially after seeing the great pictures DW posted. It's been a fun story so far.



Author's Response:

I'm sure plenty in the community would have the same weaknesses as Paul in this story

Tall Drink of Shrink by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

An inventor looking to get ahead in life accidentally helps create a phenomenon which will rebalance the world of men and women, and in the process, turn him into the perfect slave for his terrifying and beautiful boss Ms. Hoshoku.

Done as a commission.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Breast Enlargement, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, New World Order, Slave, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Jacksmith Commission Stories
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25622 Read Count: 150041
[Report This] Published: August 25 2017 Updated: October 04 2017
Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: August 28 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I have a thing for powerful businesswomen (and lawyers), so this will be great.



Author's Response:

Well, this one's definitely all about power in the business and the women.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: September 02 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Tune in next time to see Ms. Hosoku use the drug's mind control capabilities to shut him down make him do some other humiliating thing.



Author's Response:

More or less, yes.

XMart's New Product by tallie Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 25]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A story of a professional and a new hire in a highly erotic field.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Couples, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Muscle, Slave, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, FF/f, FM/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 62976 Read Count: 536205
[Report This] Published: October 01 2017 Updated: August 29 2023
Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: October 01 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Introductions are in Order

This looks like a lot of fun! Keep going.



Author's Response:

That's really nice of you to say!

Time-Out: What If? by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 39]
Summary:

Join Scott Stevens, his dysfunctional family, and a shrinking device in these alternate reality what-if short stories.

Done as a commission.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, New World Order, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Jacksmith Commission Stories
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9701 Read Count: 75243
[Report This] Published: October 14 2017 Updated: January 10 2018
Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: December 17 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Mother of All Problems (Part 1)

Great idea, and I agree with Nostory. It really does seem like the natural culmination of what Judy and her buddies want, and this has potential beyond three chapters. It makes me wonder, what other "professionals and leaders" will also get this treatment, and how and where would they live? Finally, I'd recommend not mentioning anything beyond Scott growing in the description, to make it a surprise twist.

 



Author's Response:

It's definitely fair to say this kind of thing likely has entered the latent fantasies of Judy and company. For now, these three chapters will be the only peek into this reality, though I'm sure there are others in this side canon who will grow. I understand what you mean about the spoiler in the summary, but these chapters are brief and action-focused enough I wanted readers to be able to pick out a short story to read based more on the full concept.

Another Day at the Office by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

An office worker's wandering eyes earn him a day shrunken and imprisoned in the shoes of his oppressive boss and her spiteful young intern.

Done as a commission.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Legwear, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Jacksmith Commission Stories
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7306 Read Count: 96687
[Report This] Published: January 12 2018 Updated: February 03 2018
Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: February 03 2018 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Fun story all around. And a tantalizing ending. So many possibilities.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Attitude adjustments by Stevie Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary:

In the fast paced environment of corporate America, one company has stream lined the process by way of a special piece of equipment.   Base level employees are shrunk when they come to work in the morning and grown back when they clock out.  Supervisors keep their height, and loom large and in charge.


Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28104 Read Count: 56966
[Report This] Published: February 18 2018 Updated: March 21 2018
Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: February 19 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This concept us a lot if fun! Make the most of it and keep it going.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: February 23 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Fun stuff! At his point, you can keep going with Marcus, and talk about what the other supervisors and managers do with their power. How much of it is based on legitimateissues vs excuses to have fun with employees?



Author's Response:

That is the dynamic I'm trying to work on.  Stomping on Marcus wasn't some huge ordeal for Bridgette.  Whether or not she enjoyed it, it was just part of the job for her.  Which is why she didn't mention it later.   There are rules to it all that I'm going to explain later.    Thanks for the review. 

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: February 27 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Well this was a surprise. Let's see the full extent of his operation.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: March 13 2018 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I like this turn of events. It's good to see a relatively giant Samantha. Now let' see what else is going on here.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: March 13 2018 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I sense a turning point coming. It looks like Marcus is starting to break.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: March 14 2018 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

And before he can be broken once and for all, he sends out a message. He may have screwed up their plans again, unless they detect and intercept the message.



Author's Response:

Exactly.  I'm debating which way to take the story from here.  I thought about them screening all the calls and texts going in and out, but idk.  We'll see I guess.  Thank you for commenting! 

null by Anonymous Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary: null
Categories: Breasts, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, Odor, Sci-Fi, Slave, Slow Size Change, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 500 Read Count: 15968
[Report This] Published: February 19 2018 Updated: February 21 2018
Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: February 23 2018 Title: null

Fun stuff. Keep going with Ann.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Ancient!

She seems to be a crowd favourite, so we'll definitely be seeing more of her in the future!

Thanks for the comment!

Monopolizing by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

A boy plays strip-Monopoly with his friend, but while she loses clothes, he'll lose something else instead.

Done as a commission.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Fantasy, Feet, Gentle, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: Jacksmith Commission Stories
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3468 Read Count: 31880
[Report This] Published: November 18 2018 Updated: December 15 2018
Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: November 22 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is going to be a fun story.



Author's Response:

I hope so

Dollhouse Blues by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

After a boy is caught in a dress, his magical family makes the punishment fit the crime by shrinking and imprisoning him in a dollhouse for the entertainment and pleasure of his two sisters.

Done as a commission.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Entrapment, Fantasy, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Instant Size Change, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Jacksmith Commission Stories
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16708 Read Count: 96841
[Report This] Published: January 04 2019 Updated: April 17 2019
Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: March 08 2019 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

His is a lot of fun to read. What does it for me is the masterful description of all the details of what's really a very simple premise.



Author's Response:

Thanks much; the style here is certainly aimed to savor slower, more intricate types of actions.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: March 16 2019 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Dream: useful for foreshadowing the real ending or for adding an alternate ending.



Author's Response:

Always

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