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Summary:

Teenager Michael Hearst born with a silver spoon in his mouth and a sense of entitlement given his family name, offends the wrong person. Shortly after, he begins to feel ill, returning home to a house where his younger sister is coincidentally having an unsupervised sleepover with a handful of her girlfriends.

 


Categories: Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Mouth Play, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59771 Read Count: 494135
[Report This] Published: November 04 2015 Updated: June 09 2016
Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: April 01 2016 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

@Barrowman:

I find Lucy totally out of character in the last 2 chapters. Her behaviour is not of the Lucy in the beginning.

I figured it was the result of this:

Lucie nodded, “I’m not surprised. There is something in the curse that seem to magnify the recipient’s vulnerabilities, which can have unusual effects on others,” she explained, grinning at the strawberry blonde.



Author's Response:

The curse makes Michael seem more vulnerable, which in turn may fuel the inclinations of the possessor to perhaps get frisky with him, like a miniature highly concentrated little aphrodisiac.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: March 06 2016 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Very interesting, especially for a light chapter. Suggestion: Write a chapter where Michael fantasizes about what he'll never get to do to the girls and Mirielle.



Author's Response:

Hmm might be entertaining after Mirielle is finished with Michael for the night. We shall see

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: February 28 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I eagerly wait to find out what Mirielle has planned, and how it'll turn out. A number of possibilities, all of them delicious.



Author's Response:

Mirielle is definitely a little more in tune with her sexual needs than the girls just playing. 

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: March 16 2016 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Deep down inside, Michael knows that Mirielle might not help him, but this bit of hope is the only thing between him and complete despair.



Author's Response:

Exactly having a sliver of hope may be more painful that realizing there is no hope. Anyway well see whether or not Mirielle will follow through on her promise. Thank for the review

Summary:

Act 3 picks up where Act 2 left off. A faint spark of hope has been found, but is in danger of being snuffed out before it can catch. Sanders, Darius, and the rest of the Phoenixes have to rally the scattered Resistance groups and unite them if they every hope to stop the Society.

But the groups have long been apart and have no love between them. Old hatreds and suspicious may doom their plan to fail. And lurking in the shadows is a threat that could damn them all. For not all of the Resistance wants them to succeed...

Will the flames of hope bring the Society's evils into the light, or will they burn everything to ash? Find out in Act 3 of After Shrink High, Flames of Hope.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Body Exploration, Crush, Destruction, Gentle, Insertion, New World Order, Sci-Fi, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: After Shrink High
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 119872 Read Count: 64038
[Report This] Published: January 22 2016 Updated: November 07 2017
Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: March 11 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Hard Truths

Things are heating up? That's good news to me. This is one of the best stories still on this site.

Shoebox by Duggernaut Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 164]
Summary:

A young woman keeps her playthings in a shoebox under her bed

 


Categories: Watersports, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Insertion, Mouth Play, Unaware, Vore, Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 62 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 67654 Read Count: 419501
[Report This] Published: April 23 2016 Updated: November 25 2016
Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: August 09 2016 Title: Chapter 42: Undiscovered Country

This is becoming a deconstruction of heroism. Josh is doing what would normally be the heroic thing, rescuing people and trying to help everyone escape, but Julian seems to have a more realistic grasp of the situation. They have no way to be restored right now without the girls, and so if they did escape, what would they do? Right now, Julian has a point about trying to enjoy the situation. This could, however, turn right around if Josh does find a way to escape.



Author's Response:

The inversion of traditional archetypes invites opportuntiy to exploore disparate morality given the nature of the situation and how the antecedent/behavior/consequence model is no longer abiding by the same parameters. Julilan is my pragmatist, while Josh is the idealist amnd Carver is struggling to define his role. Julian talks a big game but as a relaist he knows that there is a chasm between fantasy and the reality. We'll see how this continues to evolve with the introduction of another personality.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: July 16 2016 Title: Chapter 36: Groping Around in the Dark

I agree, this was a funny chapter. The benter with Josh and Julian is great.



Author's Response:

I think even in the face of tribulation levity is a tool to keep people from going mad. Plus it's fun to write :)

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: July 30 2016 Title: Chapter 38: Operation Jap Julie

And just what will they do with that guy? Taking him to Faith isn't a good idea; he may get eaten. He may last longer with Julie.

And I'd like to see Winston's fate mentioned at some point.



Author's Response:

It does seem to be a bit of a gamble for our little explorers. I haven't forgotten about winston...:)

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: August 12 2016 Title: Chapter 43: Missed Rendezvous

So they're not walking around the neighbourhood looking for men. They going all over the world. Teleporting, perhaps? If so, this house could be anywhere in the world. It could be beyond Earth. If Josh looked out the window, or made it to the front door while it's open, what would he see?

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: June 29 2016 Title: Chapter 30: I Was Only Joshing Around

Julian always was a compelling character, with that attitude. But Josh has been growing toward a badass. He started out smart, and he's been quickly learning to keep his cool and think on his feet. It'll be interesting to see what kind of person he becomes now that he's face to face with them. How charming he becomes, is one possibility.

One thing that doesn't seem to have occurred to him: Faith can't kill and replace him for a month.



Author's Response:

The true crucible of mettle will be put to the test for Josh. We've seen Carver collapse under the pressure. It not that Faith can't kill him just that she can't replace him for a month if she does. We shall see...

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: July 23 2016 Title: Chapter 38: Operation Jap Julie

"You better hope it doesn’t get into my room, because you know what I’ll do if I find there,” she said, grinning evilly.

Faith rolled her eyes, “I know,” she said.

“I don’t know why you keep them around for days at a time, that’s just stupid,” Julie remarked.

“What I do is my business,” Faith said. “Don’t you have somewhere else to go or was the whole point of your trip up the stairs to pester me?”

Shaking her head, Julie climbed the last two stairs and pushed by the other two girls. “I’m going to my room, see if maybe there is something hiding there,” she stated, grin at the corner of her mouth.

 

Now we find out what this means I'm also wondering if they'll take the guy back to screw with Julie, or if Julie shows up and offers a counterproposal.



Author's Response:

We have only gotten a glimpse of Julies affinity for brutality though more will be revealed in the next handful of chapters both through direct observation as well as anecdotally. There a few different ways for this this to unfold :)

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: October 22 2016 Title: Chapter 58: The Red Death

I was thinking that the future of the story would be: Josh eventually gets set free, and Julian become's Mom's willing slave. This could complicate that.



Author's Response:

We shall see...

Prejudice by vgiv, Nostory Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Takes place a little after Downtrodden, and in the same universe as well. A young and aspiring woman, hopes to one day become a member of WFBS, a organization that feels women are superior to men, especially with their now considerable size difference. She realizes how wrong her supposed morale standpoint is through tragedy.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, Gentle, Humiliation, New World Order, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Intersizable Universe
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3345 Read Count: 5266
[Report This] Published: June 13 2016 Updated: June 13 2016
Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: June 13 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like this universe, and this is a good start to a story. Keep going.

Nick by Duggernaut Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 117]
Summary:

Joining a new school mid semester is hard enough, but for Nick, when his parent's divorce is finalized he is forced to move across the country to live with his dad who just so happens to have a new lady in his life and a daughter Nick's age who is one of the school's 'it' girls. When an accident leaves Nick and two other boys shrunken, he may be forced to turn to his step sister and her friends for assistance...


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38506 Read Count: 183429
[Report This] Published: June 24 2016 Updated: October 05 2016
Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: July 08 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Nick at Night

You have a marvellous opportunity for a red herring. You've been setting up Asha as the one who will shrink him, but Hester's the one with the science smarts and a crush...

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: August 30 2016 Title: Chapter 28: In the Nick of Time

Clarissa and Hester could trade pussy pals.

And the three could get her recipe (once Hester figures it out), and then they could team up. Or fight over shrunken men.

Also, that still leave a question open: what was Asha doing scrabbling around the floor, if they can't shrink people themselves?



Author's Response:

For every question answered, another posed. All in good time... :)

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: July 16 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Brave New World

@Carycomic: So what happens if Asha finds out that she's not the only one in that game? So many possibilities.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: October 06 2016 Title: Chapter 36: Something has got to Give

I think you've got something good here. Some things to talk about:

1) Hester and Scott's growing relationship

2) Hester still needs to figure out what Scott made. Will she shrink more people? Will she make a growth potion?

3) What will Asha do now that she knows that Hester's thing blocks her powers? Will she go to Hester and try to figure out what's going on?

4) Could we have some flashbacks showing Asha using her powers?

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: June 29 2016 Title: Chapter 8: A Brand New School

I like that you're taking the time to set it up properly. Erotica and horror are so much better when they come out of well developed characters.

As for you, Carycomic, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8y-FGDwjLr0



Author's Response:

I agree building fleshed out characters is much more enjoyable whatever the vehicle. The drawback is having the patience to allow the characters to develop without rusing them to get to the 'action'. Trying to find the mix is tricky. :)

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: August 03 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Learning How to Climb Stairs

Possibility: Hester finds Nick with Asha and company, and shrinks them.

However, we still have to explain Asha's earlier behaviour. If she can shrink people too, then we may have fight...

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: July 14 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Hester Primrose

So Hester, you've kept a sample and you're going to find out just what that stuff is. How's your entrepreneurial spirit? Can you capitalize on an invention?