Penname: Ancient Relic [Contact] Real name:
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Summary:

Enlisting the aid of his sister, a teenaged highschooler who has been inadvertantly shrunk decides he wants to crash the birthday party of the girl he's been crushing on, but the party is girls only.

After the party, the story tracks the tribulations of the shrunken lad as he navigates his way through a sea of lovely ladies.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Gentle, Incest, Insertion, Lesbians, Maternal, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 180 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 207233 Read Count: 2396055
[Report This] Published: July 17 2015 Updated: September 06 2017
Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: December 05 2016 Title: Chapter 140: When the student is ready, the teacher shall appear

hopefully this jumble of words meets your expectations.

*laughs*



Author's Response:

I shall take that as a vote for the positive, :)

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: December 10 2016 Title: Chapter 142: Katie

@Carycomic: That would be a tragic ending. No more sex.



Author's Response:

I thought that was only if you got married

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: December 10 2016 Title: Chapter 142: Katie

I don't profess to  be a polished writer


You're becoming one, though.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the vote of confidence :)

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: December 15 2016 Title: Chapter 143: Where to from here

Tom is a tiny man with a big harem, and it looks like Grandpa is starting to build his own harem.



Author's Response:

Tom is a chip off the old old block. 

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: February 04 2017 Title: Chapter 151: Astraea

I wish I were this smooth at seduction. Instead, I live vicariously through Tom.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: February 14 2017 Title: Chapter 152: Habeas Corpus

At the end of the last chapter, Serena seemed like she was in Cassidy's position. Then she turned it around and left Tom defeated while remaining in complete control. Nice.



Author's Response:

Thought a little twist might be a nice change 

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: April 07 2017 Title: Chapter 160: Tinkering Back Home

So, Tess is fiddling with the machine with the girls around. This could go in all sorts of fun directions.



Author's Response:

Right?  If she jury rigs the device and gets it working...

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: April 21 2017 Title: Chapter 162: Blackness, Blackness, Everywhere/Test 2

The second one would tie the story up nicely, and the first one is an interesting cliff-hanger. However, I absolutely choose the first one, because I want this to continue, even after all that's happened.

Also, Tess fiddling with the machine needs to be developed and resolved. Unless that becomes a spin-off...

@TomSpeedy: Any other story ideas?



Author's Response:

Thanks Ancient Relic for offering some clarity to my too cryptic proposition. As you can see, the story will continue. Cheers

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: May 18 2017 Title: Chapter 167: Bloodhound

Sounds like Serena would just love to have a tiny man to dominate.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: August 02 2017 Title: Chapter 176: Back in Friendly Territory

This feels like a good climax, so I think the best thing to do now would be to write the denouement and epilogue. Anything else can go into a spin-off.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: September 07 2017 Title: Chapter 180: Epilogue

*stands and applauds thunderously*

Congratulations and excellent work on this story. Two years of regular updates is basically unheard of, and to write a story with this consistent quality for so long is a marvellous achievement. It's been a fun ride.

And nice epilogue. It wraps up Tom's Story nicely, and sets up a tantalizing teaser for Tess' Story. Not just the hint of more shrinking, but that the device is close to being usable for both shrinking and teleportation.

@Carycomic and vgiv: Yeah, it wouldve been Exile. We Titan Empire fans love to argue, which sent the review counts through the roof.



Author's Response:

*nods humbly* it has been my pleasure to share this story and my reward that it has been so well received. thanks for all your support through this journey!

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: September 13 2017 Title: Chapter 180: Epilogue

How does it feel to not be writing Tom's Story anymore?



Author's Response:

Kind of a relief to see it done. It was one hell of a fun and exciting ride, but I think it's nice to get a break. Thanks for asking  :)

Summary:

A teenaged girl with a tragic and haunted past begins to experience startling visions and starts manifesting unusual abilities feeling something dark stirring deep within her...


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Crush, Entrapment, Insertion, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 45958 Read Count: 276843
[Report This] Published: August 11 2015 Updated: June 20 2016
Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: June 15 2016 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

I skipped this over for a long time. I figured that I wouldn't like something that's very violent. A few days ago, I read the first chapter on a whim, with a bit of trepidation. Good in medias res start. I got curious about how things got to that point. I read on, and I really liked it, and I can see why. It is violent, sure, but it comes out of interesting characters. I was able to enjoy that, whereas in a porn without plot story, there is no character development to do that. I also like the Sumerian elements and this story's approach to magic. It reminds of things I read about a long time ago, and haven't touched in ages. Keep going, I like this current direction, and I want to see what ultimately becomes of Anna and Veronica, and everyone around them.



Author's Response:

I very much appreciate the fact you were able to overcome the initial intro for this story to find the currents layered within it. I am often times conflicted on justification for action, why would someone do that? I wanted to show sacrifice and betrayal with damaged elements that keep you guessing. While I write this I have essentially wrapped this story up though like most others there are lingering questions. Again thank you for taking the time to read this story and share a review. :)

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: June 21 2016 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

This story seems far from over. Some questions:

1) How did Imogen survive without any warding?

2) What happens now that Rachel has discovered a shrunken man?

3) How does Anna get to the state she's in in the first chapter? She doesn't seem that sadistic yet.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the questions. I did leave this tale with a few loose threads and could certainly have continued it but chose this point as my exit. To address your questions. 1. Imogen survived with Anna’s and Veronica intervention though she was greatly damaged by Inanna. Further Imogen's resistance while far less than Anna’s assisted the others in helping defeat Inanna. 2. In my mind Rachel discovered Valen and that could a whole other story. :) 3. The Anna we see in chapter 1 is unleashed at the end of chapter 9 when drunken Jerry tries to force himself on her. At that point Inanna's influence over Anna is very strong. We see elements of that same kind of influence in Imogen affecting her dreams though the second gathering hastily preempted their preparations to perform the rite so the influence was lessened plus Inanna was still weakened from the attempt to inhabit Anna.

I hope I have adequately addressed the very valid concerns you've listed. Thanks again.

Summary:

Teenager Michael Hearst born with a silver spoon in his mouth and a sense of entitlement given his family name, offends the wrong person. Shortly after, he begins to feel ill, returning home to a house where his younger sister is coincidentally having an unsupervised sleepover with a handful of her girlfriends.

 


Categories: Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Mouth Play, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59771 Read Count: 617387
[Report This] Published: November 04 2015 Updated: June 09 2016
Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: February 28 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I eagerly wait to find out what Mirielle has planned, and how it'll turn out. A number of possibilities, all of them delicious.



Author's Response:

Mirielle is definitely a little more in tune with her sexual needs than the girls just playing. 

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: March 06 2016 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Very interesting, especially for a light chapter. Suggestion: Write a chapter where Michael fantasizes about what he'll never get to do to the girls and Mirielle.



Author's Response:

Hmm might be entertaining after Mirielle is finished with Michael for the night. We shall see

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: March 16 2016 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Deep down inside, Michael knows that Mirielle might not help him, but this bit of hope is the only thing between him and complete despair.



Author's Response:

Exactly having a sliver of hope may be more painful that realizing there is no hope. Anyway well see whether or not Mirielle will follow through on her promise. Thank for the review

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: March 29 2016 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

If they keep screwing with Michael this way, eventually he's going to completely break.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: March 31 2016 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Did Lucie just outscheme Mirielle? Is Mirielle now as helpless as Michael, with Lucie in control? Did Duggernaut just shrink a woman for the first time? This screws things up nicely.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: April 01 2016 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

@Barrowman:

I find Lucy totally out of character in the last 2 chapters. Her behaviour is not of the Lucy in the beginning.

I figured it was the result of this:

Lucie nodded, “I’m not surprised. There is something in the curse that seem to magnify the recipient’s vulnerabilities, which can have unusual effects on others,” she explained, grinning at the strawberry blonde.



Author's Response:

The curse makes Michael seem more vulnerable, which in turn may fuel the inclinations of the possessor to perhaps get frisky with him, like a miniature highly concentrated little aphrodisiac.