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Summary:

Enlisting the aid of his sister, a teenaged highschooler who has been inadvertantly shrunk decides he wants to crash the birthday party of the girl he's been crushing on, but the party is girls only.

After the party, the story tracks the tribulations of the shrunken lad as he navigates his way through a sea of lovely ladies.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Gentle, Incest, Insertion, Lesbians, Maternal, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 180 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 207233 Read Count: 1951954
[Report This] Published: July 17 2015 Updated: September 06 2017
Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: March 24 2016 Title: Chapter 75: Janine

Right now I think Lina's the most likely to win. If Serena does figure out how to give her legal custody of Tom, then I'm not sure what the others can do to fight that. That would also force Tom's mother to become aware of the situation, as she'd have to find out that she no longer has legal custody of her own son.



Author's Response:

So many possibilities...  ;)

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: March 14 2016 Title: Chapter 71: Cassidy and Tom

Perhaps, as part of some kind of weird-ass, precedent-setting custody suit!

With recent events in mind, there are a number of ways one could interpret "weird-ass".



Author's Response:

Weird ass? Ass-tounding!!!

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: September 07 2017 Title: Chapter 180: Epilogue

*stands and applauds thunderously*

Congratulations and excellent work on this story. Two years of regular updates is basically unheard of, and to write a story with this consistent quality for so long is a marvellous achievement. It's been a fun ride.

And nice epilogue. It wraps up Tom's Story nicely, and sets up a tantalizing teaser for Tess' Story. Not just the hint of more shrinking, but that the device is close to being usable for both shrinking and teleportation.

@Carycomic and vgiv: Yeah, it wouldve been Exile. We Titan Empire fans love to argue, which sent the review counts through the roof.



Author's Response:

*nods humbly* it has been my pleasure to share this story and my reward that it has been so well received. thanks for all your support through this journey!

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: May 23 2016 Title: Chapter 93: Afterschool

If Lina found out that Ms. Harwood is engaging in sexual relations with a student...

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: June 30 2016 Title: Chapter 104: Tess

Tom raised a hand and waved, “Giant Tess,” he greeted. Clever.


Otherwise, it looks like we're seeing people starting to rein Tom in, and put a damper on his adventuring ways. Let's see how that works out.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: February 29 2016 Title: Chapter 66: Tom and Cassidy, Aftermath

Tom is definitely your most compelling character. Even at three inches tall, he's as irrepressible as ever and holds such power over women 24 times taller than he is. This last bit with Cassidy has been a delightful transformation, from innocent and unsure what to do, to equal partner in the eroticism.

Not that I expect their affair to remain undisturbed. Tom has charmed a lot of women, and they could well be fighting over a three inch man soon. Janine, Lina, Jessica and Serena when they really understand what's going on.

 

So how long until somebody decides to figure out exactly how Tom shrunk, and try to acquire a shrinker for their own use?

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: November 03 2016 Title: Chapter 133: Just an ordinary everyday Tuesday

If I had to guess, I'd say that Lina discreetly sent the shrinking machine to her scientist friend to have it fixed.



Author's Response:

I can say such is not the case, however, there is nothing saying the technology might not have been independently replicated by Lina's friend....

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: April 21 2017 Title: Chapter 162: Blackness, Blackness, Everywhere/Test 2

The second one would tie the story up nicely, and the first one is an interesting cliff-hanger. However, I absolutely choose the first one, because I want this to continue, even after all that's happened.

Also, Tess fiddling with the machine needs to be developed and resolved. Unless that becomes a spin-off...

@TomSpeedy: Any other story ideas?



Author's Response:

Thanks Ancient Relic for offering some clarity to my too cryptic proposition. As you can see, the story will continue. Cheers

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: August 02 2017 Title: Chapter 176: Back in Friendly Territory

This feels like a good climax, so I think the best thing to do now would be to write the denouement and epilogue. Anything else can go into a spin-off.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: December 05 2016 Title: Chapter 140: When the student is ready, the teacher shall appear

hopefully this jumble of words meets your expectations.

*laughs*



Author's Response:

I shall take that as a vote for the positive, :)

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: March 09 2016 Title: Chapter 69: Cassidy, Monday

@Tom: As I'm reading it, Serena wasn't ordered to talk to Cassidy, she knows something's going and is finding out on her own initiative. And Serena is going to fuck Tom at some point. Duggernaut said so by describing Serena's attributes.



Author's Response:

Serena is a determined professional and sensing something amiss is prompting her to investigate the situation further in order to prevent being blindsided. Whether or not she gets a chance at Tom remains to be seen. (:

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: March 17 2016 Title: Chapter 72: Tess and Janine

Author's Response:

I was thinking as Tom as a little pain in the ass.

Janine didn't seem to think so.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: September 20 2016 Title: Chapter 124: Mother Child Reunion

Well then, it looks as though this story is about to start winding down. But, then, Lina's here, and no doubt she's scheming to turn this situation to her advantage.

It also looks like I was wrong earlier: it looks like Serena won't have a round with Tom.



Author's Response:

It certainly has that feel doesn't it?

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: December 15 2016 Title: Chapter 143: Where to from here

Tom is a tiny man with a big harem, and it looks like Grandpa is starting to build his own harem.



Author's Response:

Tom is a chip off the old old block. 

Summary:

A teenaged girl with a tragic and haunted past begins to experience startling visions and starts manifesting unusual abilities feeling something dark stirring deep within her...


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Crush, Entrapment, Insertion, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 45958 Read Count: 199412
[Report This] Published: August 11 2015 Updated: June 20 2016
Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: June 15 2016 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

I skipped this over for a long time. I figured that I wouldn't like something that's very violent. A few days ago, I read the first chapter on a whim, with a bit of trepidation. Good in medias res start. I got curious about how things got to that point. I read on, and I really liked it, and I can see why. It is violent, sure, but it comes out of interesting characters. I was able to enjoy that, whereas in a porn without plot story, there is no character development to do that. I also like the Sumerian elements and this story's approach to magic. It reminds of things I read about a long time ago, and haven't touched in ages. Keep going, I like this current direction, and I want to see what ultimately becomes of Anna and Veronica, and everyone around them.



Author's Response:

I very much appreciate the fact you were able to overcome the initial intro for this story to find the currents layered within it. I am often times conflicted on justification for action, why would someone do that? I wanted to show sacrifice and betrayal with damaged elements that keep you guessing. While I write this I have essentially wrapped this story up though like most others there are lingering questions. Again thank you for taking the time to read this story and share a review. :)

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: June 21 2016 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

This story seems far from over. Some questions:

1) How did Imogen survive without any warding?

2) What happens now that Rachel has discovered a shrunken man?

3) How does Anna get to the state she's in in the first chapter? She doesn't seem that sadistic yet.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the questions. I did leave this tale with a few loose threads and could certainly have continued it but chose this point as my exit. To address your questions. 1. Imogen survived with Anna’s and Veronica intervention though she was greatly damaged by Inanna. Further Imogen's resistance while far less than Anna’s assisted the others in helping defeat Inanna. 2. In my mind Rachel discovered Valen and that could a whole other story. :) 3. The Anna we see in chapter 1 is unleashed at the end of chapter 9 when drunken Jerry tries to force himself on her. At that point Inanna's influence over Anna is very strong. We see elements of that same kind of influence in Imogen affecting her dreams though the second gathering hastily preempted their preparations to perform the rite so the influence was lessened plus Inanna was still weakened from the attempt to inhabit Anna.

I hope I have adequately addressed the very valid concerns you've listed. Thanks again.

Summary:

Teenager Michael Hearst born with a silver spoon in his mouth and a sense of entitlement given his family name, offends the wrong person. Shortly after, he begins to feel ill, returning home to a house where his younger sister is coincidentally having an unsupervised sleepover with a handful of her girlfriends.

 


Categories: Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Mouth Play, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59771 Read Count: 494358
[Report This] Published: November 04 2015 Updated: June 09 2016
Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: March 29 2016 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

If they keep screwing with Michael this way, eventually he's going to completely break.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: June 06 2016 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Revealing Adelina's backstory gave this a big boost in quality. It went from good fetish flick to fine literature.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for the compliment. It was my hope to try and provide reason and purpose to the actions of adelina. 

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: May 28 2016 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Well then I like that revelation.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: March 31 2016 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Did Lucie just outscheme Mirielle? Is Mirielle now as helpless as Michael, with Lucie in control? Did Duggernaut just shrink a woman for the first time? This screws things up nicely.