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Summary:

After the success of Season One, the mysterious studio that runs the Shrinking Show commissions a new season with eight new contestants! One again, eight contestants arrive at the set of this secretive reality show, only learning upon arrival that they will be shrunk down bit by bit, taking part in various competitions along the way. When a contestant shrinks to 1/16th of their normal size they are eliminated--usually. Things are a bit more complicated this time around.

Season Two is longer, raunchier, and all-around better than Season One. As it is a new cast of contestants, it is its own story and you do not need to read Season One to understand what is going on, but it wouldn't hurt.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slave, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m, M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 250434 Read Count: 388321
[Report This] Published: July 06 2014 Updated: April 25 2015
Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 10 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Current status:

Big: Paul, Andy, Vera, Carla
Small: Dale, Jerry, Hailey, Marie

Next chapter. Yes, I counted:

Big: Andy, Vera, Carla, Marie
Small: Paul, Dale, Jerry, Hailey

And the women get the advantage in the second round. This being Giantessworld, of course you're going to go for giant women primarily, but I have reasons for wondering if that's how people would vote in real life.

I like the blocking vote. The added complication makes it more interesting.

Andy may think Hailey is a little ditzy, but her interest in astronomy suggests that she's smarter than she lets on.

And do ramp up slowly! I expect my sex scenes to be a part of a proper story, and so it's good that you're taking the time to build up.

Would Betty ever allow herself to be shrunk?



Author's Response:

It's funny, because when I was writing the Shrinking Show (both seasons) I actually needed to have a chart to keep track of who was what size at what time! Hopefully it doesn't get too confusing for the readers as things get more complicated.

I think it is likely we would have more large women than men in real life if this kind of competition played out. This is largely because the men would see each other as competition and try to shrink one another rather than the women. The women might do that to each other too, but I think the women would be scared of men larger than them so they might go for shrinking the men as well, which would tip the scales. I could be wrong though, but that's the general thought behind how it turns out in these stories.

As far as Betty, she likes to be in control. Beyond that her preferences and intentions are for now a Mystery...

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 08 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Not much action in this chapter, but we got to see the characters act and interact a fair bit, and their personalities are emerging. I'm curious to see what kind of games this story will have, and I was trying to guess what would happen to who. Dale and Hailey may break up, or wind up like Sandra and Bill. Paul seems like he'll be a domineering one, and so will get shrunk relatively quickly. Andy and Marie will love being shrunk.

I'm also curious to see what Betty and Sherri do when the contestants aren't around, whether Sherri knows about the scientists, and whether the machines actually can make you taller than your original height.



Author's Response:

I can tell you that some of these questions are going to be answered soon!

These kinds of longer-form stories I like to ramp up to things slowly, but when it gets going, it's going to be pretty wild.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 28 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

So that's what Sherri was doing the first night. With the Hailey-Jerry bit in mind, I'm pretty sure Carla is going to be the new queen. Now who uses that storm door? Can't be the scientists - they can't leave. We haven't seen Betty shrink herself yet, and Sherri doesn't know what it is. It is a mystery.



Author's Response:

Indeed, the mystery of "who tickled the toes" is now answered.

Summary:

A young woman, prosecuted for a crime she didn’t commit, is placed in the hands of her titanic best friend to learn a few lessons she didn’t earn but most certainly will never forget.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, New World Order, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Omegas
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44494 Read Count: 144183
[Report This] Published: July 12 2014 Updated: October 24 2014
Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 12 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Disorientation

Good premise. It shows a side of Ackbar's world that needs to be explored. Let's see what you do with it.



Author's Response:

I'll do my best!

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 19 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Address

This would be a scary situation to be in, and I wouldn't be at all surprised if it hurt Alexandra's opinion of Omegas. Maybe even instilled some apprehension.



Author's Response:

It's probably fair to say she's not going to be quite as comfortable around Omegas as she once was.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 07 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Kismet

This is a heartwarming chapter, and when we get back to the present, their interaction will be much more emotionally powerful.

@AdamX: Most of this site is porn, but sometimes people decide to submit fine literature here. It's the reason I haven't left entirely.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! The next chapter in particular showing their next interaction will hopefully do just that.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 25 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Surrogate

Damn, Nathaniel is a bitter one. Ending with a veiled order to commit suicide by overdose topped it off nicely.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading/reviewing!

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 02 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Monster

This is beautifully heartbreaking. I feel sorry for Nathaniel now, now that he was violently orphaned at ten years old. However, his wrath is misaimed: he's attacking the one who didn't know what was happening, and turned against it immediately.

I agree with everyone else: Alexandra showed herself to be a strong one by running away and telling Aegis.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! I had hoped this chapter would, at least, make people see Nathaniel as less single-minded villain and more just violently misguided.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 07 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Revelation

I've been waiting for this for awhile now, and now we get to see something else I've been waiting for: how they react to this news.



Author's Response:

We do indeed. That'll be what the final chapters address in full.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 12 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Surrender

Holy fuck on a stick.

You've really done it.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 20 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Pieces

Once again you've made me feel sympathy for Nathaniel. His fear is a pretty reasonable thing to have, though once again he went overboard in his actions.

Alexandra is not as broken as I thought she'd be. She's still generally functional, though if she needs to run away, then she clearly has some issues to sort out (as she should).



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing. I had hoped that readers could, if not condone Nathaniel's actions, see where he's coming from. Lexi's in a state now where she just needs plenty of time to be alone.

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[Report This] Published: January 01 1970 Updated: January 01 1970
Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 09 2014 Title: None

Instead of starting each section with (Location), describe the location. It looks unfinished, like a placeholder.

You succeeded in moving the plot forward, though. Much conflict can come out of the conversation at the end.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 17 2014 Title: None

This has the potential to become a great story. Harvey's abuse set things up nicely for the emotional payoff at the end, when Anna got him arrested. Now Linda's in Harvey's old spot, as a puppet of Anna, I'm guessing.

Summary:

Starting near the end of Act 1, Act 2.5 tells the story of Gabriella and Alice as they come to question their loyalities to the Society. The Swords' corruption is thrust into their faces and their long suspicions are proven true. But with one of them crippled in a way neither could ever imagine, and with a revelation that casts suspicion on everyone, can they survive only by trusting themselves?

 

Note: Read Act 2 first as spoilers await otherwise.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Giantess, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play, New World Order, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: After Shrink High
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65752 Read Count: 63226
[Report This] Published: March 16 2015 Updated: November 25 2015
Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: March 17 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Past, Betrayal

First Julia comes back, and now this. It's a good time for me. Now let's see what happens to Gabby, and Alice too, it seems.



Author's Response:

I need to read that, but just don't have the time...

 

Also a bit of spoliers but Gabby winds up with Sanders and the rest while Alice does a big damn hero moment on Aviel.

Summary: Mark was walking home from work one day when he found a joke shop. After buying his wife Sarah some gifts, Mark was going to learn how greatful she could be the hard way.
Categories: Breast Enlargement, Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8857 Read Count: 46981
[Report This] Published: April 28 2015 Updated: May 01 2015
Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: April 30 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Possible Ending 3

@Nostory: A 44 foot Sarah would explain the Giant tag.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: May 01 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Possible Ending 4

It's been a fun read, and it's good to hear that this might continue. Here's my ideas:

Possible Ending 1: What happens when the three of them try on the panties, and what becomes of Mark?

Possible Ending 2: What does Sarah do with Mark, and what ultimately happens to him? Putting him in her panties while she walks around would be nice.

Possible Ending 3: What does Kacey do with Mark and Sarah, and what ultimately happens to the three?

Possible Ending 4: What do the three do to Mark and Sarah? And to each other?

Possible Ending 5: Make Sarah even taller than before, 44 or 88 feet tall.

Plus everything you've come up with.

And in all of them, show us what ultimately happens to everyone involved, and how reality has been altered.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: April 29 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Possible Ending 1

I like this. It's fun, erotic and gentle, and this chapter is more of a beginning than an end. With Mark shrunk and two more women involved, there is definitely somewhere for this story to go.

Summary:

A supposedly easy burglarly into a high end estate yields much more than pilfered loot


Categories: Entrapment, Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 83444 Read Count: 243395
[Report This] Published: May 09 2015 Updated: October 28 2015
Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: May 13 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Good story, all around. I really like the ending. Who would want to get their freedom and screw nine literal goddesses on a regular basis?

Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback. Yeah, that would be a tough gig!

Summary:

A brother, haunted by the years of shrunken captivity he spent beneath his younger sister’s foot, struggles to confront his demons and, ultimately, the demented girl who stole his humanity.


Categories: Growing Woman, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: A Little Blackmail
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59576 Read Count: 305128
[Report This] Published: June 24 2015 Updated: May 13 2016
Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: May 14 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Her World

So that's the big problem they had to cover up in Shrink Act Files. Delicious way to set up the next story. The best thing about this story was your ability to write people with major issues, and the most whacked of the bunch is now huge.

“No offense, but I don’t even trust you at that size not to get into trouble. Do I look like an idiot to you?” Prophetic, though I don't think Claire expected trouble on this scale. I didn't think Carly would grow twice.

I think we've taken a step toward Techilogic's founding. The MRD may be gone, but they know how that it works and how to build another one, maybe even a smaller one. For now, they obviously need to get Carly under control, but after that, they can start founding a corporation and gathering customers and supporters, some in very high places. Unless founding Techilogic is a part of how they subdue Carly.



Author's Response:

Yep, this is what TSAF was referring to. While I won't talk about it just yet, this story indeed depicts some of the seedlings that eventually grow into Techilogic.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: March 24 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Her Sex for Science

Good to see the return of the master manipulator.



Author's Response:

Glad she's being welcomed back.