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The Shrinking Show - Season Two by Benton Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 129]
Summary:

After the success of Season One, the mysterious studio that runs the Shrinking Show commissions a new season with eight new contestants! One again, eight contestants arrive at the set of this secretive reality show, only learning upon arrival that they will be shrunk down bit by bit, taking part in various competitions along the way. When a contestant shrinks to 1/16th of their normal size they are eliminated--usually. Things are a bit more complicated this time around.

Season Two is longer, raunchier, and all-around better than Season One. As it is a new cast of contestants, it is its own story and you do not need to read Season One to understand what is going on, but it wouldn't hurt.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slave, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m, M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 250434 Read Count: 270194
[Report This] Published: July 06 2014 Updated: April 25 2015
Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 24 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Those two just screwed up royally. Nice way to introduce a complication.

@TomSpeedy: Your reviews of a fun reality show are so detailed, it makes me wonder what you'd write about a Titan story thetitanempire.com.



Author's Response:

Yep, Paul and Dale have hurt their standings with their stupid fight!

Also, I should check out those Titan stories--if they are as popular as they seem, they must be good. I kind of wondered where they went, and now I know.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: September 01 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Well, I didn't expect anyone to dominate Sherri like that, but Carla did. That was fun to read.



Author's Response:

Woot!

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: September 01 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Well that's a change in relationships. Good thing, too: it keeps things interesting. This story is definitely a big improvement over Season 1.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I think so too.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 07 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Welcome back. The last one was good, so I expect great things out of this story.

My guess is that Sherri is the four inch person running around. What she was up to, I have no idea.

I've noticed some trends: Bill and Paul are both ex-Navy. Dale and Dave seem similar in some ways, though not identical. Both stories have a quiet, distant woman (Sandra and Carla).

When you say written from 2006-2008, do you mean you spent 2-3 years writing this?



Author's Response:

There are a couple similarities between the characters of the two seasons, but I tried to make sure the characters weren't mere repeats of Season One characters. And I when I said I wrote it from 2006 to 2008, it would be more accurate to say that I wrote it over the course of two years rather than took two years to write it. I started the story in October 2006 and wrote about the first 80 pages over a couple weeks, then I put it aside, picking it up every few months or so to add more, and I finished it with a bit of a final thrust in July 2008.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 07 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Everyone in the compound is so nice now. They all get along very well, and Sherri has gone from Betty Lite when Tom arrived, to a very considerate girlfriend.

Then we have Paul and Carla, who are just trying to survive Betty, and Dale, who is now a victim of both rape and domestic violence. I feel sorry for him. Let's see what they're like.



Author's Response:

Yes, we'll be visiting the "naughty" ones next!

Omega: Inheritance by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 176]
Summary:

A young woman, prosecuted for a crime she didn’t commit, is placed in the hands of her titanic best friend to learn a few lessons she didn’t earn but most certainly will never forget.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, New World Order, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Omegas
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44494 Read Count: 85986
[Report This] Published: July 12 2014 Updated: October 24 2014
Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 20 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Pieces

Once again you've made me feel sympathy for Nathaniel. His fear is a pretty reasonable thing to have, though once again he went overboard in his actions.

Alexandra is not as broken as I thought she'd be. She's still generally functional, though if she needs to run away, then she clearly has some issues to sort out (as she should).



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing. I had hoped that readers could, if not condone Nathaniel's actions, see where he's coming from. Lexi's in a state now where she just needs plenty of time to be alone.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 19 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Address

This would be a scary situation to be in, and I wouldn't be at all surprised if it hurt Alexandra's opinion of Omegas. Maybe even instilled some apprehension.



Author's Response:

It's probably fair to say she's not going to be quite as comfortable around Omegas as she once was.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 02 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Monster

This is beautifully heartbreaking. I feel sorry for Nathaniel now, now that he was violently orphaned at ten years old. However, his wrath is misaimed: he's attacking the one who didn't know what was happening, and turned against it immediately.

I agree with everyone else: Alexandra showed herself to be a strong one by running away and telling Aegis.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! I had hoped this chapter would, at least, make people see Nathaniel as less single-minded villain and more just violently misguided.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 12 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Surrender

Holy fuck on a stick.

You've really done it.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 07 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Kismet

This is a heartwarming chapter, and when we get back to the present, their interaction will be much more emotionally powerful.

@AdamX: Most of this site is porn, but sometimes people decide to submit fine literature here. It's the reason I haven't left entirely.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! The next chapter in particular showing their next interaction will hopefully do just that.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 12 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Disorientation

Good premise. It shows a side of Ackbar's world that needs to be explored. Let's see what you do with it.



Author's Response:

I'll do my best!

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 25 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Surrogate

Damn, Nathaniel is a bitter one. Ending with a veiled order to commit suicide by overdose topped it off nicely.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading/reviewing!

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 07 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Revelation

I've been waiting for this for awhile now, and now we get to see something else I've been waiting for: how they react to this news.



Author's Response:

We do indeed. That'll be what the final chapters address in full.

Incorporated by vgiv Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 115]
Summary:

Through a hopeful series of events, a young woman finds her life changing drastically, from the bottom of the corporate ladder, to the top. Her new found status is a form of happiness to her, yet it begins wearing away at her loved ones, and attracts unwelcome attention.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Humiliation, Young Adult 20-29, Couples , Footwear, Gentle, Mouth Play, New World Order, Sci Fi / Fantasy, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Intersizable Universe
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57182 Read Count: 137564
[Report This] Published: August 17 2014 Updated: July 17 2015
Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 09 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Like Trying to Court a Goddess

Instead of starting each section with (Location), describe the location. It looks unfinished, like a placeholder.

You succeeded in moving the plot forward, though. Much conflict can come out of the conversation at the end.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 17 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

This has the potential to become a great story. Harvey's abuse set things up nicely for the emotional payoff at the end, when Anna got him arrested. Now Linda's in Harvey's old spot, as a puppet of Anna, I'm guessing.

After Shrink High Act 2.5: Comrades before Loyality by Zanderas Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

Starting near the end of Act 1, Act 2.5 tells the story of Gabriella and Alice as they come to question their loyalities to the Society. The Swords' corruption is thrust into their faces and their long suspicions are proven true. But with one of them crippled in a way neither could ever imagine, and with a revelation that casts suspicion on everyone, can they survive only by trusting themselves?

 

Note: Read Act 2 first as spoilers await otherwise.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Giantess, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play, New World Order, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: After Shrink High
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65752 Read Count: 33972
[Report This] Published: March 16 2015 Updated: November 25 2015
Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: March 17 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Past, Betrayal

First Julia comes back, and now this. It's a good time for me. Now let's see what happens to Gabby, and Alice too, it seems.



Author's Response:

I need to read that, but just don't have the time...

 

Also a bit of spoliers but Gabby winds up with Sanders and the rest while Alice does a big damn hero moment on Aviel.

Mark and Sarah by lancealot501 Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary: Mark was walking home from work one day when he found a joke shop. After buying his wife Sarah some gifts, Mark was going to learn how greatful she could be the hard way.
Categories: Breast Enlargement, Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8857 Read Count: 31812
[Report This] Published: April 28 2015 Updated: May 01 2015
Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: April 29 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Possible Ending 1

I like this. It's fun, erotic and gentle, and this chapter is more of a beginning than an end. With Mark shrunk and two more women involved, there is definitely somewhere for this story to go.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: April 30 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Possible Ending 3

@Nostory: A 44 foot Sarah would explain the Giant tag.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: May 01 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Possible Ending 4

It's been a fun read, and it's good to hear that this might continue. Here's my ideas:

Possible Ending 1: What happens when the three of them try on the panties, and what becomes of Mark?

Possible Ending 2: What does Sarah do with Mark, and what ultimately happens to him? Putting him in her panties while she walks around would be nice.

Possible Ending 3: What does Kacey do with Mark and Sarah, and what ultimately happens to the three?

Possible Ending 4: What do the three do to Mark and Sarah? And to each other?

Possible Ending 5: Make Sarah even taller than before, 44 or 88 feet tall.

Plus everything you've come up with.

And in all of them, show us what ultimately happens to everyone involved, and how reality has been altered.

Case Not Closed by One Society Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary: A witty detective from Miami can't seem to grasp what has been going on in the city. Day after day, men and women have gone missing with very limited evidence to understand why. As he struggles to unfold the mystery, more and more men and women suffer at the hands of someone mad. Follow several stories of how the men and women disappear and the adversity of a man and a team of officers trying to solve it.
Categories: Insertion, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Adventure, Body Exploration, Crush, Entrapment, Footwear, Humiliation, Odor, Vore, Sci Fi / Fantasy, Gentle, Unaware, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5109 Read Count: 17535
[Report This] Published: May 03 2015 Updated: June 16 2015
Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed
Date: May 03 2015 Title: Chapter 1: The Case

This is interesting. I want to see where it goes.



Author's Response: Thank you for expressing interest.

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