Wham! Tom comes back, and something happens that I did not expect.

@TomSpeedy: It's just that site. For other stories I like, check out my favourites, and use the Wayback Machine to find Carrie's Science Project.

Paul is going to be a changed man after this, I bet.

And I don't think Andy will want to grow after this. I can see him volunteering to be Carla's pet permanently.

As for the lack of reviewers, everything you mentioned is right, but I'd like to add one more thing: there's no moral dilemmas or philosophical and social issues to debate in this story. That's how The Titan Empire series got over 3000 reviews (Exile alone broke 1000) - a few people wrote multiple reviews per chapter arguing about the issues the stories present.

Holy fuck on a stick.

You've really done it.

This is beautifully heartbreaking. I feel sorry for Nathaniel now, now that he was violently orphaned at ten years old. However, his wrath is misaimed: he's attacking the one who didn't know what was happening, and turned against it immediately.

I agree with everyone else: Alexandra showed herself to be a strong one by running away and telling Aegis.

This would be a scary situation to be in, and I wouldn't be at all surprised if it hurt Alexandra's opinion of Omegas. Maybe even instilled some apprehension.

Damn, Nathaniel is a bitter one. Ending with a veiled order to commit suicide by overdose topped it off nicely.

Instead of starting each section with (Location), describe the location. It looks unfinished, like a placeholder.

You succeeded in moving the plot forward, though. Much conflict can come out of the conversation at the end.

@Nostory: A 44 foot Sarah would explain the Giant tag.

I like this. It's fun, erotic and gentle, and this chapter is more of a beginning than an end. With Mark shrunk and two more women involved, there is definitely somewhere for this story to go.

So that's the big problem they had to cover up in Shrink Act Files. Delicious way to set up the next story. The best thing about this story was your ability to write people with major issues, and the most whacked of the bunch is now huge.

“No offense, but I don’t even trust you at that size not to get into trouble. Do I look like an idiot to you?” Prophetic, though I don't think Claire expected trouble on this scale. I didn't think Carly would grow twice.

I think we've taken a step toward Techilogic's founding. The MRD may be gone, but they know how that it works and how to build another one, maybe even a smaller one. For now, they obviously need to get Carly under control, but after that, they can start founding a corporation and gathering customers and supporters, some in very high places. Unless founding Techilogic is a part of how they subdue Carly.