Reviewer: Garuru Signed
Date: November 19 2019
Title: Chapter 1: Introduction.
I love this story. And it was a great chapter. Love when there's interaction between little girls and shrinkies, and althought I not exactly a fan of vore, prefering a gentler, if slighty dominant sexual interaction, your stories made it interesting despite not all of them being whithing my taste.
Well, here are some ideas I would like to see for future chapters, know that you will be playing Sword/shield (hope you anjoy it), but still, can't wait to see more of them:
A continuation of the Hex Maniac one: Love the charater, and the hide was simply the best.
Lana's sisters: They have been mentioned a lot, there's gotta be a chapter of them "playing"
Lillie story: A continuation of the lusamine/lillie one, with Lillie now being more willing participant, while still trying to be on the gentler side
Lana: She playing with some little ptes she keeps from her sisters.
Preschooler: More of this, maybe having some naughty play, ending with them "breaking" her toy.
Anyway, no matter what you decide to make, hope to see more of your work.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you were able to enjoy the chapter despite the vore aspect not being to your liking.
I'd love to play more SwSh right now, but with the risk of it bricking my Switch Lite (which I bought specifically to play SwSh) I'm holding off until the matter at least gets addressed.
For the story ideas, in order:
FW did leave a 'to be continued' at the end of the chapter, so maybe we'll get to see one. (Lowkey, I hope so sign HM is my favorite generic trainer class)
Lana's sisters would make for a good chapter likely
Again, I'll leave any potential Lillie sequels to FW
As one of my more favorite Alola girls, Lana is a temping subject for a chapter
While I didn't initially think I'd write another chapter with the Preschooler, I wasn't expecting it to be so popular! While I might no write another with the Gen VII Preschooler, Gen V, VI and Pokémon Masters all have cute little playful giantesses waiting for some shrunken men to play with :)