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[Report This] Published: January 01 1970 Updated: January 01 1970
Reviewer: William Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 14 2013 Title: None

I won't lie.  I have read this story all the way to this point, I even went back 2 diffrent times to read it again while waiting for the new chapter.  This chapter though is just awesome.  Tabatha is finally finding out how it feels to be in the same position her victims have been in.  Throughout the story she has gradually changed into a better person, but I believe once this little problem is dealt with, she will be even nicer.


The characters in this story (like all the others of yours I have seen) are memorable and have character that many giantess stories these days seem to lack.  This is one story that when I read, I can wait a week for another chapter because I can rest assured it will be a great one.  So keep up the good work UHF, I am proud to give you my first review and hope you continue to write. ♥



Author's Response: I appreciate the compliments. It means a lot. I definitely plan to continue my writing, and have many more stories in the works. Glad to hear you enjoy reading Double Trouble as much as I enjoy writing it.

Reviewer: William Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 21 2013 Title: None

I think that Tabby will be going through both Physical and Emotional torture for the entirety of these next few scenes..I kind of have an idea what will be the ultimate payback.  Hopefully once this is over, Anna and Samantha can forgive her.  Let us see how things go ;p



Author's Response: Yes, Anna and Samantha, now you're starting to see the picture. ;)

Reviewer: William Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 23 2013 Title: None

I don't mean to brag, but I so called this. 8)

 

Great work as usual.  Did you know I searched for this in the recently added all october for the update?

 

I fear I have an addiction ;-;



Author's Response: I've got what you need, right here. Glad Samantha's little crush isn't a total shock. I tried to plant a few tiny seeds to prepare for this. However, Anna is with Ted now. What hope is there for Samantha?

Reviewer: William Signed
Date: October 28 2013 Title: None

Oh I think we might see a..what would you call it? A..change?  In Samantha's behavior.  

In the forecast I think we have some delightful shinanigans coming up.  Could be Samantha transforming into one of Anna's shoes or something, could be her taking a more..direct approach.

I'm afraid my  brain doesn't have the answer yet at this time..my curiosity has peeked however, so I expect it will be shocking!

 



Author's Response: Yes, there will definitely be some fun... events. And there are still more new characters to meet. Hope to keep you guessing.

Toni the warlock. by lazyb Rated: R starstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

Ryan is taking over his father's business.  And thinks he can just kick out all of the older employees.  Untis Toni changes his mind...


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Middle Age (50+), Entrapment, Gentle, Giant, Humiliation, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: M/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1404 Read Count: 10606
[Report This] Published: September 15 2013 Updated: September 15 2013
Reviewer: William Signed starstarstarstar
Date: September 15 2013 Title: Chapter 1: The walking paper.

I really like Male on Male interaction, despite being straight myself.  I know you will be getting a ton of reviews telling you to add women into it, but I would keep it they way you are going.  Its hard to find M/m stories these days.

 

Anyways, I read the first two chapters and I can say I really enjoy it.  When making stories the two big things it needs is a good setting and a good background story to go with it.  I would suggest spacing the dialouge though, you did good with the paragraphing but when I try to read what they are saying at times, my eyes have a hard time looking for who says what.

 

All in All I give it a solid 8 <3  Keep it up.



Author's Response:

I'll change it.  Thanks alot!  Hugs from Curtis

Summary:

My wife and I go to visit my parents for the weekend when an old friend stops by.

 


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Couples , Unaware, Incest, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2356 Read Count: 31889
[Report This] Published: September 17 2013 Updated: September 17 2013
Reviewer: William Signed starstar
Date: September 17 2013 Title: Chapter 1: A weekend at my Parents

Well.. I think the idea is great. Don't get me wrong.  Its just this story here feels a little..rushed.  I felt like it was happening so fast I couldn't really get into it.

 

I know you're not trying to make a complicated story, but sometimes a little detail would really help make the setting seem more realistic.