Oh hell no. I don't mind how much physical trauma you can put him through, but his own sister fucking with his love life is crossing one line too many. I don't know if this was your intention, but this chapter left me absolutely fuming. Getting cockblocked by your own sister during such a time like this is not okay. I'm not having a good time here. It was not poorly written,  but I truly hated this chapter. I am not looking forward to what's to come. What I am looking forward to, however,  is seeing swift justice bear down upon Maggie. Preferably in the form of several blows to the babymaker.

Gosh, neither of them are getting away with this lightly, are they? This whole chapter just lights up signals for a harsh punishment. 

Nonconsentual mouthplay isnt very high on my list of favorite interactions,  but you've done it very well. 

Maggie's raw sadism makes my stomach churn like no other character, so I wouldn't mind her getting the short end of the deal this time. Really, I wouldn't mind at all.

For better or worse, I'm looking forward to a change in character. I'm not sure if my weak heart can take much more of Scott's suffering.

Gotta agree with riczar once again on this chapter, Scott's anticipated talk with Judy ended up underwhelming and somewhat disappointing to me. Seeing as it was hyped pretty hard with his tying loose ends with Ella and enlightenment of his mother's true evils, I figured a much bigger showdown would occur.

Instead, he get beat down pretty quickly without much of a fight. Is he really just going to end up as the family pet?

I'm fairly confident that Judy's master plan won't come to bear fruit as evidenced by the stories down the timeline, but the lack of justice on Scott's end makes this story kind of inconclusive.

Hopefully the final chapter will bring some closure, at least for this story. 

Or maybe it'll end with Judy reigning victorious, taking the win this time around. Maybe Scott will get his justice someday in the future.

You sure know how to spurn a yarn.  Though I'll admit some of your plot elements can get a little silly, you work detail really well, and I enjoyed it a lot.

I realize you're pretty big into anal vore, but if you're delivering requests, I'll bite. How about something with the always unappreciated handplay aspect? Preferably without mutilation.

Good golly, your sense of detail and second person point of view has made my dick touch the ceiling. I look forward to where this goes, have you planned far with it? How many chapters do you think this'll go?

A small problem I'm having so far is how much you're pushing the "experience no else knows" thing going on. It gives me the  feeling that it's being rubbed in my face a bit. It might be just jealously on my part, but repeating it sort of grates on me.

My heart is absolutely racing, and you paused it so abruptly! I have to agree with NightEye here, Lauren can simply threaten to report all of this, can't she? Her mom's already broken the little guy's arm, she can file that for aggresion to Aegis. Then again, I don't think Britney's in the right state of mind to heed such warnings. 

Gotta hand it to you for making Ian stand up for himself. He's got a calm disposition for this kind of situation, and I like that, knowing that kicking and screaming won't get you anywhere.

I've forgotten to ask, how long do you think this one'll go? Planning for a happy ending on Christmas? Also, I've been happily awaiting the conclusion to Watch Over, is its ending coming up next?

Finally, I'm curious as to how you can consistently update and juggle three stories at once. Do you plan far far ahead, or do the stories simply write themselves?

Nice job at always.

Neat little yarn you've spun here. 

Though it turned out to be more or less a simple power trip in the end, bullying a tiny as a schoolyard crush is oddly cute. 

In any case, it's nice to know Julia will be continuing, is there anything else you're rolling off the assembly line any time soon?

Really loving this story so far, I hope Lucy doesn't bite off more than she can chew.

In any case, was the wink by Neil in the second last paragraph an impulse thing, or is Lucy actually able to tell that he did it by sensing the impact of the sound waves from his eyelids slapping against each other?

I don't know much about blindness, but I'm fairly certain one can't see winks.

Neat chapter though, I love their interactions with each other.

@HectorVanDyne

Has she? I'm sorry, my memory must be a little fuzzy. I had always thought she had been quite physically abusive yes, but never to the point of near-death.

If she's fully prepared to wreak havoc upon the land, then all the better, huh?

Wow, reading this chapter sent shudders down my spine. Something about the way you wrote Jack's encounter had a very eery tone to it, whether intentional or not. Especially when knee socks are usually charming to me. I'm glad it got a little warmer near the end though.

You've done a swell job in capturing how Carly's corruption lingers in Jack, even after it's been so long since his 'freedom'. I'm still rooting for him and hoping for a happy ending after all he's been though.

Great job as always.