Really a nice story, but..you forgot to add vore and insertion to the categories.

Hey thats really a nice story, very funny, hm..I actually would like to read more about the boys night in Lauren´s crack XD

didnt started to read yet..for some reason the textsize increase/decrease feature doesnt work at this story. Did you write the story text in the comment field or such?

Looks like its a lifetimejob for Samantha to clean up the bad karma of her sister XD

Right in the first paragraph there are alot ..wasted possibilites to improve the story. Like how he aproached her with his likes..and her reaction in more details. And "we went to bed both happy" six words..which could be a whole chapter in a nice described scene what they do in bed :) Thats what i want to read when i open a story here..so why do you shortcut it with six words? XD

But i am happy another other decided to start writting, keep going :)

Wow only two chapters and it really moved my heart, amazing. You really do know how to write, UHF.

Wow i totally love this story, its by far the story with the most butt-crush parts i ever found in the internet since..ever. And they are all very well written. The best one of course is done by Vanessa, god damn how hot :) But the shorter ones with Clara arent that bad either :)

I do hope this story isnt by far at an end yet and will continue. Perhaps even a return of Vanessa..or another hot girl visiting Clara and doing some unaware buttcrush.

Only found one mistake that really matters

“Cool, now I can understand them IN MY STOMACH!”  Jasmine said as she tossed them down her throat.

Angelica swallowed them, not Jasime, right? :)

Storywise the ending was good with explaining the background about Arell´s motivations and all, but i wished there would have been some more..."private interactions" between Arell and Bradley some kind of more development in their relationship to each other.

At the beginning of the story i really thought that that is the core of the story and the conquering of earth is only kind of the reason why Arell showed up in the first place. But then Bradley was more time on the run than he actually spend on Arells ship.

That was a bit dissapointing to be honest.

I didnt expect them to make love lol but..well if Arell even a single time would kind of get out of her suit...well you know..

But perhaps ..at one day..Bradly is beamed up again while he watches up to the stars..short after he heard "hello my little earthy" in his head XD

And as a sidenote, i missed one arguement in the final conversation between Arell and Bradley. Human on earth my be less civilized then Arell´s people, but the agedifference of the both civilizations was never mentioned. I mean how long, how many probably million years do Arells people already live, how much time did they have since they lived in caves clothed in furry loincloths? I hardly can believe their never where violant in their evolution. They seemed to grew out of it, got a better understanding for life, learned to threasure it and all. But judging humans on earth for didnt learn that, after perhaps less than 1% of civilization age compared to Arells people is kind of unlogical. Its like hunting down gorrials in the jungle coz they didnt invent the wheel yet..after all gorrials are kind of pre-human in evolution. (perhaps they are not really but it fits to the example^^)

Hm i dont know what to say others than, i am confused by all those paragraphs. They may be an important part of the story concept in general but for me they are simply a trigger to stop reading, sorry.

I was really surprised by this after all those increadible stories you have posted here, like "changes happen", "tutoring" or Soroity Prank" which puts you on a very high spot in the meaning of writing skill here on this website.