Penname: Pico [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: June 22 2013
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I'm a male in his thirties. I've had GTS fantasies ever since I was a little kid. They were not sexual back then since I didn't even knew what sex was. It all started after watching "Attack of the 50ft woman", probably the most famous GTS motion picture. It made a big impression on me, especially the scene where she reaches down and grabs her boyfriend out of the building. I had many dreams about that afterward. In my adolescence I starting to fantasize about gentle body exploration and as a young adult begon to ponder what a sexual encounter might be like.


I also love to write. I know I will never be a great writer, and also keep in mind that when you read something of mine that English isn't my first language. So I appreciate any help I can help with this to improve my grasp on the English language.


Mostly I prefer gentle giantess stories. But I plan to offer a large variety in the different stories I write, as far as my creativity allows.


 


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Nova Force by Ginbug Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

In the future, a Marine is paired with a giantess neko as an unlikely team. They travel through the universe in search of creatures in need..what was supposed to be a quiet 3 month wait for the Marine will soon turn into a conflict beyond their wildest dreams.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 114268 Read Count: 370573
[Report This] Published: January 10 2011 Updated: July 29 2011
Reviewer: Pico Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 23 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I just joined GW yesterday after a long time lurking so I can finally give reviews to the great stories I've read so far.

Without a doubt, Nova Force is my favourite story on this site. It really appeals to me being into sci-fi as well. The universe you created is very interesting, how Neco's an humans treat each other as equal species, which is the main element where you can create these wonderful interactions and relationships. Even covering working relationships, diplomatic and military connections, casual friendships and of course the romances. Bravo. This is a fantastic for my mind to wander around in and follow the escapades and hearthships of your characters.

As almost anyone I hate to give negative aspects in my review, but I have a few... let me get these out of the way quick before I start my raving about what I do like very much about Nova Force.

- The plot leaves some things unexplained. (Another reviewer pointed this out, sorry to repeat this.) It is understandable that Kikata and Richard are just a single Nova Guard team in a vast military alliance and only the top military officers get the handle all intelligence concerning the motivations of The New Order. Maybe there could have been just a chapter or a couple of paragraphs that is completely narrative in explaining what is going on in the universe outside of the main characters adventures.

- There seems to be an overuse of the verb "shrugging". :) A lot of times the characters are presented with an akward or shocking situation... and they shrug it of and go on avoiding conflict to express their honest opinion about the situation. This I found sometimes weird and the story seemed to be propelled too fast into the next situation and scenes. (Okay, I'm nitpicking here but I only do so because I think this story is very good and must go to anal about my critique.)

- I am not into breast expansion. This is a matter of personal taste and of course no fault of yours. Those where the only patches in this story that where speedbumps for me as the entire story I read through like I was in a rocket car on a salt lake. ;)

- Of course we all, the readers, were anticipating the whole story when Kikata and Richard finally get togheter. It was nice that confessed their love for each other while Richard was in her helmet. Very romantic. But to have them rush to having intercourse in the bathroom of the Nova Guard ship immediately after the rescue... I don't know... I didn't like it. Don't get me wrong, I'm into this fetisch and especially insertion with consent, but to me Kikata and Richard are more than that. They are a great couple I care much about as a fan of this story. And they are about friendship and love. The fact that they are togheter is more important to me than the urgent need to have them consume their relationship. "All you need is love." :D :p (Of course the sexual scene with Kira in this story was awesome... but to the contrast: that was lust, not love.)

Okay, with this out of the way... now on to the amazing elements I cherish in your story.

I may have strange criteria for this qualifying as my favourite story here on GW.

I read this a couple of weeks ago before I was a member. I read it all the way through back to back. It was a long read but I enjoyed every paragraph of it and I regretted the story had to come to an end eventually.

There are two scenes of this story that for some reason I kept replaying in my mind after I read it (the whole story that is). Which means you did a really great job as a writer captivating me into the story. These are the scenes:

- After Kikata breaks up with her fiancee and goes to pick up Richard from Kira's appartment when she walks out with him. She is still pissed off and a little sad about her break up. She asks sarcasticly: "How was your girlfriend?" And Richard just sat their in her palm confused and simply states: "she broke up with me." I don't imagine he was sad or hearth broke at all, since Kira was just a casual sex partner to him, but I can see him being dumbfounded processing what just happened. While it was not a dramatic experience for him... and Kikata who is carrying him had emotions of her break up running through her mind which was probably very devastating for her. I don't know why this scene keeps replaying in my mind. It's not even an important scene. But it was a point where the characters really came to life for me. I could empathize with both Kikata and Richard and I can vividly play that scene in my mind. 

- The other scene that is almost imprinted in my mind is after Richard left and is in the gym on a treadmill. This scene is so well written by you. Very emotional and a bit melancholic. Kira kept talking to Kikata, and she tries to ignore her by looking over to Privya and Fisc. Great how that ended up in making up her mind for going after Richard. :) This a very beautiful moment to me, how Kikata says "I'm not letting go." Yeah, I'm a sucker for a love story.

And of course the story is full with great scenes perfectly written down. The goodbye between Kikata and Richard, the action scenes,....

Thank you for sharing this story.

Now I am waiting for you to finish Nova Force 2. :)

Cheers, and keep up the good work. 

(sorry for the long review, it's because I am really infatuated by Nova Force that I want to put my opinions forward. Also english isn't my first language as you would probably deduced by now, so if I don't make sense it's because of the language barrier. Or because I'm a bit out of my mind. Probably a bit of both. ;) )

Pariah by little mikey Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 103]
Summary:

Nick Avery -- tall, handsome, and well-liked-- is paired with a short, unpopular know-it-all named Michelle for a chemistry project.  The experiment goes awry; Nick begins to shrink as Michelle grows taller and more beautiful.  But he soon learns that Michelle had actually planned this all along, and he now must come to terms with his new position at the bottom rung of the social ladder.  Only Michelle can help him now, but she is determined to make the most of her newfound power over her once-mighty lab partner.


Categories: Growing Woman, Humiliation, Slave, Slow Size Change, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 206702 Read Count: 406479
[Report This] Published: May 14 2012 Updated: October 15 2013
Reviewer: Pico Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 04 2013 Title: Chapter 18: After Dinner

Loving the continuation of this story.

The kiss was an awesome start... 

... to somethinge more??? :)

And a half hour is quite long... I didn't know he had it in him. (Pun intended.)



Author's Response:

Yeah, that half hour really took a lot out of him. (another pun!)

Summary:

The year is 2,300 and life for the male species has evolved them to the point that they're now the "weaker sex".


Hey! Come check out our discord!

https://discord.gg/2H8BRd8rmN


Categories: Adventure, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Maternal, Mouth Play, New World Order, Slave, Slow Size Change, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14396 Read Count: 158527
[Report This] Published: July 22 2012 Updated: September 22 2015
Reviewer: Pico Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 09 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Just in Time for Lunch.

Keep those chapters coming, I love how this story is unfolding.

This was rather a short chapter. Luckily for Gabriel he was released from Dorci very soon. I thought you were gonna get her get away with kidnapping him. And that Emily had to go on a rescue mission.

If Dorci is known for kidnapping several boys and men... why isn't she in juvy? It makes me wonder what her previous exploits were.

I like the relationship between Gabriel and Emily. I commented on GTScity that it was borderline incest in the beginning of the story.

But now Emily has come to maturity I guess. She really loves her brother... like a brother. I hope there won't be any improper behavior between the two of them. (But you are free to do as you like.) It would be nice to have a gentle GTS story, where the GTS is the sister.

Storing her brother between her boobs... well... okay, guess that's acceptable. More practical I guess. :D



Author's Response:

Well, thank you for the well thought out, and king review. There will be a few moer...sexual moments between Gabriel, and Emily, but the incidents will be more accidental than on perpous on either parties.

Summary: Not _everything_ is big in Texas.
Categories: Giantess, Entrapment, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Instant Size Change, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6862 Read Count: 51956
[Report This] Published: October 12 2012 Updated: February 14 2013
Reviewer: Pico Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 20 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Just awesome. Funny and a very pleasant pace to read too.

Hehe, I am retroactively reviewing this, since I read this a while ago before I had an account here. So I don't know if I remember anything specific to comment on.

I do remember that this is on of the most fun stories on here I read.



Author's Response: Thank you, Pico. And a five-star review is always better late than never. :-)

Summary:

A slow shrinking story, about a man who has nothing left to lose.


Categories: Violent, Couples , Entrapment, Mouth Play, Slow Size Change, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Gentle, Insertion, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 106905 Read Count: 336422
[Report This] Published: January 25 2013 Updated: August 31 2013
Reviewer: Pico Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 26 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Ch. 40 Attack of the 50 ft. Beach Babe's

I had a lot of fun reading this story.

Although this sequence of events: the almost continuous torture and sexual abuse is not really what I am looking for... I must admit this actually was sort of a guilty pleasure for me.

You introduced some nice plot twists, although sometimes a bit confusing. And you kept it very fresh by introducing different characters in little side events. While the main storyline is captivating. I like the protagonist, Tom. He is (was) a hard working carpenter, a really nice guy. I really empathise with him, and what he has to endure.

I also find it very great that you spared Hailey.

Sorry that I can't go indepth on this story. This review is retroactive. I read this many weeks ago before I was a member on this site. But when I started reading I read from chapter 1 to 40 without a break (except for when real life called me).

Great work.

The Syndrome by Sizescribe Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

A new york city bank teller experiences the misery of a decades old condition.


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Giant, Lesbians, Slow Size Change, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: The Syndrome
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17999 Read Count: 29651
[Report This] Published: April 24 2013 Updated: April 24 2013
Reviewer: Pico Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 19 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I like it. Kind of a long build up though.

The soccer match I found quite original.

The rape scene with the doctor was well written. (Also sad and disturbing, rape IRL is terrible but this is fiction.)

I must admit, I would have prefered for Cindy to swallow her alive, instead of her crushed remains.

The Dilemma by wildcatman Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 29]
Summary:

Three men crash into a deserted island and discover that it's not what it appears to be.


Categories: Violent, Giantess, Body Exploration, Entrapment
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 31891 Read Count: 77671
[Report This] Published: June 08 2013 Updated: September 08 2013
Reviewer: Pico Signed
Date: August 01 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Ch. 10 Trimming the Bush

I just read the whole story until now. Loving it.

Great overall setting, the deserted island, and good character interaction.

I love the way you depict the giantess. I don't think I ever read a story with a giantess that acts like this before. She seem so sweet and innocent, naive and immature. Her actions however are the opposite. And I love the way she talks.

On another note: I would have been a hero in this situation. I would have jumped into the vagina. Euhm.... to save my buddy Joe. Yeah, that's why! "Joe, I'm here... let me give you a boost to get out of here. Okay, are you out? Are you okay to move? Okay now crawl away from here. Good, crawl to safety. No you don't have to pull me out, save yourself. I'm staying here... as a decoy. Yeah... that's right as a decoy. Until you make it to safety. Ah, stop that, no need to thank me."

:D Keep updating this story... or else... endure my fanfiction.



Author's Response:

ROFL ! ! !   I could see that happening....  ;`)

Summary:

Home of all my chapter long stories. Each story is given a series of ratings, warnings, and tags in the chapter notes in the beginning of each story so that you know what your getting into. If a story is requested enough times it may get a sequal or its own fully fleged story.

 

 


Categories: Adventure, Crush, Feet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10526 Read Count: 29707
[Report This] Published: June 26 2013 Updated: May 27 2014
Reviewer: Pico Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 26 2013 Title: Chapter 2: The World’s Worst Giantess Story Ever

That was great. It seems that you have the same "weird" sense of humor that I have. I also wrote a spoof-kinda shrunken male story. Although very different approach then you and I don't know if I pulled it off since some people don't get it.

"for the sake of the plot I temporarily lose my ability to think rationally"

This made me laugh for about a minute.

Something similar bothers me that you didn't convey... or maybe also share my opinion on but couldn't get into this plot.

I see many stories where the reaction of the female toward the shrunken man progresses the same. They are very realistic... your average woman, warm, kind and caring... a normal human being. When first presented with a tiny man, it just takes about 10 seconds for her to drop 40 IQ points and turn into sadistic bitches driven only by animalistic urges. 

At least turn them into sadistic tormenters over a gradual process... similar to those RP-ing experiments where normal people must simulate prisoners and prison guards. (If you know what I mean by this, certain sociology experiments... even a great german movie about it "Das Experiment".)

Also... the amount of fluid a vagina can create sometimes baffles me (in certain stories). Why would women even wear textile panties if this were true? 

I also strongly agree on the foot issues. Now, I don't judge people who have a foot fetish. I'm sure I have fetishes that are deemed weird. (I am not disgusted by feet howerer, just not turned on by them either.) But that foot play is only great for the shrunken man who is into that. No issue with that point of view. But from the giantess' perspective, highly unrealistic. The majority of people are very ticklish on their feet, and could stand anything touching it, especially small lifeforms. They would giggle and by involuntary reaction violently shake the foot and crushing the shrunken person. Unless you happen to find that rare person who is not ticklish there.

 

Wow, I didn't see a lenghty comment like this coming myself. :)

Although I must say, I want to be respectful to anyone on this site, no matter what they write. And I don't come across that many stories with an unimaginative plot. (Maybe I am lucky... also I don't click anything that contains the tag "feet". LOL :D Unless it's written by UHF.)

I figure some people are not here to write great plot-driven stories, which is okay (they probably realise that themselves). I view it as vocalizing their own fantasies, mostly for their own benefit. As an outlet. 

I must admit... you have a bit of a mean streak in your parody. But I see what you were trying to achieve and you did it brilliantly and in an original way.

 

Would read again... and appearantly I will... ;) (Did you get that?)



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it Pico. I also took a look at your parody and left a review on it for you.

As for GTS story tropes I totally agree with you on the issue of sadism. I can't stand it when the giantess suddenly snaps and turns into some kind of animal.

Also about the feet thing, I seem to have forgotten the fact that people are ticklish down there. My main focus was about how the gts in many stories simply puts something in her mouth thats been on her feet which most normal people wouldn't do.

And I'm glad you enjoyed my style of humor, even if its a little blunt in its approach.

Challenged by Lucra Rated: X starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

A mentally challenged male gets a surprise visitor in his room.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1025 Read Count: 8486
[Report This] Published: July 02 2013 Updated: July 02 2013
Reviewer: Pico Signed starstarstarstar
Date: July 02 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well, that was very brutal and abrupt. Which is what you were going for and you succeeded.

It's an interesting concept, a mentally challenged giant or giantess.

There is even potential to make more stories like this. Maybe it also would be interesting from the point of view from the shrunken person in a scenario like this.

Overall, I liked this. I get what  you were going for. It's short and to the point. It's not my taste... but I can't find anything wrong with this.

Great way to making me horrified.

I would encourage you to write more stories... about whatever you like.

Summary:

The Syndrome lives on in this tale of a desperate man, who seeks sanctuary with a strange woman, hundreds of miles from home.

 

 


Categories: Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Maternal, Slow Size Change, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: The Syndrome
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23632 Read Count: 74754
[Report This] Published: July 08 2013 Updated: July 19 2013
Reviewer: Pico Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 20 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Sweet Little Lies

Really great story, I certainly enjoyed it and was pleased to read a new chapter everyday when you uploaded them.

I had my suspicion about the "special place" at first when I started reading this story. Then I checked your other stories, so yeah, then it became obvious.

I understand the comments from some people that question having this end in swallowing the shrunken people. Maybe this is personal taste, we can't all like the same things. If you as the writer like this subject a lot (I assume), then by all means only write stories that end like this. Whatever motivates you to give us a free story to read.

I'm not sure if I myself can be classified as a voraphile, or if you consider yourself one. For me it is more a morbid fascination and not something arousing. So I await your next story, and am very curious about the plot and characters that are going to be in it.

What you have in this story disregarding its conlusion is amazing character development and dynamic. I really love how you put down Samantha, she must have been so screwed up psychological by April. All three of them were great togheter. April as the cruel insane tormenter and Robert as "the new" guy experiencing this hell for the first time. I liked this aspect more than the conclusion of the story. (But again, I have no problem with the ending.)

Maybe you can explore this even more in future stories? The relationships between the characters, because you really got some talent there.

I must even admit, I would have prefered that Robert was eaten too. I am really not into crushing. This again is personal taste where there is no right or wrong.

Top class story, amazing writing style. 

Reviewer: Pico Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 15 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - All the pretty boats

I strongly agree with Thelin.

And jeez... how fast do you write... not that I'm complaining.

Reviewer: Pico Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 13 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Forces of nature

I can only give a 10 out of 10 rating. System doesn't allow me to put in a 16.8223 out of 10. Don't worry this is all scientific.

It's weird to review a story that is not finished yet, I don't know what the plot and the finale is going to be like. But up until now, chapter 1 to 6, what a start.

Most us readers (if not all) agree that your writing skill is top notch. The way you manipulate the reader, making me curious and the build up of suspense. Amazing character development, perfect pacing. It's like... well, maybe I think it is: a psychological thriller. I like psychologival thrillers... and exciting action scenes. This story delivers both weaven toghether.

The content (up til now) might not really be my cup of tea...and there are many stories like this where a girl tortures her tiny captives. But this is raising the bar.

I will definately keep following this.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your support, I am so glad that you can look passed your own niche and enjoy my writing.

Family or Fantasy by GMD Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 24]
Summary:

Can Lauren choose living out her greatest fantasy over her son?


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Mouth Play, Maternal, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5227 Read Count: 62885
[Report This] Published: July 10 2013 Updated: August 19 2013
Reviewer: Pico Signed starstarstarstar
Date: July 20 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Conflict of Interests

Another vote for gentle!

I've been thinking about it, if you make her a cruel giantess... a goddess dominating, humiliating, torturing her "slave", then it diminishes incestual aspect.

Incest is only kinky if it is with consent of the two people, otherwise it is just plain rape IMO.

Keep it focussed on a maternal gentle relationship. This doesn't mean that there can't some cruelty... in fact it would make those rare acts of cruelty all the more interesting if afterward:

"Mom... WHY WHY WHY did you do that to me?"

Make her sometimes lose her self control, and let her sane self deal with the messy situations that have occured.

I am not judging people for preferring cruel giantesses, but come on, there are already so many stories like that. And we barely have gentle giantesses.

(This also goes for foot fetsish. :D Already enough stories about.)

 

And this was a really great start to the story. Great set up.

I rate only 4 stars.

You want an extra star? CONTINUE THIS!

;) :D



Author's Response:

Continue I will. And forget 'cruel' I gotta go rewrite that. Think more...

Abusive or Playful.

not Gentle or Cruel.

Reviewer: Pico Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 04 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Adjusting

Great footplay. I found it strange that he didn't noticed her fingering herself. If he would be aware of her masturbating that might have filled his head with even more weird feelings... to know his mother was THAT sexual aroused, that he was not alone with these "wrong" feelings.

 

my vote: PLAYFUL

And maybe a suggestion: not going for the hardcore stuff right away. Body exploration of her soft stomach and breasts. (breasts still in the bra.)



Author's Response: His vision was kind of blocked by a huge toe and so was his attention. Yeah, it's hard to notice things like that when something like that distracts you.

Summary:

The story of how I become my friend's plaything and foot toy

Read and Review as you see fit 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Couples , Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9100 Read Count: 68986
[Report This] Published: July 16 2013 Updated: October 12 2015
Reviewer: Pico Signed
Date: August 03 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: From person to doll

I quite like this story so far. It is fast paced so that makes it easy to read. Although that might be a bit to be critiqued. It wouldn't hurt to drag out the dialogue and actions a bit. Let us know the characters a bit better.

And for example, a key scene so far, the "humping of the feet". I really like that scene (and this is coming from a non-foot-fetisch guy), but I feel it would have deserved more attention. That is was longer, more descriptive, more arousing to the reader.

I always try to be honest. But I would not dare to tread on your freedom as an author.

The writing is quite good, I hope to see you make more progress the more you bite your teeth into this story.

A pleasant writing style. I appreciate the funny lines of dialogue, how the characters jest with each other. Very creative.

Keep going with this, get your creativity out.



Author's Response:

Thank you, I loved your review! And yes, I try and make it a point to write longer scenes like that one, but I find myself unable to come up with words to keep things going, but I will definitely try.

The dialogue is a little unique isn't it? haha

 

Summary: The title says it all. P.S.---Now, officially, a prequel to INVASION OF THE BATON TWIRLERS FROM OUTER SPACE.
Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: M.A.C.H.O. Tales
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4042 Read Count: 41023
[Report This] Published: July 25 2013 Updated: September 09 2013
Reviewer: Pico Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 25 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very astute special agent Hughes, very astute.

Majorettes again? :D



Author's Response: What can I say? Majorettes give me a bat-on.

Summary:

Thousands of years ago a powerful and highly advanced civilization attempts to retrieve one of its most prized possessions from the surface of a planet inhabited by a race of giants.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 28165 Read Count: 49185
[Report This] Published: July 26 2013 Updated: July 22 2014
Reviewer: Pico Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 03 2013 Title: Chapter 2: The Giant Girl and Her Master

Yeah, this is a very good start. This story is seems to be really my cup of tea.

It's interesting that the humans are in the position to abuse the giants.

Writing style is very good, I don't think you need to worry about that.

I'll definately will follow this.



Author's Response:

Thanks Pico.

The humans are at a slight advantage due to their technology and long lifespans giving them the ability to be so cruel, but the giants have pure brute strength so every Atlantian who is around a giant will have to watch their backs.

Also thank you I was having doubt about the quality of my writing, particularly my grammar.

I look foward to giving you something to follow.

Reviewer: Pico Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 09 2013 Title: Chapter 3: The Walk Part 1

And already the story is moving forward. I like it.

I said it before in the last review and I must repeat... interesting to see giants as pets and the interaction.

I don't see what is so dark about this chapter. I mean, I like Nephilla so far, she is kinda cute and sweet, and I don't like seeing her assaulted. But it's actually very plausible that the giant male who isn't sentient would act that way.

I'll be waiting for more, so far I think you have and interesting set up and characters.



Author's Response:

The dark part was her getting assaulted, most people tend to not like that kind of thing (unless its happening to a tiny person). Then again considering this is Giantessworld, this chapter is considerably less dark than some of the other stories on this site.

 

Miyu by Crushedboywonder Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Miyu goes to work as a 300 foot city tour ride. Today she discovers a new side of herself.


Categories: Growing Woman, Giantess, Crush, Feet, Violent, Slave, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9198 Read Count: 31735
[Report This] Published: July 27 2013 Updated: July 27 2013
Reviewer: Pico Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 28 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Toma, Chapter 6: The New Yu

I quite enjoyed this story.

I'm not one for foot fetish, but I don't avoid such stories either. Because sometimes I come across a good one that is original. 

Like this one. Chapter 4 was amazing. Very original showing them that video, and that the debris of the house is still on the shoe with the parents. It's not the usual use of feet that is done to death.

It wasn't exactly humiliation for the two brothers, it was pure psychological terror (and physical of course). I like that you played that aspect. I was shocked what you made them go through, and I am not easily shocked anymore.

Bravo.



Author's Response:

High praise, thank you very much. 

Summary: A couple of giantesses have a small argument over who is better at being ultra violent. This naturally leads them into holding a competition to see who is the superior killing machine.
Categories: Odor, Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Crush, Feet, Violent, Destruction
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12083 Read Count: 33045
[Report This] Published: August 03 2013 Updated: August 03 2013
Reviewer: Pico Signed
Date: August 04 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Final Round and Epilogue

"Our prayers have been answered! Hear Gabriel's trumpet! Salvation is upon us!" *sniff* ... O_o "Oh in the name of all that is holy...!" *cough* *barf*

 

Good job, I enjoyed this story.