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The Jaded Soul by gtsemp Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

When a tiny man appears on the beach, Shelby's quest to help him leads her to discover new facets of herself and the people closest to her.

Categories: Breasts, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25200 Read Count: 12365

[Report This] Published: August 28 2022 Updated: August 28 2022
Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 28 2022 Title: Chapter 8: Toys

This was all very high quality, grammar and flow is smooth, conversations work, is all excellent. 


Fo a squeal.. well theres always hopeing for more tinies to be found by the two, tiny women too, exploring more ideas from the giantess and shrinking community, just their conversations of their opinions on this stuff might be interesting. More personal one, and probably said way too many times to other authors, is wedge heels. Once could be made with a little compartment to store and hide tinies in, and for giantesses that crush cities, the large surface aria allows for maximum crushing besides also making it more stable. Wedge are aperently better then most other high heels. 


You’ve got some skill and a good start, eager to see what else you can wordsmith!



Author's Response: thanks the encouragement means a lot. maybe wedges will get a mention in part 2 

Summary:

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

A small-town waitress in need of cash steps out of her
comfort zone after meeting a mysterious stranger at her place of work.


Categories: Giantess, Breasts, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Lesbians, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30907 Read Count: 24430
[Report This] Published: August 31 2022 Updated: April 12 2023
Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 16 2022 Title: Chapter 4: The Foot Shoot

Well all of this is going pretty well, and now same is coming over. I suppose the best, or even sexiest, way for her to maybe smuggle some tinies for Carrie would be some wedge heel (sandal, sued, or boots of some kind), and have a compartment in the wedge. 

Or wedges could be the next set of heels she gets, they have more stepping aria for crushing unlike the gap normal heels have between the heel and ball, have the compartment ability like I said, and they are also easier to walk in. Maybe Carrie finds over a longer time that the heels hurt just a bit much, and so Sam gets her a better pair of wedges. 


And oh what Sam and her will be doing will be interesting. Maybe some more other models get to be introduced, it can’t only be Carrie. And maybe other new studios, scenarios, or locations come latter. 

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 25 2022 Title: Chapter 6: Girls night in: part 2

Great to see you back!

And good chapter!

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 12 2023 Title: Chapter 7: Search and Destroy

Great to see this continue!

Should be easy enough to look up online how Stockholm syndrome works so she can apply it to Tim long term. 

And see how her side job finally evolved into a real job, and what new shoots she does. 

Summary:

After ending their long and tumultuous relationship, Amber agrees to meet with her mysterious ex once again. And when she receives an offer she cant refuse, she finds herself involved in a secret research project on an isolated island off the coast of New Zealand. It is there where she finds out the truth behind their love.


Categories: Giantess, Breasts, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Lesbians, Muscle, New World Order, Odor, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8910 Read Count: 3846
[Report This] Published: September 11 2022 Updated: October 05 2022
Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 11 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Hopelessly Devoted

This is a really solid start, everything fits cleanly/smoothly, and it seems there is already a whole city that will get smushed. 

Thought hopefully Amber does try and ask for a way to reverse the effect, its a least a smart thing to ask. 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Yeah, who knows how long that city is gonna last.

I'm sure Amber will try to think of something though.

Summary:

Allison has a genetic condition that causes others to shrink when they come in contact with her skin or her body fluids. With this affliction she's lived a life in isolation, terrified of how the world would react and worried about accidentally hurting those she loves. Her life changes when she accidentally shrinks her downstairs neighbor, Clark, but he's not scared of her at all... in fact, he wants to ask her out!?

A romantic story about a shy girl coming to terms with her shrinking power, and her boyfriend trying to get her out of her shell.


Categories: Breasts, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Odor, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FM/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59487 Read Count: 81791
[Report This] Published: September 16 2022 Updated: October 02 2022
Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 17 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Bumping into Each Other

Oh yeah, I remember your greentext, and quality as expected of you!

Lets see where you take this this time.  



Author's Response:

This one will have more of a structured plot than the greentexts did, and more of a conflict, but I think the spirit of what made those enjoyable will carry over.

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 18 2022 Title: Chapter 2: The First Date

So theres a conspiracy on, of course they would completely do that. 



Author's Response:

Yep they've been watching Allison from the shadows for a long time now.

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 27 2022 Title: Chapter 8: Homecoming


Well I decided to catch up, seems the ability is no contact based only, and can register extreme anger. I wonder what the range is, or if it could be even more targeted. 

Allison could get every grunt, agent, lawyer, scientists and the higher ups of this shady origination down to microscopic and only get Dr. Kendra to explain what going on at a mor manageable size. 

Seems like Allison is still going to make some people go squish for this, might make it expensive enough to make the org not try anything. Its not worth hunting someone down then they can get any of the grunts you send and got you many many years worth of scientists removed in no time. And of course it’s even harder if the board or heads just disappear, lots of power and management vacuum chaos from that. 


Lets see what happens and how much of the beans are spilled. 



Author's Response: Yeah the Lab has crossed a line where they've got to be dealt with one way or another, you don't piss off a girl with shrinking powers, particularly when those powers are getting more potent with time.

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 28 2022 Title: Chapter 9: The Brink

Well after this, she will have to try it/target inanimate objects, and if she can do the revers (obviously by trying to do the opposite with the “limb”). If that’s possible that its easy to exercise, just shrink and unshrink objects around constantly and rapidly until somehow tiered (if it can be) and just get better. 

Easy. 

Then of course theres training range but that can be don latter, having having some live cameras all over the world and trying to do it all simultaneously. 


So lets see shat the doctor has to say, and maybe their theories or at least what that know definitively about Allison’s chemical-now power.  



Author's Response:

The mental aspect of it at least is probably something that could grow with more use, and she can probably get strong enough to regrow people at will rather than waiting for it to wear off. I don't think shrinking inanimate objects is in the cards but still Allison's power has dramatically increased and is only getting stronger. Trying to shrink the whole world over camera feeds is probably beyond her, a few people though? Definitely within the realm of possibility.

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 28 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Bumping into Each Other

Not shrinking the whole world through camera feed, just practicing range through it.  

Its make complete sense to get the higher up and their goons anywhere in the world, it a mush smaller number if people. 



Author's Response: Yeah Allison can definitely get the higher ups just about anywhere, heck she could have Clark follow them and open up video chat, boom shrunk lol. She needs to work on her powers more obviously, but using cameras is obviously a possibility for her.

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 29 2022 Title: Chapter 10: Doctor Kendra's Confession

Well a thing that could help the world using powers, being on few people and it’s unlimited range, thought it will have ti be seen if it can single out or shrink based on criteria, and it could totally not. 

Get rid of every truly corrupt politician, corporate exec, evil/asshole manager, delusional zealots, etc. and just have them disappear. Since it all this at once, and some of the not completely asshole who would become completely would vanish too once the criteria are met, that would set the whole world in an improve bit if momentum. Would’t matter if those people came back, the world changed too much for the better. 

Even if its only into “not sucking”, perfection will get there eventually. 



Author's Response: I don't know if Allison would want to play Death Note like that and try to run the world, she's got a certain inclination to try to dominate others true, but cleaning up the world like that might take her out of her comfort zone. Still, I imagine she might do it in special cases, certain highly notorious people might disappear during their big speech, nobody noticing they were reduced to microscopic size for a few days.

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 30 2022 Title: Chapter 11: Peace?

And he doesn’t know she can do it remotely. Oh this will be a thing.  



Author's Response:

He knows a little, not the full story obviously or he'd maybe reconsider this whole plan.

Summary:

Galactic Marines are sent as a security detail for a soon-to-be mining operation on a distant planet, but the mission goes south.

This is the first time I ever try writing a story, I don't know how far I will take it but I'm hoping at least 10000 words, revues and advice are appreciated.

Disclaimer: this story is in its infancy and does not yet contain Gts content.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Adventure, Sci-Fi
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1392 Read Count: 670
[Report This] Published: October 01 2022 Updated: October 01 2022
Reviewer: DcZ Signed
Date: October 01 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Landing planet side

Well its a start. 



Author's Response:

Thanks! your comment just brought a smile to my face.

Summary:

Garter-Lamia are smaller versions of the normally frightening monstergirl that some keep as pets. Apple is one such tiny snake-girl, recently purchased by her new master, Darren. Apple often fantasizes about him, and wonders what things might be like between them if she was the big one...

A one shot about a tiny pet Lamia and her fantasies and schemes to shrink her master to gain the upper hand in the relationship.


Categories: Breasts, Entrapment, Fantasy, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Garter Lamia Stories
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8201 Read Count: 7478
[Report This] Published: October 14 2022 Updated: October 14 2022
Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 15 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Garter Lamia

Highly amusing. 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Level Up by Archne_Lover Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

(RPG Lit) In a world where men shrink as they go through puberty, Bill is a 16 year old boy and its about time he learned the skills to survive the world of women.


Categories: Mature (40-49), Giantess, Feet, New World Order, Teenager (13-19)
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7170 Read Count: 6100
[Report This] Published: October 22 2022 Updated: November 30 2022
Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 23 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Nightmares & Pancakes

Well it’s a start.

And there should be more attempt at LitRPG GTS or shrinking stories. 

Maybe even isekai of them.

Lots of untaped potential. 

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 01 2022 Title: Chapter 2: Learning to Climb

Great to see this continue!

Summary:

K.E.D Gaming is at the forefront of the virtual gaming world. Their revolutionary K.E.D 1 Console blew the competition away with it`s realism. Now they are looking for the next step. But this time they are not looking at "Virtual" reality. Imagine the possibility of having a gaming device that can give you your very own planet earth. Welcome to the future!


Categories: Giantess, Breasts, Butt, Crush, Instant Size Change, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft), Tera (101 mi and up), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m, FM/f, FM/m, M/f, M/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6611 Read Count: 4663
[Report This] Published: October 23 2022 Updated: November 06 2022
Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 23 2022 Title: Chapter 1: The announcement

Im with Questathana, this is a very good start. 

Summary:

Micro Cities made their debut by building a 1:6 scale city and successfully shrinking it's occupants to live in the community. Since then they've build multiple cities--each with a smaller scale than the last. The newest city, Micropolis, is 1:200 scale.

Justin, a brilliant engineer, has been hired to improve the lives of the people of Micropolis. The only catch to his contract is that he has to live in the city for the next 5 years. He'll leave his old life behind to live at only 9mm tall.

What challenges and adventures await the residents of Micropolis?


Categories: Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Insertion, Legwear, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slow Size Change, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m, FM/f, FM/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 70827 Read Count: 90166
[Report This] Published: December 30 2022 Updated: November 10 2023
Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 30 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking into a New Job

Good start!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 13 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking into a New Job

Good continuation. 

And while I’m not so completely with foot play as bobbylaws1, I can see there being a policy related to what shows are worn, normal high heels or a supported platform to minimize the potential of accidental crushing. Thought Natasha might be told about this if she wore wedges, those are a very stable and walkable kind of heel with the most footprint, unlike stilettos and such. 

And with theses MicroCities now getting so small, and possibly smaller in the works, making a city in a platform heel sounds like something Natasha or other enthusiasts would bring up, and that Justin might get involved in designing. Much to his chagrin. 



Author's Response:

The current rumor around the company is that after all the kinks are worked out for Micropolis, they plan to make a 1:2000 scale city! No one has found a lower limit for this shrinking tech... yet.

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 13 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking into a New Job

Could also totally talk about any incidents and ‘incidents’ that happend because of the excitement like Natasha’s (possibly to a greater, smarter, or more prepared degree).

Thought it could also be good world-building for Natasha to get a corporate scolding, like what Alia was trying to be professional about, if shes still to insistent to tries to go to far, talking about genuine accidents or thing people tired to do that got serious. You know now safety regulations are made once someone gets injured or died, that sort of thing. 

So just real interesting stuff that could come. 



Author's Response:

Sadly, Natasha doesn't work for Micro Cities, inc... but there are some new characters we'll meet that I think will fit the bill!

(Also, don't worry, this isn't the last we see of Natasha!)