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Abduction by Greenanon Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 109]
Summary:

Forty five years ago the Zetan Empire invaded earth, the green skinned amazons of their space fleet terrorized the people of earth with their shrink rays, crushing and enslaving the populace in a devastating war. Things seemed lost for humanity, when another alien species attacked, intent on wiping out both humanity and its would-be conquerors. Forced into a shaky alliance, the humans and Zetans managed to turn the tide and survive. In the present the alliance persists, the tireless work of Zetan and Human leaders who know that without the other, each race is doomed. That said, many humans are still holding a grudge, and it seems far too many Zetans would like to shrink humans back into their "proper place."

This delicate balance is thrown into chaos when a headstrong Zetan princess decides she's going to shrink a human and take him as a pet, alliances and treaties be damned.

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Categories: Adventure, Breasts, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Sci-Fi, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/m, M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Abduction
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 91467 Read Count: 82234
[Report This] Published: July 22 2022 Updated: August 07 2022
Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 30 2022 Title: Chapter 8: Gilded Cage

Jolene is really enjoys her work doesn’t she. Guess she’ll also get a chance for more unwilling Zetans at this party, and considering their usage of other humans, Jolene might actually get her first taste of them as punishment, beadies obtaining the governor, some important looking people, and the princess. Cleaning her boots might be in order before seeing her girls again, if she stops on enough or through a ‘small’ crowd.


And two thoughts I had: ine the shrink tech was made, some Zetans long before the Earth invasion had to have filled the inside of a very big cargo ship with shrunken plant and wildlife, had it take over the floor or several, then shrunk themselves down with some industrial ray and live “in nature” at sub cm size. Of]r just whole other living. Probably cheeper and more isolated then looking for a whole new planet. even just set course for the void and not really be seen again. 

Or even had a shrink ray on on everything in the hold that slowly made things smaller. Takes consistent power, but way more time, so they might be even smaller then at first, after enough years. 

Shrunken communities, long term or constant shrink ray exposure, or even shrinking and already shrunk thing has to have been experimented with. (And a growth ray, what difficulties come from that) 


The second thought is, with high heels being a new thing from earth, and power armour already being a statement for a “warrior” culture, someone has had to try and train in them, make new fighting styles, or make the heels actually be practical. Classic me in this in wedges. Though depending on how tech work wen shrunk, someone could make and shrink a fancy stabilizer/compensator system (grave tech or other and install it into their boots with high heels. As much as it would be a small subset of enthusiasts who make/modify/customize their own armour. And theres gadda be dress armours, some empress in history making some requirement at her balls to be only in armour, and so everyone had to work on making them extra fancy for that time. 

And of course, shrinking normally big pieces of tech is used in places, save space on supercomputers, reactors and fuel storage, or other systems on ships. 


And a ten rating as always. 



Author's Response:

There are probably all sorts of Zetan oddities using size changing tech out there in the far corners of the galaxy.

Jolene will definitely have a chance to have a little fun during the course of her mission, her pets will no doubt be excited. Don't want to say much else for fear of spoilers.

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Date: July 31 2022 Title: Chapter 9: Ripples in the Pond

Man does Jolene get Zetans. 

If this keeps happening she might be able to start a small village or town she retires. Thought small in more then just population number. 



Author's Response: Yeah she's a regular collector of them isn't she? She might have to look into one of those human enclosures someday, not for humans of course...

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Date: July 31 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Alliance Day Preparations

Some Zetan had to have gotten an enter town or village and made them rebuild (unless they actually got the whole town). And the whole owning-an-ant-hill like situation. So Jolene probably can find one of those and all accessories. 

She’ll get an tier up in devotion from her Zetans from that, won’t she. 


And also, this island party will probably net her tons if fancy cloths from the leftovers. She already took an expensive ship, why stop there. 



Author's Response:

Yeah she'll have lots of nice things lol

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Date: August 01 2022 Title: Chapter 10: Party Invitations

Actually, with the whole thing of Zetans trying out heels or wedges on their armour, Jolene’s crew had to have proposed to her to try some of them out while looking thorough that community for armour upgrades and were to get stuff. Obviously shrink rays gave a whole new angle and set of accessories. So whatever her opinion of them is and wether she’ll take up her crew ideas/recommendations, I guess we will have to see. 

Author's Response:

I'm sure her crew will have "suggestions" when they see all the ways humans are used at the party

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Date: August 01 2022 Title: Chapter 11: The Plunge

Well, the terrorists so immediately dealt with after their assassination, morso if it was unsuccessful, by a human bounty hunter. And then everyone knowing that it happened removing tons of long readability, with anyone coming out of the woodwork being more easily targetable. The lack of leadership is also gong to cause enough chaos for these terrorists. 




Author's Response:

Yeah shit's about to hit the fan for all factions, but Zeta Forever is about to have a very uhh... big problem on their hands.

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Date: August 02 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Alliance Day Preparations

INB4 chap. 

Depending on how the party goes, Jolene’s crew could go and get the other yachts and spacecraft on the docs, get more evidence of Zeta forever, sell for more money, maybe a souvenir or two for her desk or quarters, or obviously use in some of the ‘activities’ with her crew. 

But thats gong to be a lot of money from selling all those other yachts. 



Author's Response:

Jolene's already cleaning up, the most valuable assets are the prisoners themselves.

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Date: August 03 2022 Title: Chapter 12: Triumph Stolen

Well, this it a truly fucked situation. Thought I can probably the way out…

Hope Jolene walked enough in heeled to start running in them for this situation. This is where some kind of tech comes to negate all the issues with high heeled walking somehow. Wether gyro, gravity/weight alteration, or maybe use the nano-materials for the sole and heels to flex and assist walking, some other think, or a combo of them all. Besides also what extra could be given for power armoured ones, like rockets or a gravity generator powerful enough for flight(or ship grade shrunk to fit), and mag boots. 


I do think thought that the existing town will have some successor with and even smaller scale, what with the cannon and the taste of the mansion. 



Author's Response:

Power armor probably is great for your balance already, Jolene can probably get some additional accessories tailored in since hers is all custom anyways.

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Date: August 03 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Alliance Day Preparations

Other shrunken comparison, since the crumbs worked (this shrink tech does break so many bits of reality) for eating at that size, would shrunken seeds and plats use normal dirt. Then a whole biosphere could be made in a room at the scale of the mansion (or terrarium), use normal nano or microdots to harvest and process (like wood for lumber), and use some other nanites that or some other performing tech (possibly also shrunk) to accelerate growth. 

And why stop at table top or a small room. Cargo ships are cheep, relatively. similar maybe abandoned station or asteroid outposts. 



Or otherwise just use to make food. Kiloacres of land from selves, smaller water usage, just a few bags of fertilizer, more controlled environment, all in a small warehouse, feed tens of thousands at the bare minimum. Have animals and insects too, like bees. It has to at least be used by some preper or ultra isolated types, or was at least considered by the gov to feed everyone. Whatever reasons for not if its didn’t. 



Author's Response:

Shrinking bigger stuff requires more power, more advanced equipment, etc, the cannon Jolene had was a specialized piece of military equipment for example. Another thing to consider is that given the history with the shrink rays, a lot of people just don't want to be shrunk, like they fought a huge war with the Zetans to get to stay full sized having the government say "let's all shrink to end world hunger!" wouldn't go over well. The existence of additional planets to settle has taken a lot of the resource pressure off Earth anyway, that said yeah there's almost certainly a prepper colony somewhere in a shoebox with a sustained ecosystem.

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Date: August 03 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Alliance Day Preparations

Sorry for clogging the reviews by the way. 

Could talk on the discord server.  



Author's Response:

It's fine, I don't really use discord so you can just toss ideas in the reviews

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Date: August 03 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Alliance Day Preparations


Makes sense about the mass usage (besides the expense) of shrinking to decrease resources would not be popular idea. The robot tabletop farm could still go, needs only some simpler terraforming shelf/table terraforming to make work and get a good amount of shrunken seeds without needing more shrink ray. Then unshrink  the food. So there probably some labs working on that specific thing in the background, and when everyone’s the tech will be there. And maybe shrink ray tech in general, for science and tech’s sake and no other reason. Maybe there some proposed plan somewhere for an emergency shrink storage to save the civilization, not that implementing it would have been a priority or method liked. 


Fair about the armour compensating itself for the balance and posture. What kinds of things would Jolene want but hasn’t been able to get so far, both for practical and fashion. 

Wonder what would be considered truly ridiculous for the power armour fashion circles. 




And I probably should have said it in an earlier review, but you did a great job giving Jolene a cowgirl/old-west ascent without even accessing the spelling and grammar, somehow. Thats just an achievement. 



Author's Response:

Power armor for the military is probably sleek and professional, same for law enforcement. Jolene's power armor is built slim because she wears it under her clothing a lot, it's comparatively pretty weak to more professional models, but it works well for what she does. Armors worn by royalty and rich people probably look like something out of Fire Emblem, huge obnoxious shoulder pads and capes included.

I'm glad Jolene's accent translates well, apart from a few select instances I don't like to lay it on too thick, mostly it's her choice of slang (to the point where Zetan translation software gets confused) and fashion that hopefully tells the reader what she probably sounds like.

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Date: August 03 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Alliance Day Preparations

Oh. 

Someone so made a control setup to pilot power armour like a mecha. Possibly, say,  a large control ball with life the life support system the person goes into and is then shrunk to fit in some tiny armoured black box spot deep inside. (besides the actual attempts at making mechs, grav and scifi materials and all).


Whoch then made me realize the power armour based sex androids that have been made. And all the size related stuff. Probably one of the few legal ways to truly abuse and toy with shrunken things, besides VR. 



Author's Response: Big war mechs are probably a novelty in this setting, Zetans and humans both like their tanks, fighters, and starships. Still, I'm sure there are recreational uses of power armor technology, for those who can afford it anyway.

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Date: August 04 2022 Title: Chapter 13: Aces and Eights

Another well done chapter. And you did a good job on the big male tiny girl. 


Oh and what things would be done by Jolene at her colony, like she said its doesn’t need to be the best one. 



Author's Response: There are a number of things she could do with even a less than ideal world, mostly she would want to plop herself down in a huge mansion with her pet Zetans and be left alone, but she could set up a trading post and refueling station for ships going into deeper space, she could do resource extraction, she could use the climate for specialist agriculture, the possibilities are really endless. Of course most of that boring stuff is the kind of thing she'll probably recruit some settlers to do while she fills her days with sport and leisure.

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Date: August 04 2022 Title: Chapter 13: Aces and Eights

Besides the obvious for Jolene to have her mansion, enjoying her days with her zetans and have a normal colony to runs some businesses in the side (the latter makes sense), but with everything I’ve said better, being self sufficient able to sell food even sounds also like a good business, and Jolene could have some enjoyment from developing that ‘small’ part of her colony (even miniature habitation modules to have volume, space, and food, and not the other things)   

A whole side story could be made of the zetans, maybe some humans that eventually came along, trying to develop new things to entertain Jolene and make them practical for her uses (in both meanings). She already has a military shrink ray, give her engineers some more engineering equipment and time, and I be they could make it more practical for her (even if not to mass produce), then use it for her own purposes.



Author's Response: I'm sure she'd like to play goddess to some micro sized people, at the very least her four crewmates will probably end up staring down some time at ant size or smaller.

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Date: August 05 2022 Title: Chapter 14: On the Eve of Battle

Preety good speech, and a fair strategy of softening up on a siege, and then a full military force some from behind to get them suck and finish them. But the battle will have to be seen. 

And who knows how this speech will be received by the whole alliance. 

And the after processing of at least arresting Zeta forever on the attempted assassination alone. 



Author's Response:

Zeta Forever is going to be in legal trouble regardless of how heroic they are in the battle, I mean they almost overthrew the Empress lol.

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Date: August 05 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Alliance Day Preparations

With your answer to Kessler’s questions on the shrink rays, why not have a shrink ray shrink a box of shrink rays, one is removed from the box to shrink the box, then don agains all the way down. I can guess its the whole process that make its hard to use this method for more efficiency, since a step smaller should be the normal amount of energy. Unless there are setups like this somewhere for something. 

Actually comes back to thinking that someone would shrink a shrink ray so they could have it, or multiple, in a gauntlet or gloves, for hiding and to make things even smaller. 

Maybe some theorized or ultra experimental one have several ‘pulses’ of shrinking in it, ones that only activate after being use, meaning also having been shrunk, so make the step-down process in one firing of sone ray. At best probably in a lab somewhere. 

And what about shrink pads/booths/chambers? Put the thing in the machine  and its shrunk. 


Anyway, your doing great, then its the finally and epilogue!




Author's Response:

Shrink rays come in a number of different shapes and sizes I'm sure, most of the military ones are shaped like military equipment, think Nea's rifle from way back in chapter 2, vs the civilian ones Kira and most Zetans carry day to day which are shaped like remotes. I'm sure if a person wants a gauntlet shaped one it can be done, as well as a chamber sized one but it would require more energy. I suppose a single person could in theory get a box of shrink rays and make themselves smaller in a sequence, but it would have fairly limited practical use. The cannon Jolene has is special because it reduces a very large area to a super tiny size, the biggest ones outside commonly in use are probably for shipping, think reducing cargo containers to brick size.

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Date: August 06 2022 Title: Chapter 15: Fire in the Sky

Well this went well. And the Cephalo should mostly not a problem, unless there are more fleets out somewhere, or more central locations, or subgroups that decided to make some more sustainable food source for some reason and so you have strongholds. That latter could get real messed up obviously. 

And Jolene got her bounty. Now to see the (at bare minimum month’s, if not years) long legal processing of Nea and Zeta forever. 


And pretty good climatic battle. Big thumbs up. 



Author's Response:

There are still lots of Cephalo out there, but they'll be cautious about intruding into human or Zetan space for some time. Glad you enjoyed the battle.

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Date: August 06 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Alliance Day Preparations

Oh, and a possible and interesting side story is, due to the Cephalos incursion ruining all the hyper-lanes, some cruse ship got stranded after a bad or emergency jump, so the crew and passengers shrunk to save on food and air. And for the years of drifting, or actual travel time to get back to known space to be saves, the made a town or two within the ship, like all my easier talk of using a full ecosystem in a cargo hold and having a micro colony. Only maybe a little bigger, could totally depend. 


Or some other civilization shrunk themselves to the mansion’s size or smaller so they could hid from the Cephalos in an ultra shielded container or facility, or even so re terraformed their planet with the shrunk life. Fun offshoot potential stories, and hopefully with enough erotica potential.  



Author's Response:

The setting has infinite potential, there are probably ships full of shrunken people out there somewhere.

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Date: August 06 2022 Title: Chapter 15: Fire in the Sky

And now cause it finally got room in my head, where the mystery of that that enchant Ceohalos said about an ancient conflict between humans and them will go. Cause if this says anything its that some form of mass gene therapy might need to be dine with the Zetan population to give them at least the same resistance as Nea had, whatever was causing it.  



Author's Response:

Nea has a bit of human blood in her, via her grandfather. Gene therapy probably isn't happening on a mass scale, but mankind's resistance will probably propagate over time the old fashioned way. The Cultural Department airs those Zetan-Human romance films for a reason you know!

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Date: August 07 2022 Title: Chapter 16: Second Star to the Right (End)

Pretty good end. 

And of course Jolene would pick the desert with the western environment. Hope her other ventures, bot big and small, on that sand all go well. 



Author's Response: It's a new frontier, and if there's anyone to tame it it's her. She's got the main cast and her crew with her too, and that's a group that can probably help her through most troubles she'll find out there.

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Date: August 07 2022 Title: Chapter 17: Epilogue: Straight on 'til Morning

Noice. 



Author's Response:

Thanks!