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Abduction by Greenanon Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 109]
Summary:

Forty five years ago the Zetan Empire invaded earth, the green skinned amazons of their space fleet terrorized the people of earth with their shrink rays, crushing and enslaving the populace in a devastating war. Things seemed lost for humanity, when another alien species attacked, intent on wiping out both humanity and its would-be conquerors. Forced into a shaky alliance, the humans and Zetans managed to turn the tide and survive. In the present the alliance persists, the tireless work of Zetan and Human leaders who know that without the other, each race is doomed. That said, many humans are still holding a grudge, and it seems far too many Zetans would like to shrink humans back into their "proper place."

This delicate balance is thrown into chaos when a headstrong Zetan princess decides she's going to shrink a human and take him as a pet, alliances and treaties be damned.

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Categories: Adventure, Breasts, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Sci-Fi, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/m, M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Abduction
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 91467 Read Count: 102769
[Report This] Published: July 22 2022 Updated: August 07 2022
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Date: August 03 2022 Title: Chapter 12: Triumph Stolen

Well, this it a truly fucked situation. Thought I can probably the way out…

Hope Jolene walked enough in heeled to start running in them for this situation. This is where some kind of tech comes to negate all the issues with high heeled walking somehow. Wether gyro, gravity/weight alteration, or maybe use the nano-materials for the sole and heels to flex and assist walking, some other think, or a combo of them all. Besides also what extra could be given for power armoured ones, like rockets or a gravity generator powerful enough for flight(or ship grade shrunk to fit), and mag boots. 


I do think thought that the existing town will have some successor with and even smaller scale, what with the cannon and the taste of the mansion. 



Author's Response:

Power armor probably is great for your balance already, Jolene can probably get some additional accessories tailored in since hers is all custom anyways.

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Date: August 03 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Alliance Day Preparations

Other shrunken comparison, since the crumbs worked (this shrink tech does break so many bits of reality) for eating at that size, would shrunken seeds and plats use normal dirt. Then a whole biosphere could be made in a room at the scale of the mansion (or terrarium), use normal nano or microdots to harvest and process (like wood for lumber), and use some other nanites that or some other performing tech (possibly also shrunk) to accelerate growth. 

And why stop at table top or a small room. Cargo ships are cheep, relatively. similar maybe abandoned station or asteroid outposts. 



Or otherwise just use to make food. Kiloacres of land from selves, smaller water usage, just a few bags of fertilizer, more controlled environment, all in a small warehouse, feed tens of thousands at the bare minimum. Have animals and insects too, like bees. It has to at least be used by some preper or ultra isolated types, or was at least considered by the gov to feed everyone. Whatever reasons for not if its didn’t. 



Author's Response:

Shrinking bigger stuff requires more power, more advanced equipment, etc, the cannon Jolene had was a specialized piece of military equipment for example. Another thing to consider is that given the history with the shrink rays, a lot of people just don't want to be shrunk, like they fought a huge war with the Zetans to get to stay full sized having the government say "let's all shrink to end world hunger!" wouldn't go over well. The existence of additional planets to settle has taken a lot of the resource pressure off Earth anyway, that said yeah there's almost certainly a prepper colony somewhere in a shoebox with a sustained ecosystem.

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Date: August 03 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Alliance Day Preparations

Sorry for clogging the reviews by the way. 

Could talk on the discord server.  



Author's Response:

It's fine, I don't really use discord so you can just toss ideas in the reviews

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Date: August 03 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Alliance Day Preparations


Makes sense about the mass usage (besides the expense) of shrinking to decrease resources would not be popular idea. The robot tabletop farm could still go, needs only some simpler terraforming shelf/table terraforming to make work and get a good amount of shrunken seeds without needing more shrink ray. Then unshrink  the food. So there probably some labs working on that specific thing in the background, and when everyone’s the tech will be there. And maybe shrink ray tech in general, for science and tech’s sake and no other reason. Maybe there some proposed plan somewhere for an emergency shrink storage to save the civilization, not that implementing it would have been a priority or method liked. 


Fair about the armour compensating itself for the balance and posture. What kinds of things would Jolene want but hasn’t been able to get so far, both for practical and fashion. 

Wonder what would be considered truly ridiculous for the power armour fashion circles. 




And I probably should have said it in an earlier review, but you did a great job giving Jolene a cowgirl/old-west ascent without even accessing the spelling and grammar, somehow. Thats just an achievement. 



Author's Response:

Power armor for the military is probably sleek and professional, same for law enforcement. Jolene's power armor is built slim because she wears it under her clothing a lot, it's comparatively pretty weak to more professional models, but it works well for what she does. Armors worn by royalty and rich people probably look like something out of Fire Emblem, huge obnoxious shoulder pads and capes included.

I'm glad Jolene's accent translates well, apart from a few select instances I don't like to lay it on too thick, mostly it's her choice of slang (to the point where Zetan translation software gets confused) and fashion that hopefully tells the reader what she probably sounds like.

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Date: August 03 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Alliance Day Preparations

Oh. 

Someone so made a control setup to pilot power armour like a mecha. Possibly, say,  a large control ball with life the life support system the person goes into and is then shrunk to fit in some tiny armoured black box spot deep inside. (besides the actual attempts at making mechs, grav and scifi materials and all).


Whoch then made me realize the power armour based sex androids that have been made. And all the size related stuff. Probably one of the few legal ways to truly abuse and toy with shrunken things, besides VR. 



Author's Response: Big war mechs are probably a novelty in this setting, Zetans and humans both like their tanks, fighters, and starships. Still, I'm sure there are recreational uses of power armor technology, for those who can afford it anyway.

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Date: August 04 2022 Title: Chapter 13: Aces and Eights

Another well done chapter. And you did a good job on the big male tiny girl. 


Oh and what things would be done by Jolene at her colony, like she said its doesn’t need to be the best one. 



Author's Response: There are a number of things she could do with even a less than ideal world, mostly she would want to plop herself down in a huge mansion with her pet Zetans and be left alone, but she could set up a trading post and refueling station for ships going into deeper space, she could do resource extraction, she could use the climate for specialist agriculture, the possibilities are really endless. Of course most of that boring stuff is the kind of thing she'll probably recruit some settlers to do while she fills her days with sport and leisure.

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Date: August 04 2022 Title: Chapter 13: Aces and Eights

Besides the obvious for Jolene to have her mansion, enjoying her days with her zetans and have a normal colony to runs some businesses in the side (the latter makes sense), but with everything I’ve said better, being self sufficient able to sell food even sounds also like a good business, and Jolene could have some enjoyment from developing that ‘small’ part of her colony (even miniature habitation modules to have volume, space, and food, and not the other things)   

A whole side story could be made of the zetans, maybe some humans that eventually came along, trying to develop new things to entertain Jolene and make them practical for her uses (in both meanings). She already has a military shrink ray, give her engineers some more engineering equipment and time, and I be they could make it more practical for her (even if not to mass produce), then use it for her own purposes.



Author's Response: I'm sure she'd like to play goddess to some micro sized people, at the very least her four crewmates will probably end up staring down some time at ant size or smaller.

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Date: August 05 2022 Title: Chapter 14: On the Eve of Battle

Preety good speech, and a fair strategy of softening up on a siege, and then a full military force some from behind to get them suck and finish them. But the battle will have to be seen. 

And who knows how this speech will be received by the whole alliance. 

And the after processing of at least arresting Zeta forever on the attempted assassination alone. 



Author's Response:

Zeta Forever is going to be in legal trouble regardless of how heroic they are in the battle, I mean they almost overthrew the Empress lol.

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Date: August 05 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Alliance Day Preparations

With your answer to Kessler’s questions on the shrink rays, why not have a shrink ray shrink a box of shrink rays, one is removed from the box to shrink the box, then don agains all the way down. I can guess its the whole process that make its hard to use this method for more efficiency, since a step smaller should be the normal amount of energy. Unless there are setups like this somewhere for something. 

Actually comes back to thinking that someone would shrink a shrink ray so they could have it, or multiple, in a gauntlet or gloves, for hiding and to make things even smaller. 

Maybe some theorized or ultra experimental one have several ‘pulses’ of shrinking in it, ones that only activate after being use, meaning also having been shrunk, so make the step-down process in one firing of sone ray. At best probably in a lab somewhere. 

And what about shrink pads/booths/chambers? Put the thing in the machine  and its shrunk. 


Anyway, your doing great, then its the finally and epilogue!




Author's Response:

Shrink rays come in a number of different shapes and sizes I'm sure, most of the military ones are shaped like military equipment, think Nea's rifle from way back in chapter 2, vs the civilian ones Kira and most Zetans carry day to day which are shaped like remotes. I'm sure if a person wants a gauntlet shaped one it can be done, as well as a chamber sized one but it would require more energy. I suppose a single person could in theory get a box of shrink rays and make themselves smaller in a sequence, but it would have fairly limited practical use. The cannon Jolene has is special because it reduces a very large area to a super tiny size, the biggest ones outside commonly in use are probably for shipping, think reducing cargo containers to brick size.

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Date: August 06 2022 Title: Chapter 15: Fire in the Sky

Well this went well. And the Cephalo should mostly not a problem, unless there are more fleets out somewhere, or more central locations, or subgroups that decided to make some more sustainable food source for some reason and so you have strongholds. That latter could get real messed up obviously. 

And Jolene got her bounty. Now to see the (at bare minimum month’s, if not years) long legal processing of Nea and Zeta forever. 


And pretty good climatic battle. Big thumbs up. 



Author's Response:

There are still lots of Cephalo out there, but they'll be cautious about intruding into human or Zetan space for some time. Glad you enjoyed the battle.

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Date: August 06 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Alliance Day Preparations

Oh, and a possible and interesting side story is, due to the Cephalos incursion ruining all the hyper-lanes, some cruse ship got stranded after a bad or emergency jump, so the crew and passengers shrunk to save on food and air. And for the years of drifting, or actual travel time to get back to known space to be saves, the made a town or two within the ship, like all my easier talk of using a full ecosystem in a cargo hold and having a micro colony. Only maybe a little bigger, could totally depend. 


Or some other civilization shrunk themselves to the mansion’s size or smaller so they could hid from the Cephalos in an ultra shielded container or facility, or even so re terraformed their planet with the shrunk life. Fun offshoot potential stories, and hopefully with enough erotica potential.  



Author's Response:

The setting has infinite potential, there are probably ships full of shrunken people out there somewhere.

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Date: August 06 2022 Title: Chapter 15: Fire in the Sky

And now cause it finally got room in my head, where the mystery of that that enchant Ceohalos said about an ancient conflict between humans and them will go. Cause if this says anything its that some form of mass gene therapy might need to be dine with the Zetan population to give them at least the same resistance as Nea had, whatever was causing it.  



Author's Response:

Nea has a bit of human blood in her, via her grandfather. Gene therapy probably isn't happening on a mass scale, but mankind's resistance will probably propagate over time the old fashioned way. The Cultural Department airs those Zetan-Human romance films for a reason you know!

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Date: August 07 2022 Title: Chapter 16: Second Star to the Right (End)

Pretty good end. 

And of course Jolene would pick the desert with the western environment. Hope her other ventures, bot big and small, on that sand all go well. 



Author's Response: It's a new frontier, and if there's anyone to tame it it's her. She's got the main cast and her crew with her too, and that's a group that can probably help her through most troubles she'll find out there.

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Date: August 07 2022 Title: Chapter 17: Epilogue: Straight on 'til Morning

Noice. 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Summary:

Fallout multi-chapter Fan Fic with Scalie/Scaly giantess content. (For those that don't know Scalie/Scaly is Furry for lizard people)

After years of hardship, life had finally given Drew the break he needed. He had a beautiful girl, good friends, and a home in a small pre-war town just north of the border in Canada.
All that had ended when the Greenskins AKA Super Mutants had attacked. The love of his life as well as half the town was either taken or killed. Those that survived left and Drew along with his friends Jack, Amy, and Jarik found themselves in a town known as Colville.
There they rebuilt their lives, but the pain and memories remain and now, there is a new threat, one that may threaten the whole region

This is where the story begins.

Note: this is a fetish story with fetishized characteristics. Inspired by the Domclaw pics that are out there.


Categories: Giantess, Sci-Fi, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 144284 Read Count: 68490
[Report This] Published: July 31 2022 Updated: October 22 2023
Reviewer: DcZ Signed
Date: July 31 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Colville

Well its a start,  pretty good characters, character interactions, and plot so far. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for checking out the story. Plenty of plot still to come.

Summary:

Vann is an adventurer, or he'd like to be, he doesn't have much in the way of strength, and despite years of trying he doesn't have any magical talent either. Desperate, he makes a plea to the divines, and finds his way to a lost temple where a forgotten goddess is willing to raise him up as her champion, granting him immense power. The catch? Well, she's the goddess of Female Domination, and the rituals and acts she demands in exchange for her blessings can be quite... interesting, as can her punishments for disobedience. Luckily Vann has his friend Tyra, herself a lady knight and experienced adventurer, to help him navigate things, and she's quite eager to make sure he performs those rituals correctly...

A comedic fantasy story about a mage in the service of a femdom goddess fond of size changing, and the adventures he has along the way.


Categories: Adventure, Breasts, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Muscle, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Untitled Greenanon Monstergirl Setting
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59649 Read Count: 65834
[Report This] Published: August 10 2022 Updated: September 15 2022
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Date: August 10 2022 Title: Chapter 1: The Goddess Awakens

Oh this seems the like start of another good one. 




Author's Response:

Thanks!

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Date: August 15 2022 Title: Chapter 2: A Taste of Power

Oh yeah time ill tell if it was worth it. Hopefully magic grows with usage and time. (and sorry everyone for the long review)


With what kinds of people Zenovia’s followers were, some obviously there the Big Band Evil Guy/Gal(BBEG) of some people's adventures, and all the way down to the cult that runs a brothel or something. What interesting conflicts or interactions between them and the other deity(ies) of love or similar, back when they were more common. 

There's gadda be some full sapient(more inclusive and expansive than human) sacrifice rituals in there that he and others obviously couldn’t do, legally at least, and cause Vann would die. But two could be comoed, in a ritual circle crushing a shrunken men with high heeled shoes makes the high heels no longer cause any balance concerns, running in a stiletto on a muddy battlefield would then the possible and only left to the person's own skill or balance. Crushing them inside the shoes makes the shoes perfectly fit and perfectly comfortable, and probably make it so the wearer and Zenovia has controls of the inside so tinies can be held inside, like what Eletha is doing but better in every way, more convenient, or give more options. Subject as well to the quality if the footwear and now of Zenovia’s iconography is on it, and what she thinks of it. Also another one of crushing under barefoot to give some super agility, dexterity, divine sure-footedness, or never-ending perfect food health. And probably some other version that uses women, cause some be traitors and heretics or such (better to have a way of dealing with such, maybe something only Vann can see, cause he’s choose), or just women were used, Female Domination can be a female dominating another female too. So the sacrificing of both a man and a woman in those rituals, 6 men and 6 women, was ultra overpowered to whoever managed it. (and IF that's the case, the enchantments Zenovia’s book has for these (when the sacrifice rituals aren’t used, or instead use a tiny as a constant source of power) might be interesting to compare with normal balancing, sure-footed etc. footwear enchantments that are used, or that nobles use because they can) 

Or some rituals might get some maxing out or bonus from being done to a death. Probably highly variable, only some, and it is probably Zenovia’s call at that point. 

And there could also be similar rituals for boobplate, bikini plate, and others. Maybe some done in a ritual circle (or shape), or a piece with a different effect applied, prevents true death within that aria, so some of the rituals could get real nary without real death, but cannot do the sacrifice rituals (cause no death). Or a building enchantment that shrinks men on some premises or aria or building. Or allows for the shrinking and growing of space, a more conceptual way of making bags of holding or TARDIS spaces. Far from real spacial magic and what it can do, but just good enough. 

More back to what some her followers did, some noble lady and her the female members if her clan, did the high heels and various clothing ritual on their entire shoe collection and wardrobes, and with their maids and servants too, got taken down by someone, or maybe the place got cursed, so there useful materials from that mansion or castle, and some of their shoes and such are artifacts laying around. Or a female knight made an order and they used her enchantments for their armour. Or an all female merc/bandit band, ambushing caravans and even having princesses or queens for ransom, besides the men. And with all the other leftovers of Zenovia’s followers from back when. Probably even some hidden valley or place that a follower teleport shrunken villages and a city or two to play goddess with, heresy probably but Zenovia was asleep, and maybe that follower died, and now its a tiny land with several tiny kingdoms. 

With being 500 feet (152 meters. 300 ft is as tall as the statue of liberty, so 500 is tall) of Embiggen (besides what stories or records say back they’ve happened), and depending on how big dragons are(if they exist, from just DND kins, or bigger (thought hopefully not as big as Ancalagon the Black), you know some of her followers use her rituals and spells on dragons (or tried). Cause they could use Embiggen to maybe stuff a dragon down their underwear, or shrink them for the same and use them for even more power. Or a female dragon decided to try Zenovia out, the whole politicking/drama between the dragon god(ess) and her when their domains or followers overlap/interacted would be an interesting story, if it ever gets motioned or involved (besides the dragon one, deities or smithing or craft, and the one of love/sex for the brothel thing. so many) . If Embiggen increases size by scale and not to a size, a dragon or existing giantess might try these. Whatever happened to the ones that did. 


Two, more practical things: first, with dragons as an example, and other races might not be mammals, for females don't have boobs, and I can guess Zenovia likes those. So some "womanizing" (by humanoid standards) ritual might be a thing if she deems it needed for that follower. For lizards, insectoids, fish/aquatic that aren't' mermaids, maybe dryads/trees (depending), or even non-humanoid sapients. Goda think of theses things as a diety, can't be too exclusive. 

The second one is that since its female domination, then Zenovia had to have rituals, or a few, for shen women wanted to have children but not have men involved. Either between two, bick one or the other both to have kids. Or be a "virgin" birth (of course it won't be, this godess loves sex), or some bigger one what brings Zenovia directly to help, makes some charecter creator like dream for the daughters(s). Or and orgy ritual needing at a bare minimum 10 women, whatever it does, And maybe some particular for sons and such, have to keep up the populations of both. Perhaps the two-women-mating ritual or spell was taken after an all female noble family or two had it for a while, Zenovia's influence was removed, and now is something for the court physician and mages of royals and nobles houses have just in case, cause it's not a bad precousing is two houses are need to marry and only daughter are available, or two women fell in love but an heir is still needed. Noble dynastic arranged marriage management, probably pretty boring in the end.


Well this was another long one, hope it gives food for thought. (Again, sorry to anyone reading the reviews and seeing this thing)



Author's Response:

Zenovia is probably more of a chaotic neutral aligned deity than outright evil. I like to think she intended her followers to do good in the world but just got caught up getting horny watching all the chaos they were causing. Her followers definitely ended up as villains in plenty of other people's adventures. 

As you said for obvious reasons Vann doesn't want to do any of the lethal rituals lol. That said Zenovia has plenty of enchanted artifacts floating around which we will see later in the story. Also Zenovia definitely accepts women dominating women as part of her worship, though men are her preferred targets.

Zenovia can probably do all things to help out if a woman really desires not to have a man around, that said bigger rewards demand bigger service.

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Date: August 16 2022 Title: Chapter 3: Setting Out

Now that was a fun 4th wall break. 

And the various things dwarves are evidently up to. Quite advanced getting to germ theory and it being heard all the way out there, if they even visit a truly big city or capital, bet all the doctors and healing will be mentioning it and how to have healing spells with it in mind. If they need to get new healing spells. And more of the dwarven ‘nonsense’, plus what others may have come up with that's similar. 

Rumana’s going to be important later isn’t she. 


Back sith the rituals thing, Zenovia must have come up with so many rituals during her horny has about her followers, it would be curious enough to eventually learn what she removed/left out of her book, and what she left in, considering what rituals are already there and how her followers acted back when. Some could have even taken that magic for a different goddesses or demons or such of their own use. Means some divine legal battle has to happen over taking her spell for a different high being used. So that's another task for the pile , destroying those ‘corrupted’/heretical versions’. In some way. And other divine catching’s up she’ll have to do now that she's awake. 

And other leftovers, if someone is killed after being Embiggen, would it leave their giant corps, or would it undo? That will have to be learned naturally later, probably part of the scars of some city from when that happened. Or some lakes in the vague pattern of footprints, even if eroded they still line up. Their clothing might even still be around, if it comes with the ritual. Add that to artifacts of Zenovia’s, old tower sized armoured heels left somewhere, or a full suit, or such. 


And I do recommend looking up any dnd store channels on Youtube or r/DnD so you can get more inspiration that I could probably fit into a whole story’s worth of reviews. Get stuff for the background or encounters. Whatever you think is cool or good. 

And a patron avatar of Tiamat art, cause it looks good, spent ages looking for it just for this, cause it what made me think of whatever dragon deity and Zenovia discussing about their followers overlapping:https://nitter.net/ishton/status/1385648294853029898 



Author's Response:

The dwarves here are sort of steampunk/science focused relative to the setting's other races, though far on the frontier their more impressive achievements aren't visible. Of course try convincing people of germ theory in a world where evil spirits and curses actually exist, I imagine those dwarven medical pioneers have many frustrating talks with the setting's priests and mages.

Rumana will appear later in the story yes

Obviously there are some heavy DnD and general fantasy RPG tropes heavily influencing this one. I'm well familiar with them, so don't worry on my account!

Anyways as for Embiggen I imagine you'd go back to normal if you got killed while it was active, though the giant footprints might still be out there from whenever it was last used though. The giant growth thing would be a rarely used thing even for Zenovia's followers, as Vann notes it's extremely lengthy and difficult to pull off.

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Date: August 18 2022 Title: Chapter 4: Enid of the Wilds


Well that answers what kind of ‘beast kin’ (if the is the term) people are around, unless there are also Catgirls/fox girls of the Khajiit/Tabaxi variety. 

Either and both could work. 


But Vann really does need to read more into the books. 



Author's Response:

This story is a sort of parody of DnD style adventures and RPGs in general, so yeah there are probably furrier girls out there, I'm definitely into monstergirls but the full on anthro/furry kind like Tabaxi don't really do it for me, so it's unlikely that one will show up in an erotic sense in one of my stories. Nothing against anyone who is into that, I certainly won't claim a moral high ground with how many monstergirl stories I've done, but that's my personal taste lol.

Vann definitely needs to read more into the books, more will be explored as we go along.

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Date: August 24 2022 Title: Chapter 5: Out of the Mountains

Well, I bet other elves take the human “guiding” a little farther then even Eletha would be conformable with, or even thinking about. 

And outright immortality, yeah some elf follower of Zenovia has got to still be around, and doing her own human breeding program for all those millennia. The smaller since make storing and controlling easier, and they could easily kidnaped new people for more diversity if needed. If were talking practicality. Might have even forgotten what Zenovia is all about, and so has to get a reminder or dealing with now that shes awake, and to clean up the mess now that she might need to change her image and not get on the worst side of whatever keeps the gods in check. Or the elf went insane as immortal can, having somehow avoided whatever normally let elves not go crazy from time. 

Some pantheon of Order Undivided, or some chaotic lawfull eldritch thing is their enforcer, lawfully in that it follows the laws of physics, and somehow doesn't need magic or even divine power to do anything, and chaotic cause chaos theory  and quantum mechanics. Maybe even the gods are unnerved by it, needing “sock puppets” in its “appendage”, that doesn’t make peoples heads explode, go mad, or freak out, to even interact with mortals. 

Could be funny if it had an anti magic effect, in that the laws if physics beat up magic for its oucnk miney and then assert dominance with a T pose, causing all magic to undo its effect and everything follows physics, get everyone’s interviews of whatever divine legal case it was doing, and then leaves. Just weird. 


And the Dwarves already know the world is round, kinda surprised the elves didsn’t figure it out, going to some high enough mountains and looking, or just being around so long so notice. 

Guess we’ll find out latter, goblins need dealing with. 




Author's Response:

The thing is elves in this setting are (mostly) not evil, just kind of arrogant. The ones that do what Eletha does really do believe themselves friends of the humans they "guide," like most would never do anything to hurt them and would be really troubled if they upset them somehow, at the same time they don't really understand why humans might find the knowledge that their best friend basically acted as a mentor to everyone in their family for centuries might be off putting.

Without going into spoilers there are some servants of Zenovia who are still around and doing things they shouldn't be.

Knowledge that the world is round was actually pretty common among educated classes since something like 300 BC, mostly thanks to Greeks and various groups that learned from them. This world is a sort of medieval fantasy mash up, so they'd actually be late in making that discovery, but the dwarves here are more scientifically oriented rather than magically inclined. There are probably elves that do know the world is round, but their society and ideas change slower than others.